Date: 25 Jun 2018 3:22 AM Title: Outtake 2
It's an amazing, intriguing fascinating story field with love and joy enough to out weigh all the pain, suffering, grief and sadness!!!! I'm so happy you completed it!!!!! Its a ten from beginning to end!!!! Thank you.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 27
quite disaapointed that edward got off so easily.
as the vampire queen, thought bella would put him though the ringer
a bit before sucumming.
this actually kind of ruined the story a bit.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:31 PM Title: Outtake 2
Thanks for this very different Bella and Edward story.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:10 PM Title: Outtake 1
Just as her vision showed Bell what would come to pass.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 38
A lovely wedding indeed!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 37
This will be a blessing for Marcus and Ashlee both, after the sorrow of losing their mates. Sounds like Bella and Edward's wedding draws closer.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
Boy! That was some fight! As powerful as Bella is, she still needs the help of family and friends!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 35
Okay, okay, what's this plan? If it ends Maria and Victoria, it will be a great ploan!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 34
Quite a display of unlimited power, plus feeding the tribe! Now for the plan that the queen has come up with!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
She sure had little trouble making a pact with the wolves. It was kind of cute when Seth asked how old she was, and Leah stuck up for her!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
Sure, no problem, just enlist the wolf pack to be allies in the coming war! I'm glad Edward got up the nerve to propose and Bella said yes!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
The letters Marcus and Alice received were wonderful. Now they just have to remember their loved ones and not mourn them!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 30
An amazing experience for all concerned, as well as a wakeup call to prepare for the coming fight! The letters were very touching and must have been a comfort to Bella!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 29
How wonderful for Bella to see Didyme and Gabriel and hear the future from them!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
This trip to Alice's grave has got to be strange, even for vampires!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
Too bad Bella keeps having these bad feelings about the future with Edward!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
It almost wasn't worth Alice's pain, for her to have her memories back!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Maybe this heartbreak is punishment for hiding her true identity from Edward and his family!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
Seems the queen has shown up after all!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
She must not have thought how much this would hurt everyone who loves her!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
So, even in this very different story, Mr. Bossypants Edward is forcing them to leave! How totally unnecessary!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hate that chapter twenty is missing, I really wanted to know what the problem was at the end of chapter nineteen! Must have been something about the Volterra birthday ball I'll bet!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
That didn't go too well, but it was okay until they got back! Wonder what the problem is now?
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
So, now Jasper gets to be in on the secret!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
The only reason Bella would have fear in her eyes is because she wants Jasper to like her and not tell Edward who she really is!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Maybe she shouldn't leave incriminating sketches lying around the house, if she doesn't want them all to know now!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm puzzled as to why Bella is masquerading as human for the benefit of the Cullens. Surely Carlisle will recognize her?
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
Talk about having a full day! This business of being queen of all vampires is a full time job!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
That must have been Bella playing some kind of trick on Carlisle and his family, making them think she is in Volterra!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
A rather successful first day at school, what with putting the skanks on notice and telling off Mike Newton! Of course Alice thinks she's seen Bella before, it's just been a long time and her memories are erased!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Not going to dress like sweet little Bella Swan this time around, I see! Goth chopper or '67 Chev 427, either one is going to get a lot of notice at Forks High !
Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
She must be headed to that cabin near the asylum Alice was in.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Queen Isabella is having a really good time traveling around America and Canada, waiting for the time to be right. It's fun having her meet everyone we already know!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bell is everywhere, taking care of everything it would seem! This was a great explanation of Alice's strange awakening to her new life.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really like that Bella is interacting with everyone from her future. I guess being the queen of vampires lets you do that!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looks like Bella is setting up her future quite nicely, but leaving Aro in charge might be a mistake!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Kind of cool that Charlie is a nomad and father of a hybrid child, but sad that he will lose his mate in the near future. Sometimes Bella must look on her gift as a curse.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
That is definitely a handy gift to have, being able to see that far into the future. Bella must be the most powerful vampire ever!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was curious as to how Bell could be older as a vampire and younger than the rest. Thanks for clearing that up.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
No wonder you named this story after her, Bell has any gift or talent known if she wishes to have it! That's amazing and her search of Carlisle's future is puzzling as well!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
How different, for Isabella to be such an old vampire and one of the rulers of Volterra!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like this story, but there is something wrong with chapter 20
Date: 17 Aug 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm totally loving this story :) Glad I found it!
Date: 25 Apr 2013 12:02 AM Title: Outtake 2
loved it
Date: 05 Mar 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
The first meeting went well except with Mike ...
Date: 05 Mar 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! She does not like Romanian.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter meeting with Peter and Charlotte.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Alice has been changed.
I like this story.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Meet Alice and Gabe.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella goes to visit the world
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
The story unfolds slowly.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella had a great vision.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 4:14 AM Title: Outtake 2
I found your story. I started to get into it. But most I the chapters are unreadable. All the words over lap eachother. It was a great start.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 10:50 PM Title: Outtake 2
I loved this story from beginning to end and I have to say... wow.
I am going to rec it when I post my next chapter if that is okay with you.
Thanks
Fiorella
Date: 27 Feb 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
I liked the story of Bella.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:27 AM Title: Outtake 2
sweet outtake ending.
ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:26 AM Title: Outtake 1
they are cute together
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
awwww cute ceremony
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 37
aww for marcus and ashlee
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 36
Go Bad Ass Bella
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
Fun times. Victoria and Maria are such cowardss hiding behind others.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 33
the wolves took it quite well
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
awww cute proposal
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
ooooh Marcus is mad..... Get em B
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
wow rough way to force a conversation. lol
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
aww for the crying jag at the end
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
wow she sure is forgiving.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
wow. She's full of surprises huh?
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
oooh now the truth will come out.
Date: 26 Feb 2013 7:17 AM Title: Outtake 2
Thank you for all of the updates! While I'm a little sad that the story is over, I think you did a great job wrapping it up. Thank you for sharing this story...I loved it!
~allidel :)
Date: 11 Feb 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love this story and can't wait to read more! Please update
Date: 18 Nov 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh Bella....taking the bonds from your brothers is not nice.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh Eddie you are a goober. Interesting twist to the bleeding thing
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
surprised she's kept the secret this long
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
aww poor guilty feeling jazz
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
ah so Jasper learns the truth first.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh Eddie is pissing off the wrong woman. I love jazz
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
lol for her dropping the v bomb on them.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
YEY for Demetri getting to be happy.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Carlisle is too funny sometimes.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
lol LOVE her putting Newton and Stanley in their places.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
love the cars and bikes. Mari....hmmm ungrateful teenager or manipulated girl????
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm romanian mate...Omen???
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
cant wait for her to get revenge on James.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
ah the pixie appears.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ch 6 & 7 seem to be dupicates.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
awww Jane is losing her mama figure.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ah maribell and charlie appear.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Powerful B with all her powers. aww for gifting jane
Off to bed. read more tomorrow
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
naughty vamps creating armies and abandoning them.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
intersting start