Date: 13 Jan 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
I absolutely love this story!! I am so happy that I came across it! :D I am sad that it has ended! I wish there was more for them!! Thanks for sharing! :)
Thank you so much! It's lovely to know people are still discovering and enjoying this story. x
Date: 09 Jan 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
What on earth is this girls problem?! I mean I can understand her not likib Edward, but to hurt her father like this is heartless,
Lauren does have issues, major ones. Her reasoning is cockeyed in the extreme. All will be revealed, believe me. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awww, so perfect. *sigh* They're so happy and in love surrounded by friends and family they love and adore who love and adore them in return. I'm just a big puddle of sappy goo, you and your boys have melted me, lol. I'm going to miss these boys as well.
Loved it, loved it, loved it! I've loved every bit of this story, the lemons are so juicy but most of all, as I've said before, the love Carlisle and Edward share just oozes off the page (screen) lol, I wish I could bottle it. You have an amazing talent and I love your style of writing. Fabulously amazing story, thank you so much for sharing.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Whale watching! Wow! Such a great surprise for Edward. I'd forgotten all about that, I'd love to go whale watching.
Carlisle's birthday surprise was brilliant. Edward's gift was so thoughtful. Lol, his well kept secret is out and thanks to Emmett another well kept secret was nearly out, hahaha!! I'm so glad that everything is settling down for them
Date: 11 Aug 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hmmm, what's Carlisle up to? Web site alerts for what?
I'm so glad that Carlisle and Edward talked got things back on track and also that Edward and Esme were able to clear the air. Esme was right a while back when she said that Edward was too old for Lauren, it's not in age but definitely in maturity and the way in general that Edward conducts himself. It's going to take time but I'm sure eventually Lauren will be able to accept Edward as Carlisle's partner.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Crisis averted! Step away from the ice cream! Lol.
Thank God Carlisle got through to him. Edward can't be held responsible for someone who doesn't tell anyone she's being bullied, or for the way that person reacts to bad news. The stress of it all caused Lauren's grip on reality to slip and she made some very bad decisions but that's not Edward's fault and, of course, Carlisle recoginsed that. Now, in the same way, Carlisle and Esme can't think that this is all their fault either. I know they will because they're her Mum and Dad but if your child won't speak to you and nobody else is coming up with anything all you can do is be there when it all goes pear shaped. I'm so glad she's not pregnant, it was the last thing she needed.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh Lauren, you silly, silly girl (I'm starting another theme, lol). The mind can be a magical place but it can also be the cruelest place. How long has Lauren been bullied at school? That's all I can think that she meant when she said it didn't matter what the girls said about her and that Edward kept her safe. Now a baby or is her body playing tricks with her? It's possible that all the stress has caused all her symptoms unless, of course, she's done a test.
There are decisions to be made here but Lauren needs to understand that there's nothing that can't be put right and no situation that can't be made the best of. That last part sounds so crass, but if she really is pregnant, then she has to decide what she wants to do.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Lol, I knew they'd have to watch the DVD, I mean, it was just too hot and sexy not to, they should run it on a continuous loop, lol.
I'm so glad that Edward's all moved in now and they can be together fully.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Damn that was hot! I need to lie down and have a rest after a cold shower that is, phew!!
I'm glad that Edward's Mum said what she did about wanting Edward to be happy and that she'd get to know Carlisle. He would have been heartbroken if he lost his Mum over his choice of relationship.
Finally they're going to live together, woohoo!!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
So it was Esme speaking to Elizabeth but still, despite what she's seen and everything she's been told, she still doesn't be able to accept Edward's choice of relationship. Perhaps, over time, as she see's how much in love they are she'll come round. I hope so.
I loved the karaoke and Emmett's special present was just hilarious. Could this be the start of their own personal porn collection? Lol, I bet Emmett had to bleach his brain after that, bwahahahaha!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Who said that? Was that Esme talking to Elizabeth? I know Elizabeth has a lot of revelations to get her head around, but I hope she comes round soon. She has to let Edward make his own mistakes, not that this is, but she has to learn to let go and trust that Edward's knows what he wants. He's a grown man now and he definitely knows what he wants. It almost seems like she's pushing Edward to the side and reinforcing with Emmett and Rosalie what a 'normal' relationship should be.
I wish that either Carlisle or Edward would say something about how lonely they are without the other. This is such a new relationship and in a strange way they should still be at the stage of 'should I keep calling him, should I text him, I want to be with him all the time, will he think I'm being pushy?' but because of all they've been through they are way beyond that and it seems right that they should be talking about moving in together even though they've only been together a few weeks. Does that make sense? I know what I mean, lol.
Oh, and that bar lemon........they well and truly squeezed the juice out of that one, phew!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awww, a drunk Carlisle is so cute, I love him to bits. I'm so glad that everyone at the party was happy and respectful. Carlisle has so many good friends and colleagues to support him and now Edward. Jasper turned up for Alice, it's a shame that Emmett couldn't be there.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ooooh Jasper's thinking about a date with Alice, awww, of course she'll accept him for what he is, she has to he's her destiny, lol.
I keep forgetting to say but the lemons in this story are amazing, not only are they completely hot but so loving at the same time. *sigh* The love that Carlilse and Edward share just oozes off the page (screen).
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
What does Lauren mean, her life has already ended? Has she done something else stupid or is she just being overly dramatic? Poor Esme is at her wits end. It's the worst thing to have a child that won't talk to you, it breaks your heart and it makes you feel like a failure as a parent. You feel that you can't be what they need but they won't tell you what that is. It's like you failed a test that you didn't know you were taking and then not being told what you failed on. Like I said heartbreaking and frustrating beyond words. I hope she gets the support she needs for everyone's sake.
It sounds as though Emmett's heard something about what's been going on, I hope he won't be too pissed off that Edward's kept him out of the loop, he didn't do it intentionally.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yes, Jasper is the whole package and Alice is going to be the lucky girl to be in reciept of said package, bwahahahaha!!
Poor Esme, she's always the last person to know what's going on. I'm sure that she'll start to dread Carlisle's visits as he always seems to be bringing more bad news of what their daughter has been up to. What else could possibly be prompting Lauren to act this way? Is it some sort of personality disorder, or is she simply unable to live in the real world? I definitely think she could use some help especially after the way Esme said she'd been behaving.
I'm glad that Esme already accepts Edward and his relationship with Carlisle, I think it will put Edward more at ease knowing that she's not going to attack him on sight for everything thats happened. Lol.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lauren really needs to grow up. At 18 she would know what effect her words would have, she obviously realises that a doctor having a relationship with his patient is the biggest no, no ever, then to add to the mix that this is a gay relationship she would know how devastating this would be to her Dad. I believe she acted on impulse and truly didn't think through the full consequences of her actions, (I'm trying to find some redeeming features here) that it would go as far as smear campaign and that lawyers would be involved.
Lauren's done so much damage not only to the people she loves but to the wider community. She needs to be taught a lesson, maybe her own embarrassment at being outed as the person that fuelled all of this will be enough, who knows. What she needs to really think about is that if she'd just accepted things when Edward finished their relationship and after finding out he and her Dad were together, there might have been a little bit of gossip but the humiliation and embarrassment she feels wouldn't be a tenth of what it is now. Stupid, stupid girl.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my God! After such a perfect and relaxing time away they come home to a message like that. I suppose that was the ringing phone that was heard before they left. I suppose it's not going to be as simple as the fact that Edward wasn't Carlisle's patient and that Lauren is acting like a jealous, petty little girl who'll seem to stop at nothing to destroy her Dad's happiness and try to get Edward back. What part of 'it's over' does she not understand?
Back to reality with a bump.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well I hope that phone that was ringing when they left wasn't anything important. These two have been through enough for the time being.
I loved Edward telling Emmett all about Carlisle and then Emmett confessing that he wanted what Carlisle and Edward have together. I think that we all want to be loved and feel love and Emmett is no different, he's been so lonely since his last relationship ended.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
How low is Lauren going to stoop? I know she's hurting but this is seriously going too far. It's a good job that Carlisle knows the truth but still this must really hurt hm that his own daughter would play games like this with someone's life. Now, as Edward said, she's hurt her Dad and herself with her actions. Girls are bitchy and only true friends will understand and forgive her actions, the rest of them will rip her apart visciously.
What are they all doing in a bar anyway, I was under the impression that the legal drinking age in the US is 21?
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Woohoo! Edward's remembered and he's told Emmett about everything. Now when are these two going to say their 'I love you's'? I know Carlisle already said it but I think Edward was already asleep, lol.
When did Emmett get so wise? He made some good observations there and gave fantastic advice.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awww, their date was perfect and Edward got to play the piano. It looks as though Demitri and Irina approve of Edward, just a bit, hahaha. Please let Edward get his memory back soon. I'm sure that when he said it hurts he wasn't just talking about physical pain but also the pain of not being able to remember the time he's spent with Carlisle. Although, when he does remember, he might want to forget certain parts of it again, lol.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Lauren's a silly stubborn girl and she's going to get her heart broken all over again if she doesn't apologise.
I love Carlisle and Edward's date, so perfect. I'm glad that Edward's worked it out for himself that Carlisle had his number before the accident and now he knows that he's stayed in his bed. I'm hoping that sleeping surrounded by Carlisle's scent will trigger his memory.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Okay, I take back what I said about Lauren and maturity. Carlisle's right that Lauren's playing a dangerous game with Edward's memory. She's hurt and she's being very silly and she's only going to be more hurt by playing this game.
Thank God Edward's going to be alright, I don't think Carlisle would have been able to cope if he'd lost him even though it's only been a couple of days they have such a connection which Edward is aware of though he doesn't remember. I'm not sure how right Carlisle was to answer Edward's question but I'm glad he did.
Rose and Emmett have met, hehe, I get the feeling Emmett will be moving in to Edward's room for the foreseeable future.
You're making me giggle with these reviews! Keep 'em coming! And yeah, Lauren's seen an opportunity and is grabbing it, regardless of the outcome. Silly, silly girl.
And bless Emmett - he was long overdue for some love in his life! :)
Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my God! (I'm sensing a theme developing here, lol) What's happened? Edward and Carlisle just, hopefully, got things sorted out. Has Edward been attacked for being gay, even though he says he's not gay?
Lauren surprised me with her maturity over this and how naive she is as well. Lol, I wonder if she'll be having sex when she's 36. I'm sure her Mum will also be glad to hear that she's over the hill and sex is disgusting at her age, hahaha!
Date: 08 Aug 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my God! Trust Lauren to turn up at her Dad's house. I was wondering at the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this how Carlisle would react to the fact that he's unwittingly fallen for his daughter's boyfriend. Whether he would be of the same mind as Edward and want to forget the whole thing or if he'd want see where this new relationship with Edward would lead and risk losing his daughter.
I think the only thing that Lauren can take from this to console herself is that Edward realised he's gay and did the right thing by breaking it off with her. It's going to take time for her to get her head around it all and get over it. I don't think I've said this but, poor Lauren I really do feel sorry for her.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! What an epiphany for Edward and now it's followed by the shock of finding out that his man's daughter is his soon to be ex-girlfriend, oh dear, lol. This is going to be a little awkward, to say the least. I hope Edward doesn't let this stop him from going for what he wants.
I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Hi Jane! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story :)
Date: 06 Jun 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
As a huge J/E fan I wasn't really sure I could read Edward with Carlise. I'm happy to report I was so wrong.These boys are so hot and this chapter was sweet and hot as hell. Thank you for writing such a great story. These boys are so in love I like the way you write that in almost every line!!! Thanks for all the time you take to write. I really enjoy reading it.