Date: 08 Sep 2016 8:15 PM Title: Getting to know you
Loved it!
Date: 08 Sep 2016 9:40 AM Title: More than Infatuation
Loved it!
Date: 08 Sep 2016 2:30 AM Title: The day that changed their lives
Loved it!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:59 PM Title: Pretending
This story is either your first, or unbeta'd. If you have time, please have it editted. Change some errors like than/then usage, etc. Thanks.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 7:17 PM Title: A love so enchanting
Loved it!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 8:37 PM Title: Naughty and Nice
Loved it!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 9:31 AM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope
Loved it!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 8:29 AM Title: Crossing the line
Go Edward!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:41 AM Title: Thankfulness
Loved it!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 12:19 AM Title: Smokey Mirror
Loved it!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 10:56 PM Title: Moving Forward
Loved it!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 5:59 PM Title: Nothing short of a miracle
Loved it!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 3:52 PM Title: More surprises than a little bit
Awesome!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 12:45 PM Title: Can't Escape
Loved it!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 11:42 AM Title: At Sunset
Excellent chapter!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 11:12 AM Title: I hate her I hate him
Maria and James are crazy!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 1:30 AM Title: Amazing, Astounding, Mind blowing...speechless
Loved it!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:34 PM Title: Enter the Madness
Loved it!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 5:53 PM Title: My Relationship under a microscope
Loved it! I hate Jane!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 2:10 PM Title: So It Continues
Loved it!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 12:10 PM Title: The It Couple
They are such a cute couple!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 11:26 AM Title: Chaos
Loved it! I hate Emily and Elizabeth! They are horrible people!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 10:17 AM Title: A family affair
Loved it!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:19 PM Title: Just the two of Us
Loved it!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 9:10 PM Title: Damn Insecurities
Loved it! I hate Jane!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:37 PM Title: Meeting the Parents
Excellent chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:35 PM Title: You give me something
Excellent chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:44 PM Title: Giving Titles
Great chapter! Stupid Samantha!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:16 PM Title: Taking care of business
Amazing!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 1:30 PM Title: Revealing the Truth
Awesome!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 12:43 PM Title: Unofficially Official
Great!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:54 AM Title: Defying Gravity
Awesome chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 9:29 AM Title: Getting to know you
Great chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:30 AM Title: Distractions
Loved it!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:08 AM Title: Just Friends
Loved it! I hate Emily and James!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:38 AM Title: More than Infatuation
Loved it!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:12 AM Title: The Interview
Loved it!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 6:13 AM Title: The day that changed their lives
Loved it!
Date: 12 Sep 2015 11:53 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Loved Loved this Fic!! Loved the tension and the relationship between ExB!! And the girls where too cute!! Of to read the sequel!!
Date: 23 Jul 2015 1:46 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
I enjoyed the plot of your story, however your English grammer needs some work. Thank you for posting your story.
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:21 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Great story
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2015 9:34 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
awesome
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2015 12:18 PM Title: Defying Gravity
so good
Date: 10 May 2014 5:31 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Super good
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 5:40 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Ugh hateful people in the store and James screwing up B's life even on the other side of the country.. jeez
Ty for writing and sharing
Date: 03 May 2014 5:33 AM Title: The Inevitable
Glad they sued and won. Stupid Doctor. Maria and her magic twat. Jeez
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 5:21 AM Title: Unconditional
wonderful chapter. Nice that he could take all that time off.
Date: 03 May 2014 5:04 AM Title: The day that changed their lives again
buh bye Victoria. E was generous with the way he let her go.
Alice's job on the nursery sounds wonderful.
YEY babies
Date: 03 May 2014 4:51 AM Title: A love so enchanting
sweet surprise on the show. Ice Skating?? really?
Date: 03 May 2014 4:30 AM Title: Naughty and Nice
Glad Emily finally got her head out of her arse. Yea for Em finally proposing.
Date: 03 May 2014 4:05 AM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope
wow Karl really wants to die. Wow the need to die list keeps growing and growing. Freakin Embry!?!?! wow Does Maria have a magic twat or something? Jeez Louise.
Time to call the FBI since the police commissioner is involved and obviously dirty. They kept her at B&E's house? or did I miss something?
Well at least the doctor kept Maria in the hospital but he should be prosecuted for not telling what James and Maria planned.
Date: 03 May 2014 1:41 AM Title: Crossing the line
Ugh. Carlos is a wanker. Why can't James just die.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 1:38 AM Title: Thankfulness
Lol for em being scared of Charlie.
Date: 02 May 2014 8:36 PM Title: Smokey Mirror
wow If maria gets him out, I hope they sue the crap out of the prisons system.
Bella should walk off. Carlos and Alistair were way out of line. Jerks. LOVE Carmen siding with B. Surprised she can hide the babies still. lol for Bella's water comment. hee hee
oh wow Em actually said that?!?! Surprised they are able to keep the secret. Ugh Maria again?!?! hmmm I smell a huge rat.
Despite the DA call, I still don't buy it.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 7:38 PM Title: Moving Forward
uh oh Rose and Em fighting??? Carlos is a wanker. naughty E messing around at B's work. LOL.
What a nice present for Jessica and Em. Ugh lauren is such a petty thing.
House sounds wonderful. Ugh maria again?????
lol for the B fainting, not e.
Date: 02 May 2014 7:26 PM Title: Nothing short of a miracle
Dayum. Can I have an edward clone please!!!! yummy
Ugh Marie needs to just die or get arrested already.
ROFL for Charlie's reaction.
Date: 02 May 2014 7:15 PM Title: More surprises than a little bit
aww poor Hannah. Uh oh for the puking. lol for Em's chips and feet.
Hee Hee for Benjamin getting arrested. Oh wow. Vincent found a bunch of stuff huh? Poor Em.
I'm with Edward about the waitress. I can forgive her for asking for a autograph at first, but the rest was just ridiculous. She needed to be fired.
oooh that cop is gonna be in trouble for letting the sleezeball get his gun.
lol for stupid heads.
Date: 02 May 2014 6:50 PM Title: My Strength
hmm forgot about Royce. Guessing he was out on bail?
So good of them to visit personally. Benjamin really needed to go. Old freakin dinosaur is why women rarely get a fair shot at upper management jobs.
Wow Eric is a piece of work along with that whole branch of the family.
Nice idea of spa day with the families.
Date: 02 May 2014 6:27 PM Title: Can't Escape
E has such a temper. LOL.
Wow Emily actually did the right thing for once.
OMG Maria, James, Riley??? or some combo of the three??
Date: 02 May 2014 6:18 PM Title: At Sunset
wonderful ceremony and everyone coming together. Hmm in this case I hope someone listened to Emily. Yummy End
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 4:54 PM Title: I hate her I hate him
Ugh sucks when security doesnt do their job. Wow Jared needs to be fired. Hope Jessica tells Edward. Wow Bella's building security needs fired too.
Why would her Dad call her house? Didn't he know she was on vacation??? Wow Emily really is a family traitor too huh?
James: Wow Leah huh? People will do anythign for money huh? ugh James and Maria need to get together. What delusional psychopaths
Date: 02 May 2014 4:26 PM Title: Amazing, Astounding, Mind blowing...speechless
awww sweet proposal. Yey for saying yes. Happy dance time
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 3:28 PM Title: Enter the Madness
Wow James is one real arsehole. He and Maria need to take a running leap off a cliff together.
Wow Emily had the nerve to openly meet Maria??? What an idiot.
ROFL for messing with Em about the ballet
Date: 02 May 2014 2:59 PM Title: My Relationship under a microscope
Can't say I blame Em. But I understand E's place too. Yummy middle and Jane is def a delusional biatch
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 2:55 AM Title: Addiction
Unknown is probably Riley or Victoria maybe??? grrr Aro is taking money from the scumballs??? hope he goes down too now. Ugh Maria needs to def go to a padded room.
Yea eric needs cut off or something. stupid greedy people. Love that B gets along with Bree/Esme. :-)
Ugh Victoria needs to go along with Riley and Benjamin. Jeez. Again. Paparazzi should be illegal.
B's mom is such a goober. lol for planning nazi. Love the idea of surprising him. aww for ILY's
Last chapter for tonight. Bed time for me.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 2:33 AM Title: So It Continues
Yumy Start. Ugh Emily again??!?!?! what a money grubbing skank
Jessica needs a raise. I can get Riley not being around, but Benjamin too? wonder whats up. hmm Time for Benjamin to be fired. What an arse.
aww that was nice of B to offer that to Faith.
Date: 02 May 2014 2:20 AM Title: The It Couple
lol for cockblocking Em. awww for jealous E. Hope Carlos doesnt try anything. Ugh papparazzi should be illegal. He's such a meanie not telling her what he's saying in french.
Date: 02 May 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chaos
OMG Catfight. LOL LOVED Bella punching Emily. She Sooooooo deserved it. and Rose dunking Rose....Priceless.
Liz is such a witch. The kid is 30 for goodness sakes. Wow Esme's side of the family, Emily included are the worst of the worst. Jeez Louise.
Esme and Carlisle are such wonderful people. Yummy end. Needed after the day they had
Date: 02 May 2014 1:54 AM Title: A family affair
Bumble Bree - That is too cute.
Glad Jessica is so loyal.
OOOhhhh yummy office time. ROFL for Heidi's comment to B.
OMG Esme's side are nutso. LOVE B's response to Eric.
Hmmm Sounds like Emily might have something on Benjamin maybe? Emily is such a biatch.
aww for Rose and Tanya hitting it off. Ugh Pricilla is just like Emily, a right biatch. Oh wow Heidi is a relative?!?! eek. Hope someone knock Elizabeth on her arse.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 1:22 AM Title: In My Blood
lol for Jealous Lauren. Wonder if Ben is involved with the Riley thing? I'm sure Victoria is.
Yummy Lemonny times!!!
Date: 02 May 2014 12:51 AM Title: Just the two of Us
Ugh James is an annoying PITA. Yummy mini lemony time.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:58 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Hello I just read all of it and I loved it thank you
Date: 27 Mar 2014 10:22 PM Title: The Inevitable
I enjoyed reading your story although there were occasions that due to the grammatical errors (misspelled words, punctuation, improper word usage, and sentence structure) I had trouble following along. Despite what I just mentioned I look forward to reading the next story in this series of yours. I'm sure if you had someone to proof read for you, your writing would go that much further. Keep up the good work
Date: 27 Mar 2014 10:17 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Damn James. But at least it means sequel time :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2014 1:31 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Awesome story ;) just wanted to mention that you put 4 months instead of 2 months at the beginning from the previous chapter no biggie x it looks like the sequel will be interesting I'm going to read it now ; D
Date: 24 Mar 2014 12:45 AM Title: The Inevitable
Awesome! I'm tickled pink about maria ;) the time jumps are a bit confusing with no dates to go with them though but it does move the story along ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2014 9:27 PM Title: A love so enchanting
Awesome chapter! I loved the ball massage ;) I'm looking forward to the sequel!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 8:17 PM Title: Naughty and Nice
I loved it but I've never heard of these name's before ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:15 PM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope
Awesome! I hope that's the end of James and maria ;) it's a shame about Jonathan though maybe Edward can put Vincent to work ?;)
Date: 23 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Smokey Mirror
Awesome! thanks for letting us know about maria but what about James? And its great about the new positions at the office ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:32 AM Title: Damn Insecurities
oooh E you really screwed up this time. B should be mad.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:14 AM Title: Meeting the Parents
too funny. ROFL for Em jumping out of the boat. B needs to tell E about the creepy Ben feeling.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Nothing short of a miracle
Super cute! What happened to Bree going to Europe? ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:14 AM Title: More surprises than a little bit
Super cool! Its a real shame about Hannah but if it's a girl they can name her Hannah hind sight is 2020 with Benjamin and where did the bullet go? ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2014 1:14 AM Title: My Strength
Wow! I prefer epov lemons but bpov in this one was awesome!! Hurray I thought it was Benjamin! Its nice that they agreed on something ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 11:57 PM Title: Can't Escape
Omg! I'm glad about Emily I hope she's sincere ;) I hope the descent employees are OK :)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 11:05 PM Title: At Sunset
Awesome chapter ! Wow! Yes he should of listened but I understand why he didn't I hope her dream comes true ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 9:22 PM Title: Amazing, Astounding, Mind blowing...speechless
Absolutely awesome chapter! I really hope they can pull it off ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:11 PM Title: My Relationship under a microscope
I could see both sides of Emmett s argument I'm surprised about Jane smoking I thought the unknown POV was male ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 6:07 PM Title: Addiction
I loved this chapter;) I think more so now that it's Benjamin and Esme and Bree s conversation was sweet ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 4:42 PM Title: So It Continues
I really hope Mac is genuine I think Benjamin, Royce and Emily are behind it all ;)