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Reviewer: carnal_angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:46 AM Title: January 1

it's a good story, with some interesting ideas.  I would have liked to see where it went...but I'm late to the party I guess.  I guess I'll have to see if you kept it up somewhere else.

cheers!



Author's Response:

Hi carnal_angel.  Thanks for your review.  You will find this story continued on FanFiction.net.  It is currently on hiatus, but you should get more chapters than what is currently posted here.  I plan to start VD up after the new year.

 

Thanks again!  :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:49 PM Title: January 1

I'm still interested.... PLEASE continue....?! *puppy dog pout*



Author's Response:

Lol.  I might.  I have been thinking about it actually.  Although I need to get off my ass and get the next chapter posted.

Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:00 PM Title: January 1

I'm very sorry more people either haven't located this cool story and/or reviewed...it's a real shame.  I enjoyed it greatly and I sad it's not continuing.

I read a lot of ff and, while I don't contribute -yet (love to write but car accident scrambled my noggin a little - not brave enough to share yet), I appreciate the creativity of those who do.  This is one of my favorite types of Twilight ff - I really wish Stephenie would continue the saga b/c I want to see Bella/Edward/Ness more. :-)

Wish you'd reconsider, but understand...

Cyndi     aka Tsalagi Mama



Author's Response:

Hi Tsalagi!  Thanks for your kind words.  I didn't want to stop posting it here, but the traffic disappointed me.  However, it is still posting on FF.net.  Here is the link:  http://login.fanfiction.net/story/story_preview.php?storyid=5550445

I have posted three more chapters since.  If things pick up, I will post again.

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:31 AM Title: October 31

Loved it!!  But I'm waiting for the Jake Nathan showdown!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'll have it happen soon.  Who will win?  The suspense is killing me.  :D

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:35 PM Title: October 22

Excellent! Can't wait until Jake and Nathan come to blows.



Author's Response:

It will be fun.  :)

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 8:50 PM Title: May 2

I just foud this story and started reading, it is so good, and funny!!! It reads exactly likea a diary.

I'm with Bella on the hair dyeing though she has Edward's hair whats to complain about?? Oh yeah she's a teenager, got it!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Yeah, teenagers are never satisfied.  Even if she had everything, it wouldn't be enough. 

 

Thanks for reading!  I hope to update soon.  :)

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: October 14

She should do it with both of them.  Hell, she's young and single!



Author's Response:

Lol.  I like that thinking!  :)

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 4:42 PM Title: October 5

Well, well, well.  Not her father's daughter-her mother's.  And poor Jake always seems to be caught in the middle.

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I know.  I cannot decide if I want to get rid of him or not.  I like having him around even though I'm Team Edward.

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:55 PM Title: March 30

You're very welcome!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:48 AM Title: September 30

Is this the last chapter.  I hope not!  Waiting on the next chapter!

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:38 AM Title: September 18

Nathan is vampire!  Hey, I loved Barnabas Collins!!  It used to come on SyFy all the time!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:22 AM Title: August 31

Oh yes he is!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:18 AM Title: August 16

Oh, yes.  Let's just see if Jake still has it. 

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:06 AM Title: August 12

Poor Jake, always in the middle of a love triangle.  LS, you have a discrepency in your story.  In an earlier chapter, which I can't find now, Reneesme tells Edward & Bells she wanted to learn to play the piano and Edward passes out.  Well she said she was sick during this time, but in this chapter, while she is trying to get the tatto she says, she never had an aversion to needles b/c she has never been sick.  You might want to fix that. 

Just a thought.  It's your story.

 



Author's Response:

Ah!  Thanks for the catch!

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:44 AM Title: July 30

Great chappie, but one thing Reneesme is not supposed to be venomous, because she is a female.  Remember?  I don't know if you meant it that way or not.

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:35 AM Title: July 16

Great chapter!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:31 AM Title: July 11

Yep. Nathan is like Reneesme.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:25 AM Title: July 5

Nathan is a half vamp, half human too, isn't he?

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:07 AM Title: June 10

Yeah, what did he say to Edward?

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:02 AM Title: June 6

That Edward & Bella.  Freaks. Literally!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:58 AM Title: June 3

Hmm, very interesting.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:52 AM Title: June 1

Bump that!  If I had Cullen money, I'd want a NEW car!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:47 AM Title: May 22

Come on Reneesme, buck up!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:43 AM Title: May 20

Yea, she is really conflicted.  I'm not calling her Nessie, Bella would tear my head off!  he-he

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:39 AM Title: May 15

Oh, no!  Jakes gonna get his hear broken twice?  No, say it isn't so!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:34 AM Title: May 2

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! Hilarious!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:29 AM Title: April 25

Aww, poor Reneesme

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: April 21

Edward, the doting dad.  How cute!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:22 AM Title: April 4

Excellent, except...red hair & brown eyes?  I know that's how you envision her for this story, but weird.  Really weird.

Reviewer: Modiggy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: March 30

OMG!!!  This is SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOODDDDDD.  Very, very good!  I can't believe no one has left you a review!  You capture exactly how a teen age girl would talk and think. She even has a diary, and the way you talk about Bells Edward and Jacob is right on point! 

 Excellent JOB!

 

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