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Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 3:22 AM Title: Outtake 2

It's an amazing, intriguing fascinating story field with love and joy enough to out weigh all the pain, suffering, grief and sadness!!!! I'm so happy you completed it!!!!! Its a ten from beginning to end!!!! Thank you.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

quite disaapointed that edward got off so easily.

as the vampire queen, thought bella would put him though the ringer

a bit before sucumming.

this actually kind of ruined the story a bit.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:31 PM Title: Outtake 2

Thanks for this very different Bella and Edward story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:10 PM Title: Outtake 1

Just as her vision showed Bell what would come to pass.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 38

A lovely wedding indeed!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 37

This will be a blessing for Marcus and Ashlee both, after the sorrow of losing their mates. Sounds like Bella and Edward's wedding draws closer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

Boy! That was some fight! As powerful as Bella is, she still needs the help of family and friends!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 35

Okay, okay, what's this plan? If it ends Maria and Victoria, it will be a great ploan!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 34

Quite a display of unlimited power, plus feeding the tribe! Now for the plan that the queen has come up with!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

She sure had little trouble making a pact with the wolves. It was kind of cute when Seth asked how old she was, and Leah stuck up for her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 32

Sure, no problem, just enlist the wolf pack to be allies in the coming war! I'm glad Edward got up the nerve to propose and Bella said yes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31

The letters Marcus and Alice received were wonderful. Now they just have to remember their loved ones  and not mourn them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

An amazing experience for all concerned, as well as a wakeup call to prepare for the coming fight! The letters were very touching and must have been a comfort to Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 29

How wonderful for Bella to see Didyme and Gabriel and hear the future from them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 28

This trip to Alice's grave has got to be strange, even for vampires!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

Too bad Bella keeps having these bad feelings about the future with Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 26

It almost wasn't worth Alice's pain, for her to have her memories back!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

Maybe this heartbreak is punishment for hiding her true identity from Edward and his family!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 24

Seems the queen has shown up after all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

She must not have thought how much this would hurt everyone who loves her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

So, even in this very different story, Mr. Bossypants Edward is forcing them to leave! How totally unnecessary!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 21

I hate that chapter twenty is missing, I really wanted to know what the problem was at the end of chapter nineteen! Must have been something about the Volterra birthday ball I'll bet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 19

That didn't go too well, but it was okay until they got back! Wonder what the problem is now?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

So, now Jasper gets to be in on the secret!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

The only reason Bella would have fear in her eyes is because she wants Jasper to like her and not tell Edward who she really is!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

Maybe she shouldn't leave incriminating sketches lying around the house, if she doesn't want them all to know now!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

I'm puzzled as to why Bella is masquerading as human for the benefit of the Cullens. Surely Carlisle will recognize her?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

Talk about having a full day! This business of being queen of all vampires is a full time job!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

That must have been Bella playing some kind of trick on Carlisle and his family, making them think she is in Volterra!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

A rather successful first day at school, what with putting the skanks on notice and telling off Mike Newton! Of course Alice thinks she's seen Bella before, it's just been a long time and her memories are erased!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 11

Not going to dress like sweet little Bella Swan this time around, I see! Goth chopper or '67 Chev 427, either one is going to get a lot of notice at Forks High !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

She must be headed to that cabin near the asylum Alice was in.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

Queen Isabella is having a really good time traveling around America and Canada, waiting for the time to be right. It's fun having her meet everyone we already know!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

Bell is everywhere, taking care of everything it would seem! This was a great explanation of Alice's strange awakening to her new life.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

I really like that Bella is interacting with everyone from her future.  I guess being the queen of vampires lets you do that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Looks like Bella is setting up her future quite nicely, but leaving Aro in charge might be a mistake!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Kind of cool that Charlie is a nomad and father of a hybrid child, but sad that he will lose his mate in the near future. Sometimes Bella must look on her gift as a curse.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

That is definitely a handy gift to have, being able to see that far into the future. Bella must be the most powerful vampire ever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

I was curious as to how Bell could be older as a vampire and younger than the rest. Thanks for clearing that up.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

No wonder you named this story after her, Bell has any gift or talent known if she wishes to have it! That's amazing and her search of Carlisle's future is puzzling as well!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

How different, for Isabella to be such an old vampire and one of the rulers of Volterra!

Reviewer: Cesresi Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

I like this story, but there is something wrong with chapter 20

Reviewer: brnkofeternity06 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm totally loving this story :) Glad I found it!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 12:02 AM Title: Outtake 2

loved it

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

Interesting.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Good chapter.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

The first meeting went well except with Mike ...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

They are here!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow! She does not like Romanian.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good chapter meeting with Peter and Charlotte.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Alice has been changed.

I like this story.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Meet Alice and Gabe.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Bella goes to visit the world

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

The story unfolds slowly.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella had a great vision.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 4:14 AM Title: Outtake 2

I found your story. I started to get into it. But most I the chapters are unreadable. All the words over lap eachother. It was a great start. 

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 10:50 PM Title: Outtake 2

I loved this story from beginning to end and I have to say... wow.

I am going to rec it when I post my next chapter if that is okay with you.
Thanks
Fiorella

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

I liked the story of Bella.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:27 AM Title: Outtake 2

sweet outtake ending.

ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:26 AM Title: Outtake 1

they are cute together

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

awwww cute ceremony

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 37

aww for marcus and ashlee

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 36

Go Bad Ass Bella

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

Fun times.    Victoria and Maria are such cowardss hiding behind others.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 34

cool powers

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 33

the wolves took it quite well

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 32

awww cute proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 31

sweet letters

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 30

ooooh Marcus is mad.....   Get em B

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 29

wow   rough way to force a conversation.  lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 28

aww for the crying jag at the end

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 27

wow she sure is forgiving.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

wow.   She's full of surprises huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25

oooh now the truth will come out.

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 7:17 AM Title: Outtake 2

Thank you for all of the updates!  While I'm a little sad that the story is over, I think you did a great job wrapping it up.  Thank you for sharing this story...I loved it!

~allidel  :)

Reviewer: Jgood27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love this story and can't wait to read more! Please update

Reviewer: zoey1001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

update plz

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

oh Bella....taking the bonds from your brothers is not nice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh Eddie you are a goober.  Interesting twist to the bleeding thing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

surprised she's kept the secret this long

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

aww poor guilty feeling jazz

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

ah so Jasper learns the truth first. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

oooh  Eddie is pissing off the wrong woman.  I love jazz

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

lol for her dropping the v bomb on them.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

YEY for Demetri getting to be happy.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Carlisle is too funny sometimes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

lol  LOVE her putting Newton and Stanley in their places.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

love the cars and bikes.    Mari....hmmm ungrateful teenager or manipulated girl????

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

hmmm romanian mate...Omen???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

LOVE Peter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

cant wait for her to get revenge on James.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

ah the pixie appears.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ch 6 & 7 seem to be dupicates.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

awww Jane is losing her mama figure.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ah  maribell and charlie appear.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Powerful B with all her powers.  aww for gifting jane

 

Off to bed.  read more tomorrow

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

naughty vamps creating armies and abandoning them.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Bell is funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

intersting start

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

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