Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
this was upsetting that Edward just left, geeeeeeee
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Another great chapter. Hopefully Edward won't get too far before he realizes he needs her in his life. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Oh shit!! No. No more pain for these two. Please don't let this last too long.
Oh man. How long before the next update? I need some happy!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
I am so glad they are safe. But, I need to know the network is broken.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
looking forwardto the next chatper
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
This chapter had me feeling so much. I'm glad everyone is being treated with the medical they need, and are okay. Thank goodness Jasper thought fast over Bree's situation. And taking the lead in telling about what happened on the island, sparing Edward from the details.
Come on Edward, don't jump to conclusions, talk to Bella before you decide to bail on her. You both deserve so much happiness, and to heal yourselves together. I just don't want him to do something stupid that will jepordize his relationship with Bella. He needs to know he's going to be the father of twins, and Bella needs loves him.
Will Rosalie and Edward have a talk about the 'relationship' they had before the plane crash. Thank you for an awesome chapter. I'm looking forward to more.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
ah! i'm addicted to this story and i need edward to get his shit together! you love her, she loves you, and you're having babies! yay!!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
WOW!!! I didn't think this story could get any better or any more angsty!! lol :) You totally ROCK!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Yay!!!!!! They're all safe!!!!!!
Im glad baby Bree will be kept safe. I really wish Edward & Bella would talk to each other instead of jumping to conclusions & getting all upset. I hope he doesn't get into any trouble & comes back to the hospital.
Next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Omg! Edwards's self hating is so frustrating!!!! Just talk to Bella you silly man. I understand he is also dealing with a lot too so I won't strangle him. Hopefully he comes to his senses before Bella finds out he is missing. I'm happy everyone is alive and will eventually recover. Thanks for the update!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Thank God they're off that demented island. But Edward had better get his arse back to that hospital and Bella damn quick. They need to be together and telling each other their love is for real. Wondering where James is ??
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
God Edward is so.... grrr.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Wow! Twins
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Edward, you dumb f**k! What are you thinking?You better not screw this up!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Oh noe..the dumbass didnt learn from the last time? U are supposed to talk to each remember the promise?! Ugh..pls tell me u will put them out of their misery soon? Please and thank you!! Great chap!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Why does Edward never learn to talk too her? Grear update:-) is there a reason update date is still 06 of july?
Author's Response:
yes, I haven't asked TWCS to change the date. It doesn't automatically change. Authors have to ask each time.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
So glad that everyone if ok. Boy, Jasper sure can think fast on his feet. Admitting that he is the father of Bree and that Tanya is the mother. Wow!!!! I am glad that Jasper was able to inform everyone on what went on. Poor Edward. AGAIN.......miscommuncation!!!!!!! I would have thought that by now Edward would have learned to TALK to Bella before jumping to his conclusions. I am guess that either Jasper or Charlie will have to jerk a knot in him and get his nead out of his ass. LOL!!!!! I am sooooo loving this story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
I hope it doesn't take Edward too long before he talks to Bella. They need to be together! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Darn Edward always not getting all the facts.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Please don't leave Bella and Edward seperated for long. After everything they experienced, they deserve to bring comfort to each other.....not push themselves further away.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Awe edward is realy stupid he should know that bella loves him
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
loved this. Edward's as stubborn as ever
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
Whoa, what a chapter! Come on edward, get it together....... please update soon......
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
I'm so glad they are all safe.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 63 (back to IR)
oh wow great update
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:06 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
thank you for the insight..it does help.........can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:17 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
Loved hearing from them. Thanks for sharing their story.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 1:05 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:28 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
Thanks for sharing this. I did enjoy reading the Elizabeth's story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:48 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
:) loved this
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:06 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
Awww, I loved this interview! A great way to end their story. Hope all is well there. Keep up the good work! Dana
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:50 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
Can't wait until tomorrow. Thanks for the Liz 2 story, was very sweet. Great interview!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:24 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
How sweet are the old people in the picture
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:44 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:39 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
They are so precious even in death.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:32 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Interview
That was adorable!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 62
I didn't see you write that James was dead. Is he going to come after them. More more more......and more more. This story has me exhausted.
Author's Response:
In the next few chapters there will be a detailed body count. There is more to the story, but not more and more and more. It has a definite end, and we're not far from it.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 11:02 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
Loving this story. Cant get enough of it. I'm so glad they finally got off that f'ed up island. How much story is left? I cant wait tor more.
Author's Response:
It really depends on how detailed I go and how I break out the chapters. It's not written out yet, so sorry I can't be more specific. I do know how it all plays out, I just haven't written it down.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:40 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
Isn't odd how history repeats itself. For some reason I was thinking it was Charlie that maimed Aro. Glad Anthony got some justice for all the women Aro violated.
Thanks for sharing Elizabeth's story here. Looking forward to more IR.
Author's Response:
More IR tomorrow!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:53 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 9:14 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
:) loved this
Date: 14 Jul 2013 8:14 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
I have read it before ( I think on ff) but its a good story to tideme over till the next chapter of IR.
Author's Response:
yes, it's on ff :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:55 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
I'm glad that this story had a happy ending. That was pretty scary how easily they were found but I'm glad it was by Anthony & Elizabeth #3. Are we going to have a POV by Elizabeths #2 & #3 when Edward, Bella & all them get to the main land?
Author's Response:
Liz and Charles have died. But tomorrow I can give you the interview I did with their spirits. I hadn't planned on it with the others. I might be able to work that into the plot.
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:33 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
Great backstory, love how it all comes full circle.
Date: 14 Jul 2013 12:33 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 11:35 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
U didn't check this story as completed, so I am confused was this the end of the story or not please let me know!!!
Author's Response:
no, it's not complete. Just the Second Elizabeth backstory. I'll get back to IR on tuesday!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:12 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
I loved the Seconf Elizabeth story! Thank you for adding this into this story and filling in the missing pieces.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:01 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
She is a brave woman.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 9:37 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
Thank you for sharing the second Elizabeth's story with us. I am so glad that every thing turned out ok for them. I am glad that the 2nd and 3rd Elizabeth had each other to talk to.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 12:08 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 5:13 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
That was a nice ending to Elizabeth & a good beginning to Charles & Isabella's new life together. I love a good HEA.
So Bella was named after her grandmother.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:51 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
:) loved this
Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:37 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
loved it!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:34 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:09 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
Gah... I'm so giddy that not only did they make it off the boat, but Sebastian jumped off as well.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:25 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
wooohooo. Loved this!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:07 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
Thats such a great chapter!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:00 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
I am so glad that they have gotten away. Hope their future will be bright. Can't wait to find out more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2013 1:38 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
No pictures? Pity.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 1:12 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
I long to know such deep love.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 1:12 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
Wow, that was just like a fairy tale! Awesome.
Date: 11 Jul 2013 3:45 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
Thank you for clearing up them getting caught kissing.
Author's Response:
thanks for helping me.
Date: 11 Jul 2013 5:20 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Are things out of order? This seems to be a earlyer chapter.
Date: 11 Jul 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
I read the first part. James needs to die. Plain and simple. Will I ever catch up to this story? Right now it's 70 chapters and still going. I'm not even half way....
Date: 11 Jul 2013 3:42 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
I think these might be out of order. The last 3 segments about Elizabeth need to be switched around I think.
Author's Response:
yes im sorry
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:21 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
I thought I was going crazy !! I was like wait... Did I miss something?! lol
Date: 11 Jul 2013 12:07 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
Lol. This is great, thanks for the laugh and the back story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2013 12:05 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
They're so sweet together. Damn Aro and his timing, he just had to ruin the moment.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 9:50 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
That was a nice moment too. Well, she'll be able to have many moments like that now that she's free. Or have you got a twist coming up since they haven't made it off the island yet?
Knowing you, you probably do.
How do you come up with these stories?
Date: 10 Jul 2013 9:39 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
I think your story is backwards and it is really messing me up with the chapters be missplaced Charles and Elizabeth left is supposed to be the last chapter right ?
Date: 10 Jul 2013 6:27 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
This chapter I loved. The rest make me feel so uneasy.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 4:42 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
OMGosh!!!! I hope they get away safely. I am a little confused.....did Aro or did he NOT take her virginity??????
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 5:11 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 5:10 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
I'm glad that got stopped. So yay, she's free! I don't remember anyone saying anything what happened after she ran away. Just that she ran away with the sable boy & then they bought a new Elizabeth who was raped & became pregnant with Carlisle. So Elizabeth #1 suffered longer but Elizabeth #2 suffered worse; in my opinion at least.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:43 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
Thanks!
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:41 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:01 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 1:58 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
Yeah! Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 1:32 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
Charlie is a true knight in shining armor.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 12:56 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Did we miss something. How did they end up kissing. I went back and checked the last chapter (67) and it didn't end with them kissing. Just wondering g if a chapter got left out.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 8:24 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
I don't know who to feel worse for... Elizabeth or Charles. Aro is such a sick and demented bastard. At least now will know how Aro's no dick nub came about. Charles is gonna shoot it off if I remember correctly.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 6:29 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Sadness :'(
Can I request that you skip the rape & go straight to after the act? That would be nice.
Author's Response:
im posting it as is... but as ur about to see, he doesnt rape her :) He's done enough damage.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 5:23 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
love this story
Date: 09 Jul 2013 4:17 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Good to know the Aro has been consistent with his crazy, ass behavior.
I dont know who to feel worse for, Elizabeth or Charles :-(
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:36 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Looking forward to more
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:18 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
O M G !
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:50 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Omg, son of a bitch. I guess I remember Charles gives him his retrobution and he's had to live with it ever since.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:52 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
You've gotta give Bella amd Edeatd's hrandgatjrts a lot of crefit
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:40 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
It's hard to phrase this in type so it doesn't sound harsh. I appreciate the back story, but why is it being posted within the story and not as an out take? Also, if it is written already, why are you posting such short snippets?
I like the back story, the fact that you're sharing it, but when someone comes to read the whole story when it's complete it may totally throw them off!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:29 AM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
I'm loving Charles more and more as I get to read each chapter!!! Great work hun!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:36 AM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
Thanks!
Date: 07 Jul 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
remember what i said about James last chapter? well double that now....then end part of the chapter was like a breath of fresh air! Like a cool breeze on a hot day! I think I like Tanya a lot! Not to mention E and B making out for hours....he was so cute when he offered to help milk her breasts....she went right into the yes before she fell asleep....give me more of that!!
Date: 07 Jul 2013 9:11 PM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 8:48 PM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
I wonder how long till her birthday? Months? Weeks? I'm glad she gets away from that life. So judging from her husband's name they have a boy: Charlie :) Aro was just as sick & twisted in his youth, if not more so then he was as an old man.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
I just want to carve up James, Aro, and Demetri into little chunks, but have them still alive while I feed them to sharks....is that a bad thing? How dense is Edward that he didn't know Bella was feeling guilty for getting wet during James torture? Sheesh!!
Date: 07 Jul 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
God that was awful. James is truly hated....by me at least.....I seem to have a morbid fascination with the sadism and masochism in this story, god knows why...
Author's Response:
I know, people can't explain it :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 7:37 PM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
I'm feeling spoiled with all these updates. Thank you for them.
It hasn't been hard to follow as to who this Elizabeth is. You've done extremely well telling 'her' story, as sadden as it may be. I love Charlie for spending time with her and revealing some of his history about his life. I'm sure she feels 'normal' when she's with him, sharing stories. I'm glad she feels safe enough with him to open up about some of the things that go on in the house. Looking forward to more.
I've been wondering if James made it out of the burning house alive, and if by some odd chance Aro survived. If one or both did, I can only imagine the vengeance that will come the escapees way.
Author's Response:
If you really want to know, message me on fb and I'll tell you who did and didn't make it off of that island.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 7:36 PM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
Thanks for the teaser. Definitely helps with the wait.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 7:32 PM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
Love the picture. Hope Charles can help her. Can't wait to find out what happens.