Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
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This one was a very special one, 'cause its main theme was the music.
I really love your writing style, the way you enfold the story and how you characterize your characters!
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Date: 29 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
Don't much blame Bella for the things she said at the sentencing hearing. It was all right on target. Knowing the sex of their baby is bittersweet for Bella, since Mattie never got to know his mother. I'm glad they aren't going back to high school, I think college will be just the thing for them both. Edward will be great at all they want him to do and Bella can get her certification in social work. She'll be a natural at helping others!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 27
So, things are looking up, kind of. Therapy is helping both Bella and Edward and Emma now knows that they need her help also. She's a very smart little girl and is being a peach about most things. The school district is being very good about this whole situation, too.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank God they got Bella back alive! She was worried that Edward wouldn't want her after James had kicked the crap out of her, but of course he was just thrilled he had her back in his arms! The baby was a nice touch, they deserve some happiness after all the misery. The part you mentioned about Bella's messed up mind? I'm counting on you to not make that too bad, since I was paying attention when she told James she wasn't the weak little girl from high school, she had the love of a real man and her daughter! So, no fair making this a long drawn out recovery process, okay?
Date: 29 Jun 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well, they both worked like dogs but the result was more than worth it! Bella's speech was really pretty inspirational, and so like her, no wonder Edward was amazed. I'm gritting my teeth, knowing you have some bad stuff coming in the next couple chapters. I hate it but know you think it's necessary. I'm a huge fan of HEA, but real life seldom goes perfectly!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
I figured this would be a great vacation and it is so far. I guess Edward's surprise is something to do with dolphins and a possible proposal? Bet I'm right! What isn't at all right, is the menace of James, hanging over their lives! I have my fingers crossed that they get him before he can hurt any of them. It makes me sick to think of him around Emma, let alone Bella!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
So, you're in tech week, too! No wonder you kn ow so much about this musical they're putting on, you do it too! Thank heaven for Jasper, it's so nice to have your own personal cop when you need one! Great idea to go south to the Florida Keys, it will be a good getaway for a few days!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
Emma seems to be having a pretty normal reaction to her mother's death, especially when you consider she feels Jessica never loved her and she kind of hated that about her! The therapy will no doubt be a help, as will the dance class. You mentioned James lurking out there somewhere. Why can't you just have Detective Aro, or Jasper shoot the son-of-a-bitch and be done with him? What a gift to Bella , and to Edward, too!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
What a day the whole family has had! Poor Beella and Emma! I wish Bella could be supernaturally strong for just long enough to kick hell out of Jessica! Of course, tthe ex wife has pretty much taken care of that herself! Frankly, I hope her folks pull the plug and let her die!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
If only God would zap James and Jessica, life would be perfect for our lovers! Just dreaming, I know. Speaking of dreams, their fist time together was dreamy and just what it should be. Bella deserved the best and I think she got him!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
James is a sicker bastard than I even thought, murdering his parents, and leaving a message telling Bella she was next! I hope the judicial system is proud of it's self for letting him off lightly and the penal system for letting him escape! I hope to hell Bella does the smart thing and moves in with Edward and Emma!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lots more work to the school musical than I was aware of! All this stuff is building up and I hope neither Bella nor Edward gets overloaded! They both are beyond angry at Jessica for hitting Emma and I don't blame them one little bit!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
The more Bella tells about James, the more I want to torture him to death, the selfish asshole! Next in line will be Edward's ex! I hope he sics his lawyer on her and makes her life a misery! By the way, have I mentioned that Edward is a saint? He's got to be the most patient, loving man on the planet, also selfless and pretty talented in bed! Lucky Bella!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
This girls can't seem to catch a break, sometimes! If not for Edward and his family, she really would be in trouble. That migraine was awful, and really knocked Bella out! Edward will have his hands full with both his girls sick at the same time!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Just when I was thinking they might be starting a bright new year, this happens! Charlie is even in a panic, and Edward will no doubt join him in that! They both will do whatever it takes to keep Bella safe! My perfect solution is, James finds out where Bella is , comes to Chicago, and Jasper kills him on her doorstep! In self-defense, of course! This should be accompanied by the news that Jessica fell overboard off the cruise ship and drowned! No more problem, everyone lives happily ever after!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Fair is fair, you wept while writing this chapter and I wept while reading it! That was a truly beautiful service and just what Bella needed! I'm thinking that Charlie is pretty impressed with Edward's devotion to Bella.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
No surprise, I just knew Emma wanted a real mom and Bella fits the bill ! What a wonderful Christmas, except for Emma having to spend a week with her mother! Too bad Santa's sleigh doesn't land on her and crush the life right out of her! I know, not very Christmas spirited of me, but I can't stand people like her!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
I would bet that Emma's wish is for Bella to be her mom, just sayin'! I hope the judge gives Edward full custody and banishes Jessica to Siberia, for being a horrible mother! One can only hope! Falling asleep on the couch with the two people she loves is just what Bella needs!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's a sad commentary on Jessica, when Emma would much rather have Bella take care of her! Smart little girl! I don't like that Emma won't tell her father what happened the weekend she was sick at her mother's . That sounds kind of bad!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Now in addition to Jessica, I want badly to kill James! What a monster! Jail is too good for guys like that, he ought to suffer what he did to Bella, exactly! This was an unusual way to get closer, but I'm glad Bella opened up to Edward, as it means she's comfortable and secure with him. This is a real good foundation to build a relationship on!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's official now, I hate Jessica! What a selfish, uncaring, nasty bitch! Calling Bella a whore when she has no idea who she is, was just off the wall! Poor little Emme, having a mother like that, plus being sick, is awful! Now this bombshell Bella is about to drop on Edward, whooee!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
That pretty neatly outlined Edward's life and circumstances, and introduced Bella. Not much background on her yet, but I am curious. Just one thought, with a husband like Edward, and his child, how could Jessica sleep with Mike Newton?
Date: 01 Jan 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
omg im a teary mess what a beautifull well written story Icried alot and laughed alot thank you for the heart and soul you put into this keep writing please Inever read much on this site but i will definetly read anything new from you
Date: 26 Aug 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
Perfect ending for them. I died laughing about the comment about the youngest pooping and wanting to have the picture showed to the parent. Mine asked the same thing several months back and all I could do was say maybe next time.
Thanks for sharing Your wonderful imagination.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
This was one of my favorite stories that I made sure to keep up with. I'm very sad to see it ending. I really enjoyed this chapter. It was very sweet and had a few silly moments too. I will miss the Professor and Marianne.
Thanks for a great story!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter. Glad the play went well. Ugh Ashleigh. You'd think the school would send someone to her house if she'd been out too many days. I know school have truancy officers that go to homes here. Ugh F'ing James.