Date: 30 May 2018 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
I don’t care how many times I read this story (and it’s a lot) it never get tired. This is by far my favorite Edward. I also have to say Bella and jasper are my favorites too. Please keep this story up and if you decide to move on would you be willing to share the pdf. This story is everything fun. Thank you!!
Date: 09 Mar 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love these characters. Jasper is Freakin hilarious.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awww who'd have thought that Edward could be so sweet.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ha ha love Bella's phone skills, she really had him going then.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Damn that's probably the hardest Edward has ever had to work to get a girl.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love your Bella, I'm so glad she's not making it easy for Edward.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 31
I have really enjoyed this ff event he jabs at Alabama - Roll Tide!!
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
I love your story! I have never laughed soo much while reasding a story. Thank you so much for sharing! :)
Date: 07 Dec 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely lovely story that allows these characters we know and love to take on new roles, and runaway with them in the best of ways. It's a wild ride full of ups, downs, unexpectedly delightful twists and turns that will keep you on your toes, or the edge of your seat. Wonderfully written, with superb character development, and even if you're not a sports fan this story will have you cheering for the home team. 100% worth your time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed them :) Sequel is up if you're interested!
Date: 09 Nov 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
I really like Rainbow, she needs extra treats
Date: 06 Nov 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Funny chapter. He thought he was dying lol
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my, Jasper is funny in this story
Date: 16 Apr 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 31
Rainbow is the best! :-)
Date: 09 Dec 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
First I just wanted to say that this story is phenomenal! I can't get enough! Second a friend told me that there was a grand monster outtake and I was wondering if you could post it here. I haven't found it anywhere else and for some reason I can't get fanfiction.net to work. I'd really appreciate it.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 31
awesome story ;) i've read before but it's still great ;D
Date: 23 Oct 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 30
First let me say I love this story. I found one mistake that I think you should fix. Edward is graduating in after his third year. There is no way he could get a bachelor's and a master's in 3 years. He could go to school year round and get his BBA (Bachelor of Business Administration). Bella took many marine biology and music classes before deciding on marketing. If she went to school year round, she could graduate with a Bachelor degree in marketing the December after Edward graduated. Edward could work on his master's in the off season like Steve Young did his law degree.
Date: 13 Oct 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope this review goes through.. It keeps spinning and not taking my reviews.
Date: 13 Oct 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
funny.. Tanya is an air head. Hoover has so much suction she has blown out her brains. LOL
Date: 13 Oct 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Emotional Edward in the house.. I think I love you.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
he makes me wonder.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
she defended him. Yippie.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for not writing desperate Bella. I am no fan of that, at all.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Edward is so full of himself!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 14 Aug 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
looking forward to the sequel
loved this one well done
Date: 19 Feb 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved the story it was super funny and so was Rainbow I wish my cat was like that
Date: 27 Oct 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 30
OMG loved loved reading this story and looking forward to the outtakes and especially the sequel!!!
When will you start to post those? thanks
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh so cute!!!
Loved Rainbow! Her POV was awesome!
Loved hot and cocky Edward and snarky sassy Bella!
Thx!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Cute...thanks for the story
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 30
Sweet nice little wrap up
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
Cool....all is good
Date: 15 Sep 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
Way to take care of that jerk!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ed is so so weird. Charlie is a fan boy
Date: 15 Sep 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Mopey Ed and Bella
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ed is so dumb...but Bella is lucky!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my! Ed you are so clueless
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
They are sweet together
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Interesting way to meet the parents
Date: 14 Sep 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow Ed you have a ton of baggage
Date: 14 Sep 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett is so funny!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Kitties run wild! Emmett is something else!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Freaking funny as hell!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Douche bag Ed is turning sweet!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Freak they are sooo rude to each other!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
They are so evil to each other!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love Bella and her take no crap attitude!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Bella you are something else!
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome first chapter!
Date: 02 May 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hi Amy!
Rainbow certainly saved the day and firmly put Riley in his place where he belonged. Love her fascination with the STACHE and how hopeful she is in recruiting her Mom and Dad in helping her get it;) From Rainbow's thoughts to our ears, she loves her daddy more than mom;) Thanks for sharing and congratulations once again on being published;)
Date: 14 Apr 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
You sure know how to make a grin spread across my face while reading!
Rainbow is a delightful original character. Her perspective of possessiveness over daddy and mommy is too cute.
Manipulating daddy into traveling outside of the carrier was hilarious! One wonders if owners are truly in control of the precious pets. Haha
Loved the battle between The Stache bug and Rainbow. Will the battle ever be won? Rainbow hopes to reign victorious over the moving mayhem on the dad's face. Oh so funny!
Lovin the outtakes!
Author's Response:
Hahah yeah, you know that battle will continue on for sure! SO glad you had fun with it. Pets are definitely in control, at least in my world :) Thanks!
Date: 12 Apr 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 30
I glad you haven't had enough of writing Reedgirl and Cockyward because I haven't had enough reading of these two.
WooHoo, sequel! Happy dance!
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm glad you're happy for it hon! Thanks!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for a great story. It was so funny. Of course I love Edward but Jasper was hiliarious. He made me want to go and smoke a blunt. lol Oh how I miss those days.
Author's Response:
Haha Jasper was a blast to write! Glad you enjoyed him and the story! Thanks!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am excited that you are not ending, ending this story. This story will always hold a speical place in my heart. Since it was the first one I read of yours. Keep up the great work.
Sarah :)
Author's Response:
Sarah,
Awww thanks! Yeah, I'm not ready to let them go! Glad you're not either!
Amy
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Glad to hear its not the end. I really have enjoyed the story
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you've enjoyed it! Thank you :)
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 30
YES! YES! YES! You just made my night! I'm so excited for the sequel! I LOVE clueless, cocky QBward. This was a wonderful chapter. So glad he figured out those flutters. Hate to have him think he was going to "die" on draft day. LOL!!
Author's Response:
Aww glad to hear it! I'm glad you want more of him. he's so much fun! Haha he gets his flutters now! Thanks so much!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hey-
just wanted to say I love your stories and I got really excited when I read that you were writing a sequel to SC. Keep up the good work and thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and are excited for more :)
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 30
Outtakes! A sequel! Woohoo!!!!!
I loved this chapter even if the Grandmonster didn't, lol. She could sour milk at fifty paces, hahaha!! Everything's coming together for Edward and Bella. I'm so pleased for them. An engagement, that proposal was so sweet and then Edward gets to play for a fuck awesome team and doesn't have to wear brown and orange, lol. It's sad that Emmett didn't get his chance but he's not one to be bitter and I'm sure that both he and Rose will be happy with their lives. Lol, I can't believe Alice told Jasper it was time to propose and had even picked and reserved her own ring at the jewellers, *snort* does she have to tell him to do everything?
I'm looking forward to the outtakes.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Jane,
Thanks so much! Glad you're excited for it!
They're definitely moving ahead nicely. No brown and orange thank God! Em's doing well and he and Rose will be okay. Haha Alice likes things HER way and it works out for her ;)
See you soon with more!
Amy
Date: 25 Nov 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
I can not btell you how much I loved this story. I just loved this Edward and Bella. Thanks for the ride. xx
Author's Response:
Thank you! They're so much fun! I'm glad you loved it!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! Since chapter one, your story was sexy and funny, a pleasure to read!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it! Thank you :) Glad to hear that!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
Woo Hoo!!! Another wonderful story!!!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) Glad you liked it!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 30
So excited for a sequel! I love these guys!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're excited for it! Love them too! Not ready to say goodbye :) Thanks!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am so happy that there will be a sequel! I am crazy about this story and was getting very sad that is was going to end soon! You made my day.
Author's Response:
Aww glad to hear that! Yeah I'm not ready to say goodbye to these two, they're too much fun. Plus Rainbow of course :) Thanks so much!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
God, Edward's such a big head, but we love him anyway, lol. I'm so happy that Bella stood up to the Grandmonster (great name) and told her what's what. I can't believe that she actually offered her money to leave Edward. I really don't know how Esme's kept her hands to herself all these years, lol.
I'm really glad that Rose talked to Edard and that they've called a truce, things would have been seriously awkward otherwise. It's so sad that we're nearly at the end story.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Haha he'll never lose that big head of his! Bella and Edward took care of business, for sure. Esme loved hearing that, I've no doubt!
Rose and Edward are at peace, now, which is much needed!
Ahh keep your eyes on my ANs, some news coming :) Thanks!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thank God for Jasper and Bob the bear, lol, I'd love to see the pictures of Edward cuddling up with Bob, hahaha!
I'm so glad that Jasper helped Edward see that his relationship with Bella is worth keeping and all that really matters is he loves her. She's changed him for the better and he sees that now and actually agrees.
Woohoo!! They won the Championship, much celebrating ahead in all its forms, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Hah those pics would probably get some good money!
Jasper had a great moment of clarity there :) Edward needed to hear that!
Win! Yay! Thanks!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
Lol, it was pretty underhand but sometimes a girl has to do what a girl has to do and let's face it Bella was right, partly, Edward would never notice her in her band uniform but we'll never know if he would have noticed her a different way, if she would have naturally appeared on his radar.........yeah, probably not. Bella would've had to have engineered a different kind of accidental meeting and so again I ask, how many women women out there have met their other half by plotting and planning? Sometimes you have to show a man what's right in front of his nose. Lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Yeah, he probably wouldn't have. She'd tried to get his attention before and failed it. Nothing wrong with taking things in your own hands, methinks :) Thanks, Jane!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 29
good. glad he put grandmonster in her place. sad this is winding up. going to miss another quaterback e :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, we're getting there but more fun to come and keep an eye on my ANs :) You might like what I have to say!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edward was so smooth at slipping in his dreams of Bella being at his side for all his future accomplishments.
Of course Esme would be more excited about his romantic gesture than his prowess on the field. Lol. Carlisle has this even keel approach to everything his family accomplishes. Beaming with silent pride.
Emmett gets shown up once again. These boys really do believe in the saying.....go big or go home.
Glad the family is knitting itself tightly together to weather anything the 'Grandbitch' throws their way.
Author's Response:
Haha yeah one night away from her and he's decided he wants no more of that noise :)
HAHAH Wasn't Esme funny? Oh yeah, nice game, don't care, hehe. Carlisle is definitely the quieter of the bunch!
Poor Em, he'll have to bring it when he proposes I suppose!
All is well and Grandmonster is not gonna be their problem anymore :) Thanks!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 29
I absolutely loved this chapter! so glad they got to have make up sex, took care of the grandmonster, and Rose made up with Edward... love it love it love it... ready for the next two chapters...
Author's Response:
Thank you! They went through a lot in this one but all is finally well :) More to come :)
Date: 09 Nov 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
I just love how he sees as much awesomeness in her as he sees in himself.
Author's Response:
That he does! He sees her and he's wowed by her :) Thanks!
Date: 09 Nov 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
How many women have plotted, planned and engineered a meeting with the object of their desire and gone on to have very successful relationships with that person? I should imagine it's more that we can count. I know that it's now become a whole issue of trust now that Bella has been discovered in her lie. Had she confessed to having planned their meeting right from the beginning then it wouldn't have been an issue but, as Bella pointed out, Edward would likely have walked away because he would have seen her as a player and it's not acceptable for him to be played, after all, he's the player. Edward had to have time to get to know Bella on a more personal level and now that he does he's fallen in love with her.
So, I guess what Edward needs to think about is whether the way Bella got them together with a little white lie, is now too big to overcome for him? Being so new to relationships has this destroyed all his faith in what he was beginning to trust? What it boils down to is whether Edward can forgive this lie and trust Bella again or not.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Jane,
Oh yeah, she's not the first and she certainly won't be the last. He needs a little time to wrap his mind around what was real, what wasn't and how he feels about it all. She's definitely right, though, had he found out too early that she'd played him, he would have walked away without another thought. He has to decide if the love is enough.
Yep, much to think about. Read on and see what he decides! Thanks so much!
Amy
Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Early New Year celebrations, I can't believe that Alice had a recording, lol. Everything's going so well for them all and Jasper's going to be giving up weed, I wonder how he'll cope with all that reality, lol. It's a shame they'll be apart for the real New Year but then they do have a hot phone date planned.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Haha that they do! Yeah, Alice is a good planner I think (look how she got Jasper after all) so she made it all work out :)
Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
I don't know how many times I laughed out loud while reading this chapter....so funny!
Author's Response:
Ahh thank you! I have a blast with these guys and glad you are too!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
good
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
Very much enjoyed skimming through chapters 25-28 again. Now TWCS is caught up to FFN.net, yay!
Looking forward to their victory celebration and a potential verbal smack down of the grandbitch.
Author's Response:
Yep, we're all caught up with a new chapter coming soon :) Thanks!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I thought u had completly abandoned this story!!! I had completly given up on this story. Please UPDATE more regularly at leat 1x a week would be gerat!!!
Author's Response:
I will never abandon my stories. This site wasn't letting me upload. It's over at FF as well. I don't update weekly, but every other. Thank you!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
what a treat i have missed Reed Girl and Edward
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed them!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh I liked how her mind works... she was right of course.. she keeps him on his toes for sure!
Author's Response:
Haha yeah she's definitely got an understanding of that man :) Thanks!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such a lovable possessive dick! Lmfao
Author's Response:
He is indeed! She's already "his" Thanks!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a fucking awesome story first chapter read and I already rec'd it. Edward is an asshat that must be loved too cute and hot man.
Author's Response:
Haha he is definitely that! So glad you enjoyed him! Thanks for reccing it!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, I like all your stories i'm spoiled though i read all your completed stories and i loved them i couldnt put them down (so to speak) and the only complaint i have with this one is that i wish i would have waited to start reading until you were finished with it. Its really good but waiting for updates is killing me. Whatever you need to start that creative brain working on this story again i hope you get it soon cause i cant wait to see where these characters are going to go. You're awesome. Now quit reading this review and write more chapters! ugh! lol jk. not really ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy them. I don't make you wait that long! This one a little longer than most but I've been sick and I'm moving and working on my book so lots going on! Thanks!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hi Amy!
Awesome update and I must apologize for reviewing so late;( Reading this once again on this site just allowed me to howl with laughter till the tears ran;) Thanks for brightening my day with a good laugh;D
This chapter should have come with a warning that random laughter was ahead;)
Loved Christmas morning with Bella and Edward exchanging gifts first and than going to Charlie's and doing it there too. I love that Edward and Charlie have found something to bond over without Edward stressing so much about Charlie's intentions.
OMG! I love Rainbow, who has taken an instant disliking to Riley and made it very clear too. Their little family have taken care of Riley with lots of help from Rainbow;D Rainbow certainly needs a medal of honor for defending her family to the best of her ability;P Can't wait for the next installment;)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you had a godo time with it hon! Love to make you laugh til you cry!
They had a great Xmas all in all, once they dispatched of the idiot. hehe Rainbow took care of business and Mom and Dad cleaned up the mess :)
Thanks hon!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bwhahahahaha!! Riley got his, about time to. Rainbow is a complete star and nobody better mess with Edward and Bella, lol.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter now I'm all caught up.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Haha he sure did! Rainbow protects her family for sure! So glad you enjoyed it! New chapter soon. New First outtake sooner ;) Thanks!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
What a total prick Riley is. Is he trying to goad Edward into hitting him? He's know what it would cost Edward if he did that and Riley is the sort to run off and tell everyone. In some twisted way he probably thinks that Bella would feel really sorry for him and come back to him. I hope Rainbow really goes for him, lol.
Don't you just love Edward's ego, it just never gets deflated at all, hahahaha!!
Jane x
Author's Response:
I'd say that Riley is definitely trying to get him to bring it. We'll have to see what Rainbow thinks of all of this!
No, my boy is always cocky, even when he's insecure! hehe
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Lol, oh my God, Edward was out of Bella's house almost as fast as a bullet out of a gun. Good job Charlie's a little bit in love with Edward. I loved how he slipped and said he wanted to show Edward off, hahaha!! Edward should bask in his fanboying whilst he can.
I'm glad they talked and got the marriage thing sorted out. At least, in Edward's head, he knows he's not totally opposed to getting married.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Haha yeah Edward wasn't expecting that level of love from Dad and went flying when he started hearing wedding bells! Of course B knows her man and made him listen to reason!