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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

Trust Esme to come up with a way for Rainbow to travel, lol. 

Surprise!  Awww, wasn't that a lovely one. *happy sigh*  I'm sure Charlie's going to love Edward, not sure about Rainbow though.  Will Edward be peeing up Bella's leg when he meets Riley?  Hahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yeah, Esme wasn't letting the little one stay behind!  Surprise!  We'll see how it goes with Charlie and Riley!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Drunken conversations are soooo funny and sometimes, just like Bella, someone is drunk enough to say something they'd rather have kept to themselves and I'm thinking that Bella did that.  Jealousy is getting to Edward and add to that that he can't stand to be away from Bella and he's decided to go to Washington, lol, will he take Rainbow or will he leave her with his mum to destroy the house?  Somehow I don't think Esme will be up for that.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yes they are!  Yeah he's on his way to Washington.  Jealous and he misses his girl!  Time to head north.  We'll see what Ms. Rainbow has to say about traveling!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 19

So Bella's been hiding her light under a bushell.  I know she's not one to brag but still, why has everyone kept even just the fact that she can play other instruments secret?  I still think there's something else going on with Bella, it just seems really strange that she would say 'I love you, Edward.  Never forget that.'  Why add 'Never forget that' unless she was insecure about something or knew something else was coming up/going to happen?  Edward's just told her how proud he is of her.  Hmmm.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hehe Maybe there is something still unknown!  Time will tell!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

Okay, so what's going on between Angela and Bella?  That's the second time that Bella's dismissed her but this time she actually managed to say something.  Is there some other reason why Bella didn't tell Edward about the concert?

When will Tanya ever learn?  Surely she must realise by now that whenever she does shit like she did at the restaurant she always comes off the worst.  Unrequited love sucks but you just have to learn to live with it and move on.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hmm we'll have to wait and see!  B doesn't seem comfortable with something for sure!

Yeah, T's on the crazy side but she didn't get to our couple!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my God, talking to Jasper when he's high is like trying to catch water in a sieve, lol.  Rainbow has good taste.  My cat Callie used to like sitting on shoulders and cuddling into my neck when she was a kitten, she's a bit too big and heavy now, she's a Maine Coon and nearly 4.

Library sex......will they be working on more places?  So far they've done the locker room and the library, I haven't forgotten any other have I, apart from the usual?  Lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yes indeed it is!  Rainbow is adorable isn't she?  She knows who she loves!

Hmm we'll have to see if they come up with other places.  Our boy has some in mind!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awww, Edward finally said it properly and Bella said it back.  Esme really struggled to get through to him didn't she.  I think Edward's denial of being in love and refusal to accept it made him slow on the uptake.  I'm glad he did finally accept it.

I'm so glad Rose is giving Emmett a chance, although she needs to make him work at it for a while yet.  Edward could end up killing Emmett if he as to live with him for a bit, especially if he's going to be helping to train the team as well, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yes, he did say it and it took some time but Mom got through to him. 

Rose will never make it easy :)  We'll see what happens!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bwahahahaha!  I love the way that Edward speaks before his brain's in gear.  How will Bella take this?  Will she be happy and return the 'I think' sentiment or will be offended that he isn't quite sure?

Carlisle and Edward talking about love, so effin funny, especially the confusion over Esme and pregnancies. *snort*

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hehe love the Dad/son talk.  Such fun!  Confusion and death and pregnancies. Oh my!  Hehe

Yeah, so much for turning it off.  Instead he spews it at her unexpectedly :)  Fun!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

Lol, I get the feeling that Carlisle is going to enjoy his sons torture in telling him what the problem is and that it really can't be fixed, hahahaha.  Unprotected sex was a big step for them both, it takes a lot of trust by both partners.

Is something going on with Jacob, is he pestering Bella or getting on at her to dump Edward?

Jane x



Author's Response:

HAHA I think he may indeed have a godo time with it!

The unprotected sex was definitely a huge sign of trust on both sides.  They may not be saying what they feel but they are showing it.

Haha no Jake will never be an issue in anything I write!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my, Emmett had a threesome and it wasn't the one we all thought it was, lol.  Will this become Edward's life mission to find out who it was with?  He may need to bleach his brain. 

Awww, bless him, he's still not recognising that he loves Bella.  Well I suppose we can't expect more than one miracle at a time, lol, he'll get there.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha I think Edward wants to forget about his brother maybe crossing swords!

He'll get there indeed!  HEHE  Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

Lol, is Bella a bit of a stalker in bed?  Chasing him around all night.  I love Esme and Carlisle.  Oh my God, Emmett and Jasper in bed together with Bob, those pictures would be going to everyone I knew if I was Edward or maybe he can use them for bribing purposes.

At least Bella has met Edward's parents and she doesn't have to worry about that.  Lol, I wonder if Edward will feel the same about meeting Charlie the cop.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha she's a bed hog for sure!  Bob!  Gotta love the boys and their cuddling!

Esme and Carlisle are such fun!

We'll have to see about Edward/Charlie!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

That's what he thinks, lol.  Edward's done a complete 180 in just one week, this is a really big change for him.  I hope all these new things he's feeling don't scare him into doing something stupid.  Rose is going to be even more pissed off at them now.  Will Bella be able to cope having to keep fending off all these girls that Edward's been with?

Jane x



Author's Response:

He sure has.  He's fallen in line pretty nicely so far.  We'll see how he handles it!  I think Bella's equipped to deal with the girls.  She knows what she's doing!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

"Jaspy, baby, do you know what I'm doing right now?" Bwahahahahaha!!  Oh my God Jasper keeping on asking her what she was doing, lol and then he asked if she was playing with the kitties......priceless.

Edward's moving forward in leaps and bounds with his relationship with Bella.  Lol, they even both think that they'd like to be each others boyfriend and girlfriend.  It must be hell to be faced with your boyfriends past.....girls all the time.  Bella certainly told her what's what, I hope she got the message.  She was right with what she said to Edward.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha poor clueless Jaspy!  I love how single minded he is when high.

Edward definitely is hooked and seeing it more now and Bella's handling things wonderfully :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

So how much more proof does Edward need that he's falling for Bella, he even has photographic evidence and the 'L' word nearly crossed his mind, hahaha.

Oh my God, Emmett!!  He really doesn't do anything by halves.   I bet Rose is glad she wasn't there when she hears about this.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha he's not quite there yet but he's coming along!

Em will go balls to the wall to get his girl!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lol, a date with Reed Girl for Edward, that was a novelty for him wasn't it.  He actually did pretty well considering.  He's got a lot to think about especially his nerves at the beginning of their date, his wanting to see Bella again and the weird hand holding.  Wasn't it a surprise to him when Bella defended him against Rose.  I wonder when it will dawn on him that he's actually falling for a girl and wanting more, hmmm.  I love how he has nicknames for them all, lol.

Jane x 



Author's Response:

He did do pretty well all in all!  He was surprised by Bella's defense and by just how much fun he had with her.  His nicknames kill me.  We'll see when the light bulb goes on!  Thanks :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

God, these guys are comedy gold, lol.  Four kittens!  Emmett and Jasper are complete softies, well Jasper's more like a spaced out giant kid, lol.  I don't know how Edward copes and if this goes well he could, potentially, be spending so much more time with them all.  I'm sure that Rainbow will defend her man against Rose, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Jane,

Haha they are indeed.  Not bright, but such fun!  They drive Edward nuts but he needs them for now!  Rainbow would definitely defend her man!

Thanks!

Amy

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Lol, Emmett is so stupid falling for Rose's trick to get him naked but then he's another one thinking with his dick.  It seems that Edward is managing to make the transition from thinking with that appendage to actually using his big brain, he needs to take dating lessons from Alice, lol.  How high was Jaspy, lol.  Hugging a chocolate bar and repeatedly asking Edward to remind him to call Alice.  These guys are just too funny for words.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Jane,

Haha Yeah, Em does live in his own porno world!  Edward does have an ally in Alice!  Jaspy was incredibly high and SO much fun.  I'm glad you enjoy my bumbling boys!

Thanks!

Amy

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hahahaha!!  Edward certainly got more than he bargained for from both Rose and Bella.  Lol, he's managed to get himself a date with Bella to get to know her better and this from the man that said he didn't see girls more than twice.  Well I suppose he could still claim that but he'd be lying to himself, he's so far gone on Bella.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yeah he was quite surprised that he ended up with a date himself, but he's coming along!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward's problem is that he's thinking with is dick and not his over inflated head on his shoulders.  The last person he should be taking advice from is Emmett.  It's a toss up really as to which one of them is the bigger dickhead, lol.  I love Bella and Edward's banter, it's so funny.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha Edward, though he gets girls often, is clueless when it comes to anything resembling a relationship.  Em's not overly bright for sure.  Love E&B's back and forth as well!  Thanks :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oooh Edward has a temper.  What on earth did Emmett do to Rose?  I wonder if Edward ever thought that his life would come to holding an oboe to ransom so he could get laid, lol.  Does he realise at all how desperate he is?

Jane x



Author's Response:

Jane,

Haha yes he does!  We'll find out about Em and Rose.  He doesn't realize her effect on him at all.

Thanks!

Amy

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

Lol, Bella's playing so hard to get, is it genuine or an act?  I know I'll find out in a bit.  Edward's dreaming if he thinks 'once more would do it' he's going above and beyond to deliver these reeds and he didn't even go out after the game.  Bella's affected him more than the realises.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Jane,

Yeah he's in denial but she's totally under his skin.  And I think Bella knows exactly what she's doing!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lol, Edward's a tad full of himself isn't he, I think he's met his match in Bella she's not going to let him off at all, good for her.

So I'm back for more football, still not understanding it, still thinking it's like our rugby with shoulder pads and helmets, lol, still thinking it's totally hot.  It's all those glistening muscles and testosterone, hahahaha!!  Shallow?  Me?  Never.  Lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Jane,

Welcome to SC!  I'm so glad you're reading it!  This Edward is very full of himself but he's more than met his match!

Nothing wrong with glistening muscles and testosterone :)

Thanks hon!

Amy

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter. Update  soon



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Will do!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm team Rainbow all the way!
I literally fell out of my rocking chair laughing my a** off when Rainbow implemented her last tactical move of relieving her self on Riley's shoe! The family that works/attacks together stays together! Haha.
Nice to see Charlie and Edward working together not only in the sports arena but also where Bella is concerned.
The hot tub scene was all that....HOT!

Author's Response:

Haha she's pretty awesome :)  So glad you enjoyed the shoe pee!  My favorite part!  Definitely a bonded family!

Thank you!  Had fun with the hot tub!

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

what a great Chapter. Rainbow rocks xxx

Author's Response:

That she does!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: irrevocablysue3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24

This chapter is effing awesome!



Author's Response:

Haha thanks!  I had a great time with it and I'm glad you did too!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

Hi Amy!

Once again I so enjoyed reading this chapter! Even though Cockyback was having some jealous feeling concerning Riley he didn't allow it to get in the way of standing up for his girl;D Riley may still be carrying a torch for Bella but his asshole ways was uncalled for. That is not the way you treat someone you care about, his words toward Bella was not only hurtful but demeaning. I love that our qb had the perfect comeback that Riley richly deserved to hear. Riley may have been there first but Edward intended being the last one she was with;) Oh, you have me salivating about the dinner now, I wonder how Riley will handle Charlie's obvious infatuation with Edward considering what he went through to date Bella. I guess that will be the ultimate smack that may get him to back off;) Thanks for sharing and I can't wait to see if Rainbow looks after her daddy's interests at dinner;D



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, he wasn't about to let anyone mess with his girl.  Riley apparently doesn't like a bigger, badder man around his ex for sure.  Our QB did have a great comeback :)  You'll have to see how it goes with Charlie! hehe Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good chapter. Update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Will update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

Hi Amy! 

 

Just wanted to leave a few words here again! I have to reiterate how hilarious I found Charlie. You gotta love how he not only came across as an obsessed fan and a gay guy who was falling for Edward but also as an overprotective dad looking out for his daughter's virtue. 

If Cockyback ever needs to use his speed again, I am sure that all he has to do is remember the episode in the kitchen;) 

After all the fuss and misunderstandings they are finally where they belong in each other's arms. I can't wait to see what will go down between Edward and Riley at dinner;) Thanks for listening to me ramble once again and looking forward to the next update;)



Author's Response:

You're too good to me hon!  I love that he was all over poor confused Edward.  Love that he went to the gay place, of course.  The boy can't fathom anybody not wanting him. hehe

Yeah, he can run from "I do's" on the field.

They needed their time, for sure.  Had to make it happen, so he ran!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter please udpate soon



Author's Response:

Thanks, will do.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow, Charlie needs to cool his jets just a wee bit. I was even a little afraid for our Heismann Trophy winner. Lol.
Glad that Bella is a level headed girl and knows how to get what she wants. Spending the night with her guy. Way to play the messed up situation to your advantage Bella.
The heavy talk seems to get to Edward faster than Bella, or maybe she just covers it up better. If Edward sees Bella in his future there is no way she has not done the same. Just not getting her hopes up.
Rainbow rocks!

Author's Response:

Haha well Charlie had no prep time to calm about it :)  Bella does know how to get her way for sure!

I'm sure Bella would love to be in his future, I think she just doesn't let herself count on it!

Rainbow does rock!  Thanks!

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

I was so glad to the story updated I love it

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you love it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 22

My side hurts from laughing so hard!!   Freak out much Edward?  Loved it and can't wait for more! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Hah he is a natural freaker when it comes to his girl :)  Glad you had fun with it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hi Amy!

So I just wanted to say awesome update and yes I do know that I reviewed on FF but this way I get to read the chapter twice and maybe say whatever I forgot in the other review. As you know my words by now this was an awesome chapter and seeing the personal progress that Edward has made from the selfish and self serivng manwhore that he was is just incredible. Just the way he interacts with Rainbow and cares for her tells me that he will make an awesome daddy one day. 

Just gotta love Carlisle and his observation that Edward would make a facinating father one day but Edward got him back with the comment about the crazy chick at the bonfire who would have definetly being a grandpa in nine months. Both Cullen boys are spending Christmas with their girls. I can't wait to see how Charlie reacts to having Edward visiting his home. I do know that Riley is gonna be pissed and hopefully Rainbow will get a couple of swipes in too;) So anxious to read more;)



Author's Response:

Haha aren't you the best?  Thank you!  He is coming along very nicely indeed!  He will be a great dad one day!

Carlisle and Edward are so much fun together!  We'll see how i goes with Charlie and I'm sure Riley will make an appearance!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

Rainbow on the X-ray conveyor belt was so funny. I didn't know that's how animals went through security; but then again, I don't have a pocket size pet.

Even strangers smile at the lengths Edward is going through in order to see his girl for Christmas. He must be ding something right.

Hope Charlie plays with Edward just a bit, keeping him on his toes.

Author's Response:

Haha isn't she a blast?  I don't know if it's 100% accurate but I think that's what happened.

Yeah he's definitely impressing strangers with his love for his girl.

We'll see how it goes with Charlie :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: parvati92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

I am loving this story! I hope Charlie is nice to him!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  We'll see how it goes with Charlie :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh my, that boy is something else.  You just gotta love him and all his cockiness.  More changes for him to deal with.  He is soooo whipped!!  Loved the chapter, you never fail to make me laugh.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hehe that he is!  I do adore his cockiness.  Changes everywhere he turns!  Love to make you laugh!  Thanks :)  More soon!

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I will follow you anywhere you go lol I flove these two thank you I also review on ff Your mind would be an amazing place to live Lol I envy you for your brain . 



Author's Response:

Aww thank you!  This is just a back up place but I'm honored you're here too!  Thanks for reviewing both places!  My mind can be an interesting place indeed!  Love it!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Hey Amy! I actually posted a review on FF but wanted to leave some words here too;P I really do enjoy reading this story;P Edward shows us how much he has grown and changed when he tries to fight his dickish behavior when talking to Ellie. One can not blame him for reverting back to being a dick when it becomes obvious that she wants to hook up despite him having a girlfriend. It is so sad when you find that you have outgrown your highschool friends and have nothing in common anymore. I love the fact that he misses Bella so much that he decides to go to her in Washington;P I believe that whatever Bella was alluding to in her drunken state is in your one shot that was done for the compilation, will you be posting that one shot? Thanks for sharing this hilarious story with us and I am so please that your stories can be found on another site incase FF does decide to do the unthinkable and remove any of your stories;) TTYS



Author's Response:

Aww sweet of you to hit both places :)  He's definitely grown and changed but he's still him at the same time :)  He did need to bring out the inner dick for sure.  It's always weird to see how you change from the people you were once so tight with huh?

Yeah I will be posting the one shot but not until the reveal happens in Sideline :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: saasmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome dialogue!!!! I can't stop laughing.  Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  They're a lot of fun to write :)

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

dang, Bella handled that really effin well! I guess after clueless Edward thought he was allergic to her because he fell in love with her, she should be confident that he doesn't care about his past conquests. so Edward stood up for Bella & Bella stood up for Edward, awwww. so what do you have planned next for these too? can't wait to find out!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Yep, they both stood up for one another which is awesome.  We'll have to see what's planned.  Thanks for reviewing here too, hon!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm kind of ticked at Rose for messing up my images of a tasty champagne desert, ala Edward. Lol. The shower was an acceptable substitution. Hehe.
Was a bit down thinking Rose would consider retaliation against Emmett. Glad they are trudging through the murky waters of their reinstated relationship, heading for happier shores.
No words for Jasper, no words. Lol.
Wow, our understated Bella is a musical virtuoso. Something for Edward to be proud to support! Is her field of study performance music or teaching music?

Author's Response:

Haha he still had his dessert, trust me on that!

Rose wasn't retaliating, but I'd say she was definitely testing him at every turn. The talk was needed!

Jasper! hehe

No, she doesn't have a major yet but doesn't see music as a viable option for a profession from what she's said about things she's considering :)

Thanks hon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

     I absolutely LOVE this story!  The Cullens are hilarious and Jasper also!!  True stoner!  I have laughed so hard through these chapters.  Bellas gives just as good as Edward and I think they are awesome together.  Please update soon!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you love it!  They're a lot of fun to write and Jasper kills me all the time :)  Bella definitely knows how to keep her man on his toes!  Thanks so much!  More in a couple weeks!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Read this at ff - probably my favorite Edward ever!  Love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm so glad you love him! :)  He's a blast to write!

Reviewer: Galaxy69uk Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Argh I wrote a mega review and it crashed before I finished it :( I was  basically saying  I love you Edward point of views so I'm in heaven with this fic



Author's Response:

Awww so sorry to hear that!  I'm glad you like my EPOVs!  This is a fun one!

Reviewer: paola2208 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter! Love your story and I'm glad you are posting SC here!!

Cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Good to have it in a safe place for sure!  I'm glad you love it!

Reviewer: texietoo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

So happy you're here! Don't like to be left hangin'! Love SC! It's like a younger, naughtier first and ten imho. Keep it up bb!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I haven't been pulled or anything but best to have a backup plan.  It's got some First in it but this QB is way diff from that one ;) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

So glad you're here at TWCS.
You already know my thoughts on this chapter, date night. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Happy to be here!  Thanks for joining me!

Reviewer: angiebean123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Soo glad to see SC over here, I couldn't handle missing any of it!!! I can't wait for the next update xxx Angela



Author's Response:

Angela,

Yeah, I wanted to make sure it was here to be safe :)  More soon!

Thanks!

Amy

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