Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 37
Renee needs to just leave!
Author's Response:
That she does!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 36
i like that prank im gonna have to play it on some one
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 36
Aww I loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
They are such a great family! I wanna be a Cullen!
Author's Response:
me too!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 36
awesome! i loved the prank. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 36
lol it think i have to do that this year!! my sisters would hate that...
Author's Response:
lol, she may hate it now but when you get older, she will laugh about it! I know we do!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 36
that's cool Bella got her car and her promise ring. I loved the prank to Emmett and Jasper. they totally deserved it. I know Bella is hurting and starting to get over her fears but is Edward and her relationship going to progress? I've seen her get closer to charlie but her and Edward are still the same. I hope you update again soon. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Yes, but not too much in the phsyical sense until the last couple chapters.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
awwww that was cute....
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 35
your a/n sounds like a warning...
Author's Response:
lol, it is:)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
oh yeah she does. :) that whole part about prince charming almost made me cry. I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
I can't wait for the time when bella is ready to tease Edward... Can I get a prank for next chap???
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
I already have the the whole story written out. And as luck would have it, there is a prank in the next chapter but not against Edward :)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 35
i loved the flashback. great chapter. i cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 34
awwww that sounds like a happy ending but is there going to be more chapters???
Author's Response:
Thank you! There are a total of fifty chapter to this story:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
Can you remind me the Jacob-Bella relationship? Thanks!!
By the way I am sooo proud of her!!
xoo
marianne
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
oh that was great! No more Mr. Newton. lol I can't wait for another update. you are doing awesome. thanks bye
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 34
So, he got a total pf 26 years, I kind of wish the judge had said "with no chance of parole".
Author's Response:
Thank!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
i loved the chapter. im excited to see where things go from here now that he is in jail.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
i loved the chapter. im excited to see where things go from here now that he is in jail.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
Way to go Bella! Glad that she got to confront that jerk.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 33
:) Love it GO BELLA!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
AMAZING chapter. i cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
that was really good!! this is coming along great!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 33
Such a great chapter. I think your best one yet. Way to give them all just a little bit of closure.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 32
Breakthroughs make me smile like a crazy person.
Author's Response:
lol, me too:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
That was quite an intense session.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 33
Yay Go Bella!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
Yeah Bella! that girl is awesome. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 33
yes i cant wait to see what the judge gives him for a sentince i hope he throughs the book at him for what he did to her i am looking forward to seeing what happens next so please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 33
Go Bella!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 33
I loved it! At last Bella is getting better emotionally!!
xoxo
marianne
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
iam so proud of her good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 33
brilliant chapter - I laughed at Emm and cried at the statements - great writing..
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
awww that is good that she said that...i could take a long time for some one to say that but she said it....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 32
MORE!!! this is an amazing chapter and a wonderful story
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
I cried that was soo awesome. I just loved the breakthrough. I was all but shouting you go girl. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is getting her life back! Giving a statement is going to be hard on her though.
Author's Response:
Yes, it will be:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
I LOVE LOVE LOVE that Felix and Demetri are (TOGEATHER) bahahaha
*throws head back*
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
i hate Lauren... i hope you kill that bitch in the next chapter..*evil smirk*
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
I cant even type im sobbing SO hard, this is amazing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
That was such a good chapter. I am glad that she is now realising it wasn't her fault. Loved the prank by the way lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 32
this was awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter. im excited to see whats going to happen after this happening.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
brilliant chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
Edward will get her through this.
Author's Response:
Yes, he will:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
wow - just wow
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
WOW this is a great story! I can't wait to read more! I just started it at 3pm... it's now 5:30! I couldn't stop!!
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 26 Mar 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 31
awwww edward is a good boyfriend....i wishi had a boyfriend like that..lol...
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
Really loving this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 31
well at least she got it all out and Edward is tooo sweet for his own good. lol. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
Celebrate in the art museum huh? Nice...
I am more like Alice in that department! ***chuckles***
I only love no adore El greco...
lol
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
i loved it. i loved edwards last line about the art museum.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
awww they seam to be working stuff out so that is good.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Small steps to rebuilding the relationship between Charlie and Bella but at least they are working on it:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 30
yeah progress. lol I liked the part where Bella went to talk to edward and he was crying. that was sad, almost had ME crying too. :) keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 30
she really is finding her voice - that's great!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yep progress is in order! I like the pat two chapters!!
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
They are so sweet together!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
Very nice.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
Really loved the chapter update. It's such a sad story but very interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 29
Awwwww edward is adorable! I love him and feel really bad for bella!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
awwww what happened to charlie? This is really good!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
Nice mini father-daughter talk. They needed one.
Almost as much as we needed another cliffie...
Author's Response:
Sorry, I love my cliffies:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
Hmm... a happy Lauren, that can't be good...
Author's Response:
Lauren's not all bad:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 29
Charlie needs to not shut her out! She'll feel like he is rejecting her!
Author's Response:
I know! thankS:)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 29
wow so she knows Garrett? interesting! I love it. I can't wait for more moments between Edward and Bella. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you. She knows Garrett from the park.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter - she is really healing so well!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG Who is it???? You leave me hanging in suspence. Update Soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Who's there?!! I can't wait to find out!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 28
Aww no how could you end it there, that's cruel. Please update more soon!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry! Ok, I'm not!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 28
You Who??? I hate clifies.... Anyway please cut her some slack and don't let Charlie give her the "talk"... My experience was to say the least awful... ***looks back,laugh her ass off at her mom's cherry-red face and mumblings...***
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
Sometimes it seems this story is written about adults rather than teenagers. They just act far more grownup than I thought was possible for kiddies their age. LOL. Good chapter!
Author's Response:
That's probally because they were all forced to grow up too soon!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awww... I wonder what his reaction will be. My guess is a return ILY and possibly a little kissy kissy action.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
WHO WHO???????? you can't just leave it there meanie!!!! lol I can't wait to find out who. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, I'm sorry??? Ok, I'm not:)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 28
love the chapter. i wish you didnt stop there. i hope you update very soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
You always leave me hanging on...ugh
Author's Response:
I know! I 'm mean:)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
not to critisise (?) but is there a reason you are pushing the story along so fast? she went from not talking, not touching, in general not dealing with anything to doing all of these things semi freely with c,es,ed,a,j,r,em,m,j in like a week.
please don't take this the wrong way, i hate to leave anything but happy vibes, i was just wondering. sorry:(
Author's Response:
The time span starts to widen as the chapters go on:)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
and now the healing and the hurting. it gets worse before it gets better
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
well that was kinda a break in the stress
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
uh oh daddy charlie is gonna kill him!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
she is starting to see the light
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
the worst part of this sort of thing, the wrong person takes the blame.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
this is gonna get bad before it gets better right?
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy they are going to force her to deal with it
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
ok i did not see that comming!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
well i guess we all experience deep pain at some point in life. some sooner than others and the support of others makes dealing a whole lot easier
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow they really are gung ho on getting her to open up.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
well now this looks like it could be interesting...
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oooh deffinately need to know what that means now.... Please update some more soon please.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
I think she is! Not comlpetely but still!
Author's Response:
Parts of her are:)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why do I get the feeling Bella use to be a prankster before she was raped and hid herseld way from people. The way she player Emmett was priceless. I am glad to see Bella becoming more like her old self again. Edward will be really good for her to relearn who she is now. I loved it how they two of them were together before they had to go to school. Edward always has away of making Bella feel safe and loved but not pushed. I wonder how thepary will go since Edward wont be there this time. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh this sounds good why do i have a feeling that emmett has meet his match at pranks with bella this is going to get good i cant wait to see what happens next so pelase update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh my god that girl is tooo happy. lol I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
awww that was cute!!! aww I can't stop saying awww! lol I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
aw:) thanks
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
How sweet. I am glad Charlie is not trying to kill Edward right now for loving his daughter. It is funny how the family all knew but the two were just to stubborn to admit it to each other. I am glad they have found each other and with that the strength to move on in life and find happiness. Great job once again. I cant wait to see what will be head for the new couple.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
I am so happy Bella finally said it out loud to Edward that she is in love with him. I am glad opened up to Bella and showed her that even with phyiscal scars you can still be loved. It is sad what Jasper had to go through but in the end it has made hime who he is today. Awesome chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
I wonder what Jasper is going to talk with Bella able. It is so sad what Emmett has been through but it makes since why he wants to protect Bella so badly. I am glad they are getting closer. I understands Bella's need to protect herself were it comes to opening up her heart to Edward. That alone will be a huge step for her in healing. Great job.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
It is sad she is pushing him away because she doens feel worthy enough of his love or afraid that he can love her because of what she has been through. I just hope Edward doesnt give up on her and fights for the love they both feel for each other even though Bella is running from it right now. Great job.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
That was such a feel good chapter, I read it twice!
I've been argueing with my 15 year old daughter today, really needed a smile, thanks!
Author's Response:
Bless you for argueing with your 15 yrs old.....Mine is only 7...
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
I could picture Charlie's face as he gave Edward said talk... ***shudders***
scary...
;)
Marianne
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Seriously, I squealed!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!