[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 86
Well thank goodness we are back to some plot I was about to give up even though I started out loving it, Your sex scenes are so boring and repetive, I hope your real live sex is better.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2021 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 86
Well thank goodness we are back to some plot I was about to give up even though I started out loving it, Your sex scenes are so boring and repetive, I hope your real live sex is better.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2021 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 86
Well thank goodness we are back to some plot I was about to give up even though I started out loving it, Your sex scenes are so boring and repetive, I hope your real live sex is better.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2021 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 86
I started out loving it and then it became all about sex, boring and repetitive sex. I hope your real sex life is better. I was just about ready to quit the story but now there is a glimmer of plat on the horizon so we will see.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 86
I started out loving it and then it became all about sex, boring and repetitive sex. I hope your real sex life is better. I was just about ready to quit the story but now there is a glimmer of plat on the horizon so we will see.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2021 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 79
same old sex is getting a little boring but I do like the story
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2021 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 79
I love the story but the sex is kinda boring he fuck her as hard a he can and she gsts to taste herself. Need something new different kinkier etc
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2021 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 79
I love the story but the sex is kinda boring he fuck her as hard a he can and she gsts to taste herself. Need something new different kinkier etc
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 46
time to get them married so she will be more protected
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2021 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 41
well finally some drama
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2021 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 41
well finally some drama
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2021 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
he seems a little immature but I love all Edwards
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2021 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
small chapters but being it is complete I don't mind...lol
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 14 Nov 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 134
Thank you for sharing your story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I needed a smile so I decided to re~read a favorite of mine : )
Author's Response:
awesome.. thanks its nice to hear that this story makes someone smile.
and that its a favorite of yours
Date: 09 Apr 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 120
seems very cold and self-centerd of edward and bella to be worried more about bella's feelings than the fact that rose and emmett lost their baby
Author's Response:
Edward does have his self centered, cold moments. It is alluded to in some chapters that before Bella came along that he was a different man, cold hearted and rough around the edges. Thank you for reading nad I hope that you are enjoying it.
Sher
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 135
i love this story
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
i love this story it so good
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 135
wow super cool story ;) there were a couple of things though in one chapter it mentioned that bailey had brown eyes when they were green all the time before? and hiedi is edwards cousin when aro and renata didn't have kids? and jake was bellas brother? anyway i'm looking forward to the sequel and more kids ;D
Date: 03 Jun 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 94
Bella is still so immature. So many things she says and does. I never disagree with hubby in front of associates or let them know how I really feel. Edward is always apologizing when really he does nothing wrong. Maybe I'M biased. Seth...smh..
Date: 15 Mar 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 79
I loving all the lemons....my bf thanks you
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 74
I wonder why bella doesnt get on birth control so they dont have to remember the condom
Date: 07 Mar 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
So the 1st time they are together he uses a condom...yet the 2nd time its spontantous and he doesnt use a condom....is bella on bc or do i see a preggo bella soon
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 135
WOW OMG I loved this story! and sooooo looking forward to reading the sequel!! thank you!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 135
great loved it
Date: 21 Aug 2013 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 110
Sounds like fun to me ;)
Date: 14 Aug 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 135
That was amazing! I loved this ending for this story, and cannot wait to see what the sequel has in store for us!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 135
Poor Renata. Hope she'll be ok. Think a little quiet family time is a good idea. Alice has a lot of making up to do.
TY for writing and sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 135
thank you for a wonderful story....They will find out who killed Aro.Edward and Bella will have another child.............one could only hope that Alice is going to be ok, and it's not because of her that Aro got killed at his birthday party
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 135
Congrats on the ending. ;) As for the sequel, will we be notified, or will we just have to watch for it?
Thank You!!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm not sure how to do notifications, but i'd just look for it.. or if you are on facebook, we have a group. Lost Twi Sisters fanfiction.. we'll announce it there too.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 135
Here we are at the end of this one, and I'm looking forward to the next step in their lives. Things are going to be different with Edward as head of the family and it will put pressure on him and Bella and their relationship. Hope to see you soon, thanks again for a really good read!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 135
Loved the story!!! Sorry that it is ending. It was a great story. I think that Edward and Bella will take over for Aro and things will run smooth for them.. Bella will help Edward see things in a different way...like she does now. Thanks for the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2013 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 135
:) loved this story. Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 06 Aug 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 134
OH SNAP! I was not expecting this at ALL!! LOVED IT!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 134
So sad. And wow is Alice in trouble. Good chapter.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 134
This was such a sad chapter. This is the only story that I can think of that I actually liked Aro. He was a good man and did not deserve to be killed at his party. I wonder if Alice in her crazy state was involved the enemy.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 134
Waaaahhh! How terrible! My mind keeps asking if Alice was merely negligent or was she culpable?
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 134
Never expected Aro's death. Whoa. Alice seriously needs help she is delusional,so I agreed with Aro's decision. He was the only one who could take charge of her it seems.
Looking forward to reading how Edward takes over the business
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 134
WOW what a chapter!!! Poor Aro...I hope Alice didn't have anything to do with his death. Poor Edward he has so much to do now to live up to Aro. With Bella with him he will do fine. Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 134
A VERY SAD CHAPTER I'M SORRY TO SEE ARO GO IN YOU STORY HE WAS OK I DIDN'T HATE HIM IN THIS STORY LIKE SO MANY OTHERS HE WAS A VERY BAD PERSON. I HOPE EDWARD WILL BE OK TAKING OVER THE HEAD OF THE FAMILY AND RUNNING EVERYTHING ARO DID.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 134
How devestating for the family to lose Aro, poor Renata! The burdens of leadership will fall to Edward before he thinks he's ready. I bet he's more than able to assume the role of boss, it will come naturally to him. With Bella's smarts and common sense, it shouldn't even be that difficult!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 134
Poor Aro. Alice should be happy to just go to rehab. Stupid Biatch Poor Renata.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 134
this is the first mafia/mobward story ive read and tho there's violence theres soo much love! i even liked Aro! good job !!!
Date: 02 Aug 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 133
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really hope everything works out soon.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 133
thank you for the update..........Alice needs help fast...poor girl.poor Jasper