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Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 39

OMG Renee needs to get OUT OF TOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!  Poor Bella just when everything is going good.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 37

OMG I hope Renee came back for the right reasons.  I hope Bella dosen't slip back into herself...she has so many that love her and support her.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 34

Glad that is over.  To bad Mike, Jess and his mom have to leave...but people are cruel.  I'm glad that Bella now feels that she did not do anything wrong.  I think this will give closer to Bella and Charlie!!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

I think you should warn people to by stock in Klenex!  LOL 

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

I have read most of your stories and I love them.  I just found this one and WOW I love it too!!!  You are a wonderful writer.  Thanks for sharing it with all of us readers!!!!

Reviewer: LCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 50

Great story!! Very good written!! Sometimes I even had to cry ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 50

This was such a good story. There was a lot of sadness, but is was always full of love to overcome the bad.

Reviewer: VampireReaper13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 50

I just read this straight through.

It is such a captivating story. I spent most of the story in tears. It could be because I am an abuse victim, but I don't think that is all of it. This story is beautifuly written, and covers so, so much material.

It really allows a person to look at life and see that there may be hope. It is a bit fairy tale in the whole find the new family etc, but why not. It makes for a wonderful story.

Thank you for the emotional roller coaster. Thank you for sharing your talent. I feel like I should say more, but I am literally at a loss for words.

VR13

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 46

Are they going to be ready for more before the end of the story and if not, is there going to be a sequel?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 37

Great just what Bella needs now ... another setback ?!?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 33

Good Girl, Bella!!!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 32

That is a very big, but hard step to take - admitting to yourself that it wasn't your fault - Kudos to Bella for being able to realize that already!!

Reviewer: Annjann Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm confused as to why total strangers give a crap. That just isn't the way things go...

Author's Response:

Because they see the pain in her eyes, they understand how she feels.

Reviewer: Shelndrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

It is a beautiful story so far. I was raped. I feel that you understand. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I do understand.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 50

thanks for the great story!! you are a wonderful writer!  thanks for the happy ending.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 49

again you need stock in tissues i think i have used a whole box!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 42

i love me some edward... you just haven't let us see how he feels!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 41

tissues you should get stock in tissues because you sure are making me use a lot of them!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 40

good get that bitch gone..... agh!!  i love charlie!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 39

WOW!!  didn't see that coming... WOW!!  so much pain i can't understand how so much pain to lead you to kill yourself.... it is so painful and horrible....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 38

yuk that sucks ass!!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 37

ok how much crap are we going to throw at the poor girl?  i knew something was gong to happen you wrapped it up too quick!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

that's so funny i named my first car betsy!!! sweet!!!



Author's Response:

lol, so was mine. She was hunk of junk!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 35

tissues i need lots of tissues!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 34

looks like things are evening out  but i am sure there is lot's more bumps to go....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 33

wow!  thanks for the strong bella i like it!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 31

poor bella.... i just want to cry

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 25

i hate when the love word comes out so quick that means something bad is going to happen....



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews. Sorry I havnen't responded to them all. If I was writing this now, I would have changed alot.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

here comes my 2nd favorite.. i love me some jasper he takes a real close secong to ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 22

boy can bella have anymore stupid realizations going on in her head.. it's all my fault and he cant love me.... bella bella bella you are soooo slow!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

ok i was wrong but charlie is good too...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

its my boy i know it.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

leave it to lauren to be a bitch... well i wold like to use a totally different word... i hope rose or someone kicks the crap out of her!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

makes me want to cry people can be soooo sick!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

ok it was far fetched before but it is more now.  that was a quick turn around..... i really like the story i do.  don't take it the wrong way.  i am not being mean... i do like the story.  i know you can't waste ten or more chapters on the not talking etc you need to get on with the show.. i agree.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

tough tough tough... makes me want to cry

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

ok you are filling in the blanks i will trust i promise

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

still this is way out there but i really want to read it! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

ok i have some problems  a complete stranger and you just give up your daughter to them... i know it's fiction but still alittle far fetched..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

ok you have a bunch of riddles i hope you fill in the blanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

ok they are really really strange!!! we won't hurt you your safe with us and they all say it?  strange!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

looks like this is going to be good the odd cullens and hales....

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

mr davis is a jerk!!! why would he do that when he knew she wouldnt answer?!?!?!?! 



Author's Response:

Because he is trying to help her but doesn't know how.

Reviewer: sethanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 50

Dear ButterflyBetty

This is a fantastic story and a brilliant portrayal of a very difficult subject.

You painted this story with true artistic flair - if it was a book I wouldn't have been able to put it down.

Thank you for giving us the readers the pure pleasure of reading this masterpiece.

Seth



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I appreciate it very much.

Reviewer: lauralouwho Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 50

this was a fascinating story.  A lot seemed far fetched, but it worked for this story.  I love it when B & E don't deny their love for each other.  Love can happen very fast, I knew I loved my husband within a few weeks and knew we would get married about a month after that.  Of course, we got married 6 years after that, he was slow to hop on that wagon.  Anyway, I never understood why B & E always waited forever to declair themselves to each other.

 

Thanks for an great story.  I think I'm going to start reading Here We Go Again now.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

Another good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Good chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good first chapter. hope iwill like it.

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

Couldn't charlie just drive her to the cullens house? I mean, that kidnapping thing just adds to the trauma.



Author's Response:

Perhaps but Bella wouldn't have gone with him either.

Reviewer: samic Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

He scrambled away from Charlie (not - me - that was Charlie’s pov)

 

Some of the things you have written in this story have been in the wrong view  for example -

in Charlie’s pov he said that - Edward, Emmett and Jasper grab him before he can get away.

it would have made more sense as - Edward, Emmett and Jasper grabbed him before he could get away.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

I loved that story.  You showed Bella's road to recovery perfectly.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

great job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

she needs to let it go

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

awesome story

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

hmph well

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

good chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

she needs the therapy

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

wow

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

good job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

that is aweful

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

poor Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

poor Charlie

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

talk about horror stories

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

how sad

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

good job on the pov

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

awesome job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

they seem kinda pushy

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

teachers are sometimes sooo stupid

Reviewer: 30somethingmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 50

Aother excellent story. Congratulations!!! I look forward to the next story.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting story so far. I'm intrigued as to what's happened to Bella and what it is that the Cullens seem to 'understand' about her.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

the prank was classic! loved it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 35

so happy that she is taking her life back one step at a time.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 34

some closure for baby bell. she needs it to feel that this chapter of her life is over and she can move forward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

you go girl! you take the power back, asshole never deserved it anyways!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 32

funny how it was like a switch and the light went on...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 31

well peter pushed her for answers and she was great. not sure why the whole group has to go to the museum, why can't b and e just go and the others can pick them up later.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 30

wow the first fight

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

well she seems to be finding a lot of different copeing skills. but i wonder what's up with charlie?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 28

uh oh who is there?

glad to see bella trying to find herself again. and charlie finnaly had his version of 'the talk'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

oooo... is belly bean a prankster? wow that could be so much fun!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

i agree charlie. 'about fucking time'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 25

yay! thet are finnaly putting themselves out there.

poor jasper, glad to see you made him the 'happy, normal' kid who just got the bad end of the stick.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

poor emmy bear. happy to see that em and bella have come to an understanding on how they feel about eachother.

now what is goning on with jasper?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

ugh! nothing sucks worse than the girl you like telling you, you are her best friend. poor eddie!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

well it looks like these two need to have someone sit them down and have a big talk about how they are feeling.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 21

oh boy what will the boys do? not sure if bella is ready for this yet.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

well new look, new bella? well at leasr eddie has stood up and taken notice!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

looks like everyone can see the bond between e & b.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

one foot in front of the other, tthat is how it is done.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

well she is seeing the pros ans the cons of sharing her story. she just needs to see that there is far more good that will come from all of this than bad. people may talk but soon there will be something else to get their attention and she will be able to move away from the spotlight.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

well it will be a long and windy road but with help she seems to be getting the fact that she can get better and take back her life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

poor girl has a long way to go...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh no she din't!

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