Date: 17 Jan 2013 1:40 AM Title: Epilogue
Awww, they're married and now so are Jasper and Alice. I have a picture in my head of Bella disco dancing to a slow song........crazy woman, lol. They still can't keep their hands off each other and just about stay the right side of inappropriate. I really loved this, thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much for your reviews! They made my week!
Im glad you liked it!
Date: 16 Jan 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Lol, it's one of your worst nightmares, dinner arriving at the same time as your date, hahahaha!! At least they had a laugh about it and look what it lead on to, stuff the apple pie (one of my favs) we got lemon meringue instead (another one of my favs). Hehe!!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
"sexy black Camaro"
"one hand on the wheel,"
"the other arm resting casually on the open window,"
"totally dominating the road."
OK "hot" doesn't quite do it. Where's that thesaurus?
blistering, scorching, sizzling, fiery, sultry, sweltering, torrid
Your readers may self-combust!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
You said this chapter was hard to write and that you weren't happy with it, but I thought it was perfect. Nice and sexy. I like that kind of dessert! I really love your Edward and Bella, they are sweet and hot too. xo Kelly