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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

I was wondering how they were going to be together. I am off to find your other story  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMGosh!!!!!! So fucking HOT

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, I think I would like that punishment!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

I don't think he will be able to leave her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

She was very responsive to Edward.  I think he will want to take her home with him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

I do not blame Bella.  I would take one day too. HOT Sex with a Hit man.....Yes!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

Sounds like they are going to have some fun. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for letting us know Edward's POV. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad this is fanfiction because she just let a complete stranger spank and fuck her till she was delirious. Lol. But it was definitely HOT!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yummy docward! 

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am by no means in the bdsm lifestyle but hell the way you write almost contemplating shocking the hell outta my hubby! lol

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

Yes love it

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

So hot. Awesome story

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh punish me tell him he can

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hot so hot

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

So good

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome

Reviewer: mamaowl78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really hope there will be a sequel.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Cool!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Dang hotness!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Relentless!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Let the games begin!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Bella you are going to have some fun!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

You are interesting Ed to say the least!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hot!  Bella has all the luck!

Reviewer: bee4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

Fuuck, is it hot in here or what.. ;)

A dominating Edward, oh yeah, I'd love me some of that..sigh..

-Roe-

Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very festive. Good deeds, chance strangers, sparkling undies, naughty behavior & all.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Fantastic... Can't wait for More. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

My my.... How will he leave her?

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh such punishment.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh Edward.... Take her with you when you go home... Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

So she like some pain? Great visuals with your words....

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm sad with Bella that he is leaving.... Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

So happy he made it back before she awoke... Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love you epov. Looked up the Story of O.
Little harsher than what I like o read.... :-)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fun stray to a story! Meg

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

Lovely story:) loved your sweet Elf and the gorgeous doctor:)

Reviewer: gabby98 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

gonna be a great Christmas for both



Author's Response:

Hope you're enjoying on this little adventure :)

thanks for reading,

tb

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

so kink it is

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

ho ho ho

Reviewer: RomanticLover1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

I really liked this story.

I just think it would have been better if you added Jasper and Alice trying to explain to Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and enjoying!  

Maybe at some point I'll do the J/A thing as an outtake :)

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

*squeeeee* Oh God, you got me to effing 'squee'. What have you dont to me, bb?! lol



Author's Response:

Anything I want... bwhahahaha

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

*panting and writhing* No words, baby, no words!

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

I want more!

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

He can't leave! :)

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Green! lol

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

hehehe :)

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

He is so sweet, but a dom at the same time hehehe

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

Kink all the way baby! lol

Reviewer: TrueEnglishRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

*pants* Yep, good as the first time I read it ;)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

the most wonderful ending but the sadest as well - there is just so much for them them to expore.  thanks for this trip down memory lane TB. I loved it and now I'm on to the next one.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow - so intense!



Author's Response:

*tackle hugs you*  you are making my day darlin'!!

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

This was such an emotional chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

Brilliant!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

I loved the way that he esatblished her limits with the time contraints that he has.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

I remember how sad I was when I read that he was leaving in a week :(

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aw, such a cute Santa Dom



Author's Response:

LOL... thanks darlin'!

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my word TB, I've forgotten this story! And I'm having such fun reading it again.



Author's Response:

*claps hands*  yay!!  You've know idea how big that's making me smile!  Thank you...

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great job. I am not ususally a BDSM fan but this was good.



Author's Response:

Yay!  Thank you so much momma2fan!  Thank you for reading and enjoying.

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: Ree10190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

That was really really great, I hope that you continue really really soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks darlin'!   First chapter of the sequel is already up ;)

 

xoxo,

texasbella

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