[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2022 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2022 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2019 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great story, I expected most of it, but not now you put it all together.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 4:10 AM Title: Prologue
I've had this one on my TBR list and decided to give it a try. I knew he probably was involved with someone else, but didn't expect it to be her best friend's finace.
Sherry
Date: 23 Jul 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
loved the story...
would have enjoyed a little more of the downgrading of
rose and more publically....but that is only my
evilness shining through...
i love that you finish all of your great stories instead of
leaving the readers hanging
wished more/all of the fanfic authors were like you.
thank you ~ keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
:) Loved this story
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward told Bella he was clean but he obviously was having sex with Rose without a condom or else he wouldn’t have thought he could possibly be the father.
He wouldn’t have had any reason to just have a test randomly before having sex with Bella so he wasn’t necessarily clean at all because Rose was having sex with someone else at the same time she was with him and obviously without a condom also. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow, I did not realise that this would be the end, I thought there might have been a couple of more chapters, you know Edwards explaining to his parents, a bit of back lash from Rose, but no, just cut off and there you go the end.
Ohh well. I really did enjoy this stroy, even if the ending was a little abrupt. But just as fitting in the end.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
That last line kills me. So good
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
WOOOHOOOO Love it!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
ohhh he woke up and grew up all in one chapter!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wonderful story. You didn't drag the angst out foooorrreeevvveeerr like some stories where you have to stop reading because it is too much. You had just the right amount mixed with plenty of happy in love !!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
OH MY FUCKING GOD!
I don't think I have cried like this for a while in a story that I have read, you have killed me with this chapter. I tell you what, if you ended the story there it would be poetic.
Star crossed lovers, only ever to be seen in the star, never on this earth were they bound to be.
What a chapter, when I started reading the last 4 chapters did I see this one coming. You have made my Friday night depressing, I don't think I could even find another update that could pick me up from this.
You are a cruel woman, but I tell you I can not wait to read what is going to happen. I think it is going to come out that it is not Edwards baby and I really thought Bella had it when they were at lunch with Rose in the last chapter, I was screaming at the screen, Bella wake up out of your stupor...
Ohh well I can't wait for the next up date I really hope it is soon, thank you soooooo much for this story.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
I saw the movie and I totally love it because is somehow a removie of my life,I was Bella ,but never have the strong to do something, I just think my friend will be always betterr than me
but return to your fic, this is fantastic, almost nothing like the movie, I love the idea, I hope you will upgrade sooon
I think this is the pefect sog for the chapter: demi lovato don"t forget
xoxo merry
PS:you are an amazing author
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
ohoh you are up to something. Though I would enjoy both of them telling her.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
About time. Though keeping secrets is not always a good thing I guess it depends on the situation.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can just guess the next chapter Bella puts together the party and Rose take credit whatever.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Personally I agree with Edward I prefere that doctors conduct themselves in a professional manner expecially in the or even though that may not be the universal case. I also would have them concentrate on what they are doing with the patient and not about their personal lives
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to when Bella finally wakes up.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hope the next chapter sees Bella in a different light because this one is still annoying.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I enjoyed this chapter with the exceoption of morning Bella. She annoyed me. I know I shouldn't be upset with women like this Bella since they are so nice and "selfless" but sometimes I cannot stand people who enjoyed self sacrificing themselves. BFF do not or isn't suppose to abuse you they are suppose to take your feelings in consideration. Rose been abusing Bella and instead of that she can not see she is hurting those that truly cares about her. WaKe up Bella!!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wake up Bella Geez
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:13 PM Title: Prologue
elle nez pouvait pas rester et ce battre, comme dans toutes les fics elleprends la fuite dommage
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG. So tragic. I wish Rosalie's baby is not Ed's.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
I dont understand my more people are not reading your story. I have fallen in love with these two. Even if I don't condone what they are doing, but the way Rose treats Bella and Edward would push anyone away. I have a feeling she is cheating on Edward with Emmett and I am sure he is not the first one.
I am sure that will come out soon as well.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
She needs to kick Rose to the curb!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Obviously Edward didnt consider it a mistake. And Rose is either thinking of cheating with Emmett or already is.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:51 AM Title: Prologue
Love this so far! Always good to have Rosalie as a total bitch lol! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it so far. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear it! Thanks for reading.