Date: 09 Apr 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 120
seems very cold and self-centerd of edward and bella to be worried more about bella's feelings than the fact that rose and emmett lost their baby
Edward does have his self centered, cold moments. It is alluded to in some chapters that before Bella came along that he was a different man, cold hearted and rough around the edges. Thank you for reading nad I hope that you are enjoying it.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 135
wow super cool story ;) there were a couple of things though in one chapter it mentioned that bailey had brown eyes when they were green all the time before? and hiedi is edwards cousin when aro and renata didn't have kids? and jake was bellas brother? anyway i'm looking forward to the sequel and more kids ;D
Date: 03 Jun 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 94
Bella is still so immature. So many things she says and does. I never disagree with hubby in front of associates or let them know how I really feel. Edward is always apologizing when really he does nothing wrong. Maybe I'M biased. Seth...smh..
Date: 09 Aug 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 135
thank you for a wonderful story....They will find out who killed Aro.Edward and Bella will have another child.............one could only hope that Alice is going to be ok, and it's not because of her that Aro got killed at his birthday party
Date: 08 Aug 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 135
Congrats on the ending. ;) As for the sequel, will we be notified, or will we just have to watch for it?
Thank You!!! :)
I'm not sure how to do notifications, but i'd just look for it.. or if you are on facebook, we have a group. Lost Twi Sisters fanfiction.. we'll announce it there too.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 135
Here we are at the end of this one, and I'm looking forward to the next step in their lives. Things are going to be different with Edward as head of the family and it will put pressure on him and Bella and their relationship. Hope to see you soon, thanks again for a really good read!
Date: 08 Aug 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 135
Loved the story!!! Sorry that it is ending. It was a great story. I think that Edward and Bella will take over for Aro and things will run smooth for them.. Bella will help Edward see things in a different way...like she does now. Thanks for the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 134
This was such a sad chapter. This is the only story that I can think of that I actually liked Aro. He was a good man and did not deserve to be killed at his party. I wonder if Alice in her crazy state was involved the enemy.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 134
Never expected Aro's death. Whoa. Alice seriously needs help she is delusional,so I agreed with Aro's decision. He was the only one who could take charge of her it seems.
Looking forward to reading how Edward takes over the business
Date: 04 Aug 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 134
A VERY SAD CHAPTER I'M SORRY TO SEE ARO GO IN YOU STORY HE WAS OK I DIDN'T HATE HIM IN THIS STORY LIKE SO MANY OTHERS HE WAS A VERY BAD PERSON. I HOPE EDWARD WILL BE OK TAKING OVER THE HEAD OF THE FAMILY AND RUNNING EVERYTHING ARO DID.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 134
How devestating for the family to lose Aro, poor Renata! The burdens of leadership will fall to Edward before he thinks he's ready. I bet he's more than able to assume the role of boss, it will come naturally to him. With Bella's smarts and common sense, it shouldn't even be that difficult!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 133
Between you telling us that tissues would be neccessary for the next chapters, and the last sentence Bella felt good about everything makes me afraid! If you have plans to hurt Bella, Edward or their children, the villagers will be coming for you with pitchforks and torches!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 133
They need to have an intervention with Alice ASAP!! She's a walking train wreck!! She's gotten so out of control. Plus when you add jealousy on top of post-partum depression and not taking her meds and she's headed for major problems. She's definitely not the Alice from earlier in the story.
I'm on pine and needles waiting for someone to make a move! I can't wait for the next chapter. Per your advice, I have the box of Kleenex on standby.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 132
I love the way Edward is with his babies, caring about and for them. He is a great father, as well as a fabulous husband and lover! The only thing disturbing about this chapter is the nagging feeling that Aro's party is going to be the means for Caius to attack. That nightmare Edward had, seeing Bella in a pool of blood gives me the creeps! Hope it's not an omen of things to come!