Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 68
Awesome chapter! Cant wait to read more soon
Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
im glad edward was a gentleman and didnt try to hurt tonya dry sex isnt fun
Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
ew on the cum splatter and ouch on the nipple clamps.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
what the hell was she lactating?
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
feel sorry for tonya foreplay is important
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
so rosalie was a virgin, bella currently is a virgin what does that make alice
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
tanya is very determined to give head
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
so is alice brainwashed into being a child?
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
poor edward and bella
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
those lessons sound painful
Date: 30 Sep 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
a very wierd family
Date: 30 Sep 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
both of them are captives
Date: 30 Sep 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
bella elizabeth ok. edwards being forced
Date: 30 Sep 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow edward refusing a blow job really
Date: 30 Sep 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
bellas been kidnapped?
Date: 30 Sep 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 68
well his head is still in his ass but he does have some decent leads. Great chapter. As far as your book! Wow. Congratulations!!!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
what medacine was she on again?
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
is rosalie ever not stuck up
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
would it make a difference if bella knew it was a porn she was hearing
Date: 28 Sep 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 68
too damn short. lol. totally luvin this fic. NEED MORE. please update soon. PLEASE
E/k
Author's Response:
I'm working on it!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 68
Side note...bought Illicit Affairs. Thanks.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 68
awe yay for tanya for making a man friend and not being terrified of him! also... good for jasper for convincing edward to come home, though i am so happy that there is confirmation that aro is alive and that they have a lead, well not really but sort of, so there isn't that scary, "WFT, is he alive or not?" feeling... also, i really hope we can figure out if james is alive and where aro is so that all this hunting can be done and edward can be with his family. i am so excited he is coming home for esme's party and i cant wait for when he finds out that bella is still pregnant. please update soon!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 68
Wow! The trail to finding Aro and James just took one hell of a twist. I can't wait to read more soon.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 68
I hope someone finds Aro and James and hand them into the police, I'm intrigued about this Bree person.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are... she has her own entire book in my mind.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 68
Another great chapter! Love how this all went! I can't wait for Edward to find out that Bella's still pregnant!
I am not worried that this will go on and on... I actually hope it does!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 68
Good for Rose! And good for Jasper!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 68
I'm really starting to question Edward's intelligence. First of all, even if he was upset about Bella's supposed abortion, after EVERYTHING that they'd been through how could he seriously not even have one single conversation with her? Instead of him assuming that she wanted nothing to do with him, he should've at least confirmed that. Especially with everyone telling him that she needed him. For all he knew, even if she did have an abortion, it could've been because she COULDN'T carry a baby. After all the physical trauma that she endured on the island, that was a real possibility.
And secondly, does he seriously think that he'll be able to track down his targets by himself? He barely had the mental capacity to function on the island and figure out things. Jasper always had to intervene and either calm him down and/or point out the obvious. So strategic planning is definitely not Edward's strong point. Add in the fact that he hardly knows anything about Aro and his network, how does he really expect to figure anything out? And the trail is getting colder and colder the more time passes. Well, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for him.
Glad to see Tanya adjusting. I vaguely remember Garrett having a crush on her back when Edward first met her. I think he's single-handedly restoring her faith in the male species. It's nice how he's becoming her companion and not pressing the issue.
Once E&B finally figure things out, I hope Edward doesn't plan on moving them back to his apartment. It feels too tainted to me. He needs to show her that she is his only priority and special to him, above anyone else. She was already struggling with not being wanted by him before the island, then him being with her out of obligation on the island, and him completely deserting her the minute they're off the island. And it seems like he puts everyone else before her. So it's gonna feel unrealistic that he wants her now. She'll probably think he's there just because of her pregnancy. No one wants to feel unspecial (I know that's not a word) in the eyes of their man, so he needs to go above and beyond to show her what she really means to him.
Okay, my review is officially too long. :-D. Sorry. Lol. can't wait for more!
-jonzie
Author's Response:
ooooh I hope I can write it well enough for you. Im gonna do my best.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 68
Tanya and Garrett...adorable! So confused about Aro's whereabouts but I'm glad Edward will be reuniting with Bella. Maybe he will figure out that she is still preggers.
Thanks for the update!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 68
Bout time he came home. He is going to be really surprised when he sees Bella. Maybe it will be enough to keep him there once he realizes Bella didn't abort the babies.
Author's Response:
spoiler alert......
yeah it is... this is it for them... always together :)
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 68
So someone posing as Bree has taken Aro. I read your response to one of the reviews that he was not in good hands. I can only hope he is being tortured multiple times daily.
It's about time Edward is coming home, that makes me so happy. He's gonna be so surprised when he sees Bella is still pregnant. They need to do some serious talking to each other.
Since Edward is coming home, and Tanya has taken up living in his condo, where is Edward gonna be staying. Surely he won't stay with Tanya, that would just be so wrong.
Looking forward to more.
Sherry
Author's Response:
At this point, in his mind, he plans on staying at his parents house because that is where Bella is. He wants so badly to do right by her and protect her, but he just can't say away anymore.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 68
i really want an EPOV when he finds out she is still pregnant... that will definitely be interesting!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 68
so glad u finally updated!!! Thanks
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 68
HE'S COMING HOME?!?!?! WAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I just can't wait to see his reaction to Bella still being pregnant. :D
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 68
I am wondering if the "Bree" that came and got Aro was the wife of the guy that Bree was sleeping with. What is Stefan wanting? Was it Stefan that was the father of Bree's baby??? I can not remember. I am so glad that Edward is coming home. He will be surprised when he sees Bella. I am pretty sure that her belly has gotten bigger since he last seen her. And considering that Edward thinks that she got rid of the baby, I know he is going to be surprised. LOL!!! Thanks for the update.
Wow, the picture of your book looks really hot. I am off to check it out.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 68
YAY! Tanya and Garret are gonna end together, which is the way its supposed to be, and Edward is comming back! I'm sooooo excited! Can't wait for next chapter (^_^)
Much Love and Respect
Xoxo
Mia
Date: 27 Sep 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 68
Finally, maybe Edward will see that he has been wrong about Bella all along.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think he is with James and I think he is with Caius...I think that is his name. The man that brought Bree to the island. god what is Rosalie had Aro just to try to keep Edward and Bella away from each other....
Author's Response:
I'm super confused... ok, Aro and James could be together... The man that brought Bree to the island was Peter (i'm pretty sure). He could have Aro. He'd be pissed though... no Bree, no baby... wouldn't want to be Aro. Why would Rosalie want to keep Edward and Bella from each other? She's in love with Emmett.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 68
god I am so glad edward is coming home....boy is he ever in for a surprise when he realizes that Bella did not have an abortion....I just wish that Carlisle or Edward would kill Aro and James and any other sob from that island or who came to get Aro's advice or guidance.
thank you for an update...
Author's Response:
Oh, there is a plan in place. Who do you think has Aro???? It sure isn't Stefan. :)
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 68
Looking forward to more
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 68
Yeah he's coming him. Boy is he going be shocked. I can't wait. I still want him to hunt Aro down. I don't feel that they are safe until he is dead. James too. The sad part is that even with them dead the torture lifestyle will still be there. But at least they would have paid for their sins. Plus I just don't see Edward having true healing without some type of revenge. Keep going and post sooner ........... please. Begging on knees.
Author's Response:
They will all get what is coming to them and more. Originally I just wanted Aro to die, but what is currently happening to him is much worse. Trust me on that. Let's just say that he is not in good hands right now. *evil grin*
I'm trying, but Midnight's Caller's sequel is calling to me. Come sit in google docs with me for Involuntary Rapture and you can see what's going on as I type it :)
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 68
Tany sounds like she is doing well. Get Edward to Bella quick. This seems to be dragging like crazy.
Author's Response:
That's because school started and I'm working 60 hours a week. Also hockey started so I have practice with my kids 4 nights a week, oh and I published a third book two weeks ago... yeah... this story, while my first love, just has to be back burner sometimes while I put out what's on fire.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 68
Great chapter! Angst rips my heart out, but I am trying my hardest to hang on ;)
Author's Response:
its almost at the end... hang in there... :)
Date: 25 Sep 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 67
Please update soon, I miss them.
Date: 16 Sep 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 67
This story is so great....so many different emotions!
Of course, Carlisle is in for a shock -- after all his talking about "there being time for grandchildren" in the previous chapter, because a few months isn't really very long; or did he forget about his twin grandchildren that Bella is carrying? :)
Can't wait to see how Edward gets slapped around because he is an idiot and won't communicate with Bella.....She is getting better at it, but he never seems to learn :)
Date: 16 Sep 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 67
Holy smoke, they're about to get married! !!! I want Edward to come back NOW! !!!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 67
Good stuff for jasper and Alice. Now to get Edward and Bella straightened out.