Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 70
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 70
Cmon ED,, damn get your head straight now!
Fantastic chapter~!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 4:57 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
i hate aro
Date: 15 Oct 2013 4:54 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
brainwashing
Date: 15 Oct 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 62
yay their escaping
Date: 15 Oct 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 61
they need to leave
Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 59
alice is the same age as me
Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 57
yay demented grandpa
Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 56
i like it when they make love
Date: 15 Oct 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 54
so james is bi
Date: 15 Oct 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 53
that was sweet
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 51
i dont like james
Date: 14 Oct 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 50
that was messed up
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 47
edwards a buzz kill just like in breaking dawn
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 45
ah a nice moment
Date: 12 Oct 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 69
Dammit Edward where are you ?
Date: 11 Oct 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 43
edwards so considerate
Date: 11 Oct 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 42
alice is teasing jasper alot
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 69
Great chapter, as usual. I am glad that Bella is looking forward now, even if Edward is being a jerk. He should have gotten his facts straight before taking off.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 69
ah, i'm dying! i am craving some exb interaction! anything more than a text... can't wait for the next update!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 69
Please tell me that edward comes to her soon!!! I really need to see them happy and be a family!!
Author's Response:
shhh... yes he does
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 69
That was AMAZING :D
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 69
i loved this chapter, but i was a little sad that edward didnt show up and realize he still had babies coming and to be reuinted with bella and let them actually experience some love finally. cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
that's the next chapter! It will be out in like 6 days!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 69
i just want to say how much i love this story, its so different than anything i have ever read, excited to see whats coming next. so nervous for edward and bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 69
I thought for sure Edward was going to show up your such a tease
Author's Response:
shhh he's there... he's actually standing on the other side of the party as she left :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 69
Wow that was a lot to take in. Damn that Jessica, how insensitive can you be. She said all that really loud & in a room full of people. So awesome she got slapped, not once but twice.
I guess Edward was going to make an appearance at the party but was running late. That or Jasper was trying to convince to show up. Either way Bella's on her way out so Edward's going to miss her. I hope she gets to the house okay, I'm not sure she should be driving in her current state of hysterics. I understand it but she needs for a bit longer before she drives.
Please post again soon
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 69
Omg where the hell is Edward??? Can't wait for the next chapter thanks for this one...
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 69
Amazing as always, just wish Edward would get back.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 69
:) good chapter as always but the angst over Edward and Bella is killing me!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 69
Did something happen to delay Edward's arrival? That has to be who Jasper was texting with, right?
Jessica is a fine piece of work. Rose and Alice should have wailed on her some more. I cracked up at Alice calling her a fuck slut, and Rose's mild admonishment for it.
I'm anxious about Bella driving herself to the house. I hope Edward arrives before she leaves. They need some time alone.
See you in two weeks,
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 69
Is Bella being set up? Cuz Alice is correct in calling Jessica a F Slut. I think that she is part of Aro's clan of misfits. My eyes are covered for the next chapter because I'm betting that she is going to be grabbed and once again Emmett won't be able to protect her. That's my guess. Looking forward to your next update.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 69
Come on Edward, where are you??
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
alice wants sex
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
that made a dildo sound bad
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 69
Edward is being a fuck slut!!
Get home to your girl, Edward
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 37
bella and edward were hot
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
alice is sweet
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing each chapter!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 35
the breast pump seems painful
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 69
Looking forward to more
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 33
glad victoria got off,but james will probably punish her for it
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
bella deserves foreplay
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 69
please brang Edward home
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 69
Well, you know this is a bad, bad idea.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 69
Jesus! Edward! Stop being such a miopic asshole! Stop being such an asshat! Go home and take care of your girl IF you really love her. I'm starting to wonder. (Sorry... Had to vent.)
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 69
Impatient. Want to get to the good stuff. It's time Bella is getting herself back together. They've all suffered so much, time for some happiness.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 69
Aaaw man! I wanted to see Edward do something reminiscent of Matthew Perry in 'Fools Rush In' when he realized Salma Hayek was still pregnant!!!!!! Can't wait for more. Bring our Edward home.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 69
Thanks for the update. I hope Edward shows up next week. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail cullen
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 69
oh damn... I thought Edward would be back in this one. UGH!! You're killing me w/ the anticipation!!! :D
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 69
Thanks for the update!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 69
Awesome chapter, Alice and Rosalie rock! Thank you for writing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 69
Even though I know, blood pressure is still up. Jessica deserved more than two slaps.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
old mcdonald should be hiding from james
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 69
Edward needs to meet up with Bella SOON!! I don't want him missing out on any more of her pregnacy and still believing that she had an abortion. They NEED their HEA!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 69
Loved it - thanks! Can't wait until Edward find out she is pregnant!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
not the reaction to proposing a man wants
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 69
I busted out laughing when Rose slapped Jessica. LOL!!!! And then Alice, at least Alice was honest. LOL!!! What in the world happened with Edward. He was suppose to be there at Esme's party? Why did he not show up???? Can not wait to hear more.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 69
Wow! When the hell is edward jumping in? She needs to know he still loves her..great chapter
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 69
Ahh, I wanted some Edward. Oh well thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
He's coming soon.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 69
Oh dang!!! What a place to stop!!! Thanks for continuing to write. I love you!!! :)
Author's Response:
you saw how hard this chapter was for me... how I cried putting it out. Thanks for being there... :)
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 28
its wierd to have people watching
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
bella got ass raped
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
tanya finally got off
Date: 03 Oct 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
jasper is a good guy
Date: 03 Oct 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
a bad place to have a period at
Date: 03 Oct 2013 7:12 AM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
:)
Date: 03 Oct 2013 7:00 AM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
:)
Date: 03 Oct 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
i like giving head but that scene wasnt a turn on
Date: 03 Oct 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
a lose lose situation
Date: 02 Oct 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 68
I'm surprised that I read though all of this, but I like how it has turned out :) Please post again soon