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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 77

thank you for the update.They are really having a GREAT TIME!!!.I like when they spoke with Bailey via skype

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 69

Happy times together and as a family. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 77

:)

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 68

At least Emmett is going to be alright. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 67

Babies grow very quickly. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 66

Honestly and trust are always important elements to a strong marriage.  I was correct when I thought Renee was behind the phone calls. Hopefully she's gone and we won't hear from her anymore. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 65

Happy to see them as a family. Wonder if it was Renee who was hanging up the phone?

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 64

Wow. Bailey might be born on Edwards birthday. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 77

Sounds like a great start to their Italian trip!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 63

Who could it be?

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 62

The baby shower is coming up. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 61

Good to see they talked. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 60

Edward should talk to Bella soon about his work to see what she thinks. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 77

Gah, that was amazing :)  Really loved it so much :D

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 77

wow what a chapter!  they are doing all kinds of kink on this vacation... love it.. can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 59

Good to see that Edward doesn't want any secrets between himself and Bella. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 58

Finally returning home after an eventful trip. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 57

Hopefully nothing bad will happen while Edward is a way. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 56

Such a sweet moment of Edward talking to Bailey. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 55

They had their first official fight. Luckily they made up quickly. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 54

It's good that Edward is healing well. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 53

Charlie won't be nothing them anymore. What a wedding crasher or would it be reception crasher?

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 52

Hormones getting in the way. Great to see they were married without any problems. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 51

Perfect valentines day. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 50

Great to see they decided on a wedding date. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 49

I also believe both of them well be good parents. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 48

Finally some justice. Jacob is gone. All we need is for Charlie to pay. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 47

With Edward there I don't think anything will happen. Good to see Bella stand up for herself and talk to Edward. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

Make them all pay Edward!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 45

Finally safe at last. Jacob and Charlie will pay soon. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 44

Perfect key word. Bella will be coming home soon. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 43

Happy Seth is willing to help Bella get out of there. Hopefully he can convince Edward. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 42

Someone find a lead soon. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh no. Where happened to Edward? Hopefully someone will save Bella and bailey soon. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 40

What a way to bring in the new year. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 39

That was a perfect first Christmas for them together. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 38

Come on Bella. Give him the answer he's waiting for. She doe fit in well with his family. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 37

Relieved to see no real harm came to Bella because of Jacob. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 36

Perfect time to propose on Christmas Eve. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 76

Boy, that's the way of traveling to Italy, by private plane, with a bedroom and discreet attendants! Edward and Bella can't do enough to and for each other!, This trip should be a lot of fun for all concerned!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 76

:)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 76

thank you for the update.This Edward is in Love with his Bella .I'm happy they are getting away..I really didn't think Bella was going to leave Bailey, I thought for sure she was going to beg Edward for her to come and he would have said YES!!! what ever you want baby......I love it........I hope they have a great time and Bella gets to handcuff Edward

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 76

SO amazing :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 76

loved it!  the handcuffs were a nice treat!!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 35

Their dinner ended well. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 34

Can't wait to see how dinner goes with the Cullen family. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 33

Happy to see their baby is healthy and doing well. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 75

thank you for the update..Edward say's yu only have to ask....lol.I hpe they have a great time in Italy and nothing happens to Bailey when there away....until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 75

:)

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 32

I believe you won't mess anything up Edward. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 31

Great way to be received after being gone on a trip. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

He did what he had to to protect them. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 29

Proud to see Bella protect herself. Reinforcements will be there soon. 

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 75

It's odd how Edward is in the mafia, yet the biggest threats seem to come from Bella's parents.

I also expected Jane to have done something by now. Did she give up already?

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 75

If they keep practicing for Italy, and don't use birth control, Bailey could have a sibling before she knows it! Hope Seth's mom and sister aren't in any danger from Billy and Renee's plotting.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 75

please don't let anything happen to Bailey while they are in italy or anything to happen to Bella or Edward.. i would like to see Edward in action and bringg Billy and Renee down....

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 28

Edwards family took the news well. Hopefully demetri won't try anything with Bella.  

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

Extremely happy to see how their relationship has grown. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

Nice data out by the pier. Wonder if Bella is pregnant?  

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

Now that she's back with Edward she will be safe from them. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great to see he's showing her around the house. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good. She will be safe from now on from Charlie. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

Good. She will be safe from now on from Charlie. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh no. At least she was able to escape. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hopefully it's just a bad feeling. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 19

No awkward morning. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great ending for her birthday. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Edwards family have accepted her. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Happy to see her party is going well. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

Don't like Charlie or Jacob. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edwards plans for her birthday sound good. What happened to Bella?

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

Happy to see they are official. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hopefully nothing bad will happen during his trip. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

Good to see Edward was honest about everything related to his work. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Proud to see Bella asked the tough question. Now,  will Edward answer ?

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

Don't let Charlie order you around Bella. Make your own decisions. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh no. He was recognized. I think Charlie is going to have a huge talk with Bella. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great time at the movies. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Good to see dinner went well. For the most part with the waitress. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

 

At least she was able to go without any problems.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 74

I love their love....their bond, their little family which I think is going to be added onto the way they are going at it!
LOL

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 74

If these two can't remember to use a condom, they might as well give up and have another baby. Of course, there's always the option of having Bella use some form of birth control. It ought to be a mutual decision anyway.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 74

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait for them to try out those cards ;)  I hope Bailey likes her presents too!  I also hope that the pictures don't get into the wrong hands.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 74

thank you for the update..............look at all the love they have for one another..I love it........Is bella pregnant again?.....Did bella ever tell Edward what Sue said?...........until you post again

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 74

loved this chapter!  Edward is such the sweetest dad in the world...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 74

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 73

It would be just like Billy to be planning something bad while Edward is out of town. I sure hope Seth doesn't get caught in the crossfire! It would be real nice if the trip to Italy goes off without a hitch!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 73

thank you for the update..........I love your story so much!!!.......Seth good looking out or should I say Sue..lets hope Edward's work is not a set-up and that he is going to be fine....are they pregnant again?.Edward did a oop's

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 73

:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 73

So amazing :)  I really loved it!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 73

please keep them safe... hoping that Edward can get Billy and Renee taken out before they start trouble..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 72

:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 72

SO amazing :D 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 72

If Bella is still that touchy, maybe her hormones are still a little messed up!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 71

Happy, happy birthday, Bella! All that and a trip to Italy, too!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 71

:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 71

SO amazing!  I really loved it SO much!  That lemon was amazing!  

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 71

great chaper... do you know about how many more chapters are left??



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I'm not entirely sure, but as of this posting i am working on chapter 80.

 

My best guess would be at least 100. and then maybe a sequel.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 70

SO amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see the rest of her birthday :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 70

Sounds like Bella is having a great twentieth birthday, and it's only going to get better! Her life sure has changed in the last year, so much for the better.All the difficulties she and Edward have gone through have only made their love stronger.

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