Date: 06 Jul 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 125
yummy chapter. They are so sweet together. Glad Rose and B got to talk some.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 125
thank you for the update...Greyson is on his way.........lets hope nothings happen to him or his mother....I wonder what the fall out is going to me over Billy's death?
Date: 05 Jul 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 125
Love the story. Bring on baby
Date: 05 Jul 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 125
Bella sure is calm about Grayson's imminent arrival! I guess she doesn't wan't to be a bother, which is very like her. Hope they don't get caught at home with a baby in a hurry!
Date: 05 Jul 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 125
That was amazing! Just one thing, here, "I didn't think nothing about it." you have a double negative. That is something you don't want to have. You can change it to "I didn't think anything about it."
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 124
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 03 Jul 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 124
Bella is going to be mad, but glad that he is safe.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 124
Glad billy is dead at least. Grrr of course the V are still out there though. Hope B is just having normal prego stuff.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 124
OH MY GOSH!!! That was intense and amazing :)
Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 124
There's another prioblem solved. Too bad he didn't tell what he knew before Edward killed him! So, Caius is still to be dealt with, hopefully before Bella delivers Grayson. She will have a hissy fit over the bullet graze on Edward's arm as it is!
Date: 26 Jun 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 123
yummy play time. Hope seth is ok
Date: 26 Jun 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 122
sweet chapter. Hope Caius take s a long time to figure things out....but I know he wont. LOL
Date: 23 Jun 2013 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 123
Seth was too calm about that.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 123
Hope this double agent thing works okay for Seth and the Cullens! It would be so sad if something happened to Seth, he's been such a friend to Bella and so loyal to Edward! Sounds like Rose and Emmett are on the mend and will be home soon.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 108
Bella is so sweet and want to make sure everyone is ok around her.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 107
Thank goodness Alice and baby are good. I am so happy Edward got back earlier than he had planed.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 106
Wow what a great date I would love to do the ballon ride.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 122
THAT WAS SO HOT! THANK YOU!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 122
SO amazing :) Cannot wait to meet Grayson!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 122
Good thing Aro has more security for Edward's family, as Caius will be after him now the boats are blown up! I worry what that evil troll will come up with to revenge himself against Edward!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 122
Loved the impromptu photo shoot!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 121
That was amazing :) I cannot wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 105
They are happy and health that is what counts
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 121
yummy chapter. Aro is stupid to ignore E that way.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 120
Glad B is ok and that Rose apologized.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 104
Shit has hit the fan he needs to ease up on himself.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 103
Poor guy he is so guilty because he got hard he is a man his dick had a mind of its own when it went in the warm mouth.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 102
Bella to the resuce please kill your mother now.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 101
Please tell me Edward is going to get there before they take the baby please kill Renee slowly and very painfuly
Date: 14 Jun 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 100
It was good Aro was there when the note from Renee showed up.
Date: 13 Jun 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 121
Aro knows his nephew inside out, doesn't he? Threaten his family, sting his pride and Edward's on fire for revenge. He would do well to pay attention to Bella's fears and bad feelings! I have a bad feeling myself, that this marina thing isn't going to turn out well!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 121
oh god what a place to leave the story.....damn....i want more pls....i love ur imagination and twists.....excited to see what is next......damn don't need to ask for more lemons.....hehehe...love it.....
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 121
thank you for the update...........Edward needs to calm down..I prey everything is going to be ok. they could be setting him up, maybe the man are just hideing....anyway Edward better come home in one piece..I hope he also calls Aro like he should..........we will see when you update again...........until next time
Date: 13 Jun 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 121
Bailey was only cruising, so Edward did not miss her real first steps. Edward has a job to do and Bella needs to let him do it. She knew what he did when they met. She knew there was danger involved, but Edward is smart. She has to let him be a man. She can't get all pouty when things don't go her way. She has hardly let him work since they met.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 120
Tha was amazing! One little thing, here, is a double negative, which is something you should not have, "You can't tell me nothing,"
Date: 08 Jun 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 99
what a great Christmas
Date: 07 Jun 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 120
Thankfully, both Bella and Grayson were okay and Edward, too. Poor Felix will be out of commission for a while. Now they know for sure it's Caius out to get them, so they can counter-attack. Edward will enjoy that, he's so ticked that his family has been hurt, revenge will be his first priority. I liked that Rose apologized and made up with Bella. I just want them all safe, or as safe as a mob family can be!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 119
i'm still loving your story but i fear i wont get to finish it i'm so sick with cancer but good luck
Author's Response:
I'm really sorry to hear that you are sick. My mom passed away from cancer about two years ago. I truly have no words, I will keep you in my prayers.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 97
Renee is evil what baby is she going to try to hurt??
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 96
Never good when your baby is sick. What evil is Renee going to do and why are they not going after her a kill her???
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 95
She is going to kick his butt if he keeps talking to her like that lol
Date: 02 Jun 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 94
I Love how much in Love these two are That is why they are doing it all the time lol. I think those who have a problem with it is because the aren't getting any lol
Date: 02 Jun 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 119
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One little thing, reread this sentence, ""I can wait to fuck you baby, I know how much you love it," he said as he pulled at the tie of my robe." It doesn't sound right for Edward to say "I can wait to fuck you, baby", instead of "I can't wait..."
Date: 02 Jun 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 119
Omg,how u can end her,i hope she loose not her child,please dond do that
Date: 02 Jun 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 119
No please keep them safe!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 119
Shame on you leaving us with this cliff-hanger! I sure hope Bella and the baby are okay and help comes in time! Things are getting too dangerous for them to be running around town by themselves! If there is some shadow player behind the scenes, my money is on Caius, like Bella said. I never did trust him, but I do trust Bella's intuition. Hurry the next chapter, please so they can be safe and back with their little girl!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 119
Wow the scum are getting really desperate.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 119
Love the angst!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 119
Oh, man. Cliffhanger. Good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 119
I was ready to send you some love but with a cliffie like that, I'm not feeling it, lol. If you really want to redeem yourself, which I'm sure you do, you must update very, very soon!!!
Date: 30 May 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 93
My mom was terified of snakes and it is because her twin sister put one down her dress when she was younger it was one of them dresses that was very tight around the waist so she could not get it out. I guess by the time she got home she had riped her dress off. My mom could not even look at one on tv.
Date: 30 May 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 92
Jane is an evil bitch someone should but a bullet between her eyes.. What did Bella get for him???
Date: 27 May 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 91
Great get away it is amazing that she can walk lol
Date: 27 May 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 90
i get freaked out when they go out
Date: 27 May 2013 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 89
Bella was a bad girl and he likes it when they are alone
Date: 27 May 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 88
She is to sexy lol poor Edward
Date: 27 May 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 87
it is good that he tells her everything. fun with good ;)
Date: 27 May 2013 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 86
wow her mom wants her dead Renee is a s sick bitch That needs to die
Date: 26 May 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 118
That was wonderful :) I LOVED IT!
Date: 25 May 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 85
That whore is lucky she is still alive
Date: 25 May 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 84
That is so scarry
Date: 25 May 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 118
Though it hurt her feelings, Bella understands why Rosalie acted the way she did. The pain of losing her unborn child, added to seeing Emmett hurt so bad , has to just be tearing at her heart! Sure sets Edward off to have anyone disrespect his Bella! It was a little sad when Carlisle heard his grandson would be named for Aro, and not him! I hope Bella and Edward tell him that they've added his name too!
Date: 25 May 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 118
Can understand rose's feelings but she's going to regret yelling at B. Yummy trip home!!!
Date: 25 May 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 118
Thank u so much for the wonderfull long amazing hot Chapter,
was litle bit sad to,but still awesome :)
Date: 21 May 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 83
i think both predictions are correct
Date: 21 May 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 81
That was intence I hope she understands how much he loves her now
Date: 21 May 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 80
wow what a day great shoping and he made good on the promise of the field ;)
Date: 18 May 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 117
That was amazing! Poor Rose! I cannot wait for more! One little thing, the word "have", here, ""I.. I just feel uncomfortable about us have sex at your parents house," I said softly as I looked down." Should be "having", not "have".
Date: 18 May 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 117
It's almost like Bella is a bit psychic, she felt something bad was going to happen and it did! Emmett and Jasper could have been killed in that warehouse explosion and that in turn led to Rosalie losing her baby! Edward must be really on edge to take it out on Bella, as if she cut herself on purpose! It's a hell of a way to end their wonderful Hawaiian vacation!
Date: 17 May 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 117
Edward did not have a bad attitude. Bella was down playing the cut and Edward was telling his Dad that it was deep. It needed more than butterflies. Bella acts all wimpy, until she wants to yell at Edward for something, then she acts tough. Edward was worried about all of the blood loss, plus Bella often faints. They also had a tough morning. Bella could have cut him some slack. He is a much better person than she is. He needs to stop apologizing to her. He loves her and she should count her blessings.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 117
What a mess to come home to. And poor Rose and Emmett, I cannot imagine it.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 May 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 117
oh my poor Rose...and the boys too.
Date: 17 May 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 91
I started reading this story a few days ago. Now I want to say I am enjoying the story however as much as I enjoy lemons in a story I think that sometimes you can have too much of a good thing. They are hot but for me I just start to get into the story and then BAM they're going at it again. LOL...Just my opinion and I'm still reading so I hope I didn't offend.
Mary Alice
Date: 16 May 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 79
wants some candy Yes Yes Yes lol
Date: 13 May 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 116
As much as they are enjoying their vacation, the trouble at home is starting to wear on them. They are away from their baby and even though they know she is being taken care of wonderfully, they worry. It is time to head home and face the situation. Edward loves his family so much, but he needs to get this worked out before the next little one is born. He needs them to feel safe in their own home. It won't happen until he deals with the problem head on.
Date: 13 May 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 116
That was amazing :)
Date: 12 May 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 116
great chapter. Glad they had a nice day
Date: 11 May 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 116
This sounded like a perfect sight-seeing day , even the snakes in the zoo. The photos with the tiger cub would have been so cute! They are worried about safety issues back home, so it's smart to stay at his folks. There has to be someone betraying their trustor the breaches at their house wouldn't be happening!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 116
Another great chapter. I am anxious as to what is waiting for them at home. Glad Bella agreed to moving into the house with the rest of the family. Safer for all I think.
Looking forward to the next! thank you
Date: 11 May 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 77
That is one way to start a great vacation handcuffs yummy lol
Date: 10 May 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 76
That had to be so hard to leave the baby but fun times on the plane
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 115
WELL IT SOUNDS LIKE BILLY WANTS TO HURT BELLA BUT I KEEP REMEMBERING BELLA'S DREAM WHERE EDWARD GOT SHOT IS THAT GOING TO HAPPEN IS HE GOING TO DIE SAVING HIS BELLA?
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 114
please tell me this story is a HEA it would just kill me if edward dies in this story
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 101
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ANSWERING MY QUESTION ABOUT THE FBI I DO WISH MORE WOULD COME OUT ABOUT HOW BELLA'S MOTHER COULD WANT BELLA TO BE WITH JAKE THAT WOULD MAKE THEM BROTHER AND SISTER THATS SICK. OR DID I MISS SOMETHING?
Author's Response:
Bella's father wanted her with Jake, he never knew that Jake was renee's son.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 97
i have a question something that has been bothering me for sometime now why can't the cullen family call the FBI for help i mean bella's mother wants bella dead the FBI'S job is to stop that shit right i know they are a mob family so what they still have rights.
Author's Response:
i never really thought of involving the feds, i really just think that the Cullen's want to take cre of their own stuff. they don't really trust the fbi.. or other institutions like them.
Date: 04 May 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 115
That was AMAZING :D