Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 94
SO amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait for more :)
Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 94
It surprised me that Caius offered Edward a position in his organization, especially knowing how Edward feels about that family dynamic! Maybe he thought Edward wasn't serious! There's going to come a reckoning between Edward and Seth soon, also.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 94
thank you for the update..............I hope Edward listens to bella and does not tell that she is pregnant.....Seth needs to watch himself, the boss ain't to happy with him right now
Date: 27 Dec 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 94
excellent chaper... Edward needs to talk to seth about his attraction to Bella soon, before it get out of hand..
Date: 20 Dec 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 93
That was amazing :) I really loved it so much! I really cannot wait for the next part. Two little things, here, you need to put the end quotation mark in the sentence,
"Baby do you want to spend the day out at the zoo tomorrow? I'm sure Bailey would love it.
And when you say, "Your welcome", it should be "You're welcome" since it is "you are welcome", not "your welcome table" or something similar :)
Date: 20 Dec 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 93
With the trip to the zoo, it sounds like a nice family outing. The Cullens are all about family. Probably why Edward doesn't care to be around this Los Angeles bunch. They are totally different that way. Speaking of family, it creeped me out to hear Renee was leaving that message about choosing. That woman is up to no good, I'm sure. Edward is going to have his hands full keeping Bella and Bailey safe, I'm afraid!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 92
I suppose it was inevitable that Edward would run into that bitch, Jane. She's pretty clueless where Mr. Cullen is concerned! He's sure happy Bella is pregnant again, and must have bought the necklace as a celebration. Wonder what she bought him?
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 92
SO amazing! I cannot wait for more :D You are amazing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 92
Jane is a pain in the ass! If she ever grabbed my husband I would be all over her like white on rice. Bella needs to send a message to that one. A BABY!! whoot! that was great news.....looking forward to the next update.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 92
great chapter! can't wait for more!!
Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 92
I love the story...but things are going too smooth. I know something big is going to happen. Will it be Jane or Reene?
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 91
OH WOW...LOVED IT!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 91
They keep that up and it might be difficult to get away from the Four Seasons! Looks like the Cullens are having their children pretty close together. Hope this trip to LosAngeles works out okay for Edward. I think he should watch this L.A. bunch very carefully.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 91
thank you for the update...........what a nice family trip they are having, even if all Bailey gets to do is sleep and play with her new bear...this is mommy & daddy time..........love it ..........well done
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 91
They are just the cutest couple alive!!! can't wait for more!
Date: 08 Dec 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 90
OH WOW, that was amazing! Loved the lemons as always! Wonder who that could be?! Also, is Bella pregnant? LOVED IT!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 90
thank you for the update.....Edward relly knows how to please his woman
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 90
This trip to california may not be a real good idea, if Edward feels anyone has disrespected his Bella. It will be real interesting. I think Bella is pregnant again too, which will be another joy for the both of them! The outing to the park was a nice little interlude, Seth is a good bodyguard, as wellas Bella's friend.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 90
I bet she is pregnant again.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 90
Awww! What a sweet chapter! Thanks for the update
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 59
so glad he told her everything.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 58
how come I don't think this is the last of Jane?
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 53
Well of course Charlie had to ruin the day. Girl you did a number on old Charlie. Jacob has always been unbalanced. This time Bella saw it from the get go.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 52
Ahh well these girls that are all moody and pregnant I don't understand. I never was. My daughter was happy through hers too. Neither of us were all that moody.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 50
My son and his wife married the Saturday after Valentines. Now never do that. Why? Hard as hell to get flowers. But we did it anyway and it was very pretty.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 48
Sad isn't it? None of us cried for this Jacob..
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 46
home but Jacob got in there so something is not secure.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 45
lllllllllllllllllll IN the car and I will feel better.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 44
Finally Seth is getting to Edward. Now get Bella then protect Seth. Kill Jacob.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 42
Now would be the time to plant evidence and get the FBI on Charlie. Then get a hold of Jacob and set him up for Jail or the east river.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 39
Too bad they have to live in the same town as Charlie and Jacob. Or do they?
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am sure there is a Victoria or Kate or Irina Or TANYA out there ready to mess this up. Charlie sure is trying. I think the FBI and planted evidence is good to keep him busy for hurting his daughter. You don't want to kill him.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 30
So that was a drop of a shoe. Well you let us know Dem was bad. So no surprise there. HE was stupid. When do you go after another guys girl especially your boss.. DUH
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yep Edward me too.. What is waiting for her?
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
No father should treat his daughter this way.. Never. You may think things but you don't say them. Then when you are wrong no one knows but you and God.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
At her age she needs a better job and move out from Charlie. This making her date his friends kid is awful.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yes well first and only is what most men want. What they give is experience they have learned from any one will do chicks.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
good job B right to the point. Best plan is straight up and out, cards on the table so to speak.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well Charlie has his view of him.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have absolutly love reading this most amazingly beautifully written story!! This story is truely captivating & intriguing!! I most definatly rate this story as a #10 out of #10!! Thanks 4 all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazing story!! Trust me I understand how much time & effort it takes to write a story. U truely are a talented writer to be able to write one of such length!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I am truly touched by your words.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 89
OH SNAP! I cannot wait to see what else happens next!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 89
Bella better learn to ignore Alice's wilder suggestions! It was nearly a fight between her and Edward, until they made up. The idea of Embry being at the party was a little concerning, they have to be on guard against Billy and Renee at all times now.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 88
I'm kinfd of surprised that Alice would be so unthinking as to do this to Bella and to Edward. Maybe it's the pregnancy hormones, messing with her brain? Whatever the cause, it sure backfired on everybody! I hate those envelopes that have been showing up in their mailbox, too.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 88
I blame Alice for that entire fiasco! She should've known better, on all levels. However, Bella should have never drank alcohol in the first place, considering that there is a possiblility that she might be pregnant.
Renee is one sick bitch, and I hope she's gone, ASAP!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 88
SO amazing :D I really love their costumes ;) They could have a Halloweeen outfit for Bailey :D
Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 87
I get a bad feeling that Bella better start believing that her so-called mother, really would do her harm, if given the chance! She and Billy Black hate Edward so much, they know it would hurt him worse to hurt his wife and child!
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 87
He is so sweet and caring and I just love them together..
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 86
GAH! I love their lemons! I hope they have a baby soon too, but if Renee becomes a problem, I don't want them to have a baby (does that make sense?). I want their next child to arrive safe and sound, without worry from Bella or Edward about their safety. I cannot wait for more :D
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 86
I hope Edward and his family get a hold of Renee and finish off that crazy bitch! To want the death of you own child is just sick, and evil. Sure puts a damper on the good feelings from the Italian trip, to come home to this crap!
Date: 19 Nov 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 86
OMG poor Bella ... Renee is one sick bitch... hope Edward can keep his family safe..
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 85
It's been an amazing trip , this belated honeymoon! They have had a great time, sightseeing and making love everywhere they could! After the Irina incident at dinner, Bella has to have no doubts that Edward desires only her.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 85
GAH, I love their lemons! I am SO happy Edward told off Irina! GO EDWARD!
Date: 15 Nov 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 85
I love how Edward put Irina in her place!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 84
Here's hoping Bella has the right idea and the gelato lady was correct in her prediction. The other one sure played hell with Edward's dreams! That was scary as it could be! His greatest fear is losing his Bella and Bailey, nothing else comes close to frightening him like that!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 84
well I hope that dream doesn't come true at all!! I hope that everyone can stay safe and sound... and that anything that Billy or Renee can come up with, Edward can and will be ready for them!!
Date: 09 Nov 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 83
They're having a wonderful trip through Italy, and the boat just makes it that much better. The only sour note is the old flowerseller's prediction of danger coming for both of them!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 83
GAH, that was amazing! I really loved it! I hope that the "bumps" in their relationship won't last long...I don't deal well with angst.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 82
thank you for the update............What in the world is Renee up to?.Aro my kind of uncle....lol
Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 82
Generous Uncle Aro, I must say! It will be nice to have on the Puget Sound, too. It's a good thing that Seth is watching their house, and the family is providing lots of security while they're away. Trust Renee to be trying to cause trouble, her and Billy!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 81
GAH!!!! YES! Cannot wait for more ;)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 81
wow that was intense! I loved it.. so about how many more chapters will there be??
Author's Response:
not sure. I'm currently working on chapter 98
Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 81
Loved the love on the boat! If those two don't make a baby on this Italian trip, I would be very surprised!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 80
OH wow, that was amazing ;) LOVED the scene in the store :D
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 80
Loved it ! can't wait for more chapters! I just love them two! who wouldn't want to be at leat a little bit spoiled??
Date: 24 Oct 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 80
Just loving their way across Italy, literally and figuratively! This shopping trip was a bunch of fun. Maybe someday Edward will convince Bella of how beautiful she is!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 80
thank you for the update.........they are having a wonderful time on their honeymoon...........Edward is a shopping fool
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 79
Oh wow, SO amazing :) I really loved it! I cannot wait to see that chocolate paint come into play ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 79
I'll bet Vincenzo never calls anyone names again, without thinking of how scary Edward Cullen was!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 78
GAH! Who wouldn't want public sex with Edward?! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 78
This is like the honeymoon they never had a chance to take before Bailey came. The way they are going at it, there may be another baby on the way, soon. It's interesting to watch Edward wield the power of his families' reputation, and quite a revelation for Bella. She's still learning things about her husband, besides how much he loves her.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 78
Hot!!!! Loved it!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 78
OMG that was so hott! Awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 77
Great to see they are enjoying their time in Italy.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 76
Fun times on the plane ride.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 75
Getting closer to their trip.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 74
Great to see Edward is back safe and sound.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 73
Wonder what billy and Renee are planning ?
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 72
Exciting that Alice is going to have a baby.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 71
Wonderful end to her birthday.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 70
The pictures were a wonderful gift. Good to see Emmett is doing better.