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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 67

making out on the couch are so cute.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 66

ewww  E needs a decontamination chamber.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 65

yey baby!!!!   Ugh Renee is a real skank.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 64

ugh Jane just had to come and be a bitch.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 63

Ugh  Lauren just has to cause trouble.  Glad Heidi put her in her place.   hmm  hangups huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 62

glad she talked to esme.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 61

they are too cute together. Glad the baby is doing ok.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 60

oh Alice...you really are trying b's patience.

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Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 59

Glad he told her everything.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 58

glad the meetings went well.   Slutty Janey is so pathetic.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 57

rofl for not using the directions.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 56

sweet chapter.  nice lunch and day at the museum

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 55

aww first really big fight

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 54

Glad e is doing ok.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 53

CHarlie got off easy.   Jerk

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 52

yey they are married.  LOL for B overreacting at heidi

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 51

what a wonderful day

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 50

Vday plans sound great.    yey for marriage.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 49

Glad B is cool with what he did.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 48

Jacob really is a moron.... showing up at E's again?   Buh Bye Dog!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 47

poor thing will probably have flashbacks and nightmares for awhile.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 46

So glad seth was there for her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 45

So glad seth is helping her.    Charlie and Jake need to be tortured painfully.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 44

Poor E.  He must be going CooCoo.   Glad Seth called.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 43

Glad Seth is going to try and help her. Hope he doesnt get hurt.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 42

oh Charlie...you really want to die dont you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 41

How did Jake get into the house!!!     GRRR   Time for Charlie and Jake to DIE

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 40

Ugh  Skankya just had to be there.  SIgh.  yummy end though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 39

wonderful Christmas.    Go Domella   hee hee

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 38

awww sweet proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

Jake and Charlie really need to disappear or something soon.  Poor B.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 36

Charlie really needs to be dealt with.  ugh

oh no.  I dont like her going off alone, even with Alice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 35

Rose is so annoying sometimes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 34

go Baker Bella!!!   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 33

glad baby is doing ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

Charlie needs to be taken care of thats for sure.  Dickhead.

YEY for Aro and Renata

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 31

first time daddies tend to worry about hurting babies.  LOL

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

Glad Aro didnt get pissed at him.   Go B protecting herself and E too.  Stupid Demetri.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad B remembere the gun.   Grr Stupid Demetri

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 28

hope Demetri doesnt try anything. stupid

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

awww a baby

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

glad he listened to felix and didnt take it out on him. 

 

Awww for bracelets.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yey for Felix being there for her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Glad he is taking care of her.   Quitting job is prob very smart

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

ALice is a scary shopper.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 22

Gad the boys are taking good care of her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

oh Charlie....you've done it now.   Arse.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

yummy morning.    I dont want her going back there either

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 19

they are too cute together

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 18

Woo hoo great way to end a birthday.   Happy Lemon Dance.

 

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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

nice presents

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

his family seems really nice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

he needs to get B out of that house before Jake hurts her bad or rapes her....or tries too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

aww nice present.   uh oh for ending. Wonder what daddykins did?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh Jake....you are a moron.   Charlie is just pushing B away.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

The Motor City.   glad he told her he had to leave though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11

glad he was honest with her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

dun dun dun.  she gets right to the hard questions huh

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh Daddykins..... you are gonna lose her yelling like that

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

awww sweet.  Wonder if daddy will read her the riot act.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

awww first kiss

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

nice first date.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

ah E and J are aquainted.   Glad Charlie is being cool for now at least

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

ah so Daddy knows E.   This ought to be good.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

aww he came back already. too cute

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

awww E is smitten already

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

cute start

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

They have experienced so much abusive and criminal behavior in the last year. They probably should have picked a different role play. This one was a little too close to reality. Role playing is suppose to be fun and not like real life. Unfortunately their real life had some real sucky moments. Hopefully the next year will be much less dramatic. It is a good thing their love is so strong.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 110

THAT was amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next, especially how Edward will react to learning about the baby :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 110

Kind of makes a person wish to be in Hawaii! Aside from missing their darling little girl, this is going to be a lovely anniversary present  to themselves.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love all the sexing and their relationship. Thanks!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 110

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 51

Wow what a day :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 50

Sounds perfect

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 49

She took that very well I hope she wants Charlie dead he doenst deserve to breath the same air as her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 48

That was a good job but I think he should of suffered more no matter glad he is gone

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 47

That is the kind of day I would like to have other than the being scared shitless that the asshole was going to try and get me again lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 46

Now they are both compleate 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 45

I love Seth what a good kid.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank god the man is going crazy so much pain so sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 43

Seth is my hero what a good boy.  Jacob needs to die slowly

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 42

Better not be long before they find her and kill Jacob and Charlie

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 41

I cant believe that they will be alive much longer once Edward gets ahold of them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 40

nice way to bring in the new year ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 39

Best Christmas ever ever ever lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 38

suprise he even suprised himself I think how sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 37

Jacob is luck he is alive or at least not missing an arm.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 36

What kind of evil shit does Charlie have on his mind.??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2013 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 35

I think she has proved herself.  The only one she needs is Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2013 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 34

she was good enough to eat lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 33

things are going the way they should

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 109

SO amazing :)  I cannot wait for the next one!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 109

Even on thi vacation trip. the threat of danger always lays over Edward and Bella. I guess that's never going to change! At least they will have some time alone in Hawaii.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 109

:) loved this

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 32

Charlie is a prick and needs his ass kicked.  Aro and Renata are very nice and love her like family 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 31

he was waiting for her so he didnt freak her out what a sweet guy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

She meant what she said she is not going anywhere she loves him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 29

If she didnt kill him Edward will.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 28

I dont like him or trust him Edward will have to end him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 27

so happy a baby

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