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Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 1:47 AM Title: Epilogue

I thought Renee should discover Billy Black as her true mate.  thanks

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:45 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for this one....a lovely fast paced romp!

Great work as ever! T

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:38 AM Title: Epilogue

Awesome story thanks so much for sharing it with us ;)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 2:15 AM Title: Epilogue

great epi, loved to see Renee take charge like that. see you next story or on FB :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  Thank you!  Back soon :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:43 PM Title: Epilogue

good. challenging yourself worked out well ;)

looking forward to the sequel

wondering how you see em/rose in the future



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it! 

 

I see Rose living her life and dying the way she wants to.  Em will be nearby but leave her to it as she wished.  Marcus can help guide him through dealing with his loss.

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

The dress was gorgeous! Bella was great! Good thing we didn't lose any on our side!

Author's Response:

Wasn't it??  She did good!  Too powerful :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

good chapter.

over so soon ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Just a small snippet of endless lives :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 17

famous last words Heidi.....ok bat shit crazy pseudo mother of Edward, time to drink some Xanax laced blood and go line up for the wedding (freaking loopy hag)

Author's Response:

Hahah Sounds about right :)  Thanks hon!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Author's Response:

:) Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

Will he spare Marcus?

Author's Response:

We shall see!  Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 15

ok, Aro's wife is freaking creepy in her wonky adoration of Edward...just no...lol.

Author's Response:

Haha she is creepy, isn't she?  Such fun!  Thanks :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

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:) Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

good



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

Ok, I'm pumped up for this fight now!!!! Bella is going to hand them their asses!! Hopefully she can learn Chelsea's talent and break the bonds.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're excited!  Should be fun!  Thanks :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

El would have blown their plan, he had to go. strategy time!

Author's Response:

You got that right!  Strategy happening :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

good



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

Now that is a true mate ;) loved seeing a glimpse of Edward's past

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

:( my heart broke for him. .. at least Jasper can help a little.

Author's Response:

Yeah it was a tough one!  Jasper did help.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

what a bitter piece of crap Charlie is! Edward, find another loophole! or he could just send Jasper and Emmett to Forks.....js

Author's Response:

Haha I think she covered that loophole earlier with Jacob ;)  But he'd like to!  Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

quick thinking on Bella's part. I just wanna hug Emmett, he's such a mush...lol.

Author's Response:

He is that!  Bella's a perfect match for Edward for sure :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Author's Response:

Thanks hon!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 8

Such a charmer...lol. that will be hilarious when Jacob finds out about the upgrades, can't wait!

Author's Response:

Haha yeah I can't imagine he'll be too pleased!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for finnaly updating this stort at long last..I would love if u would update more regularly & not wait so long between update please. But this was a sight for soar eyes to see u finnaly update. I truely enjoy reading ur stories. I hope to see an update again sooooooooooooooon!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm updating daily as the note said :) Story is complete and will be posted chapter per day until it's done!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

now Demetri needs to keep the conversation shielded from Aro.

Author's Response:

Yep, Demetri knows just how to do that :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

i like this Billy :) good he gave them a little lead

Author's Response:

Yeah this is a great Billy :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

please update

 



Author's Response:

I did!  Been awhile but it's all written now!

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

hope you update soon!! love the story... can't believe her mom is a vampire



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you wanted more, sorry it's taken so long but it's all written and more to come!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

This truely is a very captivating & intriguing story & I absolutly love,love it very much so!!! This story is truely very different from so many other stories out there!!! This a very beautifully well wrtitten story with an amazing plot development story line!! Please don't wait so long to update pleasssssssssse!!!! I am giving this a 10 star rating!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you love it and I'm sorry for the wait!  But it's all coming out at once so you won't have to wait any longer!

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love the story!!! I hope you update soon, I can wait to see how Charlie will react and what will happen next..

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Forgot to ask in my FFN review.....
When do Emmett and Jasper meet Rose and Alice?

Author's Response:

Time will tell :)  It will be addressed, I promise, though maybe not in the way we think it will :)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interestimg chapter!  I love this story.  Thank you.  I always gravitate to the vampward stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's fun to write the vamps again :)  Been a long time!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love the banner for this story!
This image of Bella reminds me of an add campaign using Elizabeth Hurley. Minus the red eyes of course. Haha.

On FFN I inundated you with literally a dozen questions. So here I'll just say......WooHoo, another story by my favorite author!
This is so different from your sports writing yet has captured my curiosity from the very first chapter when it was a contest entry piece.
Looking forward to more twists and turns, taking me on a mind bending journey. No pressure. Haha.

Love it so far!

Kristi

Author's Response:

Kristi,

Thank you!  It's an awesome banner by Jaime Arkin. 

Well I'm glad you like the different, it is fun to try something new :)  HEHE No pressure indeed!

Thanks again hon!

Amy

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

great start..

 

Charlie will have to understand or be left behind. You can not pick your children's spouses it does not work. They know their own hearts. Heck mine would not even let me pick their clothes.



Author's Response:

Haha yeah that's for sure, but of course it hurts not to have parental approval :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

well good first chapter..  At least we will be over this hump. No I can't change you business.



Author's Response:

Hah definitely no dilly dallying on that front!  Thanks!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

yes I'm so glad that this story will continue.  Will you kill Jake and charlie off or or will have bella scare them.  That would be funny.  Can't wait to read more and you can read mine if you like.

 

Jukie

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow I have just finished reading sideline, and I loved it, I have read other stories of yours you are a fantastic writer, I saw this story and had to read it so I hope you do expand on I can't wait to see what talents Bella may have.



Author's Response:

Expanded!  I'm so glad you want more :)

Reviewer: RoseE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just love this story and really hope that you're still considering turning it into a multi-chapter fic. 

You're such a good writer. You always infuse your stories with great details, deep feelings and amazingly sexy and appealing characters. 

I especially enjoyed this Edward. He's so powerful. He knows what he wants and gets it. He can read Bella's mind! What can that mean for when she's changed? 

Anyway, I'm so happy to have found you here. I'm one of the many who have decreased traffic at FFn in favor of a more comfortable, less restrictive reading environment. (I don't consort with book burners.) I appreciate your presence here.

Thank you again. ~RoseE. xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Yeah, I am planning on expanding it when Sideline wraps up!  No time to write a bunch of stories at once anymore, but it is next in line!

This Edward is very powerful and sexy :)  We'll have to see how it goes for when she awakens ;)

Thank you!  Glad to be here as a safety net!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I forgot about this story. I hope you are still considering this to be a multiple chapter story.
I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

I am indeed, but it'll wait until after Sideline.  Only going to concentrate on one at a time while I write my novel :)

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

So, I could not let one of my favorite stories not have a review..... Love. Love . Love, this story... Can't wait until you continue...... Thank you..... Wendy

Author's Response:

Haha thank you so much hon!  I do appreciate it!  Was kind of sad seeing those zeroes even tho I know most of you have read it already!

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