Date: 17 Mar 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great day and I think he will have to tell her every day so she will begin to believe it.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 108
Love it update soon
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 25
Jake will be lucky if that is all he gets
Date: 16 Mar 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
He is gone he showed her his fav gun wow
Date: 16 Mar 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow I want a black card lol
Date: 16 Mar 2013 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
sure wouldnt want to be Charlie
Date: 16 Mar 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
Charlie will be lucky to stay alive
Date: 16 Mar 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Kitchen is a good place ;)
Date: 16 Mar 2013 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
she should not go back home I dont think things are going to be good
Date: 16 Mar 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
very nice first time great day
Date: 13 Mar 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
nice she didnt even get a happy birthday from her dad
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
His family loves her
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Charlie needs to kick his own ass and then kick Jacobs what a dick
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Not good what happened
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
she knows what she wants
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
What is he going to by her and did Charlie hear them talking
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
How could she not want to be with him and I am so glad he was honest with her
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
He needs to be honest
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
What is she going to do??? ;)
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
busted I hope Charlie doesnt loss it with Bella
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like fun lol
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Not good Jacob going to tell
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is not good for you Edward
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
perfect timing lol
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I dont think she will mind or not
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jessica is right good
Date: 08 Mar 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 108
I know Hawaii is going to be amazing, but it must be so hard to leave little Bailey for a whole week! Edward will have to watch his worry-quotient over Bella's second pregnancy, or she and Carlisle both will get after him! I'm sure glad their life has calmed down some, now that Renee is dead and the danger level is lower.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 108
thank you for the update.............wow..these two are always having fun...I can't wait for Edward to find out he is having a son!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 108
SO amazing :D I really loved it! Cannot wait to see how she reveals the baby's sex to him :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 107
thank you for the update....I'm happy Alice and the baby are all ok....I can't wait for Hawaii and Edward to find out he is having a boy........well done
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 107
I sure hope Alice is okay! Thanks for the update
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 107
That was amazing! I really loved it! One thing, here, the word "mexican" needs to be capitalized because it is the name of a country (even if it's a description), "Can we go to my favorite mexican place?”
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 107
Pretty scary about Alice, but it turned out well. Guess it helps to have a doctor for a father. Bella sure was happy to have Edward home early, not only for the loving, but to be there for Alice's surgery. That would have been awful if she'd been without his support. Can't wait for Hawaii and the reveal of the baby's sex!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 107
Love this story!!! Great Chapter. Edward is going to be so so happy that they are having a boy. I'm glad Alice and the baby are fine. Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 106
That was amazing :D I am so happy for them! How much longer before we find out what baby number 2 is?
Author's Response:
Very soon, it's actually when they go on their Hawaii vacation
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 106
Love love love this story!!!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 106
That was a really great Valentine's Day Bella planned for them. Edward's right, she has come a long way from the shy girl she was just a year or so ago. They have a great life, great family, and best of all, each other, with no more danger hanging over their happiness.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 106
Great chapter!!! I'm so glad that Edward has moved past what Renee did to him. He and Bella need to have some good luck for awhile. Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 105
SO amazing! I am SO happy they are together (in every sense of the word) again :D I really loved it!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 105
Thank God Bella got her Edward back!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 105
It's nice to see Edward starting to get over the trauma he suffered, and he and Bella reconnect. They're planning romantic things to surprise each other with for Valentines Day and their trip to Hawaii. That is great now the major danger has been removed, permanently, from their lives. Maybe the Cullens can all just relax and be happy as a family.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 105
Awww! Glad they worked through that bit of madness. Can't wait for more, thanks for the update!!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 104
Poor Edward. Hopefully they will keep working in the right direction. Thanks for the update!!
Date: 10 Feb 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for responding. I'm glad that you understand where I was coming from before. I'm sorry if I came across harshly - as I said before, no offense was meant. And you're right...Bella is an annoying twit. Couldn't have said it better myself. LOL And I agree with you 100% that Bella was an annoyance in the books, as well. What was Edward thinking when he picked her? LOL!
Anyway, sorry again for my Simon Cowell moment. However, I wouldn't even bother if I didn't feel that your story wasn't well written, or didn't have potential. Whatever I said or did came from a good place, I assure you. ;)
Jen
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 104
Good chapter. Too bad Edward can't ger Renee out of his head. Bella is trying but Edward can't just shut her out when he gets upset. He would tell Bella the same thing.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 104
SO amazing! I know it is hard for him, but I think he needs to talk with a professional about this.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 104
Looks as if Edward is doubly screwed, by Renee's memory and by his own actions!Bella was being pretty understanding for a while, but something at Alice's shower and Edward's attitude set her off. Wonder where she's taken Bailey?
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 104
I just find it extremely odd that Edward & his family are supposed to be some big, scary mafia family, yet both times when there has been a threat/trouble - shy, timid Bella had to save the day - shooting & killing BOTH of her parents - saving Edward & Emmett the first time, then Edward the second time! Absolutely asinine!
And for them all being "mobsters", I think they are pretty stupid, as well as weak. Letting Edward go alone, regardless of what he said, onto an Indian reservation where they KNEW there was danger was completely ridiculous! Why couldn't Carlisle or Aro have ordered Emmett or Jasper to follow Edward? Why did it take 2 days (or however long it was) of them sitting around with their thumbs up their asses, and for Bella to be the one to go get him?! Why did Edward just charge in there like an idiot, instead of the trained, badass mafia killer that he's supposed to be? I mean, his daughter WAS at stake! Things SHOULD have been handled and thought out much differently...better.
As a parent myself, I DO understand why Edward was irrational, and not thinking clearly at the time...but what I don't get, is WHY Aro, Carlisle, or someone else didn't take charge, over-rule Edward, & handle things right? None of that stupid shit with Renee would've happened, if they had. Maybe then they could've spent some time torturing that sick bitch & her cohorts before they killed them. I was very disappointed - Renee got off far too easily!!!
Now, as it is, they've left Billy, and all of those other idiots on the reservation alive to potentially come back out of the woodwork again at some other point in time to avenge Renee & Jacob's deaths. If you are the mafia, you don't leave potential threats behind that might come back to bite you in the ass later! If you or your family can't or won't do it, then you send in a hit squad, assassin, or some of your cronies, and exterminate the vermin! They "disappear" like Jimmy Hoffa, never to be seen or heard from again.
I also don't think Bella is a very understanding person. She "says" she is, but she's most certainly NOT! She's very selfish...it's always all about her, and her feelings. In a roundabout way, I blame this on her to an extent...it was, after all, HER crazy parents that have caused trouble, and been a thorn in their sides numerous times since day one! I'm not saying that she can help who or what her parents were, I'm just saying that she inadvertently came with quite a bit of baggage, so to speak - and with that baggage comes responsibility and culpability, at least to some degree. Yes, Edward was stupid for putting himself in that position in the first place, but like I said, there wouldn't have been a situation if it weren't for Bella's psychotic mother!
Edward - her husband, and father of her children...a man who has been nothing but wonderful to her, NEEDS her terribly right now. However, she has yet to be there for him in any way. So what, she rescued him - I don't believe even that to be completely altruistic. It was more for herself, if you truly think about it.
Edward has always been so patient, loving, kind, and understanding with and to her...yet when he needs some of the same in return for the first and only time, she's pouting and thinking only about her own spoiled, selfish wants & needs - not to mention the fact that she's a lazy, lousy mother, and a total nympho!
It's sad...Edward really needs her love, understanding, & support right now, so badly...and what does she do? First, she pouts, making it all about her by saying, "Guess I don't turn you on, anymore", and her fake smiles, etc. - her typical pity party, insecure bullshit - which Edward definitely doesn't need to deal with, right now, or in a perfect world, EVER! Then the second time, she storms off, gets in her car, and leaves - essentially running away from Edward and her/their problems! She's so immature, cold, and uncaring...among MANY other things! I just hope my son never brings a nightmare like her home, someday!
From the very beginning of their relationship, she has been nothing but awkward, to say the least, and terribly insecure - him constantly having to assure & reassure her, and fawn over her. I'm sure that gets VERY tiring and annoying. Most men would've probably strangled her, or smacked some sense into her by now, and most likely dumped her whiny, needy, clingy, selfish, dumb ass! But not Edward. During all of this, Edward has ALWAYS been patient, understanding, nurturing, helpful, and supportive of her. But like I said, it's only been a week, and Bella can't seem to do any of that for Edward. :(
It's a shame that Edward always seems to have on these rose colored glasses where Bella is concerned - love will do that to ya! Edward needs to get his head out of his ass, regardless...and Bella needs a foot up her's! Edward has spoiled Bella too much, and now she's full of herself, and entitled. She needs to be taken down a notch, or put in her place, before she ends up behaving like her awful parents! She does unfortunately have their genetics, after all! If Edward can't or won't say something to her, maybe...hopefully his family will!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry if this is how you feel. You are the only one that feels this way. If you don't like it then just stop reading it. Why would you read so many chapters if you don't like how it's turning out.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 104
More please
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 103
Ding ding the bitch is dead!!! Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 103
Poor Edward and Bella. Thank God she had the nerve to kill Renee!!! I know they will be fine when they get thing worked through. Great Chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 103
Happy dance! the bitch is dead! and poor Edward, but they will be fine.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 103
That was AMAZING! I really loved it! Just one thing here,"You haven't ate anything since yesterday." the word "ate" should be "eaten", think about it would you say, 'I haven't ate yet' or 'I haven't eaten yet'?
Date: 04 Feb 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 103
It's so sad that Edward feels like that crap with Renee was his fault! That's the same reaction some rape victims have, and I guess in a way that's what he was. Hopefully it won't take too long for Bella to get those pictures out of her mind. They love each other too much to let nasty Renee ruin their lives! She's gone now, thanks to Bella, she and Edward just need to work their way back to where they were three days ago.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 102
Renee really is a psycho bitch! How the hell two defectives like her and Charlie could have produced a girl like Bella, so sweet and loving, is truly one of life's little mysteries! Poor Edward, if only he hadn't been so off his game as to go in there onhis own!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 102
Holy shit! Renee is one sick mother. Kill her Edward!! sorry I get carried away....lol Let BELLA do it!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 102
That was amazing! I really hope Bella will hurt Renee, PLEASE? If she doesn't, I WILL!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 101
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 101
I just knew this, or something like it was going to happen to Bella and Edward! Now she's hurt, maybe lose the baby, and Seth is shot. I hope Edward kills Renee!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 101
Like I've said before...E&B spend way TOO much time having sex, instead of focusing on their baby, this threat, and doing something about it in order to protect their family. I bet Bella wishes she would've spent more time with her daughter now, instead of lying in the bed, & screwing all of the time!
Is Bella going to lose the baby/pregnancy from her fall?
I don't understand WHY Bella didn't keep her phone with her, especially since she had a bad feeling about Brady?! It's just another example of her irresponsibility.
After she heard the gunshot, WHY didn't she go to Edward's office first - doesn't he keep a gun in there? I thought he did. Wasn't there another phone in the house she could use to call for help first, or an emergency button that she could've pushed on the alarm system? It was really STUPID of her to put herself, the unborn baby, & Bailey in harms way, without thinking of other options first. Hell...lots of things can be used as a weapon - anything would've been better than running downstairs where the danger was, with nothing! Bella never has been the sharpest tool in the shed.
Seth should NOT have been her first priority or concern, as cold as that may sound. She SHOULD'VE been a mother FIRST...went to Bailey's room and locked the door, or took Bailey into a room that she felt was safe, and locked the door until help could arrive, or at least to give her an advantage at protecting them & giving Bailey comfort. Or maybe she could've tried to hide Bailey somewhere. I don't know...but what I do know is that she just isn't a very good mother, at all!
But since she was down there by Seth's body, didn't he have a gun that she could've grabbed?
I also find it a little odd that Seth was shot in the side only. It seems to me that the logical thing for this Brady character to do would've been to just take Seth completely out - shoot him in the head, and leave nothing to chance. I do hope that Seth survives...IF he wasn't in on this, somehow. It is possible though...he is, afterall, from the reservation, and blood is thicker than water...most of the time.
I also wonder WHY, considering how supposedly powerful Edward & his family are, that they have permitted this threat (Renee, Billy, etc.) to continue on for this long, which not surprisingly resulted in this?! I mean, doesn't the mafia make people disappear that they feel is a threat, BEFORE anything can happen? Just doesn't make a lot of sense to me.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 100
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 7th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 97 not 100!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 100
That was amazing :) I am so happy for them, but I really cannot stand Renee, I hope she goes away soon. One little thing...when you say "Your welcome", it should be "You're welcome", since the welcome doesn't belong to you, it means "You are welcome".
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Sometimes i miss that one, most i can fix.. Thanks for not being so harsh. :) Renee will be taken care of soon.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 100
Bella and Edward had a nice, quiet Christmas with Bailey, and then dinner with Aro and Renata. How fabulous that they gave them matching Mercedes! Wow! Nice family time except for that awful note from Renee. How could a woman threaten her own child and grandchildren like that? I just don't understand that depth of hatred!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 100
I understand being in love and lust, and all that implies...truly, I do...but these two have way too much sex! Especially with a baby around. Sometimes it seems like they are almost borderline selfish & neglectful. I would've NEVER left my baby alone as much as they do, and have in the past - i.e. : leaving the baby (A newborn at that) in a swing while they go have shower sex. Anything could happen! But, this is just my opinion...from a mother's perspective. Not to mention that Edward seems to get up with Bailey, and do more for her than Bella does. Thank God that Bailey isn't a fussy baby!
If they didn't have a child, then I'd say go for it - have sex 24/7 if they want, go on vacations, go to parties, etc. . I'm not saying that they should neglect each other just because they have a baby, or quit living their lives - they are lucky that they still have that spark, and people who are willing to help, plus money. I'm just saying that there comes a time when you have to put your own wants & needs aside, even if temporarily - that's when you have children. They become priority #1...they become your focus. It's part of growing up, being mature...being a good parent.
There is also a time & a place for everything, like at night, when the baby is deeply asleep, and safe in her crib - not awake in a swing, or anywhere else! Also, whether or not she's too young to know or understand what they are doing, I could & would never have sex with my baby in the same room, or within earshot/close proximity either, like they did earlier.
I mean, they recently had two weeks to themselves in Italy, plus Esme babysits often...I just think Bella should appreciate all of the "me time" that she has been blessed to have, and start focusing a little more on being a mother, especially since she is going to have another baby soon.
Not to mention that her nut mother is lurking, wanting to cause harm. Geesh! First Charlie, now Renee! Edward sure did marry into a winning family - NOT! E&B both need to become more vigilant in watching Bailey for this fact alone!
This story started out so good...and was for a long time...but now it's just become all sex practically. Don't get me wrong...lemons are great, so long as they don't dominate the plotline/story, taking away from the substance of it. ;)
Date: 25 Jan 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 100
beautiful as always... please keep them safe! I don't want to see Renee or Billy get away with anything!!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 100
I think Renee needs an imprint of a Mercedes on her forehead!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 99
I love this story. I'm just waiting for Renee to strike. They make the perfect couple! I'm having a problem with updates. The chapter updates but the date dose not. I don't know why do you? keep up the good work!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 99
The gifts Edward gave Bella were so personal and meaningful, he really is the perfect husband at Christmas time! By the way, Esme thanking Bella for the gift-certificate was really cute, the way it embarassed her!
Date: 19 Jan 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 99
GAH, that was amazing :)
Date: 18 Jan 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 98
GAH, you are amazing at lemons ;) I cannot wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2013 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 98
It has taken me a week to read ninety-six chapters for starters...
Firstly I love the story line and I love the story. So please, with what I have to say next... dont say that this story might not be for you, I am making this comment to help you as a writer, you can take it on board or you can ignore it. The choice is yours.
Secondly, I am all up for a sex scene here and there and even one ever chapter, but seriously 3 - 4 times a chapter or chapter after chapter, after chapter... it gets a bit much. You are loosing the original story line.
Thirdly after ninety-six chapter, I am sure by now Renee and Billy could have planned what they are going to do ten times over... lets get to the crux of the story already, and you would be there if you were not to focused on them humping each other, we get they love each other, we get they cant keep their hands off each other. Give me depth of character not sex for the sake of filling a chapter.
Lastly, enough with the repeating, I think you have said that every one fears of the Cullens about 50 times... I get it they are a fearful family, you only had to tell me once, I have memory. We know that Edward is unhappy with how the other families live their life, you say every time you write Ciaus or his daughter into it... Once is enough. You are treating your readers as if they are forgetful nitwits... they aren't, they love your story or they would not be reading it, they will remember the facts.
I hope you take my comment for help, not putting your story down. As I said if I did not love it I would not have read 96 chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you like the plot to this story. As for all the sex scence in the story. They are newly wed's, they are suppose not to be able to keep there hands off each other. The reason it has taken so long for Renee and Billy to get there scheme together is because its a well thought out plan. The Cullens are a well respected family and feared. As a reader myself sometimes I forget what has been said at the beginning for the story specailly if they are a really long story chapter wise. I really do value your thought and opionion's and I really hope that you will contiue to read this story after everything is said is over and done with. Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 98
:)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you like it. Your reviews mean a lot to Sher and myself. :)
Date: 17 Jan 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
super comme toujours n
mes dit moi pour quoi sa ne s'affiche pas dans les mots recents
Date: 17 Jan 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 98
Merry Christmas, Edward and Bella! Sounds like the gifts weren't all wrapped in holiday paper, either!
Author's Response:
Thabk you for the review. It means a lot to Sher and myself. :)
Date: 16 Jan 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 93
Great story read all 90chapter in one go couldn't put it ddown don't change anything I love all the sex it's good for the heart
Date: 13 Jan 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 97
Blood-smeared baby booties? That's just all kinds of gross! I wonder if this isn't about to get out of hand, and pretty soon? Seems as if every time you think things have settled down, some other crap pops up!
Author's Response:
I really do value you your thought and opionion's and I really hope that you will contiue to read this story after everything is said is over and done with. Thank you for your review.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 97
SO AMAZING! That baby bootie thing SCARED ME! I cannot wait for whoever it is that sent it to be caught!
Author's Response:
I really do value you your thought and opionion's and I really hope that you will contiue to read this story after everything is said is over and done with. Thank you for your review.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 96
That was amazing! I am so happy for them. I know having a sick baby isn't fun, but it's a part of life. Anyway, one little mistake, here. I think you meant "adding", instead of "added", here, "I loved added the chocolate chips"
Date: 06 Jan 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 96
It figures that trouble will rear it's ugly head, just because all the Cullens are pretty happy. All the new babies on the way will make the coming new year a busy one. Edward is going to really keep watch that nobody harms his family, noe that Seth and Aro have been to warn him. The scare with Bailey kind of made me smile. It's always so much more painful when your children are sick, much more than when it's you!
Date: 06 Jan 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 96
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more
Date: 06 Jan 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 96
I just love this story!! I just hate Renee...I can't wait for Edward to get ahold of her. I like that you have made this family so close and protective of all their family memebers. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 95
OH wow, that was great :D
Date: 31 Dec 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 95
I really like the tradition of everyone saying what they are thankful for around the dinner table. It never hurts any of us to remember our blessings all through the year. Speaking of which, you guys have a real good 2013! I like the fact that Edward is trying to control his quick temper, and that Seth dodged another bullet, by simply telling the truth.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 95
thank you for the update...............will Edward ever learn?.....although he's been dying to speak with Seth aboujt how he looks at Bella any way......until you post again
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 95
Thanks for the update and Happy New Year!!
Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 95
great chapter... so is Seth telling the truth or what????
Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 95
I'm glad Seth and Edward got things straighten out. I love that Bella can hold her own with Edward. Its kinda funny how he bows down to her...but would kill anyone else who would speak to him like that. LOL