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Reviewer: michelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

OK.. first off, that's so unlikely and horible. If Charlie knew she was raped he sure as hell wouldn't let three teen age strangers go and get his kids... how flippin' cruel.



Author's Response:

Perhaps, but when are  you are desprate to help your chid, there is no end to what you might do:) Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 50

Absolutely wonderful!  It don't get any better.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: myshy741 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 43

You know the biggest reason I like this story is because you went outside the "Norm".  It's a good story decent plot, a little rough in some places but still good.  You took the "normal"  Bad Guys and made them her friends, her confidant so to speak.  You made Lauren a little shady but snaped her back in line.  Mike was her best friend Rosalie loves her.  James is a role model.  Lol.  I really like that.  It was interesting to read it thus far.  Good job.  I like it.  Not that you need my approval but it was certainly different from any other story I've read.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I wanted the main focus of this story to be her recovery and not the attack, or who attacked her.

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 50

I have loved this story.  I am sad to see it end but what a happy ending it is.  Looking forward to ready more of your work soon.

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Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: MrsRathboner Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 50

aw that was beautiful <3



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Thank you

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 50

awww that is cute!!



Author's Response:

THank you:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 50

I loved this story - great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: moonlit smile Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm really loving this story. I'm new to this , but am addicted already.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 50

Perfect ending!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 50

Aw :) Great story I really enjoyed it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 50

Come on just the weeding??? As an outtake?? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! ***pouts***

You know I am a sucker for weddings!! I can find everything wedding gowns tiaras shoes jewls eveything!! PLLEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE

 

xoxo



Author's Response:

lol, I'm thinking about wriing the wedcding:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 50

i wish you would have shown them at their wedding and not just stop there. i love what you had them doing with their lives. i wish you would have continued. its sad to see the story ended.



Author's Response:

I might still do their wedding:)

Reviewer: walmartchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 50

Awww!!! That was a great story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 50

So good, I'll be there and this ended very nicely. thanks again can't wait. bye



Author's Response:

Thanks:) I just put it up:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 49

awwww im so happy for them!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: rpattzgirl08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 49

yeah im so happy for them they are soo good together yeah them im so pround of bella for finally letting go of her fears

Author's Response: thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 49

wow hot and heavy and after daddy leaves? edward you animal. lol I loved it. I'm sad to see it end though. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, thankS:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 49

He's so perfect for her!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 49

great chapter! good for Bella :) Edward is so sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 49

I'm glad you made them wait to have sex. I'm also glad you had her go to therapy which is very necessary for people that suffer through trauma. Hopefully people will read this and understand that no one is able to get over rape just like that. It takes time, love and support.



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Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 49

Aww, that's so great that she finally had the courage to move on to that next step with Edward. I can't believe the story is nearly finished. Can't wait for the last chapter.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

You got me excited now! Anything I can help with?? (Outfits pics etc...)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 49

woo hoo  college here they come.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice! Can't wait! What's about?



Author's Response:

Bella starts a new job with the FBI. It's full of angst, drama, twists, turns, and lemons! Plus, I have the sequel to Lustful Awaking, too:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 49

That was sweet! How long will this one be??

XoXo



Author's Response:

Only one more chapter left:( but I have another story ready to go up:)

Reviewer: Lisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 49

Aww at the end ^^



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Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 48

this is a really good story and i can't wait for more update soon please



Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 48

awww that was good!!



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 48

Love the update! :)



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Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 48

You know seeing James as one of the good guys is alwways refreshing... Sometimes being the evil jackass is getting old... (not that I have any problem with it... ;) )

Loved it!

xoxo



Author's Response:

I know. I get tired of James always being the bad guy too. I do have stories where he is the badguy but I like to try to mix it up some:)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 47

Splendidly done!! :)



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 48

good for Bella. she did amazing. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 40

It was great!! I really wanted Esme to hit her!! :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 37

Wow!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 33

That was great! :)



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Thank you!!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 31

Every time she retells it i cry! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 47

woo hoo  graduation is done.



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 40

I like your alternative better.

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 47

awwww that is soo cte!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Do not apologize hun! You know I am not always the bitch I look like!

I am glad that you did!!

xx

 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 47

aww forever! how sweet. I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 47

Mmmm foverer... Intresting! I can imagine myself bitching at you for eterntity!!

lol

So what did you think of the outfits???

xxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Sorry, I loved them! Things have just been so crazy here!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 47

Beautiful!



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

What the hell was that?

He gave her away? :)



Author's Response:

he's desperate:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 47

loved the speach.



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Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

They are ready!!

http://www.polyvore.com/senior_prom/set?id=17756689

http://www.polyvore.com/senior_prom/set?id=17757227

http://www.polyvore.com/senior_prom/set?id=17758027

I can make any changes you want!!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 46

so even though Bella is not so sure at the moment with sleeping with Edward are they eventually going to? Just curious. i love what's happening now and Prom was sweet. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yes, they will but it's a big step for both of them so I really wanted to wait until the perfect  moment.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

You sure like them?? I can start making the whole thing right away!



Author's Response: Yes, I do:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 46

awww that was cute!!!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 46

It was such a sweet fluffy chapter!! :)

I was lookind for a wedding outfit a friend has asked and I came across these dresses for the girls! I think you might like them!! What do you think? I can make the whole outfit if you want!!

Alice:

dress: http://image.dhgate.com/upload/200912/77/ff80808121bf487c0121c29773cc4c0b/productimg1260436216118.jpg

shoes: http://www.polyvore.com/bethany/thing?id=16064711

Rose:

dress: http://www.polyvore.com/bright_red_rose_corsage_taffeta/thing?id=6679273

shoes: http://www.polyvore.com/jimmy_choo_quiet_patent-leather_pumps/thing?id=14432502

Bella:

dress: http://www.polyvore.com/aidan_mattox_blue_jersey_drape/thing?id=14141422

shoes: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/thing?id=9110450

necklace: http:/www.polyvore.com/necklaces_01ct_edwardian_style_platinum/thing?id=16191429

 

xoxo

Marianne

 



Author's Response:

Yes, please with Jasper and Edward on top:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 45

It's great!! ;)

xx

Marianne

 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 45

Yeah for Bella! I'm so happy for her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 45

awwww that is a good thing...that will help her



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 44

this is soooo good!! you should have bella pull a big prankon the last day of school on everyone..but i dont have to...



Author's Response: Not a bad idea!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 44

It's so great that they are all going to stay together!



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thanks!

Reviewer: LadyExcalibur Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

I just started reading this and I love it! I can't wait to find out what has caused Bella to retreat into silence. Beautifully written!



Author's Response:

thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 44

ooh they're getting more affectionate and bella, poor girl, had a no reason freak attack. :( I love where this is going. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you ;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 44

What a chapter!! I enjoyed even with the panic attack!! I suppose Bella will study art huh?

Great

xoxo

marianne



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 43

Charlie is so happy that she is alive and talking that he goesn't care about the language, I wish he was my dad! He is awesome!



Author's Response:

I think that when yoe've been through as much as Bella has been, you get the right to cuss!

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 43

Wow totally loving this story and really glad to see James not a bad guy for once hopefully he'll stay that way.



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THanks:

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 43

well at least she knows she's loved. lol I liked that chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 43

That was fucking awesome indeed!! Go BELLA!!!

Great smartsmouth!

xoxo

MArianne



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reveiws!!!!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 42

I loved it!! Honestly I thought that you will end it here for a moment... The ending part is awesome!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 41

What a fucking nightmare.... It send chills down my spine!!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 40

I don't really think that tomatoes and veggies are the thing...

How about you let me handle her?? ***strange glint in her eye***

I have a basement here... Nobody can hear her scream... I wont kill he if you dont want to... Just play with her! No permanent damage at her body at least!! ***demented laugh***

 

Snapps out of it...

Ok I am off to the next chap...

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 39

For fuck's sake... If Bellas is hurt I swear I will kill her myself!!

And you know me... It will be slow bloody and painful! ***evil laugh***

xx

marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 38

I am back from Easter break and decide to read this story first cause I think I don't need mental support or tissues and I save smutt for later....

This is what I get ***looks around her and mess her desk up*** Where are my Klinex??

I can't get Rennee... She left! Why did she came back?? She wants Bella to be her Maid of Honor??

Anyway you know I love it!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 43

awesome! i loved th verbal beatdown. amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 42

well at least all is semi well again. I like it. keep it up thanks again bye



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 42

She has the worlds best family!!



Author's Response:

Yes, she does:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 42

Aww, so cute.  I hope they don't start watching her around the clock, she'll go crazy.



Author's Response:

I know, right?

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 41

Charlie is such an awesome dad!! I wish he was mine!!



Author's Response:

Me too:) thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 41

that girl has got a long way to go. I'm so glad Edward has the patience for her because he loves her that much. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: MrsRathboner Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 41

Ohhhh i love your story!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 41

i loved the ending of the chapter. i cant wait for the  next chapter. i hope its up soon and longer than the last couple,



Author's Response:

Thank:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 40

I like what you would like to do to Renee! It takes a special kind of bitch to walk away from her own child!



Author's Response:

I know! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 40

Omg this was so sad. I hope she gets through it. Hope you update soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 40

Okay, Esme should have gotten one good smack in though...Yea, for Chalie!  Thanks for the update.  What will Bella have to deal with next?



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 40

the tomato thing would be great. lol I liked that chapter. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 39

i wish you didnt stop it like that. i hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

I will:)

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 39

WTF!?!? You are leaving it there?!! Arg! And I am out of chapters. Thanks for the crazy good cliffie. I loved Esme when she got all Mama Bear on Renee. I thought she was going to scratch her eyes out. And poor Edward. Bella will be alright, right? She has to!!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

Well, atleast she's talking to the therapist. Hopefully she will talk to Edward and Charlie too. Good job. 

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 37

Just when you thought this story was wrapping up and Bella was on her way to finding happiness, we are sucked back in. I wonder what'll happen next...

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 36

That was a pretty good Christmas-inspired prank. LOL.

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 35

This Bella makes me want to say, 'I am woman, hear me roar." Go kick some ass girly. 

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 34

Good job. 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 39

damn Rene! ugh!



Author's Response:

I know!

Reviewer: Oaky Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 39

GAH! this has become one of my favorites, your doing such a good job. its a sad story but happy at the same time. i love it, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: beanbag_131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

ok so i am sooooo hooked on this story!! keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

oh Bella. she just threw things WAY out of proportion. poor girl. :( I hope she's okay. I can't wait to find out what happens next. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yes, she did! Thanks:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 39

Are they going to baker act her?



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 38

ahh you are getting on my nerves! lol no I'm just kidding. I love that Bella has yet another obstacle to face. this just keeps getting better. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 38

I hope Renee gets the hint and goes away!



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh no that is so sad, i can't believe that Renee has only come back now and only becasue she heard what happened. Stupid. Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 38

I'd tell the witch to get the heck out-of-town and not look back.



Author's Response:

All in due time....

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 38

Poorp Bella can the girl catch a break! love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 38

thats not good that she is going back into her shell...



Author's Response:

No, it's not:(

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have it up soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

wow just when she was getting better, that witch comes back! (shaking my head) so much for the two of them getting closer. :( I like it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 37

awww that is sad...



Author's Response:

I know!

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