Date: 14 May 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
OK.. first off, that's so unlikely and horible. If Charlie knew she was raped he sure as hell wouldn't let three teen age strangers go and get his kids... how flippin' cruel.
Author's Response:
Perhaps, but when are you are desprate to help your chid, there is no end to what you might do:) Thank you for the review.
Date: 09 May 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 50
Absolutely wonderful! It don't get any better.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 43
You know the biggest reason I like this story is because you went outside the "Norm". It's a good story decent plot, a little rough in some places but still good. You took the "normal" Bad Guys and made them her friends, her confidant so to speak. You made Lauren a little shady but snaped her back in line. Mike was her best friend Rosalie loves her. James is a role model. Lol. I really like that. It was interesting to read it thus far. Good job. I like it. Not that you need my approval but it was certainly different from any other story I've read.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I wanted the main focus of this story to be her recovery and not the attack, or who attacked her.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 50
I have loved this story. I am sad to see it end but what a happy ending it is. Looking forward to ready more of your work soon.
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Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
aw that was beautiful <3
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 50
awww that is cute!!
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
I loved this story - great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm really loving this story. I'm new to this , but am addicted already.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 50
Perfect ending!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 50
Aw :) Great story I really enjoyed it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 50
Come on just the weeding??? As an outtake?? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! ***pouts***
You know I am a sucker for weddings!! I can find everything wedding gowns tiaras shoes jewls eveything!! PLLEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol, I'm thinking about wriing the wedcding:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 50
i wish you would have shown them at their wedding and not just stop there. i love what you had them doing with their lives. i wish you would have continued. its sad to see the story ended.
Author's Response:
I might still do their wedding:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 50
Awww!!! That was a great story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 50
So good, I'll be there and this ended very nicely. thanks again can't wait. bye
Author's Response:
Thanks:) I just put it up:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 49
awwww im so happy for them!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 49
yeah im so happy for them they are soo good together yeah them im so pround of bella for finally letting go of her fears
Author's Response: thank you:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 49
wow hot and heavy and after daddy leaves? edward you animal. lol I loved it. I'm sad to see it end though. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thankS:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 49
He's so perfect for her!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 49
great chapter! good for Bella :) Edward is so sweet!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 49
I'm glad you made them wait to have sex. I'm also glad you had her go to therapy which is very necessary for people that suffer through trauma. Hopefully people will read this and understand that no one is able to get over rape just like that. It takes time, love and support.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 49
Aww, that's so great that she finally had the courage to move on to that next step with Edward. I can't believe the story is nearly finished. Can't wait for the last chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
You got me excited now! Anything I can help with?? (Outfits pics etc...)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 49
woo hoo college here they come.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice! Can't wait! What's about?
Author's Response:
Bella starts a new job with the FBI. It's full of angst, drama, twists, turns, and lemons! Plus, I have the sequel to Lustful Awaking, too:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 49
That was sweet! How long will this one be??
XoXo
Author's Response:
Only one more chapter left:( but I have another story ready to go up:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 49
Aww at the end ^^
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 48
this is a really good story and i can't wait for more update soon please
Author's Response:
thank you:)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 48
awww that was good!!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 48
Love the update! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 48
You know seeing James as one of the good guys is alwways refreshing... Sometimes being the evil jackass is getting old... (not that I have any problem with it... ;) )
Loved it!
xoxo
Author's Response:
I know. I get tired of James always being the bad guy too. I do have stories where he is the badguy but I like to try to mix it up some:)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 47
Splendidly done!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 48
good for Bella. she did amazing. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
It was great!! I really wanted Esme to hit her!! :)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
That was great! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 31
Every time she retells it i cry! :)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 47
woo hoo graduation is done.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 40
I like your alternative better.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 47
awwww that is soo cte!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do not apologize hun! You know I am not always the bitch I look like!
I am glad that you did!!
xx
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 47
aww forever! how sweet. I loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 47
Mmmm foverer... Intresting! I can imagine myself bitching at you for eterntity!!
lol
So what did you think of the outfits???
xxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Sorry, I loved them! Things have just been so crazy here!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 47
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
What the hell was that?
He gave her away? :)
Author's Response:
he's desperate:)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 47
loved the speach.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
They are ready!!
http://www.polyvore.com/senior_prom/set?id=17756689
http://www.polyvore.com/senior_prom/set?id=17757227
http://www.polyvore.com/senior_prom/set?id=17758027
I can make any changes you want!!
xx
Marianne
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 46
so even though Bella is not so sure at the moment with sleeping with Edward are they eventually going to? Just curious. i love what's happening now and Prom was sweet. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Yes, they will but it's a big step for both of them so I really wanted to wait until the perfect moment.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
You sure like them?? I can start making the whole thing right away!
Author's Response: Yes, I do:)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 46
awww that was cute!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 46
It was such a sweet fluffy chapter!! :)
I was lookind for a wedding outfit a friend has asked and I came across these dresses for the girls! I think you might like them!! What do you think? I can make the whole outfit if you want!!
Alice:
dress: http://image.dhgate.com/upload/200912/77/ff80808121bf487c0121c29773cc4c0b/productimg1260436216118.jpg
shoes: http://www.polyvore.com/bethany/thing?id=16064711
Rose:
dress: http://www.polyvore.com/bright_red_rose_corsage_taffeta/thing?id=6679273
shoes: http://www.polyvore.com/jimmy_choo_quiet_patent-leather_pumps/thing?id=14432502
Bella:
dress: http://www.polyvore.com/aidan_mattox_blue_jersey_drape/thing?id=14141422
shoes: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/thing?id=9110450
necklace: http:/www.polyvore.com/necklaces_01ct_edwardian_style_platinum/thing?id=16191429
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Yes, please with Jasper and Edward on top:)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 45
It's great!! ;)
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yeah for Bella! I'm so happy for her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 45
awwww that is a good thing...that will help her
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 44
this is soooo good!! you should have bella pull a big prankon the last day of school on everyone..but i dont have to...
Author's Response: Not a bad idea!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 44
It's so great that they are all going to stay together!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
I just started reading this and I love it! I can't wait to find out what has caused Bella to retreat into silence. Beautifully written!
Author's Response:
thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it :)
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 44
ooh they're getting more affectionate and bella, poor girl, had a no reason freak attack. :( I love where this is going. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 44
What a chapter!! I enjoyed even with the panic attack!! I suppose Bella will study art huh?
Great
xoxo
marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 43
Charlie is so happy that she is alive and talking that he goesn't care about the language, I wish he was my dad! He is awesome!
Author's Response:
I think that when yoe've been through as much as Bella has been, you get the right to cuss!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 43
Wow totally loving this story and really glad to see James not a bad guy for once hopefully he'll stay that way.
Author's Response:
THanks:
Date: 08 Apr 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 43
well at least she knows she's loved. lol I liked that chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 43
That was fucking awesome indeed!! Go BELLA!!!
Great smartsmouth!
xoxo
MArianne
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reveiws!!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 42
I loved it!! Honestly I thought that you will end it here for a moment... The ending part is awesome!
xx
Marianne
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 41
What a fucking nightmare.... It send chills down my spine!!
xx
Marianne
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 40
I don't really think that tomatoes and veggies are the thing...
How about you let me handle her?? ***strange glint in her eye***
I have a basement here... Nobody can hear her scream... I wont kill he if you dont want to... Just play with her! No permanent damage at her body at least!! ***demented laugh***
Snapps out of it...
Ok I am off to the next chap...
xx
Marianne
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 39
For fuck's sake... If Bellas is hurt I swear I will kill her myself!!
And you know me... It will be slow bloody and painful! ***evil laugh***
xx
marianne
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 38
I am back from Easter break and decide to read this story first cause I think I don't need mental support or tissues and I save smutt for later....
This is what I get ***looks around her and mess her desk up*** Where are my Klinex??
I can't get Rennee... She left! Why did she came back?? She wants Bella to be her Maid of Honor??
Anyway you know I love it!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
awesome! i loved th verbal beatdown. amazing.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 42
well at least all is semi well again. I like it. keep it up thanks again bye
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 07 Apr 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 42
She has the worlds best family!!
Author's Response:
Yes, she does:)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 42
Aww, so cute. I hope they don't start watching her around the clock, she'll go crazy.
Author's Response:
I know, right?
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 41
Charlie is such an awesome dad!! I wish he was mine!!
Author's Response:
Me too:) thanks!
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 41
that girl has got a long way to go. I'm so glad Edward has the patience for her because he loves her that much. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ohhhh i love your story!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 41
i loved the ending of the chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope its up soon and longer than the last couple,
Author's Response:
Thank:)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 40
I like what you would like to do to Renee! It takes a special kind of bitch to walk away from her own child!
Author's Response:
I know! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 40
Omg this was so sad. I hope she gets through it. Hope you update soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 40
Okay, Esme should have gotten one good smack in though...Yea, for Chalie! Thanks for the update. What will Bella have to deal with next?
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
the tomato thing would be great. lol I liked that chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 39
i wish you didnt stop it like that. i hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
I will:)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 39
WTF!?!? You are leaving it there?!! Arg! And I am out of chapters. Thanks for the crazy good cliffie. I loved Esme when she got all Mama Bear on Renee. I thought she was going to scratch her eyes out. And poor Edward. Bella will be alright, right? She has to!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks for the review:)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
Well, atleast she's talking to the therapist. Hopefully she will talk to Edward and Charlie too. Good job.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 37
Just when you thought this story was wrapping up and Bella was on her way to finding happiness, we are sucked back in. I wonder what'll happen next...
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 36
That was a pretty good Christmas-inspired prank. LOL.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 35
This Bella makes me want to say, 'I am woman, hear me roar." Go kick some ass girly.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 39
damn Rene! ugh!
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 39
GAH! this has become one of my favorites, your doing such a good job. its a sad story but happy at the same time. i love it, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 39
ok so i am sooooo hooked on this story!! keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
oh Bella. she just threw things WAY out of proportion. poor girl. :( I hope she's okay. I can't wait to find out what happens next. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Yes, she did! Thanks:)
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
Are they going to baker act her?
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 38
ahh you are getting on my nerves! lol no I'm just kidding. I love that Bella has yet another obstacle to face. this just keeps getting better. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
I hope Renee gets the hint and goes away!
Author's Response:
Me too!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh no that is so sad, i can't believe that Renee has only come back now and only becasue she heard what happened. Stupid. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 38
I'd tell the witch to get the heck out-of-town and not look back.
Author's Response:
All in due time....
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 38
Poorp Bella can the girl catch a break! love the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
thats not good that she is going back into her shell...
Author's Response:
No, it's not:(
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 38
love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have it up soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 37
wow just when she was getting better, that witch comes back! (shaking my head) so much for the two of them getting closer. :( I like it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 37
awww that is sad...
Author's Response:
I know!