Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 44
UGH!!! Cliffie! This story is so good! Hurry...Can't wait 'til next update! :) I want to see Charlie & Jacob get their comeuppance!!!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
please update soon :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 43
Please update soon. This is really hurting my heart because I want B/E together again.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 43
Yeah, just like an abusing bully, hit a pregnant woman so hard she sees stars! Nice black eye, if Seth keeps checking it. Boy, I sure hope Edward believes Seth and comes for his girls. It better be before Jacob gets drunk again and tries raping Bella, he might make it this time!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 42
Charlie and Jake must hate Edward and his family something fierce, because we know it isn't love of Bella driving the bastards! I hope they get to her before she and the baby are harmed!Edward will murder anyone who does that!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 42
SHIT! Fucking Charlie! Fucking Jacob! Please fix this soon...and kill both of those fuckers!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 42
This story is soooooooo good! Very well written. Anxiously awaiting the next chaper!!! I want to see Charlie & Jacob pay! I hope that Bailey or Bella doesn't get harmed!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 41
I knew this was going to happen, I knew it! Now Charlie and Jacob have Bella just where they want her and Edward has no idea where she is! I hope to hell he finds out what's going on and rescues his girls! It may take the whole family, but it will be very satisfying to read about it happening! P.S. Don't let those two hurt the baby!
Author's Response:
thanks for the reviews... I won't hurt let anything happen to the baby.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 40
Now that's the way to usher in the new year! I know things are too good for them right now, so I suppose you are going to send some angst their way! Please don't let anyone hurt Bella or their baby, that would just be awful!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 39
Pink fuzzy handcuffs, leave it to Emmett! What a silly Christmas gift! I think Bella and Edward had a wonderful holiday, especially with getting engaged!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 38
That was a lovely, heartfelt proposal! Even though Emmett sounded half goofy about it, I think he was touched by it, too and probably the rest of the family also!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
It is a shame Bella keeps hearing these nasty things from her dad and now Jacob. The good news is she puts no credence in said words. She better watch that blood pressure, though and so should Edward. I laughed when she told Edward about Emmett and Alice keeping him in line, that was pretty funny!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
Sure as thye world, if Edward lets them go without Felix, something bad will happen. Since Charlie keeps hinting that he has plans against Edward's family, it's inevitable that he'll try something.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh no! her dad is probably going to snatch her up or something.
Thanks for writing...Lisa
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
Despite Rosalie's accusations, this was a very nice Thanksgiving Day for Bella and Edward. The whole family is happy they have found each other and a baby is on the way. These two really are in love , even though it happened so fast.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
Sounds like Edward and Bella both have lots to be thankful for! I like that Edward realizes life is short and you better live while you can. Bella probably knows this too.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
j'aime ton histoire, mes j'ai un problème dès que je traduis en français le texte se met en un seul paragraphe et j'ai du mal a le lire
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 33
At least this chapter didn't have Charlie calling Bella names! It's sweet the way Edward and his family take care of Bella. They are supposed to be the bad guys, but I'm thinking the lines are a little blurred between good and bad, at least in this story.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 32
It's so nice that Edward's family loves and accepts Bella as they do. Too bad her father isn't anywhere near that nice! He will try to mess up all that makes her happy, if he gets an opportunity.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
Bella still hasn't realized how much she means to Edward, what her worth is to him. My God, the man has killed for her! That's pretty much a declaration right there! Now we're off to meet Uncle Aro, I can hardly wait to see what he thinks.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh no. Wonder if they will still go out when her dad finds out?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good to see he came back.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bella seems to have a pretty commonsense attitude toward what happened to Demetri. The dumb shit, trying to lie his way past Edward's fury, didn't help him a bit, he's still dead! I notice Uncle Aro was approving too. This is quite some family Bella has gotten into!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
He really was that dumb, and damned if it wasn't the death of him! Demetri deserved that bullet Bella put in him and I'm glad she defended herself. What a creepy bastard! I sure hope Edward or one of the Cullens gets there pretty quick!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well, Edward's family is happy about the baby, and Bella and Edward are happy. Too bad her father is such a jerk, so he wouldn't be too thrilled. I'm wondering why Demetri is staring at Bella. You don't suppose he would be so stupid as to try something with her? Edward would kill him then!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG nerve wracking
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 29
omg! Please Edward! Come home!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
Every child should be as wanted as this one. Sadly it isn't so. That kind of lumped up my throat, the way Edward was so thrilled and how happy it made Bella. May they stay that way always!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward has got it bad! He is absolutely besotted with Bella and she with him! He wants to be a better man for her, it must be true love! Maybe he can convince Bella she's worthy of his love and care. He's definitely going to make sure she's safe and happy!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loovee this! please update soon! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
This hanging out with Edward deal definitely has it's perks. Never having to worry about being accosted by unwelcome people being one! Felix sure took care of Jacob! Served him right, too! Now Bella will learn, I'm sure, that Edward isn't angry at her, but whoever hurt her!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sorry I've not reviewed before this chapter! I got to going so fast and most were pretty short, I had zipped through before I realized. This is such a different story from most of the fan fics. This Charlie is just unbelievable! I wanted to kill him myself when he called Bella a whore and knocked her into the wall! Edward may not be the only criminal in this story! I'm not real sure about Bella hanging out with a crime family, but they sure treat her better than her asshole father! Plus, Edward seems to love her to distraction. Compared to how Jacob forced himself on Bella, Edward is a prince of a guy! Looking forward to seeing where this plot is going, and seeing the love between Bella and her Edward flourishing.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Edward will make sure everything is taken are of. Kind of makes me wonder what he's doing while Bella and Alice are away
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great to see Edwards point of view.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Bella. Boy, Charlie just messed with the wrong people!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Jun 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like that Bella is not just seeing what Edward does for his living, she is actually seeing the person that he is inside. As for Charlie, I do hope that he will come to his senses and start to treat Bella as an adult but I am not holding out much hope on him. Looking forward to your next update on TWCS! :)