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Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 50

she's going to have one hell of a hangover tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 49

got the feeling it ain't gonna happen tonight....she'll pass out...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 48

geez, where is my Edward like this?  add in that he's a sci-fi and/or computer nerd, and my ideal man would be complete....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 47

some place she'd never expect, probably.  she is such a horn dog!  isn't that usually the guy's thing? LOL what kind of woman's libber am I??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 46

hot guy, hot car, what's not to love....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 45

so sweet, these 2...

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 65

Outtake in EPOV please. As for the wedding bring it on :) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 44

so I see you're still not done here after 65 chapters....hmmmm....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

glad to hear you have plans for a couple dozen more chapters....I'm reading it all today in a marathon....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 42

that didn't take long....LOL!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

she's full of bravado, this little girl....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 40

these 2 were MADE for each other....

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 65

I so missed these two together..they are so hot. :)  I would love to see and outtake of the proposal!!! EPOV would be fun, but whichever you choose will be great :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 64

A girl on girl love scene...either I totally forgot that from before or it wasn't said until now.  Yeah, Edward totally had a different reaction based on that fact alone!!! That trailer is going to be rocking for the next two hours <3

Reviewer: inbetweendayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 65

I would like the proposal in epov always different to see a proposal to the mans point of view. great chapter as always

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 39

yep, I love reading about these two unlikely lovers, so drag it out as long as you see fit, just please please finish it eventually, OK?

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 65

Just what I need to start out my afternoon!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 38

yes, me, I want that too, come on over here.

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 65

I'm a big fan of anything in EPOV, so you know who's version of the proposal I would love to read :)  I knew Edward would be horny as hell after seeing Bella with Tanya.  That is  every guy's fantasy. LOL  BTW...  Is there going to be any pics of E/B's heart tats?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 37

ok well i guess they will go at their own pace...which seems now to be racing off the page!!!!  go go go!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 36

spanking? oh, I didn't know this was going to be THAT kind of a story....oh I don't mind at all, just wasn't thinking bubblegum bdsm.....LOL!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 35

oh damn....they still want each other....fucking LOVE that! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 34

oh you are so evil!  the master of the cliffie!  I love being teased....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 33

Ha ha! The joke's on me AGAIN!  Not so what I imagined or expected! The cardboard cutout was among the things she sent for Jacob's daughter!  That's what I get for expecting things!  Now lets see the real deal....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 32

wow, so not the reaction I was expecting from Edward!  Can't wait to see her reaction to the cardboard  cutout of her that she encounters in the shop at her next appointment!  not so good, I imagine...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 31

OMG.....what ever does he think of her now? doesn't he know she's the same girl he fucked two weeks ago??  I bet not...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 30

it never ceases to amaze me what people can build up in their minds about a situation that is so totally not what is really happening....just fucking talk about it, people!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

what a way to find out!!!!  I bet he feels like a first class perv now....LOL!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

still with you, and happily so, my dear!  oh I can't wait for this....but I will, of course!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 27

thanks for the background on Edward....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

I am very excited to see what comes next between them...I am really enjoying this story a fucking LOT and hope that you do finish it.  I have started more stories than I care to remember, only to find the author never finished them...I resisted starting this one a long time ago because of that very reason. It caught my attention a while back but I only started reading now that I see you have started adding chapters again after a long haitus.  Please finish it.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

these 2 need to synch up and talk.....hope the do later on down the line...will he relent and look her up, google her?  sorry my reviews aren't really reviews, more like stream of consciousness rant-like comments....

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 65

Edward! I think it would be fun to hear from him for a bit.

Love their shared ink. They are so solid I love it! 

Glad Renee liked him and approved! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

I can't believe he still thinks her claim to fame is being a porn star!  LOL! He couldn't be farther off the track. Oh this is really good!  I can't wait until her finds out....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

oh poor girl....i think she will find that she has underestimated both herself and him...eventually...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

more like a scared little girl coward.  she is feeling way too much and has no experience with situations like this....selfish, yes, but I don't think that's the main emotion here.....I feel very protective, somehow, of these 2....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

wow what's this? she's feeling shy all of the sudden...oh I forgot how young she really is...what a way to start a relationship!  i am assuming there will be one....

Reviewer: Lulutbo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 65

EPOV ;)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm not sure he's still thinking porn....I don't think he's thinking with his big head at all right now....more like with his other, more sexy, head.....he's in for a big surprise when he finds out who she really is....part of me hopes he never finds out!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

me *raises hand* I want them to keep going....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

so slow, such a tease....more, please!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

he has no idea....oh this is going to be fun...

Reviewer: kristinem Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 65

Very enjoyable reunion!  I love that their engaged! Great  chapter! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

oh god, the imagination runs wild....tongue, fingers, cock. more of all....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

oh kay....I would love to feel a pierced tongue on my clit....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh you tease....lol!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh Edward, please make a move.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOL!  He thinks she does porn.....oh little does he know....I was right, too soo for lemons but not for fantasizing....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

lemons already?  I bet not, but could be wrong....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

I bet Edward will be willing to make her scream....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

I wouldn't call him a manwhore....most men are like this....just hope he's not a cheater. I don't like cheaters....will Bella return tonight?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

26...I said mid 20's so I was very close!  An 8 year age difference is nothing!  Mutual attraction at first sight....nice!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

mid 20's would be my guess...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

 ok lets see....hot tattward....tattoo virgin Bella...hmmmm...what's not to like?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love tattoos....have 2.  This will be interesting to watch....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

still here. ok here we go. sad about charlie. love the ink idea...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

so far, so good....I hope Bella gets what she thinks she wants....and then some...

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 65

good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

still reading....like that the chapters are short....makes it easy to catch up. Love snarky Bella....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 65

:)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey there, I haven't read one of yours lately and this looked fun.  I see you have started to pick up chapters again on it so I thought I'd take the chance to start now. Yes, she seems bratty, but hell what 18 year old isn't!  I really enjoy reading FF and count you as a favorite among authors.  See you again down the road!

Judy

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 65

So glad to get folowup re: proposal and heart tattoos! 

As to the outtake - I always love hearing what's going on in Edward's head generally -- but especially with your Edward!  He's such a sweet goober - it's so cute hearing this tough tatoo guy gush over Bella :)

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 65

EPOV all the way.....love EPOVs  :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 65

SO amazing!  I really loved it SO much!  Hmmm...I think I want the outtake in EPOV, since we don't hear from him as much :D

Reviewer: A Jasper For Me Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 65

I love this fic ... I tried to wait 'til it was finished, but I just couldn't! So, I read it all Friday night & pimped you out on my blog yesterday! ;)

i would love to see the proposal in EPOV.

Thanks for sharing your awesome talents with us!

Reviewer: Shadowed by Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 65

so happy renee and phil didn't give her shit!!

 

and epov for the proposal :)

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 65

Proposal from EPOV.:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 64

That boy is ready to pop lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 63

Edward is there to make sure what was going on with his women 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 62

he is so sweet

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 64

I love this! lol :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 64

looking forward to more

Reviewer: GiggleSnortBlush Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 64

You big meanie! No fair teasing us like that!! 

:) great update, literally panting for more!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 64

Are we getting some sexin next chapter? Loving it doll.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 63

Oh how i have missed these two, Im glad your mojo is coming back with these two.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 64

Hahaha, Edward got an eye-full of some girl-on-girl action. Now he gets some if his own. Make him beg Bella. Lol.
Wonder if Tanya will try and weasel her way into their private bubble. She seems overly interested in Edward. Angela is a delightful part of Bella's entourage.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 64

Damn aww Edward got all hot seeing he's girl making out with another girl lol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 63

Bella is trying to move beyond her bubble-gum image. I wonder how that will be received?

Reviewer: mstre11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 64

IDK about Tanya meeting Edward...

Reviewer: mstre11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 63

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Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 64

Really great story.

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 64

I'm sorry I wouldn't let Tanya any where near him.

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 64

LMAO.... never saw that one coming. (no pun intended) That right there is a man's fantasy come true ;)

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 63

Oh boy.  Is Edward going to be able to handle the Bella's sex scene? Hopefully he feels secure in their relationship that it won't bother him. As for Bella, let's hope she can do it in one take. LOL

Reviewer: kellishines Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 64

They need to christen that damn trailer now! Dear lord I hate waiting. But I will. For a story this good the anticipation is worth it. :) thank you very much

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 64

LOL.... Naturally the lesbian scene turned him on - but could he have handled a hetero scene as well?  And I'm kinda bummed we missed the proposal scene -- hope it makes it to an outtake. 

After such a long hiatus - I re-read the early chapters -- such a great story!

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 64

:) one way to get your man to be okay with sex scenes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 64

Good job b. Lol for turned on eddie

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 63

Oooh b doing a sex scene not with our boy....uh oh.

Reviewer: jeter2684 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 64

thansk for the updates!!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 64

oh boy, I believe our boy was turned on!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 64

GAH! That was amazing :)  YEAH! I knew he would react that way, but I didn't know who Bella's costar was, that was shocking!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I had to go back and re-read chapters because i thought i missed the engagement?? will that be covered in a later chapter.. i love these two they are very hot and adorable together  

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 64

I hope Tanya doesn't get any ideas...he's off the market! 

I so thought the sex scene was not with a girl, no wonder he wanted to be there! Now she's in for a real treat with the trailer action!! 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 64

so when did they get engaged?  will there be a flashback or anything to it??  Love the story !!!!! And whata part to do to break the mold, Disney sweetheart to lesbian? 

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 64

I'm little worried about tayna and her wanting to meet Edward. 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 64

Welcome back! And with all sorts of yumminess! Good to be reading this again! Tanya? Totally unexpected and totally hot!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 64

*fans herself* oh yeah... LOL that was hot, Soapy! Can't wait to read the next one. xoxo Mina

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 64

I don't think two hours will be enough for Edward!

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 64

Oh I didn't know it was girl on girl sex, now I get why Edward showed up lol wouldn't be the same if it was a man 

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