Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 60
Thanks for letting us know where to find you.
Great chapter - Jasper's reaction too cute (and funny)!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 60
Oh Jasper you poor boy I think I love you too!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 60
whey hey, found you. thank god. gah FF. right then, fab, so glad that Alice didn't realise straight away, and poor poor Jasper, xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 60
Thrilled to see another chapter!!! I was heartbroken to see that this and AToH was pulled from FF. Boo!!!! But I love these characters too much to just drop the story! Thanks for posting! I loved Jasper's reaction!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 60
Nawwww... Jasper, you were just too cute (and thanks for helping your woman out there Edward!).
Can't wait to find out how dinner goes xx
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 60
Haha! So cute! I actually expected a lot of squealing and jumping up and down, with possible hugging the crap out of Bella. It was much more subdued. Dinner should be interesting.
~C
Date: 04 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 60
I was so bummed to find this fic pulled! UGH at least I can find you here now! Well and on Facebook! =) Awesome update!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 60
Yay! So happy to read an update of this wonderful story. Jasper's reaction was hilarious. You rock, Soapy. :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 60
Bahahaha! I loved Jasper's screwy reaction (and Alice's nonreaction because she wasn't caring/paying attention). Gotta love Edward for letting the fuckery happen, too! :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 60
I followed you over here!!! Love the reactions of Jasper, I laughed my ass off!! Thank you for continuing this story :)))
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 60
hehehe. Jasper, the little dweeb. So seriously cute. I thinks maybe Alice may not be so keen on the real Bella Swan in her house if it means Jasper's attention shifts focus from her.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 60
I love that Alice just ignored her. And Jasper's reaction was just too good.
I can't wait to see what Alice has to say once she can form more intelligent sentences around Bella.
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I laughed so hard at their reactions to Bella. Jasper is so adorably geeky and awkward and Alice.....she was great - glad to know no dogs were rendered deaf......way to keep the reaction calm......
Can I say I am so freaking happy you are posting over here. Living without your awesome stories would be like living without my coffee.....just can't do it.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 60
Love it. Haha at Alice and jasper. And shame Edward for laughing at jasper outburst.. Can not wait for more
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 60
lol this chapter is to fuuny... i am reading this while my little cousin taking a bath and she screaming
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved it!!! Especially Jasper's reaction after Alice completely did not register her brother's girlfriend... His "I love you" was priceless!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 60
Aww Jasper's so adorkable. Hehe!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 60
I am so pissed about your stories being pulled from FF. THANK YOU for reposting here! I love your stories and your writing. I was not expecting Jasper's reaction...I laughed out loud! Great to see this story again.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 60
Wow! I am impressed that even amidst the insanity going on over the teenage terrorists at FF, you've managed to add another chapter! (I know you've been busy commenting on the FB "Removed Fic Support," too.)
Thank you so very much for continuing to write for us. I am so appreciative of your efforts! I read everything you write and am thrilled to see this one in particular contine. From the bottom of my heart, thank you.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved this chapter. So happy that you're continuing with the story.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 60
Awww, Alice and Jasper's reactions were too cute. Can't wait to see what happens next! xo
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 60
Hah! I did not expect that reaction from Jasper!! Lol
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 60
OH WOW! I really loved that! I was not expecting Jasper to act that way! Alice...yes, but Jasper? LOVED IT! So happy you're continuing on :) We readers LOVE you :D
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 60
Wonderful first meeting, so cute of Jasper. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 60
YAY! Well played Soapy!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 60
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! This chapter was GREAT!!! Just know that I first started following your work only recently but I love everything that I've read so far....unfortantly I found you on FFN but luckly it was before your stories were pulled. Just know you ROCK and please continue to give us all these wonderful gifts....you have amazing talent!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 60
That is so funny. I would so expected her to scream and wail and do all sorts of jumping. Poor Bella having to deal with Jasper being oh so in love. LOL HAHA Keep up the great work. Can't wait for more.
Sarah :)
Date: 03 Jun 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
Lol...Jasper was cute. I guess Alices reaction will come later in full force
Date: 03 Jun 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 60
This is just so funny. Just join because of ff.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 60
lmao, jasper. lol.... cant wait to read more....
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 60
Awesome! I have been waiting for this chapter!! great writing and keep it up. Loyal readers will always follow great stories and this one (and ToH) are really great!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 60
LOVE THIS STORY!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved It! Annoying little kids on Fanfiction happy your still posting though.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 59
Loved the superhero role play! Super hot!!
~C
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 60
I thought it would be Alice screaming and jumping and being just Alice never did I think Jasper would say a word lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 60
So, the cat is out of the bag now. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome back! I loved that chapter...Jasper killed me!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 59
I'm so glad you are posting this story on here. I tried to open it up on fanfiction and realized your story was deleted. I'm so sorry about that, but I am glad you posted it here.
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 60
That was so damn cute. Jasper blurting out "I love you" was just perfect.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 60
So glad I found this story of here on this site. Now I have to figure out how to keep track when new post come. Love this story. Alice and Jasper so cute.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 60
Sorry about all of the ffn mess. I love this story though and as difficult s I sometimes find this site, I would not stop reading just because of that. I'm very glad you are continuing your stories and didn't let the entire thing stop you!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 60
I'm deeply shocked by jasper but Alice but not so much. Wow! Jasper strikes me as being the articulate one but or him to be stars struck? That was surprising. I love this fic and a taste of honey so I'm glad you put them over here being as i already have an account to read your other fics. :) thanks soo much! Bye for now.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 60
so happy to get a update ;) thanks. I'm sure she's many 13 year old boys dreams...
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 60
omg their reactions had me laughing so hard. Loved it. Can't wait to see how Bella's parents react. Thank you so much for not giving in to the ff garbage. We really love and appreciate all the time and effort you put in to your stories and I'm happy to follow you to any site you choose to post them. :)
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 60
Who knew it would be Jasper who would be the most shell shocked. I loved his reaction. Thank you for making me laugh today. I needed it. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 60
I owe you massive amounts of reviews, just haven't had the chance. I'm going to try and get them to you though. Awesome chapter, and I imagine that Alice is going to get jealous of Jasper loving on Bella. Can't wait for the next one!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 60
That's hilarious and a complete and true fanciful response for these teens. Poor jasper with his admission of his love. Too funny!!!! And Edwards just finding their awkwardness just as hilarious.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 60
LMAO poor Jasper, he was completely overcome, & Alice, somehow I don't think we've heard the last of her. Thanks for the update, so glad you are continuning to post Soapy. xx
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 60
LOL!! Poor Jasper.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved it... ohh poor Jasper.. is it possible for a teen boy to have a heart attack?? I think he will.. but Bella handled it with grace!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 60
As usual I loved it. You are actually the reason I migrated to this site, I'm learning and adjusting. Thanks for the heads up. Keep it coming and many blessings.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 60
They are so sweet. What a fun story!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 60
Loved it! Thanks for continuing it even after all the discouragement. Not sure I like this site yet but I'll endure if it means I get more bubblegum!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 60
Yay Soapy! We won't those stupid teens beat us down!! So happy to read my favs again. You rock and Alice and Jasper are adorably cute.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 60
Lol loved her reaction... And Jasper lol too funny...
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 60
Lmao! I love jaspers reaction. Awesome!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 60
Aww this has truly made my fucking day (ok night, it's 1:56am right now!!) loved it, jasper reaction classic! Just so happy you are writing again!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 60
oh my God Soapy.... i'm laughing so much that i have tears . I don't love you.... I ADORE YOU woman... only you. My kids are looking to me like i'm crazy.
Luisa
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 60
Love this story--well, actually all of your stories. sorry about the stupidity going on over at ffn, but your loyal readers will follow you to TWICS!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 60
That was great!! So frickin' funny! I'm still laughing at Alice's "Hey, Edward's girlfriend" without even looking! Glad to see you're here... I'll be sure to add the stories to my favorites so I get the updates! Thank you for keeping on writing - I would be sad if I didn't get to see your stories anymore.
~allidel :)
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 60
Jajajaja i loved it¡¡¡
Jaz: I love uuuuuuuuuuuuu....
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 60
Priceless!!!! Poor Jasper and so typical of a 'boy'! lol
Alice was much calmer than I expected, I'm thinking shock and the real screeching is yet to come. ;)
Thanks so much for updating and being so determined to get your voice heard. I'm here and couldn't/wouldn't give up on this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 60
Comical..I was expecting Alice to be more...Alice-like,LOL... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING..(I'M TASCHA LEIGH ANN ON FB)
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 60
LOL I loved it! Very cute! Could you imagine someone you loved (Rob?) showing up in your house! Sigh.. <3
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
loved jaspers reaction, poor bella though. i hope alice and jasper will leave them alone, and not tell all their teen friends that she is at her house or that they know her. can`t wait to see what reene and phil are going to say.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
I can just imagine what I might have done if unexpectedly confronted with a childhood crush (or an adult one come to that !) in my own house. Poor Jasper, hope they don't tease him too much, poor boy will be mortified.
Good to see your story is continuing despite the fuckery in FF land. Illegitimi non carborundum, and all that !
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
I thought that Alice and Jasper's reaction to finding out that Bella was Edward's girlfriend funny. I cracked up when Jasper said 'I love you' to Bella and then her response to it, and then to have Edward laughing about it. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 60
OMG, that was EPIC! Loved their reactions!!!!!!!! P.S. I'll follow you to the ends of the earth as long as you keep sharing your awesomeness!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 60
Great chappy!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 60
Well, I followed you from the ff site and I hate that so many good stories are being deleted. I am happy that so many wonderful authors like yourself have another place to call home and well we readers as well!!!! Still love love love this story!!!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 60
Lol...... That's such a typical reaction! Brilliant
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 60
LOL! Oh that was good. I like the last part where Jasper just blurted he loved her. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 60
Holy shit!! I loved the reactions. Cracked me up!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 60
Flove it!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 60
oh that is to cute! LOL! Loved Jasper's reaction!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 60
LMAO OH Jasper!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 60
Bwahahahaha... Alice was such a bitch, and Jasper was just palin cute. Poor boy...
Can't wait to read about that dinner... I bet Alice is now VERY interested ot meet her brother's girlfriend. LOL
Thanks for updating!
xoxox
~Mina
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 60
Alice probably though it was just one of Edwards many girls no biggie, but oh boy did Japser take the words out fo Eddie boys mouth. Atleast i guess you can say he has a pair of balls that Edward doesnt have at the moment ;) Great job, and Im so HAPPY your going to keep going with this and AToH, I know all the hype over at FF will eventually die down like always. Keep up the awesome work.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 59
Hey Holly :) i really loved this chapter!
can't wait for more!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 59
I Love these two! I can't wait to see how Alice reacts! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
ohh ok! i had thought from previous chapters that charlie was still alive.. very cool backstory though
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow! even for a teenager, so far so good for Bella having a good head!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 59
Followed you from the site which will remain nameless.
I can't wait for Alice's reaction.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 59
hey, great story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Alice is going to be speechless before she screeches so loud only dogs can hear than pass out. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 59
Wow...that what some hot ass role play..."wearing a sleek black body suit that hugged every curve and line of defined muscle"...we need some more of that! Lol!
And fuck off to those assholes who don't have a bit of patience or compassion.
Love ya, Soapy, and those short stories!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Gah! Newton is always such a bastard. I see it's no different here.
And Jessica ... Well, yeah. She's not my favorite person at the moment.
I feel a bit bad for Bella. The financial freedom aside, I can see how she'd want to start living a normal existence. I hope that Renee and Phil give her the chance to go off to college and have that regular life, and don't try to pressure her into continuing something she really doesn't feel passionate about anymore.
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love love love this!
Oh so much trouble awaits with that AmEx Black card.
I can't wait to see exaclty what trouble she gets herself into actually. Well, if there's any trouble. Perhaps that's just my own overactive imagination getting the best of me? ;)
xoxo
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 59
There are too many tacky phrases I could say...all surrounding him having a "gun" in his pants and asking her if she knew where he could "holster" it. God that sounds so much worse typing it. LOL
Thank god for Carlisle. Just call him cool, calm and collected, that's why he's Mr. C!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 59
I love your story and it really sucks that you had to move your story because ffn decided to crack down all of a sudden or whatever is really going on. Haters gonna hate :P
~ Fairest
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 59
OH YEAH! Loved it! I cannot wait to see how Alice reacts :) I loved the role play...maybe they can do some more role playing later ;)
Date: 02 Jun 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 59
So happy this is up here!! I hate that it was pulled! This is by far one of my favorite stories!