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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 75

working on another baby

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 115

Sadly, this sounds like the wonderful anniversary gift trip is coming to an end. They will be back home soon,and back in the middle of danger! I just want to see Bella and Edward safe and happy and with those four children  they both want!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 74

playing cards fun stuff

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 115

yummy chapter.  hope they get billy and aro before something happens to bella

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 115

LOVE this, always look forward to an update. Thanks

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 115

:-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 73

What is Billy planing

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 115

If Bella wants to hear the news, she needs to be strong enough to handle it. She needs to be mad at the enemy, not weepy with Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 72

He did a good job of getting out of the doghouse

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 115

:)

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 110

Sisters you both are amazing!!  I am so excited for a sequel!!  Can't wait!!   Love you both!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 93

I personally love all the sex!!  LOL! True they are insatiable...I just wish I had a man like that but I guess at my age I can only dream!!  Thanks for a wonderful story & I hope Renee gets what is coming to her!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 71

That was nice very nice lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 70

Rose has a heart I am glad Emmett is feeling better.  I like his plans ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 114

SO amazing!  I cannot wait to see what they name him!

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 114

Thanks for the update. I sure hope we get to the bottom of this sabotage without too many casualties.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 114

great time at the aquarium and all.   They are so cute together.  Glad Aro is ok

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 114

Sounds like I would love the aquarium they went to! What a lot of fun Bella and Edward have exploring things together. It was a nice respite from the worry caused by the news of the warehouse and attempt on Aro's life! Looks like someone, Caius or Billy , is ramping up the threat levels! Of course the first thing that they worry about is Bailey and the rest of the family!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 114

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 69

thank goodness Emmett is going to be ok and they can get there grove on again lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 68

Poor Emmett they where set up for a hit now they need to get them.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 67

it is good that they relived the tention lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 66

Renee is an evil skank and should be dead.  I am glad he told her what is going on.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 65

Sweet little baby love her.  Bella's mom evil dont like her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 64

He is getting one hell of a birthday present :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 63

Not good getting all the hang ups who is calling.  I hope it was not his mom lol

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 113

aww showed them lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 62

What was she going to do just keep Bailey in there lol.  poor girl I am glad Esme helped put her mind at ease

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 61

They are making my teeth hurt lol.

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

Dundun Jacob really?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 113

Bella's whininess would get on my nerve's. She may need a therapist to work on her self-esteem. Edward can't tell or show her more how much he loves her. She just refuses to believe him for long. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 113

thank you for the update.....Bella needs to have that baby soon....I'm sure he'll look just likw his dad......................

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 113

love it

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 113

Bella still has her moments of self-doubt which may never completely go away. Their time in Hawaii sure has been like a honeymoon, even if they're awaiting their second child. Some couples are lucky that way and some let the spark die!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 113

sweet and yummy chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 113

:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 113

That was amazing :D  I love them!  I cannot wait to see what they name this baby :D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 60

I think Alice gets it now no pink lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 59

He is a good man and very brave telling his pregnant wife about him and naked woman lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 58

He isagood man. Jane is a whore

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 57

Poor Emmett getting kicked out lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 56

They are so cute and loving

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 112

SO amazing :D

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 112

Bella needs to get some self confidence. How many times must Edward tell her that he thinks she is the most beautiful woman in the world? His opinion is the only one that counts. She needs to believe him and get over her past. She is loved by a new family. She should count her blessings and stop fishing for compliments. He tells her daily that he loves her and that she is beautiful. Why does she need more than that? Edward is not going to lie to her. This weakness is unbecoming.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 55

Thank goodness that is fixed I dont think she should feel bad about killing that bastard either he deserved it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 54

they still have goood times

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 53

She is a bad ass and I am so glad she took out that bastard she called a father.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 112

I'm getting bad feelings from Bella's nightmare! I sure hope that it's not an omen of things to come! She and Edward are having such a nice time in Hawaii, it's spooky that she has a dream of him dying in her arms, covered in blood! It would be a crying shame to take him from her and their children!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 112

thank you for the update..I hope everything will be ok for them.....I know that women it Italy told them something would happen...I hoping that it dosen't........Edward & Bella gave those girls a show....well done.........until you post again

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 112

great chapter. prego dreams suck.   lol for plastic biatches.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 112

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 111

Temperature play can be so much fun.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 52

Alice is lucky to be alive messing with a pregers lol

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 111

GAH!!!  I really loved this chapter!  I don't know if I'll be able to look at shaved ice the same way again ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 111

That was one fabulous anniversary present! What a perfect day, hotair ballon ride, helcopter over the volcano, shopping and dinner , once the waiter was dismissed. I'll never look at shaved ice quite the same way ever again, either!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 111

great vacation time.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 111

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 110

yummy vaca time



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter. It was such an awesome surprise to see all the reviews you left. :)
I have loved this story from the get go and we are currently in the winding down stage, but there is quite a bit more to come.. and there will be a sequel... hope you enjoy all  that is left and will come back for the sequel as well as reading our other stories.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 109

great start to the vaca.  Ugh now Caius has to start something with Aro.   Jeez

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 108

Glad Alice and Carlie are doing ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 107

lol for prego hormones making her nutty again.    Aww poor Alice

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 106

Great vday

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 105

Glad they talked things through

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 104

oh Bella running is not the answer.  Give the man time.  Can understand his frustration thats for sure

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 103

Glad Renee is dead.  Now they need to kill all her accomplices.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 102

Hope Renee and all her pussy rez boys die.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 101

grrrr Hope someone kills that bitch and brady too.    grrr

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 100

Renee needs to take a long walk of a short pier. soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 99

lol for esme embarrising them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 98

yummy chapter.   calm before the storm I bet

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 97

Glad baby is doing well.   Kids with infections are so hard to bear sometimes.   Renee is one really sicko biatch

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 96

Glad Seth is on their side.   Ugh Renee is prob working with Jane and others.   Cant wait for her to die.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 95

Seth does need to be careful.  Get him a real girlfriend soon.  lOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 94

hmmm wonder if Caius and Jane are going to help psychomom out?

Seth needs to be careful of protective E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 93

Great family time at the zoo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 92

Jane is one pathetic whore.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 91

great start to thier little trip

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 90

glad they had some fun time in the park.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 89

Silly drunky B.    

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 88

Alice was really trying to start trouble with the outfit.

Renee is one sick biatch

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 87

yummy food play

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 86

Buh Bye Paul.   Hope Renee dies painfully.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 85

Great date till the whore of a waitress.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 84

yummy play time.   Ugh  crappy dream.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 83

great honeymoon day.  I could go for some Gelato.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 82

Hope renee gets run over with a bus.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 81

Wonderful boat trip.  great surprise.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 80

wonderful day.  Great shopping trip

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 79

another chocolate factory huh?   yummy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 78

yummy yummy yummy!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 77

yummy play time on vacation

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 76

yummy plane time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 75

yummy play time.   Seth is such a great asset.  Hope Sue and Leah will be ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 74

glad E got some cool presents.  Such a great daddy

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Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 73

Glad Sue called to warn them.     Great day with Alice.

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Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 72

lol for doghouse boy.   Yey for Alice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 71

great end to birthday

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 70

wonderful start to birthday day

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 69

Sweet mom and dad time and baby snuggle time at the end.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 68

Poor em.   Sounds like Billy really wants to die.

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