Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Lovved it! I'm happy they said it! Very cute
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Thanks!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
yes finally! lol I think that was a crappy cliffhanger but that just leaves me wanting more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
YAY!! the cat is out of the bag! I love it!
Marianne
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Thanks
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
Very sweet! And Edward's response is?
Author's Response:
Edward sats "I hate you! Get teh hell awaat from me." Oh, wait wrong story....
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
That is such a sweet ending to the chapter. Jaspers story is really sad but happy in the end which is good. Really liked the update, looking forward to more :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
this was a great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
awesome chapter. i wish you didnt leave it like that. i cant wait for the next chatper. i hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
I will, I promise!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
the story is so good! i love emmett and his story was so sad! their family is so sweet and caring! i cant wait for hte next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
I have a feeling that I will need my stash of Klinex for the next chapter...
Amazing story!
You are a great writer...!
Marianne!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
these two never seem to get it right!
Author's Response:
I know, *sigh*
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope they get together soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
thank you for up dating . i was starting to read a;; 22 chapter yesterday night when i find out you up date new chapter here,
last three small 2 line sentence you have mis-spell : you wrote wood instead of would . just want to let u know
he wood look over at me and smile before he looked down at his plate
Author's Response:
Thanks foir reading and pointing out my mispelling:)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
Emmett's story is pretty terrible as far as childhood's go...
Author's Response:
Yep.....Thanks!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow way to leave it like that! lol I loved the talk between Em and Bella but now its Jazz's turn and it doesn't look like its going to be good. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
I wonder what Jasper needs to talk about.
I really love this story, please keep it coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
Some days the worst words in the world are: "We need to talk."
Author's Response:
I know
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
I wonder how long it will take them to admit their feelings
Author's Response:
I know.....
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
Such a sweet date. I bet he was hoping to call it that and she obviously didn't even realize what it was. Very nice.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Whatever you are doing, keep doing it. The writing seems to get better and more fluid with each chapter.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
crazy crazy crazy couple. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
amazing chapter. i love that they are getting closer and closer.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
poor bella you are a little fast in these chapter 10 and 11 and love and confession all three guys are feeling about rape emmm
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reivews:)
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
what can i say a little hurt but good chapter over all
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
so she confess like that emmm i really love it if u put more prietly confess from bella to charli or edwar alone emmm but itsnot m story to tell
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow, so she is writting godto know but im thinking when she starts talking it wil be ard to talk after 2 years
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
I just read the chapter 7 and you've already gotten me hooked.I'm just curious as to have very dark things are going to get. I see that I have a lot of chapters to get through
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
i wish more of these good people we creat it in fanfiction sotries was real in real world we living . emmm its so hard and touchy it had hurt,comfort and maybe love in ur story
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
i just started this story and its really really good. Your writing is amazing... It's like you are in Bella's head but also the reader is aware of what she is oblivious...
Somebody told me about this story and that I should read it
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
emmm,weird she will fight and screams so bad wow, how you want this story goes i dont know im still in this chapter 4 i have to read a lot to see what will comes next.but thanks for taking your time to write . i love it
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love your story! It's one of the best that I've ever read. One thing I really enjoy is your unique plot, it makes your story that much more addicting. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
hi, wow its a little funny that all cullon kids are in all her classes and they all want to be talk to her and feel her safe emmm interesting. i eager to know what will happens
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this chapter, hell, . It's great, and i love it.
WOW! Cannot wait for next chapter. This has rapidly become the highlight of my week. Thankyou!Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
god those two are sooo frustrating. lol I know I know they've been through a LOT but they don't have to assume that they don't love each other. :( keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I know, but I promise things are coming together:)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad Bella is starting to open up more in therapy. It is hard but the Peter is only pushing her just enough to help her open up right now. I am happy to see how comfortable Bella is with Edward and he seems to be able to read her very well. Knowing not to push her into talking by filling the three hour car ride home with him doing most of the talking. It was sweet hearing Bella does love Edward but I know she will be shocked to find out he does love her as well when the time comes. I know I felt the same way that no one would love me because of my past and I believed it for years.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
aww... what a tough chapter, but ended so sweet.. I hope that Edward gets the nerve to tell her that he loves her... they need to heal together...=)
Author's Response:
thanks:)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
In art therapy she will paint him flying through the air in his red underwear and cape! That's a picture he won't want Emmett and Jasper to see!
Author's Response:
lol, that would be funny
Date: 19 Mar 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up very soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
awwww. naptime
Author's Response:
ThankS
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter!
Author's Response:
ThankS:)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
aww Edward's in LOVE!! that's so cute. I love it. I liked Emmetts story too and Jasper's as well. I can't wait to see what actually happened to them. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wondered if Edward was not already in love with Bella it was being shown by the way he cares for her every chance he gets. I dont blame him for being afraid of not being loved in return. I hope he just takes his time and waits for Bella to be ready to hear it because right now she is not ready to hear it. But I do believe she is growing to care for him as well. I cant wait to hear Emmett and Jasper story. They all really do need each other and I am glad they all over each other to lean on when they need it. Great job. Looking forward to see how Edward talks his way out of this one and how there first niht together will go.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.
Author's Response:
Thank You:)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad Bella is leaning on Edward because she needs someone she trust completely. I am happy to see Alice give Bella a dose of Bella Barbie. It helped me change my look to start my life over again as well. Awesome work. Cant wait for the next chapter and see what is ahead for Bella at group therapy.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
How is it they can't understand that although she may look beautiful in an outfit, if she is not comfortable the beauty won't shine through?
That's been an ongoing problem I have with Alice. Pushing cause she believes she knows fashion and what will look best on an individual.
Author's Response:
I agree! Even though Alice is trying to help, it's going to take time for Bella to feel beautiful!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
Everyone but them knows that they both love each other!
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad to see Peter is not pushing Bella to tell him everything. I had a therapist do that to me and I was as scared that I didnt want to go back. It is good to see her talking with Peter. I hope group therapy and art therapy will help Bella open up. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
love the chapter. cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love how Edwards reaction is to talk and act like a man would have ages ago
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
awww cant wait for the B&E relationship to progress!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
awww Edward just had to beat everyone didn't he? lol I love it. that chapter was cute and nice touch with Felix being alice's brother. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, yes he did! Thanks, hon:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
Really sweet chapter. It seems like this story is coming together a bit more now. Good job with that.
Loved this line: "it was kind of awkward to around them because they were in the 'I think everything you do is super adorable' phase."
And the bit about Felix being Alice's brother - that was a nice tie in.
Author's Response:
THanks:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Fantastic. A good first day at therapy. I like how he jumps around and it throws Bella off a bit. I think it somehow makes it easier for her to answer.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward and her are too adorable. they like each other so much but are taking it soo slow. too cute. I can't wait for more updates. keep up the great work. thanks again be
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow...I have read the first two chapter, and you have got me totally hooked. I'm really curious about what happened to Bella, and why the Cullen's are so drawn to her. It seems like they know what she is going through at the moment. They keep reassuring her that they won't hurt her. I can't wait until the mystery is uncovered.
I'm off to read the next chapter now. Until then...
Jennifer
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like Peter as a counsellor, he is really great!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good job! Seems like everyone is getting more comfortable with each other.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
awesome. i wish it didnt stop there.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Maybe Edward needs to go in with her?
Author's Response:
Maybe:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
I remember being sick to my stomach as well when I talked to my therapist the first time. I was scaried of what they would think of me or what would happen if they found out I was talking. I hope she will go in even if she doesn't talk today. I am glad to see she is finding comfort it Edward. I can remember nightmares like that but I would just wake up in a full sweat and would not go back to sleep the rest of the night because every time I closed my eyes I would picture the dream again. Awesome work I cant wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am glad Bella is standing up for herself even if it is just with Emmett. I know it is scary to talk to other about what happen but it will help in the long run not carring everything around all on your own. She is right with living in a small town like she is every one will know what happened and it will suck. I hope when Bella starting talking to the therapist she will start feeling a little like her self before she was raped. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Normally I don't review until I've read all posted chapters, but I just had to say that this chapter moved me to tears. I have tears streaming down my face. It takes an incredible writer to evoke that kind of emotion in a reader. You've done an amazing job on this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
aww James seems to be a good guy in this story. I am really enjoying it even though it's very dark and sad. I hope for some happier times to come.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
love this story
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad she is going to get professional help.
I LOVE Emmett!
Author's Response:
Me too. Emmett is one of my favs:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
It is nice that she if finding her voice again thanks to Emmett he will help bring it out LOL
Author's Response:
I think that's what Emmett does best!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
This chapter is so sweet and sad and lovely!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
awesome chapter. cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter. The writing seems to be getting better with each one.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aww that was such a nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
One big happy family! That is so great!
Author's Response:
Thanks you:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
this was an awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
So much to work through it is going to talk a long time
Author's Response:
Yes, it will.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so happy to see Bella opening up to Charlie. It will help in the long run. I know because it was my mom that helped me deal with my past. It is what brought us together in away because I was a daddy's girl. I like to see her opening up with Edward as well. Along with all of her friends and new family but it will take time for her to feel some what normal in her own skin. I cant wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Thank you. My hubby has been my rock for many, many years!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
The blame is always easier to take when you believe everything you were told as a rape victim. There is still to this day I still blame myself even though I know I did nothing to cause it. I hope she is ok and who is there will not hurt her. She has been through enough already. Great job.
Author's Response:
Yes, it is. Especally when you've been told over and over that it was your fault.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG Lauren is such a bitch. I hate it when people judge rape victims without knowing the whole story. I had a whole church turn their backs on me without knowing what really happened. Awesome job.
Author's Response:
I think that's why I had such a hard time telling...
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
so you made James a good guy? or are you just messing with me?
Author's Response:
James is a good guy! I promise I am not messing with you!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Nice mystery cliffhanger you gave us there. Powerful stuff. The end only proving how easy it is for a victim to place self-blame and doubt on themself. Nice work!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ooo.... another cliffie. Good to see Lauren put in her place. But it's even better to see her remorse.
Author's Response:
That it is:)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Did you hear she killed someone? hahahaha. Oh dear. Those rumors...
Lauren is just an awful human being.
Good chapter. I like the response from her teachers.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Who is there?? I'm glad someone finally straightened Lauren out!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
So now we know Esme's story too. Such a wonderful woman.
Author's Response:
That she is....
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh, poor Edward. Good job with this chapter though.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good job!! Not sure about the whole Charlie moving in thing but ehh, I'll go with it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon :)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
gosh poor bella it is going to take alot of time for her to heal.......
Author's Response:
Yes, it is.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope to god it is Edward behind her.
Author's Response:
Next chap will be up soon:)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
OH not she did not just say that to Bella Lauren is going down someone needs to slap that Bitch hard and many times.
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
i loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. two updates in one day. im happy!
Author's Response:
lol, I'm glad you are happy:)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Forming the queue to kill Lauren now...:)
Author's Response:
lol, I'm in!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Somebody slap that bitch!!
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Nice idea to have Mike waiting at the locker to check in with Bella, as well as the teachers quietly voicing their support to her. Lauren - of course, there would be one (or several people) who would go that low road. Looking forward to see how you handle it in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Omg, Lauren is such a complete Bitch! I swear if i ever met someone like her i would have to try very hard not to slap her lol.
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
no way! where? I'm in Austin...I was so going to ask if you were from Texas...
Author's Response:
I'm from a small town about an hour south of Amarillo.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
you used my phrase..."busted out laughing" are you from the south?
I'm glad I made you laugh!
Author's Response:
Yep! I'm from Texas!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lauren is a bitch. GRRRRR
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
stab her. just stab lauren in her black hole she calls a heart...
Author's Response:
lol, i totally busted out laughing at this! I'm very tempted....
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
Let the healing for all begin. Poor girl thinking people would be mad at her.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
i love this story. when i read the part where bella was telling her dad what happened it made me cry and think about what if that happened to me and i thought and know that my dad would be like charlie :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
What an emotional chapter. The things all of them have been through it heart wrenching. I am so happy they have each other to lean on when they need help. I cant blame Bella for not wanting to talk to someone else about what happened. She will be blaming her self for a while still. I know it took me years to stop blaming myself and there is still time I will still feel that blame to this day. I hope Bella's first day back to school goes ok. Awesome work.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Maybe they aught to do some medical tests to be sure her stomache is physically ok.
Author's Response:
Good suggestion:)