Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:51 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue
I'm glad that in the end they did gain their HEA, but so sorry to know there is going to be a 4th Elizabeth
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:44 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 8
That was so close. ...
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:35 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 7
Can't we stop it here and have them a HEA?
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:30 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 6
Knowing what I know already, this will only be the first of many times, but it can't be said often enough - Aro is such an evil being! I know it is probably due to the way he was raised, but still, he makes me sick nontheless
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:22 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 5
Oh fuck, that's not good:(
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:17 PM Title: Second Elizabeth part 4
This is such a bad situation...
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:14 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3
Charles is a very good man, and I like that after all he's still behaving his best around her!
Getting all tingly huh;)
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:09 PM Title: Second Elizabeth Ch 2
Even if nothing really happened between "Elizabeth" and Charles the tension was high enough ; )
Date: 04 Oct 2015 6:01 PM Title: The Second Elizabeth Part 1
As I read your last update I found out I never left you a review for this story, which is a shame on my part as I read it at least 2 times already... fearing that the end to it is just around the corner, I felt even worse about only reviewing these last updates I decided to just read it all over again;) As this is more like a prequel to the actual story, I thought it's only appropriate to start with this...
I'm feeling very much with her, as I can only imagine (thank god for that) how it must have been there. Coming into this in hope of finding a true family must have been devastating to her...
Date: 01 Oct 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 81
Loved it, loved it, loved it!! So happy to see this update notification in my email!! Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent!!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 81
Beautiful chapter, wonderful pictures, amazing. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 01 Oct 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 81
It was so great to see your story posted again I hope you post soon
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 81
Awe! A perfect chapter! I'm so happy that the girls are here finally! Congratulations Noc!!!!! Dana
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 81
Such a sweet chatper. After everything they have gone through, they need a little sunshine.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 81
Hello I was reading this on fanfiction and lost it when it was pulled but now I am happy that I caught up update soon
P.S. I think the woman going by the name Bree is Bree's little sister
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2015 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 81
That picture is so precious!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 81
Oh my, I didn't think I'd see another chapter. Glad we did., it was beautiful and much needed after all the bad stuff.
Here is an Fyi for you. With twins as the babies and placentas grow the placentas fuse together. You'll never deliver the placenta until both babies are born. It will deliver and appear as one large placenta.
thank you for this chapter and hope there is more soon. :)
Author's Response:
I didn't know that! Thanks for the info. I'll make sure to correct that if I do a rewrite! :D
Date: 29 Sep 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 81
Loved, loved this! Thanks for making my day!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 81
Loved this chapter!!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 81
That was so sweet! I have missed this story so much. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2015 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 81
I can't believe that you updated it's been so long. This was a nice chapter glad all went well.
Date: 29 Sep 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 81
I've missed this story so much. What a wonderful upbeat chapter and no disaster. Loved it. Beautiful.
Date: 29 Sep 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 81
Aww I was so excited to see this chapter in my email! It was a beautiful delivery and the babies are perfect!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 81
I am so glad that both girls were ok. Glad everthing went great. So happy to hear from you again. You have been missed. Hope we hear from you again. ....soon.
Date: 29 Sep 2015 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 81
I was so excited to see an update. What beautiful little babies they had!!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 81
TThis was a precious chapter. Excited to finally have a new one :) excited for more.
Date: 29 Sep 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 81
So happy to read this new chapter. Was worried that you had abandoned this story. Charlie and Carley, so cute!
Author's Response:
Well, in my head the story was told but people asked for more. Emmett and Rosalie are married and expecting. Bella and Edward are safe and happy. There is nothing more coming really. I can keep going, I mean, there is another story that can be told...
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 81
HOly shit, Charlie really does look like Edward! Carlily does too! Grerat picture~ Fantastic chapter!!
Date: 01 Sep 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
I seriously hope Bella gets 5 minutes with James, with him tied to a chair, and her with a serrated knife. James is the devil.
Date: 31 Aug 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! They've covered just about everything! Where is this going next?!!
Date: 09 Aug 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 88
When will you update? We need an update like, yesterday! I need to know how this all plays out and what happened during the birth. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 May 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 88
I am so glad you came hack to finish this story, I was on pins and needles anticipating what was going to happen.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 88
You can't say you'll post again soon and then never post again... I WANT MY CONCLUSION!!!!! SERIOUSLY NOT COOL! Just finish the story!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 88
Glad to have this story back. Can't wait to see what happens to this characters in the future. Can't wait for more.
Much Love and Respect
xoxo
Mia
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 88
Aah sweet noc. You are killing us again...
Love it...
Glad you are picking up this story again, it is a very good one and well has earned its rights for the words 'the end'.
Just like you, a closer of a chapter a writing chapter...close a book, open a new one...
Love ya
Date: 16 Feb 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 88
Your story is amazing I usually don't read fits that are not complete but I have read your other flics and decided to just check out the first few pages. I was hooked can't wait for you to finish.
Date: 15 Feb 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 88
This story is wonderful. I wonder if the candy striper is Brees sister
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 88
had all but given up on this being finished
Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 88
Thank you very much for updating :). We all were waiting so long.
Author's Response:
yes, thank you for sticking with me. I'm so sorry :(
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 88
Thank you for updating.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 88
So wonderful to see this update. Thank you! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 88
Thanks for the new chapter! I have loved this story from the start!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 88
Yes, it's been so long. But incredibly good to hear from you.
Rose & Emmett, too funny. Nice to have the humor in this story.
Now, let's get on with the babies. Damn, I hope there is no one left out there to cause harm or pain to B, E or the babies.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 88
AAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
a wedding & babies ^_^
i was seriously wondering if you guys were even writing this story anymore.
Author's Response:
It's just me... always been just me.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 88
Welcome back...with this story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 88
I'm so happy to have this story back. Love Rose and Emmett's bet.
So the babies are on their way!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 88
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 88
Wonderful chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 88
So good to get an update. Looking forward to more soon.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 88
Yay, the babies are on their way!!! I was so happy to see an update for this story. I have really missed it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wrote! Interesting bet! I loved this! Can't wait to meet the babies!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 88
I have really enjoyed this story. I am so happy you were able to update. I will be patiently waiting for the next one.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 88
Oh snap! Interesting bet! I loved it! Can't wait to meet the babies!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 88
I am so excited to get this update. Awesome! !!!!!!! So Emmett and Rose got married. Yay!!! Edward and Bella are having the babies. How is Alice and Jasper? ? Can't wait for your next update. Hope it is soon.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 88
OMG you updated, you updated!!!!!!!!!!! I'm jumping up and down and squealing Luke a fan girl here! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like it :)
Date: 02 Feb 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Could you please update this story.
Date: 02 Feb 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Could you please update this story.
Date: 18 Jan 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 77
are you going to finsh this story? ;o)***** i just love it
Date: 05 Jan 2015 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
so is it wrong to say i love ur stories?! im trying to find ur book but no such luck but this is so good
Author's Response:
My pen name is NJ Cole You just need to look on amazon. http://www.amazon.com/NJ-Cole/e/B00EVCTBS0/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_1
and thanks for loving my story!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 77
Is this going to be finished?
Date: 04 Dec 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 77
Is this story finished? Who found James? Where is Aro? Why didn't you give us chapters of Bella chopping James' dick off? This story was extremely hard to take at times, but I've enjoyed it as well. I actually thought about flouncing but decided I had to find out if everyone survived with their sanity in tact. Very compelling.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
can you plz finsh this story i love this story thank you for this story
Date: 24 Sep 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 77
I've had some difficulty with reviewing. After I submit, I get disconnected from the document and it says I can't get back on with approval by an administrator; or something like that. Anyway, it's been a pain in the ass.
I love the justice that Bella got, slicing James from dick on up. Something he threatened to do to her (cut her from clit to ), so I loved hearing about his dick getting shredded. Gross, but justice.
I also love the fact the everyone wanted to off James. Although, Jasper or Carlisle mentioned the air bubble entering his bloodstream to kill him and someone else wanted to strangle him to death, the fact that a candy striper did it who has a famililar match makes me wonder if Bree had a sister she was unaware of, they already said her parents were dead.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
D.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 77
oh drats! I'd assumed that the story was completed (even though it wasn't marked that way) -- while a lot of questions have been answered, I'd love to see the ending, the wedding, the babies, what exactly happened to Aro :-) I know you're a busy bee, writing original fiction and all, but I hope you finish this sometime in the near future! pretty, pretty please! :-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 56
That chapter was sooo hot!! And, the pictures at the end were a nice bonus. I'd love to trade places with Bella. Sexy.
D.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 40
Poor Bella freaked out a bit.
I loved the edition of the picture. HOT!!
D.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 56
No, No!!! don't stop the breast stimulation! :-) lol While I don't want Aro or James touching Bella, the shower scene in this chapter, when Edward cums in Bella after swallowing down her milk, dear Lord, that was f#cking hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad he's finally realized he has a little bit of a freaky side ;-) I love how tender, yet primal they are with each other. And yeah, i'm about to nail James in the nuts -- that guy needs to major dose of karma. I think Victoria or one of the chicks should stab him in the neck and smile while watching him bleed to death -- I'm mean I know!!! lol The pics for this chapter were super hot too!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 38
That was too close a call. It had me biting my nails and praying everyone would make it back to their proper room without getting caught.
D.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 34
OMG, great chapter. That was scary how close your punishment came to what I had in mind a review or two back, that I would like to see done to James. I still would like to see him humiliated more. (Maybe gangbanged and shredded by the wolves. I still would like to see that happen).
I'm more than a little concerned for Edward and Bella. I hope Aro doesn't allow James alone time with Bella anymore. And, I really hope Aro finds out what James did to her in the barn, as well as walking her around the property and showing her off to the men, as well as telling Sam to call the new wolf bitch Bella.
Maybe James will be the one wearing the tail and bell at the next party Aro hosts.
D.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 33
As much as I hate the idea of Edward being with the nasty whore Victoria, she has been such a bitch to Bella that the chapter had me LMAO. Great payback to both of them. I love the way Edward handled that situation from start to finish.
I bow to your writing genius!!!!! It was the best chapter yet. I would just like to have seen Aro become enraged with James because he fucked Bella/Elizabeth in the ass. I really didn't think Aro would have approved of what James & Dimitri did to her. But, he is a crazy old man.
D.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 32
Although James makes me sick, I love Jasper's character and Alice is much smarter than she letting everyone believe. I pretty sure she is Edwards little sister that disappeared. Hope I'm right.
I'm also really hoping for some great revenge brutality for James (and Dimitri & Aro), but mostly James. Like maybe some huge guy tying him down while he rapes his ass and then makes him wear a tail with a pronge twice the size of the one he made Bella wear. And, make sure it's roughly shoved up his ass, while a team of men cum all over his face.
Or better yet, I'd like for James to be gang banged by the wolves for about 48 hrs, before they rip him apart. He could be slowly ripped apart, while each wolf tries to claim him as their bitch. Maybe he could also be wearing a dog collar with a shocking device and tied to a tree so he can't get away while they do this.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm really love your story. It is so unique and twisted, and I am a little embarassed to say how much I am enjoying the pervertedness of Aro and James.
I really would love to see Edward and Emmett get to spend time with James and Aro in the dungeons, showing them exactly what they think of his twisted, wicked ways with women though.
Thanks for such a genuinely unique piece of writing. Please keep the story going and don't get concerned with the small minds that choose to ruin things by getting you booted from fan fiction. I myself started reading this in the TWCS. I have gotten away from reading stories on the fan fiction site because of these kinds of issues.
Keep up the great writing.
D.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! one chapter where I actually like Aro -- amazing! lol Oh, this was such sweet revenge!!! "anal sex is the devil's work"!!! oh, and James breaking Alice's hymen....hmmm, wonder what happened there......what a sick f#cker he is!
Author's Response:
I love that you are reading and commenting.. makes me want to write more....
Date: 13 Sep 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
haha! you go, Edward! sex superstar!!! LOL :-) oh, and poor Jasper, Mr. Quicky, it had been so long -- hopefully he won't feel guilty about it afterwards
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 77
Can we have an update please
Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 77
Hope you can update soon I want to see the wedding and a HEA after all they have been through.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 77
DUDE UPDATE IM DYING HERE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IM SUCH A HUGE FAN OF THIS I KINDA DISGUST MYSELF CAUSE YA KNOW ITS KINDA>>> DIFFERENT, BUT I LOVE IT.... YOU ARE A GENIUS... UPDATE!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 37
i AM SORRY,BUT YOU ARE SICK!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure why this comment was on chapter 37. I certainly hope you didn't read all the way to chapter 37 before you realized that this wasn't your type of story. It is also rude to post comments like that. This is a piece of writing I worked on for over a year and you said nothing about it, only a personal attack on my character. If I were inclined to do so, I'd say, a person who read 37 chapters, what would ammount to about 500 pages, enjoyed it, or was certainly intrigued by it. Now, if you just clicked on a random chapter, that's a bit harsh to pass judgement like that. I can't imagine going on your page and posting that you were a rude person, or immature to type a one sentence comment in all caps, or perhaps that you are narrow minded. Just because there is a space for you to provide a review of an author's work doesn't give you entitlement to bash someone personally.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please finish this, I read it all in 2 days and love it! Left us on a Cliffy, what's going to happen to baby brew and the 'mysterious killer'? What about Bella and Edwards twin babies? And where on earth has Aro disappear to...
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 77
I really love reading this story! I can't wait for more!!! Update soon please! :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 77
OMG this story is one of my favorites... I hope to read more.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 77
Candystriper = Bree's younger sister Piper
Peter & Charlotte = Piper
Aro being taken from hospital = Piper
I am going to assume that the journal/diary that Bree mentioned writing in was found by her younger sister Piper when she went back to school after visiting since that was the last time that either sister saw each other. Has Piper decided to seek revenge on all those that hurt Bree? It will be good to read a Piper POV if you ever decide in the future. Will wait and see if my assumption is right or not lol. Thanks for sharing doll, loving this story!
Ms Torres
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Date: 27 Jun 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 77
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 77
Woo Hoo!!!!!! For some reason, I thought this story ended when Bella and Edawrd found ot that the babies were his. I stopped reading then. I imagine my delight when I found all these chapters just waiting for me today!!!!! There's more!!!!!!!
I loved everyones POV about killing James! Brilliant.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 77
So Bree's little sister took out Aro & James! That is awesome!
Date: 26 May 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 77
Im glad none of them killed him... I mean, I dont want thw in jail because of tgat worthless piece of... anyway... ooohhhh I wonder who this Bree is... (I already know but im nit telling)
Great chapter.
Much love and respect
Xoxo
Mia
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 77
Yikes! This chapters ending gave me chills. Baby Bree's aunt is getting her revenge. Love it.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 77
Mama Bree's sister. Baby Bree's aunt. Didn't see that one coming.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 77
It must be Bree's little sister. She must have found and read her diary. I didn't see this coming. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 77
What the... ? So someone related to baby Bree's mom? Sent by Bree's former owner? Or the father? Or are we going with ghost Bree?