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Reviewer: tinare05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 62

awww

nothin' more to add

 

Cheers

Tina

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 62

Aww he's so sweet! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 62

Awww, I LOVE this Edward!! :o)

 

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 62

aw so sweet :D love this chapter/story

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 62

Aaaahhhhhhh!!!!!  Love it. 

Reviewer: Withloveviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 61

I'm a huge fan!!! I'll follow your reads anywhere you go:) 

Reviewer: Bubblegum Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 61

Hi, i just came across your work a few hours ago. hope you update soon, im addicted to hot bubblegum. i cant wait to read up on your other fics, keep up the good work ;) Thanks for sharing x

Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 60

Great chapter! I'm so glad I found you. I LOVE this story.

Reviewer: Pumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 61

It was amazing as always;)

 

The potty mouth discovery was so funny...

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 61

Love it, thank god you decided to continue it. I'll aventually catch up on a TAste Of Honey.

Reviewer: lizconno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 61

Posters of her in his room? How mortifying! At least B unintentionally cut the tension with a few profanities. lol :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 61

OH WOW...SO amazing!  Oh Jasper ;)

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 61

Love this story and cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 61

LMAO at how even Jasper was so...excited/shocked. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: vandecou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 60

I followed you over from FF because I had to finish this story! Thanks for posting this here and for finding me a new site to read stories from since FF is censoring all the good stories!

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 61

The dinner and meeting the fam went well, don't you think? Hehehehe

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 60

OMG, Jasper was so damn cute. "I love you!"  LOL

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 61

freaking hilarious, i wouldn't be able to not laugh either!

Reviewer: BertieBott Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 61

Went to check for an update on ff.net today and saw your story was pulled - twcs was my first stop in tracking it down. Hooray! Thanks for keeping at it even though people are acting like immature brats. I love this story!

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 61

Love it.  Great update.

Reviewer: horphan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 61

hahahhaaaa, great slip by Bella, hehe... yeah I'll bet Alice and Jaspers' jaws were hanging wide open.  Great visual :)

xox

Reviewer: horphan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 60

haha, their reactions were too cute!  Jasper's 'I love you' with his serious expression had me rolling.  Great writing, glad you're here :)

xox

Reviewer: OliveU Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 61

Hehe

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 61

LOL! Poor Bella that was really akward. Great writing! 

Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 61

not creepy at all!! LOL.

Glad that Edward's family liked Bella though.

Reviewer: katydid Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 61

Oh my, Edward seems to have been little help...he definitely should have warned them about Bella's arrival.

 

Thanks for the update-Kate

Reviewer: JoanaS Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 61

that was hilarious! can't wait for the next! 

 

Reviewer: Jacylee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh My Gosh! So freakin' hot! Somehow, I overlooked this story as it was being posted elsewhere. Thank you for being willing to take the time to repost!

Reviewer: kroseph Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 61

Yeah, so glad this updated!!! That went well, don't you think? Poor kids, I'd been shocked silent if a celebrity came to dinner at my house!

Thanks so much for this and for posting back-ups. ;)

Reviewer: lizziesparkling Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 61

What an awkward meeting. I bet Bella's glad it's over..lol

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 61

ah, think Jasper is cute. ;)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 61

lmao, jasper and alice. lol. cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 61

LOL! Oh my god that was an eventful night. Lol! But at least her slip cleared the air. That's good news. Can't wait for more. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loved the dinner lol

Reviewer: twidictedbyrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loved the update! :D

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 61

soo good

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 61

I'm glad that the meeting between Bella and Edward's family went pretty well.  But I hope that Alice and Jasper won't be telling their friends.

Reviewer: Gaby04 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 61

Nope..Not creepy at all. I'm glad that dinner went well. Eh, as well as it could go. Lol

Reviewer: girly613 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it!such a awesome fic.

Reviewer: meee611 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 61

LOL I would have died of embarressment swearing like tha tin front of his parents! LOL 

Reviewer: littleblueduck Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 61

Awesome chapter!!! I am so glad your blog is coming along and everything is working out. Keep up the great work. :)

Sarah

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 61

so funny, glad edward got a kick out of that :D

unfortunatly don't think dinner with bella's parents is going to go good as this one.

love the story so much :)

Reviewer: Handley Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 61

I love you for carrying on and continuing to write. Thank you for putting in the effort to have your stories available for us to read. You're amazing and I can't wait for more of this story. As soon as I get my update alert I stop everything and go straight to it. 

Reviewer: CdrIvanova Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 61

Too funny!

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 61

Well at least things seemed to get better as the night progressed. :) 

Reviewer: nakeli23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 61

fucking tweens,lmao..loved it!!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 44

Haha

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 43

Aww

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 42

Lmao!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my God! Go Bella!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh my

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 60

Can I just say, I do miss the ability to be able to hit the "share on Twitter" button that FFN gives us. But I am so glad to see you've got this posted again and can't wait to read the rest of your story.

Reviewer: Pumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 60

Well, that was funny;)

 

Poor Bella, I guess that was not the way she hoped or better feared her introducing into Edwards family...

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 37

Yes!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 36

Aww! He wants to do the right thing!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 35

Awesome!!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh my

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

Ahh

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 60

too freaking sweet!  totally funny!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 60

Loved the last two chapters updates and that you brought everything over to TWCS as well. 

Sorry to hear about your loved one passing and hope that everything has gotten back to as normal as they can at this time of loss. I do hate that " the haters" actually left mail for a few days late on an update but it truly riles me up when they have done it anonymously, that is the cowards way out. I truly believe that if you were that passionate to send the response, then you should tack your name onto it. I have only done that once and signed it. I still felt guilty afterwards b/c I dislike confrontations. Some people amaze me with their selfish stupidity. Sorry for the rant but I guess this carries over from the FF massacre that is happening.

Thank you for bringing your stories over to another site and continuing along. They are all just wonderfully fantastic. Much love to you for sharing your stories with the rest of us.

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh fuck

Reviewer: saintfudge Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 60

They are all cute .. 

Now have log in for here ..so all good starting new favs list to read .. Can't wait for all your up dates ..

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh shit

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

He needs to google her

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love it

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 22

Omg

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh fuck

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

Omg!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh my

Reviewer: lilytree Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 60

Yay! So glad to find you here and get an update, I can't wait for more, thank you!

 

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oooh!!! It's hot in here!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

Go Bella 

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

Haha!!

Reviewer: cullenstwimistress Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 60

lmao!! priceless!!!! :o)

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome!!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

He's too much!

Reviewer: sewthyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 60

I'm one of the followers.  I don't understand why the sudden crackdown, but I'm glad you are continuing the story here. 

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

Keep giggling at his inner dialogue with himself!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bwahaha!!

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ahhhhhh

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Lmao

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awesome

Reviewer: barbarito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love it

Reviewer: katydid Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 60

Oh Jasper, he literally fell on his ass for her.  Of course, Edward is getting a giggle out of them now, but he may change his tune.  Bella's thoughts were perfectly appropriate, fucker indeed.

 

Thanks for the update and taking the time to move your stories over!

 

Kate

 

ffn, I was katelyndc...only place I'm not katydid.

Reviewer: Isaos Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 60

Ooohh

That's not the scream I was waiting for! 😉

Reviewer: barbarito Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

Lmao

Reviewer: barbarito Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Looks good

Reviewer: SeaEnchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 60

I love that Alice didn't even pay attention to her at first. So funny! Love it!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 60

Nice to read more of you here, Définitely ! But how can I know when you post a new chapter ?

Reviewer: mstre11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 60

I am so glad that I was able to find this over here after all that bs on ff net.Great chapter,I loved their reaction.See u next update.:)

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 60

Oh that was so funny. Poor Alice is stunned unable to speak, and Jasper has an infatuation the size of Mount Everest. LOL 

 

So happy that you moved your stories over hear with all the crap going down over at FFN. I've loved everything that I've read of yours and can't wait for more!!

 

Reviewer: Chachi94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 60

I read this over at Fanfiction and I stopped at chapter 59 because that was the last chapter you uploaded. Anyways this story is so good. I love. In this chapter Jasper seems like he is a crazy fan. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 60

Oh too fucking funny... I'm sure Alice is just going to love what Jassper just said... lol

Reviewer: sharkjumper Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 60

love love love the kids' reaction!!!! :)))))

on a different note, how can we take down the LawlClan forum on ffn? i understand they're behind the recent attacks on the twilight fandom which resulted in a bloodbath of deleted stories from ffn... is that true and what can we do about it?

Reviewer: JoanaS Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 60

omg that was so freaking funny!

can't wait for the next ;)

Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 60

Oh god fucking hilarious! I'm a little disapointed that noone fainted (like I said in my last review at ff.net).

But Jasper falling over and Alice not even looking at her was so funny. Not to mention the shouting and the I love you. Priceless.

Reviewer: orintadarling Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 60

hahahahaha Jasper's reaction made me laugh! i love this story!

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