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Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2016 12:53 AM Title: Rosalie Outtake

She's in her own little world.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

wolverine

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOVE SO FAR

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 10:59 PM Title: Jasper's Outtake

wow!!! great story ;) i hope you come back and write the o/t you mentioned soon ;) i hoped b x e had more kids but the 2 they had were great ;) i'm a bit confused about who was bellas' biological dad and what her name was first though? thanks for posting this on here for us ;D

Reviewer: kellygirl77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

Just some things I noticed in case you want to fix them. You gave Laurent and Felix the same last name. Also the hippy lady should smell of patchouli,not petruli. Other wise,great story

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 28

What a wonderful story!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2013 2:14 AM Title: Jasper's Outtake

Enjoyed the whole story and loved the reversal of roles for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: amhall1977 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:11 AM Title: Jasper's Outtake

love this story can't stop reading it now off to read the other 2.

Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

If I were Bella, I would threaten to rip out that nipple piercing she put in for Rosalie. What a bitch! 

Reviewer: Nyddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm getting impatient.

 

But I'm still liking this.


Onward I go! 

 

<3

Reviewer: Nyddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

I know why it bothers you!

 

P.s: Get rid of Laurent fast. He annoys me.

LMFAO!

Reviewer: Nyddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm curious.

Very curious.

Let's see where this leads...

Reviewer: Lovingyou-4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really loved your story so much I read it in one day...
Please keep writing...

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:12 PM Title: Jasper's Outtake

I really enjoyed this story. What was particularly fun was to read your unique spins on all of the characters. Thank you.

Reviewer: LTAVirgo77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:29 AM Title: Rosalie Outtake

WHAT A FUCKIN BITCH!!!!!! SHE SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN THE GOOD OLE KARMA TREATMENT. After reading this chapter, all I could hope for was that she get her just desserts ya know? maybe place her in a car accident where she has a 5 inch scar on her face and when she tries to correct it during plastic surgery she has a botched surgery. Wouldn't it suck to have bad luck only to find out later that the surgeon who preformed the surgery was a fraud. HAHAH That would certainly would play up to Edwards theory that everythinb happens in 3's as mentioned in the earlier chapter.   

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:53 PM Title: Rosalie Outtake

Looking forward to the next chapter.  I hope you will do an Alice out take as well.

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:23 PM Title: Emmett Outtake

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  How sweet was this!??!  Minus the whole hair cutting thing!  OMG!  I had visions of Emmett doing a voodoo dance around a barbie pyre!!  Good LORD!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

What a wonderful ending to a great story!  I feel bad that Jasper had to get a divorce, but Alice was so bad to him!  How could anyone leave someone like that who's going through such a tough time?  I mean, so they didn't have to stay married, but she didn't have to make it all about her while his father was dying.  Shame...

I am SO happy for Emmett!  He deserves happiness!

LOL at Abbie not liking Alice.  Serves her right!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

How freaking CUTE is this?  I feel horrible for Em, but he doesn't deserve that kind of treatment.  He's too good of a guy to have a wife like Rose.

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

UGH!  Such a sweet wedding.

UM, I can't believe............scratch that....  HOW DARE SHE TURN UP AT THAT DINNER!  God, Rosalie is such a BITCH!!! O_o

Alice needs to be slapped in the face.  How dare she act like that!!  But, then again, it just shows her immaturity!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

I am SO glad that she's OK!  Of course she didn't come away without injury, but she's alive.  AND ENGAGED! 

Alice is a brat.  Seriously.  Did she really think Bella was going to put up with her high handed-ness????

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Emmett, but it's better for him.  Rosalie is just too cruel for such a sweet guy!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMG!  How creepy were those flowers????  ICK!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

Holy shit!  I thought she'd be arrested!  You know, the whole Rosalie crap... O_o

As always, great chapter!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG EDWARD GOT A TAT!  I have one in the same place he got his!  It's pretty new, only like 2 weeks old.

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

OMG!  Those damn Denali bitches.  GRRRRRR!!  I hate Rosalie, have I said that enough yet?!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

Goddamnit Emmett!  LMAO!!!  I think it's funny, though!  :D

 

I am so glad they finally took the leap.  It was so sweet, too!  Such a great first time memory for Edward!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

Rosalie is such a stupid bitch!  She's so obviously involved in something. For her to risk everything with Emmett because she's a jealous ho is sad.  BRING HER DOWN!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

LMFAO OMG IN HEAVEN THE SEX TALK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

LOL!  Of COURSE Esme wouldn't let her pay!  Ugh, I love that woman!!!!  And I love how she insisted Bella was family.  Warms my heart!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

Freaking Laurent!  And you KNOW Rose has something to do with this.  She's too stupid to keep her mouth shut.

I'm so glad that Edward is there for her.  She snapped, yes, but it's to be expected.  She's traumatized.  And the whole sleeping in the same bed thing?  SO CUTE!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

How freaking awesome was this chapter?  I'm so glad that Bella is alright, sore, but alright.  And I am so freaking happy he kissed her back!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

Damn.  Too bad the tree wasn't Rosalie... O_o

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

FREAKING AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!  How cute is THAT?!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fucking Laurent.  He's such a douchebag!  LOL!

YEY they had a chat.  I like that they had a chat, and I'm also happy that he didn't get run over.  LMAO!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was a page in high school, too!  Only for a year or two.  The place I worked at, I hated it.  The boss was a nazi... O_o

This is adorable the way you have Edward all awkward. 

OH NO!  He got hit, didn't he??  Action in the first chapter, nice!

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it! Great story ;)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 27

YAY!!!! Loved it!

Reviewer: AndiQuill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Emmett Outtake

I really love this story. I actually have read it twice before (I had this story on Alert on fanfiction.net and then after you finished it I reread it) and I truely do love it. Your Bella is a total badass (meant in the absolute best way) and your Edward is completely adorable (reminds me a bit of my fiance' when I first met him).

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 10:38 PM Title: Emmett Outtake

Loved it-----------it only took me two days to read the whole story.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:27 PM Title: Emmett Outtake

Poor Emmett surrounded by all those females, he needs some testosterone in the house so I hope he get a boy...

One thing I never understood about Rosalie was why she hated Edward instantly from the start.  I mean, Edward was a shy, quiet bookworm, why would Rose be so hateful to him (all before Bella even showed up in the picture).  I just never understood why she was so mean to him...

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

WEll done! Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

I have really enjoyed your fic. I love shy nerdy Edward. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the epilogue! :)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it and I am happy that she asked him :D AND it about time someone put the foot down on Alice

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 25

Are the drugs ever found? What is Rose's problem? Is Lauren a drug addict? Why were Rose and Lauren meeting with Laurent at First Beach?

Loved, loved, loved how Bella put Alice in her place!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 25

Glad that Caius was caught...I am interested in reading what went down so I am glad we get BPOV on that.

Alice will never learn that the world does not revolve around her - good for both Bella and Edward standing firm against her.

Still a bit curious where those drugs are hidden, so I hope we find that out soon as well.  Thanks!

 

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh shit! And I'm all cought up! Well I love the story and i cant wait to see how all this pans out ;)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

Poor Edward & Bella there going thrugh so much hell. I hope that it will get better soon for them, They need it.

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

All this crazyness is crazy! BUT it makes the story intresting ;) pluse i love that she asked him to move in with her :D

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

Happy to know that Mom and Pops are in the Bella wagon! Bella really needs to set Rose on the stright and narrow 0_o Loved the chapter :D

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

Excited Edward got a tat! I have a few myself :D & Billy Rocks!!

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

WOOT!! That is what im talking about XD Loved it 

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

I feel a cat fight coming on :D well i am kinda hoping for it but i just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ah oh ... I wonder what the news is? Reading on to find out .

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sad for what has happend to Bella... but so happy that they are in the same bed XD I love these two .... Reading on , BTW i am so happy i decided to read thsi fic :D

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Humm Is Rose up to no good with Laurent... guess i'll just to have to read and find out :D

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

YAY!!!! That was awesome :)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh the Drama! I hope that she isn't to badly hurt :( 

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Rose allways the Wiched Witch BUT i am hoping she'll come around when Bella hands her her own tail :D

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

YAY dso proud of Edward for asking Bella to brunch :) Too cute 

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

sounds like Bella might be jelous cute story so far :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

Caius must employ the dumbest criminals ever, or maybe it is just hard to find professionals...I am glad they were caught and that Demitri talked to the FBI.

So the question remains "Where are the drugs?"  I am assuming that Laurent's truck has already been impounded and searched.  Did Bella's first break-in happen after Laurent's return, cause maybe he broke in and hid the drugs in Bella's house.  Maybe they can get some drug-sniffing dogs to come out and search B's house.  The only other place I can think of is buried at first beach or hidden in a cave or something off the beach, but that doesn't sound right either.  So I am thinking the drugs are hidden at Bella's, maybe they are hidden in the purple couch.  Regardless, I don't think B and E should move back home until this Caius is behind bars.

Reviewer: TeamBedward123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

So so good. There aren't adequate words to describe how completely enthralled I am with this story. I am however thoroughly irritated at Rosalie; I'm curious to see what her deal is and how it all unravels. I do feel bad for Emmett, but I'm glad he realizes and sees what she's doing. And I'm a little skeptical about Alice still (I agree with Bella, I'll wait for her to prove herself [haha]). 

On the badass comic book character note...I have to agree with Jasper. I hate disagreeing with Edward in general, but Wolverine is supreme in my mind. More now than before since the delightful Hugh Jackman has taken up the role of Wolverine. 

Can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: naughtydreamz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Not an epic fail at all!!!!   It was sweet and sexy and just the right amount of naughty.  ;)

Reviewer: naughtydreamz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like how you made Bella the lion and Edward the lamb....sure wish Rosalie would have gotten her face re-arranged though, lol.

Reviewer: naughtydreamz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm really hooked on this story!  I love sweet, nerdy, innocent Edward.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

Spent the last two days reading your story through. It's fluff with just enough suspense and bada** Bella to be reallly intriguing. I can't wait to find out what Rose's deal is! Are she or Lauren druggies?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 22

Hmm I dunno. I like both for different reasons. I love sweet Edward. 

Reviewer: GGtwinmom06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

damn got into a roll reading and you stopped.. grrrr update soon..

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

another great chapter, cant wait to read more. hmmmm Wolverine or Iron Man, idk i think there both pretty badass. lol

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

I am looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

You did an awesome job on the lemon!!

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

What the hell is wrong with Rose??  What a bitch!!  Still loving the story!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

I just love innocent Edward!! So darn cute!!

Reviewer: alcg123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

I can't wait to see where Rosalie falls in all this!

Reviewer: crazyaspoohbear Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am loving this story. I really hope Alice and Roselie get their heads out ther butts or thay are going to loose their family.

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

Can not wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: rhochradel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 20

Awww man you had to stop it there :) I can't wait to find out what Charlie has found out.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

What? Update soon. I can't wait for more:) why are the so adament about Rose's sister and Edward dating?

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful chapter! :)

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 18

Alice is becoming almost as bad as Rose.  So glad mama and papa Cullen aren't fooled.  Also love Carlisle's tattoo :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

That sucks about the library cutting the hours.  Maybe he could work the front counter at Eclipse part time to make up some hours.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ooh, that Rosalie is so devious, makes me wonder if she had any role in Laurent turning up dead.  So happy Edward showed up in Phoenix to support Bellaand meet the 'rents

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Good for Edward!  He really needed to start standing up to his siblings, they are solo inconsiderate

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love the story. Edward is so cute.  I hate a completely overbearing Alice but absolutely love it when she gets put in her place and stood up to. Wondering if anything ever came of the check charlie did on Rose as it hasn't been mentioned again?? Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awe. This was so cute. I hate that Alice keeps going back and forth. The girls need to get over themselves. It's ridiculous. I can't wait to see what else rose is up to. 

Reviewer: Tenshi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

GREAT story. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Reviewer: shirleypositive72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm leaving you a Nutella cookie and a glowing review. Is it too early to request a Nerdward for Christmas? I promise I'll feed him, and clean up after him, and take him for walks...

Author's Response:

Oh, I so love Nutella. Yummy as is Nerdward!  Let me find a way to clone him first, then you can have one for your very own.

Reviewer: Imu-icu2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

Just wanted to let you know that I enjoy your story very much. I truly admire your passion and appreciate that you share it with us....readers like me look forward to the end of the day where we can relax and lose ourselves in your story. Stay inspired and keep writing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!  I've had a blast writing it.  Out of all the stories I've written, it's my favorite.

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  I'm attempting to post 2 chapters a day, so the next ones are up for you!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

You did great.  I am proud of Edward, the first is the hardest, now he gets to practice to improve, lucky girl!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Glad you enjoyed it, and yes, Bella is a lucky girl.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

So Rose indirectly confirms she is working with Laurent, I know her motive is jealousy and just being a bitch, but I wonder how far she will go if pushed.

I totally agree with Edward by the way, Bella should call her out on her shit during Brunch where she can't manipulate behind the scenes.

And they both said 'I Love You's - so sweet and they are so cute together, at least Em and Jasper are happy for them.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

That is the first tie I have heard of someone aspiring to be an oompa-loompa, Edward is too cute!  And I agree with Bella - Rosalie is a heinous bitch and I wouldn't turn my back on her.  She is plotting something...

Reviewer: gbasjw Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love that you've added a bit of mystery and intrigue to the story.  I can't wait to see how that plays out!

Reviewer: DayTripper82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

Fun semi-clean sexy times!

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