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Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

Glad Jake got his act together.   Bet Bella is over the moon with the promotion.  Don't know that I'd be strong enough to be a cop or a firefighters wife.

TY for Writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

Awww poor Felix and Demetri.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

lol for hospital wedding.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad Tanya has forgiven E and helped him see B's pov.   Buh Bye Vicki!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow  Surprised that Victoria had the guts to do it.   Sorry the judge should have already held Caius in contempt.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

Crazy indeed.  Lawyers like Caius should be banned.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad E got to her before V was able to hurt her or the baby

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow taking em's kid is so cowardly

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Glad the event went well. Hmmm for cliffy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ooh a female arsonist...don't see those that often

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow great that Jake is getting help.  Now I'm wondering if someone else is starting the fires though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yea he def messed up

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow Renee is a real peach.  Thinking Jake is doing the fires like in Backdraft

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

Glad she told him. Aww for taking in a treat

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

Aww sweet song she sang for him.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Felix better be careful Demetri doesn't run her off.  While I do feel for Jake knowing his story, do excuse for harassing/threatening Bella

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aww how cute. They live in same place. I'd make sure to walk her home too since Jake was already drunk and harassing her.  Can't wait to see where you take it

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

So what happened to that flame? 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 18

wow a very fast paced story but still very enjoyable ;) thanks for sharing on here with us ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 18

Things worked out very well for all concerned, even Jake. So, Bella is happy Edward won't be in as much danger, Jake has returned to the firehouse, all the kids are happy and healthy and on their way, so I would have to call this a very happy ending!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

Now that life is so good for Bella and Edward, with Matty such a good baby. trajedy strikes! How sad that her dear friends are gone, at least together!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

That scene got a cross between a chuckle and a tear! Bella is a determined woman, wasn't going to have her son as an unmarried mother! Mind over matter, I suppose!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella is entirely too good for this old world, and a much better person than most of us! I feel much more like Edward and Tanya, where Victoria is concerned. At least the threat is gone for good, that's what really matters!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

After all this hideous testimony and anxiety for Bella especially, plus Edward, Victoria is dead? What gives?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

A crazy client and a sleazy lawyer, sounds about right! What a farce, she's guilty as hell and deserves the maximum sentence under the law! Bella did a great job of testifying, even when she admitted she offered her life for Emily's!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well, well, thank heaven they slapped the cuffs on Victoria, the sick fool!I almost cheered for Bella as she told off her crazy cousin!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm surprised that Bella hasn't told everyone that Victoria set the fire and tried to kill her! As for whether she and Edward will think this a good thing, I'm betting she is pregnant! Now they will have to guard against Victoria killing their baby!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

Here it comes, trouble on the hoof! Hatred, jealousy and pyromania, sounds like a deadly combination to me!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

How creepy is it for some crazed woman to be setting fires to feed her sickness and trying to get rid of Bella into the bargain!I suppose she would rather kill them both  than let Bella have him! I hope Charlie can find this loon and put her behind bars!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

It took courage to get the help he needed so Bella is happy for him, though sad that he probably won't be around. It is tough to lose a friend. but then she is ready to get serious with Edward, so that will be her focus.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

SWow! That was some deep, dark secret! I kind of don't blame Bella for her reaction, but I can see why Edward handled it the way he did, too. I just hope they can work this out.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

Now you're scaring me, what deep, dark secret does Edward need to share with Bella? The trip to Alec's grave to say goodbye and tell him about Edward was a bit sad, but necessary. The Renee shows up wanting money, and it galvanizes the whole family! She must be really bad news!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

Okay, I'm glad Bella told Edward about Alec, it needed to be told. They are neither of them rushing into anything, but I'm liking the growing relationship between them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

After all, he did promise her a ride in his beautiful truck! I bet Edward was blown away by Bella singing that song just for him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Just that fast, it's hit both of them. Too bad that his girl's death led Jake to be an alcoholic, but there was no way to keep him on at the firehouse in that condition. Too bad also that Edward and Bella don't both know how the other feels!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Instant attraction, after that song, especially. Tickled me that Jake gets to be the stupid ex-boyfriend, again! If Rose, Jasper and Charlie okay him, Edward should be safe to date Bella.

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

i kept thinkin maybe victoria faked her death to escape but i am glad that she is not around to harass bella and edward or harm the kids. also glad jake and bella are still friends and everyone is happy and living a happy ever after. keep up the good work

Reviewer: elicitshadowhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

awesome!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awwww...how sweet!! Enjoyed it!!!! Thx!
:)

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

just discovered this and i love it turned off my fave show so i could read good thing its a holiday here cause im gonna be uplate reading! great story

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love it

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

i love how you wrapped that up.....well done!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

wow that was horrible and sad...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

giggles, chuckles and snorts....perfect Wedding and delivery!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

thats our Bella, very charitible!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

Praise be, or is she really not dead...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

good grief is looney thats for sure....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

yiiipppeeeee!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

omg!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

Victoria.....perfect...so we hadn't met the culprit yet.....what a witchett!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

okay now were moving on... yes, I should be sleeping....this is getting so good...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

hum... who on Earth is doing this.... well I was thinking wacko Tanya, but how would she know details on where Bella was conceived? So a person wants to think Renee,  but that's just ...oooh yuck, sick.... then one wants to think maybe Kate? or someone we don't know of yet..

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow what a way to tell someone you love them.....giggles.... love that Jacob is getting sober...how is it that Jake knows about Edward and Irina?



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. I don't know, or can't remember if I ever explained how he knew about them....its been a while. I think I mentioned that he saw them in Seattle or something. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 6

okay glad it wasn't as bad as I thought.... and totally didn't see the wife in a coma coming....wow!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

what the heck....oh please oh please tell me he wasn't the cause of Alec's death....geez...and am I the only one that thinks Jacob Black is setting the fires?   Hope its not but I think it is....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

very good chapter......

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

awwwhhhhh

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

very good.....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

great first chapter.....good detail and wonderful background on the characters.....

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great story!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

Nice ending, I really enjoed this story



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

oh no, not Felix and Demetri.  I so did not see that coming!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow, that sure had a lot packed into it!! Glad Edward was alright and that they were married before the arrival of baby Matthew.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

So glad that they came to an understanging. I'm not sorry that Victoria is gone though.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

Uh oh!!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love the trial proceedings!! And the proposal was sweet!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad to see that you are enjoying this one.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm so glad that they finally have her in custody.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad she's doing better. Hmmm, something in the bloodwork.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

OMG!!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great fundraiser, but what's going to happen with there visitor?

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow, who on earth is starting these fires.  Oh, I hope they are okay!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Jacob is getting better. I just hope that it is real. I'm so glad he said the big ILY!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow what a story, let's hope they can get through this

 

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, so much happening in this story:a fire starter, an alcoholic Jake, a crazy Renee and what ever it is that Edward has to tell.  I'm loving it!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

So sad about Alec. Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved Bella's confidence! 

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think I'm going to like fireward!!

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like how this is starting out. So glad I have you on author alert!

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad that you are enjoying it. It only gets better.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hadn't thought about it, but I'll consider it if there is enough interest.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it.  Are you going to do a future take so we can know what the sex of the twins were and how the gangs life is then?  Thanks again for the great story!

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