Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 77
Wow! Didn't see that coming.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 77
Just when you think it's over it brings you back in, love it.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 77
I am sooooo confused. Bree died didn't she??? If not nobody had more right to kill Jamesicko than her. Can't wait for the next chapter! XOXO, Cheri
Author's Response:
Bree did die...
Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 77
I LOVE this story!!!!! More please!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 77
Oh so they are all in the clear...
but who did it? not the butler this time....
Love the story, you know i had a bad start with it... but you helped me to be able to read on. and like every other story of yours... i fell in love with it.
love nicole
Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 77
I missed you Noc!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 77
I KNEW IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 77
How could this happen? How could our sweet Bree have anyone left?
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 77
looking forward to more
Date: 25 Apr 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 77
I'm a bit confused. Maybe it's because I read about Bree so long ago but... umm... shit. Do I have to go back and find out how Bree actually died? Or did she? dun dun dunnnnn hmmmm
Author's Response:
Bree died in child birth. They threw her body in the ocean. It washed up on shore and the 5 remaining burried it in the sand. When they were rescued they exhumed the body and she is reburried in a cemetary in Seattle. It was most definitly not Bree the mother of baby Bree. (and it wasn't the baby obviously. She is a few months old)
Date: 24 Apr 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 77
I look forward to this story updating so much. I'll be so sad to see it end.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 77
Spooky! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Glad that none of them did it. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 77
I think the candy striper is Bree's sister
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 77
Its Bree's sister. Has to be! I think in a older chapter you said Bree left her diary before going to the island. Her sister found it killed peter and Charlotte even though you said he killed his wife then shot himself. But he was in women's clothing!! It has to be bree's sister!!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 77
Ehm, ok... so now I'm a little confused. Maybe one of Bree's family? Look forward to the next one :D xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 77
i thought bree died unless someone twin
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 77
Really loving this....thanks for the update! Xx
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 77
Oh snap! Nice twist!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 77
ooh! good chapter!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 77
Wow, what a cast of characters!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 77
Whew! I was ready to smack Edward. Sweet to try and save her but dang man... don't leave her. ;} Sooooo. Who is Bree???
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 77
Bree's sister. Just as I thought. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 76
I wonder who killed James?
please post again soon
Date: 18 Apr 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 76
SONOFABUCKET! Glad he is dead. But it wasnt Edward and it wasnt Bella. It was either Carlisle or Jasper. I cant wait to find out who actually killed him...
Much love and Respect
Xoxo
Mia
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 76
Ha! The butler did it! Or was it Colonel Mustard with the lead pipe?
Author's Response:
soooo funny!
Date: 15 Apr 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 76
NOOOOO! why couldn't he say they were having sex or something?! this needs to be sorted out fast! update soon please!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 76
I loved all the different POVs it's so interesting with the mystery of "Who killed James" as I don't think it was Bella. Please don't take so long to update next time.
Author's Response:
Im so sorry, I did write two novels though in the last few months and almost finished a third.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 76
OMGosh!!!!!!!! Everyone wanted to kill him. I don't blame them. I just hate that Edward confessed when he did not do it. Bella needs him to be with her and the bsbies. I was excited to get this update. Thanks.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 76
Oh God. Did Bella actually kill him? Or did Carlisle, Alice, Jasper, Emmett, Rose, or anyone else???
Really look forward to the next chapter! Edward can't leave Bella now!!
Sarah x
Date: 15 Apr 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 75
Dun dun durrrrrrrhhhhhhh! Xx
Date: 15 Apr 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 76
arrgghhh i need more...
great job again :-)
if i had to guess... aro killed james
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 76
Really? No way. He can't go to jail for that bastard!
Date: 15 Apr 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 76
You have to hurry and post again. I'm going crazy with it being left there.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 76
Oh my god!!! Who did it?? This is exciting!
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 76
Ok, so how many confessions will there be?? Could be anyone, could be he just got what he deserved and died on his own. Can hope can't I? Love this story, thrilled to see this update. Can't wait to see where you take us. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 76
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 76
So many people who want James dead.....too bad only 1 probably got the real honors. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again soon so we can find out who done it and we get to see the birth of the babies.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 76
Noc, I am totally blown away by this chapter!!! I have to say this is my favorite chapter so far except for the cliffie!!! I am ready for the next chapter so I can find out who really did kill James! You keep blowing me away!!! Keep it up!!! Dana
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 76
Wow, exciting chapter! A real who done it.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 76
He's dead!!!!! I hope it was VERY painful. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 76
I think it was Bree's sister. But who will be charged?
Ding Dong the bastard's dead but how many to go?
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 76
Oh snap!! I cannot wait to see what will happen next. Which one of them really killed him?
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 76
Love this chapter, love this story, and love you.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 76
SQUEALS!!!!!!!!!!! omg omg omg.. It's a who dunnit!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2014 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your last update has been in Oct. Are you finished or will there be some more stuff? I love your story like crazy and wait ... and wait
Hoping for the continuation .....
I send you my best
Arty
Author's Response:
was more today!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 75
I loved your version of Edward and Bella, thanks for sharing your amazing talent, NJ
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 75
OHMYGOWD! why can't that sunofabucket just DIE already??? I want a very painful death for him *hint hint*
Chapter was awesome, can't wait for the next one.
Much Love and Respect
XoXo
Mia
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 75
Glad to see an update. Thank you for posting one.
Bloody hell the monster lives. I think Bella shoud get first shot at killing his nasty, sick ass.
Sherry
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 75
LOVE this chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 75
what a great chapter... then the animal lives!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 75
He's alive? Seriously?
See how long that lasts.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 75
Wonderful to see this update! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 75
I agree kill him I say! Off with his head.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 75
So excited to see you actualy posted after two months but then it was so short, but still a good chapter! Please please update soon!
Date: 22 Feb 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 75
I keep hearing from authors that it's hard to find reviews on this site... so anyway love love love!
Date: 22 Feb 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 75
Someone needs to finish James off. There is no way that a lowlife like him should still be wasting oxygen! Curious as to Aro's whereabouts, will we find where he is? How far along is Bella now in her pregnancy?
Another fabulous chapter - looking forward to reading the next one :) xx
Date: 22 Feb 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 75
OMG! He needs to tell who all is involved and die ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 75
I thought you may have decided to end it last chapter since it's been awhile since you updated but what a surprise to see that you had updated, I'm very pleased.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 75
Shouldn't they ask a guy for Tanya? Loved the chapter but.....what a cliffie.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 75
thank you Noc! i was perfect!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 75
Great to have ya back, holy shocker batman... Cant belive ya brought James back with you though! Your always full of suprises!
Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 75
Short but fab as usual :)
Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 75
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 75
Great to see an update! Thanks for the new chapter and welcome back!
Date: 22 Feb 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 75
At last, and it was a sweet chapter!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 75
Ugh! I thought he was going to die! Very sweet between Edward and Bella! :)
Date: 22 Feb 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 75
mmm Love the three days in bed but... wanted more detail! :( Sorry, I'm pervy like that. :p
Author's Response:
I know, I told you guys I wasn't feeling it. This is what happens when I cave to pressure :(
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 74
Are we done with this one already?? I want to see the weding and the twins birth does james dies?? Ohh lord noc am a mess I want so much more...lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been reading and re-reading this for like a year now lol
I'm so glad to see happy endings, one thing that keeps bothering me is Bella's Tattoo!!! What happened with that?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was some ride. You did NOT dissappoint...I love the "Happy Ever After". Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 74
Perfection, I could not stop smiling while reading this chapter, the love and bond between Edward and Bella is very touching. I'm glad they're able to now just experience joy without fear after everything they've survived. Thank you for the beautiful update NJ :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 74
Great story...
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 74
oh i loved this chapter!!!! lol.... i loved that edward told the random guys to watch, lol, and i loved that jasper texted him, lol.... all the beginning part was great too!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 74
It's almost finished what an amazing ride.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 74
About time u updated I was going crazy waiting for a new chapter
Date: 09 Jan 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 74
love the trickery he gave those frat boys, college kids and Jasper ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 74
Thank you so much for the update....I'm happy they are safe and sound, the babies are Edwards......they're happy.Jasper and Alice are happy.Tanya is on the mend.....well done........I'M SO HAPPY THEY GOT THEIR HEA....their time on the island was hard to read, I'm glad I stuck it out...........I can't wait to see what happen to Aro, James, and the rest of the crazies.....thanks again for a very edge of your seat story.....until next time
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 74
Damned straight! Way to go, Eddie boy!
I have to say, though, it would be SO hard to just live your life after something like that. I would never trust people again! I would constantly be looking over my shoulder! It certainly helps that Aro and James are out of commission, but what about the guy whose baby Esme and Carlisle are now raising? And all the others? You would always need to remain vigilant.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 74
AWWWWWWWWWWW *teary eyes* That was beautiful, no words can describe how I feel. I've loved this story for so long, its kind of sad to see it come to an end, but I loved it. Beautiful work, *vows to your greatness* Thank you for such an amazing story.
Much Love and Respect
XoXo
Mia
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 74
Loved it! It seems anticlimactic given the drama they went through, but yeah, loved it.
Nice spin on the balcony, way to show the "proper" way to treat a lady.
They will all never be the same.
I hope for peace & love for Tanya as well. She was incredible in her heroism.
Bring pn the epilog(s).
Date: 07 Jan 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 74
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter. I was thrilled that the babies were Edward's. Love Alice for being nosy!!!!!!! I loved Edward's proposal. It was perfect!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 74
That proposal was awesome!!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 74
Aww, lovely ending :) Really looking forward to the epilogue :) xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 74
so so so beautiful fic
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 74
I'm sure Bella and Edward are relieved to have the paternity test back and know for sure Edward is the father of the twins.
The valet sure did see something he hadn't seen before. What a jerk raving about how Edward treated women like he idolized him.
Having Edward propose and give Bella the opportunity to have a wedding she wants is pretty awesome.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 74
You have 2 chapter 85's. JSYK