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Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 37

Renee needs to just leave!



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That she does!

Reviewer: rpattzgirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 36

i like that prank im gonna have to play it on some one

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Thanks:)

Reviewer: pinkb3lla30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 36

Aww I loved it

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Thanks

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 36

They are such a great family! I wanna be a Cullen!



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me too!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 36

awesome! i loved the prank. cant wait for the next chapter.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

lol it think i have to do that this year!! my sisters would hate that...



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lol, she may hate it now but when you get older, she will laugh about it! I know we do!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 36

that's cool Bella got her car and her promise ring. I loved the prank to Emmett and Jasper. they totally deserved it. I know Bella is hurting and starting to get over her fears but is Edward and her relationship going to progress? I've seen her get closer to charlie but her and Edward are still the same. I hope you update again soon. thanks again bye



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Yes, but not too much in the phsyical sense until the last couple chapters. 

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 35

awwww that was cute....



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Thanks!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 35

your a/n sounds like a warning...



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lol, it is:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

oh yeah she does. :) that whole part about prince charming almost made me cry. I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 35

I can't wait for the time when bella is ready to tease Edward... Can I get a prank for next chap???

xoxo

Marianne



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I already have the the whole story written out.  And as luck would have it, there is a prank in the next chapter but not against Edward :)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 35

i loved the flashback. great chapter. i cant wait for the next one.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 34

awwww that sounds like a happy ending but is there going to be more chapters???



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Thank you! There are a total of fifty chapter to this story:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 34

Can you remind me the Jacob-Bella relationship? Thanks!!

By the way I am sooo proud of her!!

xoo

marianne

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 34

oh that was great! No more Mr. Newton. lol I can't wait for another update. you are doing awesome. thanks bye



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 34

So, he got a total pf 26 years, I kind of wish the judge had said "with no chance of parole".



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Thank!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

i loved the chapter. im excited to see where things go from here now that he is in jail.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

i loved the chapter. im excited to see where things go from here now that he is in jail.

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 33

Way to go Bella!  Glad that she got to confront that jerk.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) Love it GO BELLA!!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 33

AMAZING chapter. i cant wait for the next one.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

that was really good!! this is coming along great!!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 33

Such a great chapter. I think your best one yet. Way to give them all just a little bit of closure. 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 32

Breakthroughs make me smile like a crazy person. 



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lol, me too:)

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 31

That was quite an intense session. 



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Yes, it was:)

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 30

Good chapter!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 33

Yay Go Bella!!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 33

Yeah Bella! that girl is awesome. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you!

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 33

yes i cant wait to see what the judge gives him for a sentince i hope he throughs the book at him for what he did to her i am looking forward to seeing what happens next so please update soon



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 33

Go Bella!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 33

I loved it! At last Bella is getting better emotionally!!

xoxo

marianne



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 33

iam so proud of her good chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 33

brilliant chapter - I laughed at Emm and cried at the statements - great writing..



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

awww that is good that she said that...i could take a long time for some one to say that but she said it....



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: monicakaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 32

MORE!!! this is an amazing chapter and a wonderful story

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 32

I cried that was soo awesome. I just loved the breakthrough. I was all but shouting you go girl. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 32

Bella is getting her life back! Giving a statement is going to be hard on her though.



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Yes, it will be:)

Reviewer: monicakaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

I LOVE LOVE LOVE that Felix and Demetri are (TOGEATHER) bahahaha


*throws head back*



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: monicakaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

i hate Lauren... i hope you kill that bitch in the next chapter..*evil smirk*

Reviewer: monicakaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

I cant even type im sobbing SO hard, this is amazing!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 32

That was such a good chapter. I am glad that she is now realising it wasn't her fault. Loved the prank by the way lol.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 32

this was awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter. im excited to see whats going to happen after this happening.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 32

brilliant chapter!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 31

Edward will get her through this.



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Yes, he will:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

wow - just wow



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thanks

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 31

WOW this is a great story! I can't wait to read more! I just started it at 3pm... it's now 5:30! I couldn't stop!!



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thank you

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 31

awwww edward is a good boyfriend....i wishi had a boyfriend like that..lol...



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Thank you

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 31

Really loving this story!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 31

well at least she got it all out and Edward is tooo sweet for his own good. lol. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 31

Celebrate in the art museum huh? Nice...

I am more like Alice in that department! ***chuckles***

I only love no adore El greco...

lol

Marianne



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 31

i loved it. i loved edwards last line about the art museum.



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Thanks

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 30

awww they seam to be working stuff out so that is good.



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Thanks. Small steps to rebuilding the relationship between Charlie and Bella but at least they are working on it:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

yeah progress. lol I liked the part where Bella went to talk to edward and he was crying. that was sad, almost had ME crying too. :) keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 30

she really is finding her voice - that's great!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 30

Yep progress is in order! I like the pat two chapters!!

Marianne



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 30

They are so sweet together!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 29

Very nice.



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Thanks

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

Really loved the chapter update. It's such a sad story but very interesting.



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Thank you

Reviewer: Princess Michelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 29

Awwwww edward is adorable! I love him and feel really bad for bella!

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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

awwww what happened to charlie? This is really good!!!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 28

Nice mini father-daughter talk. They needed one. 

Almost as much as we needed another cliffie... 



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Sorry, I love my cliffies:)

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 27

Hmm... a happy Lauren, that can't be good...



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Lauren's not all bad:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 29

love it!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 29

Charlie needs to not shut her out! She'll feel like he is rejecting her!



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I know! thankS:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

wow so she knows Garrett? interesting! I love it. I can't wait for more moments between Edward and Bella. thanks again bye



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Thank you. She knows Garrett from the park.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 29

great chapter - she is really healing so well!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: OffKeyReason Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

OMG Who is it???? You leave me hanging in suspence. Update Soon!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 28

Who's there?!! I can't wait to find out!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 28

Aww no how could you end it there, that's cruel. Please update more soon!



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I'm sorry! Ok, I'm not!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

You Who??? I hate clifies.... Anyway please cut her some slack and don't let Charlie give her the "talk"... My experience was to say the least awful... ***looks back,laugh her ass off at her mom's cherry-red face and mumblings...***

xx

Marianne



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

Sometimes it seems this story is written about adults rather than teenagers. They just act far more grownup than I thought was possible for kiddies their age. LOL. Good chapter!



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That's probally because they were all forced to grow up too soon!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

Awww... I wonder what his reaction will be. My guess is a return ILY and possibly a little kissy kissy action. 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

WHO WHO???????? you can't just leave it there meanie!!!! lol I can't wait to find out who. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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lol, I'm sorry??? Ok, I'm not:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 28

love the chapter. i wish you didnt stop there. i hope you update very soon.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 28

You always leave me hanging on...ugh



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I know! I 'm mean:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

not to critisise (?) but is there a reason you are pushing the story along so fast? she went from not talking, not touching, in general not dealing with anything to doing all of these things semi freely with c,es,ed,a,j,r,em,m,j in like a week.

please don't take this the wrong way, i hate to leave anything but happy vibes, i was just wondering. sorry:(



Author's Response:

The time span starts to widen as the chapters go on:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

and now the healing and the hurting. it gets worse before it gets better

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

well that was kinda a break in the stress

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

uh oh daddy charlie is gonna kill him!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

she is starting to see the light

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

the worst part of this sort of thing, the wrong person takes the blame.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

this is gonna get bad before it gets better right?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh boy they are going to force her to deal with it

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

ok i did not see that comming!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

well i guess we all experience deep pain at some point in life. some sooner than others and the support of others makes dealing a whole lot easier

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow they really are gung ho on getting her to open up.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

well now this looks like it could be interesting...

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oooh deffinately need to know what that means now.... Please update some more soon please.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

I think she is! Not comlpetely but still!



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Parts of her are:)

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

Why do I get the feeling Bella use to be a prankster before she was raped and hid herseld way from people.  The way she player Emmett was priceless.  I am glad to see Bella becoming more like her old self again.  Edward will be really good for her to relearn who she is now.  I loved it how they two of them were together before they had to go to school.  Edward always has away of making Bella feel safe and loved but not pushed.  I wonder how thepary will go since Edward wont be there this time.  Great job.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

oh this sounds good why do i have a feeling that emmett has meet his match at pranks with bella this is going to get good i cant wait to see what happens next so pelase update soon



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

oh my god that girl is tooo happy. lol I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

awww that was cute!!! aww I can't stop saying awww! lol I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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aw:) thanks

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

How sweet.  I am glad Charlie is not trying to kill Edward right now for loving his daughter.  It is funny how the family all knew but the two were just to stubborn to admit it to each other.  I am glad they have found each other and with that the strength to move on in life and find happiness.  Great job once again.  I cant wait to see what will be head for the new couple.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 25

I am so happy Bella finally said it out loud to Edward that she is in love with him.  I am glad opened up to Bella and showed her that even with phyiscal scars you can still be loved.  It is sad what Jasper had to go through but in the end it has made hime who he is today.  Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

I wonder what Jasper is going to talk with Bella able.  It is so sad what Emmett has been through but it makes since why he wants to protect Bella so badly.  I am glad they are getting closer.  I understands Bella's need to protect herself were it comes to opening up her heart to Edward.  That alone will be a huge step for her in healing.  Great job.

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

It is sad she is pushing him away because she doens feel worthy enough of his love or afraid that he can love her because of what she has been through.  I just hope Edward doesnt give up on her and fights for the love they both feel for each other even though Bella is running from it right now.  Great job.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

That was such a feel good chapter, I read it twice!

I've been argueing with my 15 year old daughter today, really needed a smile, thanks!



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Bless you for argueing with your 15 yrs old.....Mine is only 7...

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 26

I could picture Charlie's face as he gave Edward said talk... ***shudders***

scary...

;)

Marianne



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lol

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

Seriously, I squealed!!!



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Thanks!

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