Date: 30 Oct 2021 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
This was amazing book! I loved it!
Date: 11 Dec 2018 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
so she;s pregnant is this one a boy? Story seems incomplete or just a rushed ending
Date: 11 Dec 2018 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
thankfully you did not stop there
Date: 07 Oct 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
AWESOME!!! story i'm looking forward to reading the epov companion to this when it's finished ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 04 Sep 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am glad everyone got their HEA. But one question.....what do the dogs and Lucy think Lena? It just crossed my mind. Lol. Thank you for sharing a really great story with us.
Date: 04 Sep 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMGosh! Could Edward be any more perfect! !!!!!
Glad Bella and Rose are trying to get along.
Date: 04 Sep 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
I had to laugh at Edward falling out of the bed. Lol. Glad Esme and Bella are getting along.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hate Emmett and Rose are separated. Why does it not surprise that Jacob has showed up.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad they had a good time.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad Bella stands up for herself.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
I was wondering when Jacob was going to show up.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella may be young be in am glad she stood up to Rose. Catlin was a trip, lol, out of the mouths of babes.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I liked how he split that in about the dinner at his parents there at the end. Lol
Date: 03 Sep 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love their "fight" lol
Date: 02 Sep 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad Edward and Bella'sparents are getting along.
Date: 02 Sep 2015 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
So glad that Alice and Bella made up. Glad Edward and Bella talked about what happened. So glad I so not have to wait on an update. I am off to read the next chapter.
Date: 02 Sep 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, Rose is a real bitch. I hope Edward let Rose have it after Bella ran.
Date: 02 Sep 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
I would say they both have fallen. Will we ever find out what Edward and Charlie talked about? ???
Date: 02 Sep 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved Sue in this chapter. Lol. I hope Edward is really ok with what he and Charlie talked about.
Date: 01 Sep 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was about the way I thought Charlie would act. I figured he would blow up 1st and then have he say. I'm sure he will make sure to have his gun on him when he meets Edward. Lol
Date: 01 Sep 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Famous last words Edward. Lol.Alice needs to get off her high horse and support Bella.
Date: 01 Sep 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Children? ?????? They are moving fast but at Edward's age I guess you have to think about things like that! !!!!# LOL!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what Alice had to say.
Date: 01 Sep 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow!!!!!!! Things are moving fast!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like Bella wants to get to know Edward a little better alone in his house. Lol
Date: 01 Sep 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
So glad she felt comfortable telling Edward about her past experiences with Jacob.
Date: 01 Sep 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really likedthis chapter. Glad they talked and got some things out in the open.
Date: 01 Sep 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am glad that Bella is standing up for herself. Alice will get over it at some point.
Date: 31 Aug 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Did Bella not know how old Edward was? Was it not in his profile?
Date: 31 Aug 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for them to meet
Date: 30 Aug 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
I really liked how everything turned out, not only for Edward and Bella, but Rose and Emmett and Alice and Jasper, too! I love a happy ending!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well, Happy New Year, Bella! Hope she said yes! Of course she said yes, she loves him to bits!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I know exactly how Bella feels, I hate to shop and would almost rather take a beating! Wonder why Emmett is so cheerful?
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh dear, should have known this wasn't going to end well, first the dogs eating the pies, then the road home being closed, now jackass Jake shows up!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
As far as Edward is concerned, that had to have been the perfect end to Tanya's wedding! I liked that it wasn't as bad as Bella feared, either.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
What in the world is the problem ? Too many people seem to have a cow over the age difference between Bella and Edward! Like it's anyones' business but their's!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
Jake is a real jerk and I'm kind of glad Edward hit him, especially since he didn't break his hand! I hope Charlie has it wrong and Jake never shows up in Seattle! That could get ugly!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Rosalie is being an uber-bitch about their relationship, as if she had some right to comment on or control it! That seems to have turned Edward on, big time!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
This arrangement makes sense to me, let's see what the rest of his family and her dad think of it! Maybe Rosalie has mellowed by now?
Date: 12 Nov 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was too cute, her faking, then thinking he wanted to break up. I'm glad they both declared their love, despite dishes in the sink and dirty clothes on the floor! Bound to be a few bumps in the road for them, I guess.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
This should be quite a test for them. If living together while she recovers from her injuries doesn't have them at each others throats, all will be well! I think it's a good sign that Charlie stayed with Edward while Bella was in the hospital.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my God! This can't possibly be good! Just when she and Alice have made up and she told her she loves Edward! Crap!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Too bad Bella didn't just grit her teeth and tell Rosalie to go to hell! Guess she was just too shocked at her venomous words! I hope she and Edward can square away this little problem.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
It makes sense that would cement Bella's feelings for Edward. She's in love with him, so I hope he is with her as well! They are going to have some adjustments to make, but probably no more than any other couple.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
As embarassing as that was for Bella, looks like Edward handled it okay. I would love to have been a mouse to hear what they talked about on the front porch. Hopefully, the worst is over.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
That went about the way I thought it would, but at least Charlie hasn't got out his gun ! We'll just have to wait and see, I guess.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
That kind of sounded like Bella wasn't very experienced at that, but made up for it with enthusiasm. Edward seemed to enjoy it also! Bella 's mom was pretty cool about Edward's age , at least a lot better than Alice has been! Now we must brace for Charlie's reaction! By the way, I wanted to spank Alice over her reaction to Bella being with Edward, how rude!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, oh, Alice probably has figured out that Bella spent the night with Edward! This should be fun to hear! I'm glad that Bella is going to have him meet her dad, best to get that out of the way.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Crafty devil that he is, Edward definitely has an agenda here, and it seems to be working on Bella!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Telling Sue about Edward wasn't too bad at all, probably a breeze compared to telling her dad! I like that they are getting to know each other and are in no rush to become intimate too soon.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can see why Bella feels so guilty over how Jake treated her. He was abusive, she just didn't want to admit it to herself. Good for Edward telling her real men don't treat women that way. Bless him, he's one of the good guys, obviously! I hope Bella doesn't have trouble with Jake while she's home !
Date: 11 Nov 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a nice, normal way to spend the day! I think Irish wolfhounds are beautiful dogs, so that was cool. It tickled me when he announced he was about to kiss her! Looking very promising!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm proud of Bella for defending her choice to see Edward against Alice. It's tough sometimes to oppose a friend or relative that has your best interests at heart. This could be a fun journey, seeing where it leads!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Things were going along so well, I hope his age doesn't scare Bella off!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Pushy Alice, who would believe it? Sorry, couldn't resist! I'm glad Edward talked Bella into meeting face to face. It sounds like they will hit it off with as many things as they have in common.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Typical Alice, get all excited about this online site then zonk and leave Bella to deal withit! At least it started out well. I suppose now her friend will talk her into meeting this guy!
Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved loved loved it. Thank you far sharing your writing.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
AMAZING!! Love it!! I hope they get the baby boy!! ;)
its been a great journey! Thank you!!! I hope to read more from you in the future :)
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
They're just great toguether :)
Date: 12 Sep 2013 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella needs to accidentally let Chester out of the car so he can maul Jacob lol
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
I reread this when I got the chapter update. Gah! I need more please :) I really like this. It's got its drama but it hasn't felt melodramatic, even with the car crash. And when Bella ran out after Rosalie's ambush it was completely in tune with her age. I'm worried about this next chapter though. I don't like Jacob! But hopefully it won't be too bad...please?
Date: 29 May 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
I thought Angela was away with Ben for the weekend?
Date: 11 May 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love your story. I dated a guy 17 years older tan me when I was 20, so I know how Bella feels. Love your Edward and a Bella. And of course LuLu and Chester. LuLu was an English singer from the 60's so how about KiKi for Kiki Dee, anither E flush vocalist?
Date: 29 Mar 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
Please may we have more????
Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
I really like your writing style, please continue this story, it brilliant!!
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
I loved it they just work as a couple even if others dont think so they truly care for each other update soon
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aw, that was amazing! I love the kitten, and cannot wait to see what they name her!
Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hot!! Bella is ready to up the ante physically, and Edward seems all for it.
Rosalie does not seem to realize that her atttitude gives a pretty ugly picture of her own motives - if her first reaction when meeting Bella is "gold-digger" and "money-hungry", then what were her ownmotives for marrying Emmett?
Date: 28 Jan 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bitch much, Rosalie? Running was dumb, have to agree on that. Bella had stashed her phone in her bra, of all places? I could imagine stashing money, a key(done that actually) or even a credit card in my bra, but a phone? Wouldn't she have her purse for that?
Date: 28 Jan 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Unsensored version, yes thank you very much! Didn't realize I'd missed the goodies...definitively moving over from ff for the rest of the story. You're one of the few authors who actually care about the content restrictions
Seems for some reason I can read on my phone but not review so that'll have to wait until I manage to chase the kids of the laptop, lol!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Gah, that was amazing! I love this story (then again, I always love an older Edward) :)
Date: 17 Jan 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, I really just couldn't stop reading this. I love it and want more, please :D
Date: 17 Jan 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
I liked that Bella didn't come; it's a lot more realistic than always having amazing, mind-blowing orgasms. They make me feel bad.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really liked the scene with Edward comforting Bella and making sure she knew none of it was her fault. I felt that was really important and you did a good job.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Bella didn't take Alice's shit. Age is irrelevant when both parties are able to consent.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
How old did Bella think he was? He wouldn't have looked young, but she obviously didn't know he was nearly 40. Although, considering she used her own birth date as part of her name--a pretty common thing for people to do--it seems pretty stupid that she didn't work out his age in the beginning.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking this :) Except I would've loved to have read Bella and Edward's messages to each other from the first night.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
Rosalie's reaction toward Bella makes me wonder if there's some jealousy involved:( I'm surprised she hasn't been told to shut her mouth yet.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Rosalie is a spoiled brat who needs a serious wake up call and the members of her family really need to give her one.... I feel like they are letting way too much slide and that's how shit gets out of hand
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
I really like this story. Can't wait for more
Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well that was a good way to start my day.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm soooo glad you put a link to your story here! It's one of my favorites!
Catherine
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah, an update on FF.net::)) I keep track on both in case of any differences *wink*wink* lol
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
love this story
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
again - read this chapter at ffn since it was posted there. are these post different than ffn?
Author's Response:
No, the only difference is that in the earlier chapters on FFn, the lemons have been removed. I'm just using TWCS as a backup incase something happened to it on FFn.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
good - read over at ffn first :)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Is Bella on anitbiotics? Could a little one be on the way? Reading this story age is really just a number, love knows no bounds. Please update soon! LOVE IT!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
Gah, your lemons are amazing :D Loved it!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella :( I am happy that Edward is there for her, though :)
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
wonder how e will react
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
hope we get a peek at the talk
Date: 22 Jul 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
can't wait for the meet