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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 74

loved this

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 74

Awww sweet Edward, and what a jerk that guy was, cheering him, and admiting to be watchig him with the girls he fucked

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 74

That was awesome!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: teafortulips Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 74

cant believe its coming to an end! le sigh. love it. 

Reviewer: Shirley13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 74

Awwwww.....NJ that was so sweet!!!!

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 74

Really, just the epilogue and its over? But what about the weddings, Bella and Edwards and Alice and Jaspers? What's gunna happen with Rose and Emmett, Tanya and Garrett, what about baby Bree, Aro and James? There just seems like there is to much undsaid for just an epilogue left.



Author's Response:

well, then maybe I'll go on I was gonna sum it up. Baby Bree is a baby. The person who kidnapped Aro should be the biggest question......

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 74

Finally!!  Loved the ending. Thank you

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 74

Thank you soo much for that!   Brilliant!!  :D

 

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 74

Yeah! Loved this update. I may have been guilty of skimming the rough chapters, but I read every word of this one.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 74

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please update loving the story!

Reviewer: DayDreamerCozmo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 73

Where's the next chap?

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 73

bellas ok

 

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 73

Not sure how I misses this in my inbox. Happy they are all together. Oh and that James doesn't have a peen! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 73

i really liked this chapter. im glad that bella told him how much he hurt her, but that they are going to be together from now on. i cant wait for more!

Reviewer: RowanBronze Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 73

Good!

Reviewer: ocdcullen815 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 73

grrr all caught up on that sick and twisted mind of yours! did i mention awesome??? it took me 2 days to read all this and i am still wanting more :D so UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Reviewer: ocdcullen815 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 52

finally Edward even uses what i have been sayin all along ....... the train wreck that u cant turn away from lol

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 73

Yeah thrilled that Edward and Bella are together again.  I think James is getting to much morphine though.  Great chapter.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 73

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 73

be a hell of a long ass line!

Reviewer: ocdcullen815 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 34

ok that was deeeeee besssst chapter!!!! that was a train wreck i couldnt wait to watch and still kept on staring cause i wanted to, not because it kept ur gaze :p i know i am sick sue me

Reviewer: Shirley13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 73

Whoohoo! James finally got what he deserved!!!!!

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 73

I'M SO GLAD JAMES GOT WHAT WAS COMMING TO HIM HE HAS LOST HIS MAN HOOD THE ONE THING HE USED TO HURT WOMEN WILL HE DIE LIKE THE DOCTORS THINK HE WILL OR WILL HE LIVE TO HURT BELLA AND EDWARD SOMEMORE? GOOD CHAPTER I LIKE THAT BELLA FORGAVE EDWARD THEY WILL BE OK NOW.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 73

Thank you so much for the wonderful update. Beautiful chapter :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 73

lol loved it

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 73

Yay!!!! Edward & Bella are back together!!!!! & Edward's not leaving again!!!!

i liked that part when Edward & Bella's moment was interrupted & everyone got to see just how protective Edwsrd was of Bella & the baby & how much Bella trusts Edward. 

Im glad James lost his dick. 

I hope you update again soon ^_^

Reviewer: crazymama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 73

Finally! Communication is a good thing!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 73

Yeah, all is right in the world. James need to suffer a lot.

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 73

I love that you didn't kill off James quickly.  He needs to suffer for what he did.  What a POS!  You know I love this story but I'll say it again!  I love this story soooooooooooooo much!

 

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 73

damn James is getting what he deserves......aro and james treated edward and bella like farm animals.....that scene where bella had to walk on all fours with james or demetri I don't remember ex

Reviewer: SarahCullenxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 73

This update made my day :) Literally so happy to see this :)

 

So  I wonder whether Alice is right when she predictes 2 girls or whether Edward is right with his 2 boys. One of each anyone? ;) 

 

Really really really looking forward to the next chapter. I wasn't sure how to reply to your reply to my last review but let me just tell you that if you stick a 0 on the end of any of the suggested numbers, that would make me very happy :) No, but truthfully I will be sad that the story is over but I am sure you will give us a super-duper ending to make it extra special :) Maybe some lemony B/E times? Yes? No? Guess I'll leave it down to you then ;) 

 

Much love

 

Sarah xx

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 73

Good chapter but I would have liked to keep reading.

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 73

Aaah finaly they are back together.

And james is dickless whahaha

 

 

 

Love it , it is another great chapter!!!

Reviewer: Shirley13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 71

Omg! What the hell????

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 73

Ah great chapter nice they finally got some sweetness...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 73

Well maybe James will wake up long enough to know he no longer has a penis. It would probably be asking too much for him to survive disfigured and in pain for the remainder if his life. That seems more fitting than getting to die. 

Gkad to finally see Edward where he belongs...with Bella. 

Reviewer: Shirley13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 65

Omg! When are Edward and Bella going to talk????  Grrrr

Reviewer: pcpieterse Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 73

Happy and together al last its about time .love it

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 73

:)

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 73

LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. What is going to happen when they return home? Where is home? Is the house to bad for them to go back to? Where are they going to stay? They need to get the nursery set up. How far is she now? What's going to happen to James? I hope he is going to die. Where is Aro? Is he dead yet?

So many questions, so many posibilities, but I know you NJ, I will guess all wrong and you will surprise me. I have only been right about a few things but you always surprise me with what happens. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hope everyone has a good Thanksgiving. I know I have a lot of cooking and baking to do, as well as my last essay for one of my classes. Then a lil break till the Spring semester.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 73

loved this

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 73

Things are really coming around ;)

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 73

Awe Bella and Edward are so cute.... Well I guess that James is pretty much a done deal. I hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 73

Thanks Noc for the update.

I'm glad Edward and Bella have gotten to talk a bit and are beginning to open communication between themselves. They both have a lot to share with the other.

I half expected Edward to propose to Bella when he put her ring back on. They need to make it official and all that jazz.

Ugh!! James is still alive, even if it's barely? Breathing air is too good for him. Can't wait until he's dead and buried.

Do you know how many more chapters before the babies will be born?



Author's Response:

not really sure how many more chapters, but I do have to say the drama for them is over with very few minor exceptions. I just have to wrap things up for everyone and give them their HEAs :)

Reviewer: jmullinax Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 73

Great chapter! I love this story! Could you possibly give a tentative date for the next update? 



Author's Response:

Im really not sure, probably a week.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 73

Loved the chapter. You made my night.Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 73

I am glad that Edward and Bella get to talk and worked things out. I laughed at Emmett. Now they just need to find Aro and take care of him. Is it bad to say that I am glad that James is in extreme pain. It serves him right, he needs to be in extreme pain for a while!!!!!!!!!! (evil grin)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 73

It's neat to see Edward and Bella happy again!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 73

OH SNAP!!  That was amazing!  I cannot wait to find out what the babies are!

Reviewer: MiaIsabella4ff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 73

I'll do it... I'll turn off the machine... or not... let him suffer... he should suffer *smirks* AWWWWW this chapeter was sooooo cute.... except for that whole detached dick thing... seriously... soooooo don't wanna have that picture in my head *giggles* I'm glad Bella and Edward are back together, I'm kinda sad 'cause the end is getting closer, I don't know how I'm going to let go, this has been my favorite story since... it first came out *sobs* I can't wait for next chapter though, I want to know what happens next... 

Much Love and Respect 

XoXo

Mia 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 73

BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!   omg... that is awesome.   Gives new meaning to dick in the box!   

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 73

Awesome chapter!  so glad that edward was able to tell her he wath nted to be with her and tell her he really did love her.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 72

Ha Ha - cutting a hot dog lengthwise?  Seems fitting! 

All I keep thinking about is Bella's tattoo. Wonder what the hospital staff thought of that?

Thanks for the update - I am sad that this story is coming to an end.  :-(

I am ready for some super serious groveling from Edward. 

Thanks,
Maura

 

 



Author's Response:

HOLY SHIT... i cut out all the tattoo stuff... now i have to go back and look to see where i can throw it back in!

Reviewer: RowanBronze Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 72

Love it

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 72

Glad that James didn't get a chance to rape her.  I hope James dies he is so evil.  great chapter thank you.  

Reviewer: Shirley13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 54

I love these visuals!

Reviewer: TwilightKC Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 72

love this story 

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 72

:)

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:P

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 71

:)

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 72

i LOVED this! i loved bella's clue... and the whole fight scene... everything. i really really hope james does not survive the night, but then theres a tiny little part of me that hopes he survives enough to tell them what else is all going on. where aro is... cant wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 72

finally! totally missed the update but so pleased i went checking lol

 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 72

Way to go Bella! I love that she got to stab James and I loved where she cut him. I really hope he dies. I know burns are really painful. That is what he deserves. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 72

Way to go Bella. Partially? Ha, Ha.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 72

I really hope the twins aren't James, after everything that Bella and Edward have been through I don't think you would put them through that. Glad to hear about James he gets everything he deserves.



Author's Response:

now we both know that those babies were concieved in love the day before the wedding on that blanket in the meadow....  :)

Reviewer: starla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 72

When James threated to "cut her from her clit to her chin.” It reminded me of the movie Ever After when Drew Barrymore threatened to cut him from navel to nose. Of course James had to take it a step further. How fitting it was that he wanted to go straight for a genital cut and that's exactly what he wound up getting. Delicious irony. Gotta love it!

How fortunate that Edward was able to figure out Bella's message. I was with her willing him to come back. But our boy was smart and knew he had to regroup before attacking. 

James is a nasty piece of work. Death is too easy for him. On one hand you almost want him to have to live as the dickless wonder ... But then we all know how Aro managed to still inflict torture even without his manly bits. So he still needs to be taken care of. Just no dying peacefully in his sleep. He needs to suffer. Burns are beyond painful so at least he isn't just resting. 

I was with Bella grinning over her being called Mrs Cullen and especially when Edward specifically claimed her as his wife to the medics. Bella would have swooned over those on any given day but how much more of an impact it had to make for her that he was there when she truly needed him the most and was giving her the title she deserved. 

I loved him declaring he would never leave her again too. Even though she was in panic mode after being attacked again and with the fire and all ... Edward still realized how her plea for him not to leave her was more than just in reference to the here and now. He knows he has some explaining to do as well as a bit of groveling. Nothing like a near death experience to put things into perspective though. I don't think Bella will be as hard on him in light of things as she would have been had his appearance and explanation happened a week ago, for example. 

I'm ready for them to get it all out in the open and find their HEA. They deserve it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice long review. They will have a good long talk when they both wake up. 

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 72

I HOPE THE DOCTOR IS RIGHT ABOUT JAMES NOT BEING ABLE TO HURT THEM ANYMORE. GREAT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 72

Well, too bad he won't make it through the night. He probably won't even know his dick was sliced. Then again more peace will be had if no one has to worries about him. But...there are others still looking.



Author's Response:

He might make it through the night. There really aren't others looking for them, just Aro and he's in no condition. 

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 72

Love it!!!

As always can't wait for your next chapter.

 

Love nicole

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 72

This is so horrible... but at least Edward got to Bella in time. It's good to know that James (if he doesn't die) will never have proper use of his dick. I hope to read more... What happen to Aro???? Are the police doing something about all the other people who are taking people for this life?

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 72

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!     Love the slicing and dicing of James' dick!  And the hot dog reference was awesome.    

bwahahahaha

 

Reviewer: Jess641 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 72

Poor Bella having to go through all that being nude as the day she was born. Loved that she sliced James's penis. I hope he lives, What can he really be able to do with being burned 80% of his body and a sliced penis. I dont think that will work the same and probably not even feel the same, lol!! Just what he deserved! I can't wait for Bella and Edward to talk and at least he'll be there when she has her next u/s. Not sure why she needs to have an amio though.

Author's Response:

She doesn't and she wont. Some doctors are test happy though. :)

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 72

Thank goodness he never got the chance to do anything mor than scare Bella. I like what Bella did to his dick. I'm kinda hoping that James lives so that he can be questioned & charged. However I'm not a hundred percent he would make it to trial, that community is good with cleaning up messes & staying hidden. 

Oh boy when the Cullens & the Swans hear about this in the morning . . . . . . . I can only imagine the chaos of screams, rage & the fear for Bella/twins & Edward. Emmet isn't going to forgive himself for this. Not his fault but he is going to feel so guilty. 

Reviewer: jylway Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 72

Thank you for that chapter! It was great!!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 72

Nice! The perfect justce for that sicko.

Reviewer: MiaIsabella4ff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 72

OHMYGOWOHMYGOWDOHMYGOWD!!!!!! THIS CHAPTER!!! I can'tget over how amazing this chapter is! I could just picture everything on my miond, I'm so excited!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! James got what he deserved! I'm not sure if I want him to live or not yet... and Edwar flying through the window... I'm so happy he is back and everything is alright in the world... Can't wait for next chapter.

Much love and Respect

XoXo

Mia 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 72

Thank God. Edward saved her!!

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well i did get the fact that james paid the family who lived there, but the fact that he squatted that i missed... now i get it... but still if i was charlie i would have been there for my girl when she is about to move into the house... 

But that is irl and this is fiction ;-)

 

But i still love this story ...

 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 72

Lets hope that James really is toast this time. Pun intended!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 72

OMGosh!!!!! I am so glad that Edward figured out what Bella was doing when she was saying all that stuff to him. I hope James dies. But he will be getting out the easy way. I am glad that Edward and Bella are in a room together. I am soooooo loving this story. Can not wait for the next update. Can not wait to read what Edward was thinking and for him and Bella to finally talk. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 72

Shouldn't Bella and Edward's families been contacted about the fire and them being in the hospital? You sure made my heart beat a little fast thinking James would violate Bella somehow and/or get away with her as his hostage. Extremely glad he didn't, but concerned he's still alive. Maybe someone should slit his throat while he's in the hospital.

I hope Charlie gets there to stand guard of their room. I can't wait until Bella and Edward get a chance to talk things over.

I'm curious since James had all the pictures he took of Bella downloaded on his laptop, and I'm assuming the laptop was still within the house, did all that stuff burn up as well?



Author's Response:

He had them in a cloud like account. It's all gone. The pics, laptop, everything. The house is really no more. It is late and Bella and Edward aren't children, but yes Charlie is contacted. And Edward and Bella will talk in depth when they both wake up in the morning :)

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 72

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: EdwardsKitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 72

Dickless James!!!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 72

Way to go Bella. The only thing that would have been better was if she could have cut it off completely and put in in a food processor. Yep, my husband knows not to mess with this Texas woman!  ;)

So, do they notify the Cullen's and the Swans to let them know about the fire and where their children are?  Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

It's really messed up... not quite food processor, but still bad. And eventually get notified, but Edward and Bella aren't children :)

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 72

phew.. u really know how to give a person a heart attack.. I'm glad that bastard hour what he deserves..

Reviewer: pcpieterse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 72

Love it im glad his dick is out of order haha :) thanks for the fast update

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 72

I sure came back to read again at the perfect time this was great, just wish it got cut off all the way, lol 

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 72

shouldn't they have contacted their family ?

Reviewer: michelle82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 72

wow, James deserves to die ...... I'm better now

Reviewer: SarahCullenxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 72

I hope James survives the night just so that he can be tortured and killed all over again! Ok, maybe a bit harsh but he definitely deserves it! Can't wait for next chapter :) Would love to see a lot of B/E loving :) Do you know roughly how many chapters more? Please say at least 20! If not, please lie just to pacify me ;)

 

love this story immensely!

 

Sarah xxx



Author's Response:

at least 20 more... just kidding.... maybe 5? might be less... depends on how far into the present you want me to go.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 72

loved this

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 72

Pew, thank god, I thought it may have been awful, but that was ok, good even, now maybe the next chapter will finally be some nice stuff for them........

Reviewer: ssb13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 72

Thank you for chapter!

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 72

Now that is justice! WTG! Until next time!

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 72

I swear Aro's crew have more than nine lives. And there are so many still in the picture who can harm them. Loved the knifing.

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 71

Damn it!  Please let Edward be close by and get there before that psycho rapes her. Edward will kill him with his bare hands if he has the chance. Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Taley06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 71

Oh no poor Bella!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 71

OMG You did not just do that!!!! 

 

Love this twisted little ditty you have here!

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 71

Just a question... how can bella move in her old house if it is rented to james? 

Or did i miss something.... did he just moved in without somebody knowing...

Didn't charlie check the place once in a while??

 

Great chapter again.

Love,

Nicole van kooij (fb)



Author's Response:

Maybe I wasn't clear. Sorry honey. Ok, so there was a family renting the house who wanted to move into their own home. James pretended to give them money and they used it to move out. Charlie thought the house was vacant so Bella could move in. James was squatting.

Reviewer: michelle82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 71

hi, you're already in my authors / favorite stories, although sometimes I am afraid of the fierce people who write, I can not stop reading, and I'm Italian, I do not speak English, I use google translator! .... also I am a bit 'scary ..... lol



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)

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