Date: 29 Jun 2015 10:59 PM Title: Jasper's Outtake
wow!!! great story ;) i hope you come back and write the o/t you mentioned soon ;) i hoped b x e had more kids but the 2 they had were great ;) i'm a bit confused about who was bellas' biological dad and what her name was first though? thanks for posting this on here for us ;D
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:29 AM Title: Rosalie Outtake
WHAT A FUCKIN BITCH!!!!!! SHE SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN THE GOOD OLE KARMA TREATMENT. After reading this chapter, all I could hope for was that she get her just desserts ya know? maybe place her in a car accident where she has a 5 inch scar on her face and when she tries to correct it during plastic surgery she has a botched surgery. Wouldn't it suck to have bad luck only to find out later that the surgeon who preformed the surgery was a fraud. HAHAH That would certainly would play up to Edwards theory that everythinb happens in 3's as mentioned in the earlier chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
What a wonderful ending to a great story! I feel bad that Jasper had to get a divorce, but Alice was so bad to him! How could anyone leave someone like that who's going through such a tough time? I mean, so they didn't have to stay married, but she didn't have to make it all about her while his father was dying. Shame...
I am SO happy for Emmett! He deserves happiness!
LOL at Abbie not liking Alice. Serves her right!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
UGH! Such a sweet wedding.
UM, I can't believe............scratch that.... HOW DARE SHE TURN UP AT THAT DINNER! God, Rosalie is such a BITCH!!! O_o
Alice needs to be slapped in the face. How dare she act like that!! But, then again, it just shows her immaturity!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Freaking Laurent! And you KNOW Rose has something to do with this. She's too stupid to keep her mouth shut.
I'm so glad that Edward is there for her. She snapped, yes, but it's to be expected. She's traumatized. And the whole sleeping in the same bed thing? SO CUTE!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was a page in high school, too! Only for a year or two. The place I worked at, I hated it. The boss was a nazi... O_o
This is adorable the way you have Edward all awkward.
OH NO! He got hit, didn't he?? Action in the first chapter, nice!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Emmett Outtake
I really love this story. I actually have read it twice before (I had this story on Alert on fanfiction.net and then after you finished it I reread it) and I truely do love it. Your Bella is a total badass (meant in the absolute best way) and your Edward is completely adorable (reminds me a bit of my fiance' when I first met him).
Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:27 PM Title: Emmett Outtake
Poor Emmett surrounded by all those females, he needs some testosterone in the house so I hope he get a boy...
One thing I never understood about Rosalie was why she hated Edward instantly from the start. I mean, Edward was a shy, quiet bookworm, why would Rose be so hateful to him (all before Bella even showed up in the picture). I just never understood why she was so mean to him...
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad that Caius was caught...I am interested in reading what went down so I am glad we get BPOV on that.
Alice will never learn that the world does not revolve around her - good for both Bella and Edward standing firm against her.
Still a bit curious where those drugs are hidden, so I hope we find that out soon as well. Thanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Caius must employ the dumbest criminals ever, or maybe it is just hard to find professionals...I am glad they were caught and that Demitri talked to the FBI.
So the question remains "Where are the drugs?" I am assuming that Laurent's truck has already been impounded and searched. Did Bella's first break-in happen after Laurent's return, cause maybe he broke in and hid the drugs in Bella's house. Maybe they can get some drug-sniffing dogs to come out and search B's house. The only other place I can think of is buried at first beach or hidden in a cave or something off the beach, but that doesn't sound right either. So I am thinking the drugs are hidden at Bella's, maybe they are hidden in the purple couch. Regardless, I don't think B and E should move back home until this Caius is behind bars.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
So so good. There aren't adequate words to describe how completely enthralled I am with this story. I am however thoroughly irritated at Rosalie; I'm curious to see what her deal is and how it all unravels. I do feel bad for Emmett, but I'm glad he realizes and sees what she's doing. And I'm a little skeptical about Alice still (I agree with Bella, I'll wait for her to prove herself [haha]).
On the badass comic book character note...I have to agree with Jasper. I hate disagreeing with Edward in general, but Wolverine is supreme in my mind. More now than before since the delightful Hugh Jackman has taken up the role of Wolverine.
Can't wait for the next update! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Spent the last two days reading your story through. It's fluff with just enough suspense and bada** Bella to be reallly intriguing. I can't wait to find out what Rose's deal is! Are she or Lauren druggies?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love the story. Edward is so cute. I hate a completely overbearing Alice but absolutely love it when she gets put in her place and stood up to. Wondering if anything ever came of the check charlie did on Rose as it hasn't been mentioned again?? Look forward to the next update.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm leaving you a Nutella cookie and a glowing review. Is it too early to request a Nerdward for Christmas? I promise I'll feed him, and clean up after him, and take him for walks...
Oh, I so love Nutella. Yummy as is Nerdward! Let me find a way to clone him first, then you can have one for your very own.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
Just wanted to let you know that I enjoy your story very much. I truly admire your passion and appreciate that you share it with us....readers like me look forward to the end of the day where we can relax and lose ourselves in your story. Stay inspired and keep writing!
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I've had a blast writing it. Out of all the stories I've written, it's my favorite.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
So Rose indirectly confirms she is working with Laurent, I know her motive is jealousy and just being a bitch, but I wonder how far she will go if pushed.
I totally agree with Edward by the way, Bella should call her out on her shit during Brunch where she can't manipulate behind the scenes.
And they both said 'I Love You's - so sweet and they are so cute together, at least Em and Jasper are happy for them.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
That is the first tie I have heard of someone aspiring to be an oompa-loompa, Edward is too cute! And I agree with Bella - Rosalie is a heinous bitch and I wouldn't turn my back on her. She is plotting something...