I'm not sure if I want to kiss you pr stab you with a fork... HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME??? WHYYYYYYYY???? He got what he deserves, still not enough though... and I can't wait for Edward to get there and kick James ass! 

Much Love and Respect 

XoXo

Mia 

OMG IS JAMES GOING TO HURT BELLA OR IS EDWARD GOING TO GET TO HER IN TIME TO SAVE HER?

What! Noooooooooooooo! This was dumb her going alone, they were so careful keeping everyone safe, then they let her drive off on her own! Edward better be two mins behind her....... please.....

I'm so afraid for Bella and the babies. Please let Edward reach her before Psycho James harms her. Thank you for the update.

Oh my God... You cruel cruel woman leaving us like that!!! So worried for Bella and the babies :( Just to think that if Edward had gone to her when he saw her sitting in the Cullen's back garden he could have been with her and she wouldn't be in the situation :( I trust you to make this tight though so cannot wait for the next chapter :D 

Much love

Sarah xxx

Thanks!

Put your foot down Edward!!!

Why cant they ever have a happy ending

Author's Response:

gimmie one more chapter.... :)

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!

holy shit balls... i'll be dying until friday! 

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! That was nasty leaving us at that point.  Guess it was a good thing Edward left his phone.  Come on Friday!!! XOXO, Cheri

I love that James was pumished about. I hate to see this end but I realy wish  the tension was over.

Shit!  I'm glad he hot some small payback bit, shit, now he gas Bella. I hope to hell Edwsrd is close behind. Or that Bella finds away to kill him herself.

Thanks for no making us wait too long for the next chapter.

OMG!!!!! I can't wait til this Friday. I need more so badly. Will Edward get there on time? Will James hurt her or the babies? OMG!!!

E/k.

OMG Noc!  Can Bella and Edward ever catch a break!!

Ooh, yeah... Edward will get to kill him afterall!

You are amazing, Noc! Remember I'm always here for you! <3 you! 

Holy shit that was awesome!!!!!

I had to review to this chapter because I already reviewed to the last chapter. And the contact button was disabled because of abuse it says, so this was the only way to get ahold of you.

When is your next update? Your killing me here. I check for an update EVERYDAY, and get depressed because there is no update. I really really want to know what happens next. They have to talk, don't keep us hanging again. I really want to know what happens. For him to NOT know she was pregnant this whole time to find out she is and for them to see eachother for the first time in MONTHS. I mean, really how can you leave us hanging this long. I know I am not the only one that is waiting and looking for an update. I don't even check my e-mail to see if you have updated. I log on to my online classes at the same time I look for an update on your story.

Yay :)

Wow I'm thrilled they all actually made it off psycho island. I'm glad there's no more Aro and I hope James doesn't make off the Island either. Hopefully Edward and Bella will continue to love and support one another. Great chapter.

I was positive Alice was Edwards missing sister, I'm glad he found her. 

I love Jasper and Alice together. I really hope they will all be able to make it off of freak Island. Great chapter :)

Whew they're married now and Bella will be safer with James having less access to her, although I'm sure he will be scheming and ploting ways to cause them pain.

Of course Aro's friends are just as creepy as he his. It was a bit nerve wrecking when Aro offered to get James for the virginity inspection, super thrilled that portion was skipped. I think Vladimir's gift is a tattoo which would explain the buzzing airplane sound Bella heard. I'm nervous and excited for the next chapter :)

Finally! Knight? Check. White horse? Well close enough....

well glad he finally realizes his errors... can't wait for more... to see their reunion.

worth the missing of E&B coming together again ........that eye candy!!!!

wow!

;-0

wow

I have been with your story from the begginning and I am sure it is in the top 10. It is a great story. Thanks for the cliffy, you know we hate when you do that. I was thinking he was going to see Bella agian. I was confused for a while about the Edward/Bella/pregnancy/abortion thingy for a while but the last 2 chapters cleared it up, especially this one.

I actually got a few of my friends reading this story as well. They love it.

Edward is such a fucking idiot, but at least he & Bella will be together again soon. Damn, Bella is going freak out if Edward is right behind her, she's gonna think someone is following her. 

Im glad Edward finally knows that Bella is still pregnant. 

Next chapter please. 

bella is the 4th elizabeth

daring escapes

uh oh

elizabeth could be in trouble

Jeez, that was short! And
They didn't even get to talk!
But the first pic is gorgeous on the plus side!

Awesome i cant wait till the next update

I could never get mad at you. But I do so love the long chapters. Thanks for keeping us on edge. 

AHHHH!!! Edward has finally arrived home, and how did I know he wouldn't arrive without complications to his travel plans? Well, at least he's home now and he's on a mission to catchup with his girl. God I hope he gets there fast. I'm anxious for what happens next.

Thanks for updating and see the next chapter soon... hopefully.

YAY! Edward is back!!!

Wonderful pics of our boy! That man is a God. Yes, short chapter, but Edward is back and heading in the right direction finally!!!  XOXO, Cheri

Yay! Thank you for the early update. :)

Awe come on Noc please let them reunite!!

Well it is about time that Edward comes home and face everyone. I am sorry but he should feel bad. 

Ok, where to begin ... I'm still disappointed in Edward. He didnt make the decision that he was back for good until he saw Bella's pregnant belly. That makes me so sad. I am glad though that he acknowledged that while he was unhappy about her making a major (assumed) descion without consulting him. He basically did the same thing to her. Although his big descion still seems like a punishment for her assumed big decision. At least he has realized the mistake he made even if he doesn't realize the full magnitude of it yet. 

I'm trying really hard to ignore his concern over Tanya. I guess they'll always be bonded due to being on the island together. I still think she is too involved with their lives. I know from the previous authors note you counted her as a positive influence for Alice so I'm guessing she is there to stay. *I* couldn't imagine a situation where I would even consider her a positive influence. But that's just me. 

What the heck was up with Edward assuming Bella would go to his apartment? Did he forget he gave it to Tanya? I know Bella is being a martyr about everything but even she didnt think it was a good idea for her and Tanya both to be there and since he made it clear he wanted Tanya there ....

He was upset that Emmett was "moving in on his girl"? He should be thanking his lucky stars that someone was looking out for Bella after he abandoned her. We all know the reason Emmett is going there. But in Edwards mind Bella was no longer pregnant and was single and many times he thought about what a catch she was. So did he really think she would stay single. That even though he left her no one else would want her?

I see he figured out she is still pregnant but no one let him in on the tidbit about it being twins. That should really rub some salt in there when he fully realizes what he abandoned. Plus if anyone tells him what Jessica said and what people in town most likely though that he knocked her up and abandoned her. Makes my heart hurt for Bella. Pregnancy is hard enough without adding being abandoned on top of it. Edward has a lot to atone for. 

I skipped the last chapters due to my obvious Tanya dislike. But I did give a quick skim to see if there was any E/B progress. I was proud of Bella making the decision that enough was enough and it was time for her to start acting like a mother. Though if anyone deserved time to wallow at all it would have been her. She seems like she's finally decided to stop waiting around for Edward to bring her her HEA though and has realized she's going to have to save herself and make a life for her twins. 

I guess that's good though. Once she has found the courage to stand on her own is when Edward decides to grace her with his presence. Hopefully that means she will stay strong and recognize he needs to work for it before just flying into his arms. Don't get me wrong, I WANT them together. I just think he has put everyone else above her and now he needs to prove that she and the babies will be his priority. This will be an on going pain. Even years down after they have ahead years of happiness together he will still deal with the ramifications of his actions. The next time Bella gets pregnant he will be reminded how he left her alone when she needed him most. When his girls grow up and get married and have babies he'll think about how he was gone for the pregnancy and how he would absolutely castrate a man who dare abandon his babies the way he abandoned their mother. Action and reaction. Everything has long term consequences. 

I've been checking this page since 5pm yesterday hoping for an update. I was just about to go to bed but decided to check once more. I'm thankful for an early update even if things didnt go exactly how I had hoped. Hopefully you'll still find a way to give them their HEA though. Just please with sugar on top don't make it an HEA where Bella is a doormat. She's come through too much to allow herself to be pushed around and made to feel like she is second best. Everyone deserves to be someone's first choice. Edward needs to prove to Bella that she IS his first choice. And bella needs to settle for nothing less than being his first choice. 

Will the next update be in 2 weeks or are you going to try for 1 week again?

your killing me. the anticipation is too much. I can't wait for their reunion. ugh.

E/k

So many things are blocking them. So sad. Say, have any of them been tested for STD's? I would think that could be a major issue. Always look forward to more. So glad this is in the top 10 where it should be. Get a move on Edward. 

Yeah it was too short but we will take it anyway!!  Thanks