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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

The mommy and daddy together thing was so sweet, I doubt I could have resisted either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

Pretty savvy little girl they made between them! She knows just how to work the crowd! Edward seems to be correct, Bella is a bit strange, but I really like her anyway!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm learning to read and laugh at the same time, this is hilarious! Edward  is going to have to get a filter installed between his brain and his mouth, or Bella is going to do him harm!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is full-out crazy, and I really love it! Oh what a tangled web we weave, and Bella really hadn't planned to deceive anyone. It just seems to have worked out that way!

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

I enjoyed this sweet funny story.  Thanks for sharing.

~LL

Reviewer: marini03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

8D That was SO CUTE! I LOVE Daddyward! They're just so adorable together! And I would LOVE if there were a sequel! Then we could see how crazy their life is or what shananigans their kids are getting into. LOL. And now, I'm going to read My Master of Darkness since that's the only thing left of yours for me to read for today... HAHAHA

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

Hilarious to the end.   TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

ROFL for breast milk   TOO funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

lol for liz and smelliness.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

ROFL for lizzy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

ROFL for hidden baby C.    You are hilarious lady!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

lol for thanksgiving and messing with Em.    Uh oh   Eddie will be traumatized for life.  hee hee

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

LOL for Ms blue clit and Mr blue balls.    Orgy...haha

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

lol for bribing Lizzy.   aww for new family renting her house and store help

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

YEY  one of each.   Lizzy is funny.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 11

hee hee for B ratting out E to the 'rents.   Ever hear of a maid service B?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

Esme is diabolical.   Aww for babies moving

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

OMG  you are killing me.  Stoned....Humping...Big mouth Em....aww for sick Liz.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

omg  for sick e, Dr and sex talk, and stoned 'rents

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

E is an idiot for a doctor.    Too funny.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

ROFL  Charlie.....caterpillar..... twilight.     I gotta pee.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

ROFL  Twins......Serves them right.    OMG  Em is hilarious.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella is a meanie.   E is funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

you are too funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOL  Eddie is hilarious.   Surprised she decided on another one.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG  This is too funny for words

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

I read the one-shot on Fanfiction but since you did say you had some of your stories on TWCS, I thought I'd look for the rest in here.  Glad to find it and I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Thanks.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thinking of my brother-in-law sticking his filthy paws in my business as I give birth is enough to make me projectile vomit. Switching doctors PRONTO is a good idea, Bella. How could her man tolerate his own brother knowing everything about her privates? Gross.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

If I remember correctly Bella was ready to kill more than the nurse the first time.

Triplets five punds each poor Bella. No wonder she went early.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

You know what I find funny. They tell you to drink all that water. But at my first UltraSound with my first born the tech. told me it wasn't neccssary to drink all that water. A half bladder would do. I did that for my second and third and the tech never noticed the difference.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

How can Em be a OB/GYN and make a comment like the pain isn't that bad and still be alive? Where is ROse to smack him on the head when you need her too. lol.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved this story. Emmett as an ob/gym is one of my favorite characters. I really liked the longer chapters too. I really have a hard time with the drabbles.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved the story, I think it's perfect as it is, but wouldn't object if you decided to wrote a sequel...

Thank you for writing!

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Awesome in its unusualness!

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved the story! Truley an awesome read.

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

Told ye I was gona read all your storys lol I loved this one my stomach hurts from laughing so much xx

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is seriously some of the funniest shit I've ever read - this whole story so far!  HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dizzym Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 20

I must say it was wonderful full of  fluff story.  A feel good story. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Awww...thanks for the read, it was a wonderful story :)

Natalia

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow 3…and I love their names!

Reviewer: xodani Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 20

SEQUEL PLEASE! It would be so awesome to see a sequel set in the future where the children are a bit more grown up! Please consider!!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for a nice quick read for this evening! I enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 20

OKAY OKAY I MUST SAY..... this is the best fucking edward babydaddy bella babymama story ive ever read... and let me tell you ive read many and this is by far the best and funniest one i've ever read.

i love it and i dont think you need a sequel i think you ended it just nicely.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

We get horny sex god Edward who takes what he wants and then sweet romantic Edward that wants to propose nice combo.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 18

Lizzie does not like that daddy is learning to say no. I love it.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

I like that last part so since I got a extra sister can I have a kitten always the opportunist.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

No wonder she had gain so much weight exciting.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well they say sex can bring on labor.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

Finally it was just perfect timing there. Seven minutes that is funny she timed it. He was about to explode if they did not do it soon.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

He is just a nervous daddy. Maybe they can get busy christening this new house.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love how Emmett pouted about still being bella's doctor. Lizzie is cute about if she has to have a brother she needs a dog.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

I thought they got a new doctor. But I am glad he is there much needed comic relief with his slip about the sperm bank I can just imagine how he told them about it.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

He is the perfect baby daddy. So romantic. Esme is crazy.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

That is just too funny. He wants at least one the natural way.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yay they can have sex. Really her mom got his parents buzzed lol.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

Why do guy think that. Do they understand they would need a curvy 19 in. penis to accomplish that. He was aroused by thinking about sharing a bedroom how cute is he.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like Charlie he is funny. Poor Edward getting head butted in the crotch.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

Twins wow!!! I love Emmett he is so funny. Possessive Bella is fun.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh how cute. Mommy and daddy sleep in the same bed duh. She is just the cutesy little thing.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

The constant peeing is never fun. Edward was cute cuddling with his little girl. Her losing her towel was great gave Edward quite the show. I love Jasper and Alice they are adorable.

Reviewer: cecye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

Really good story.

Thank you

Reviewer: cecye Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

triplets!!!!! Well done, and he wants to put one on her too.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ok she is scary when she is hormonal. Poor thing getting kicked and threatened. He does not even get sex out of the deal.

Reviewer: cecye Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Now, I have some questions.

How did she get pregnant with Edward´s baby again? Was she ok with frozen sperms now or did Edward keep donnating?

Poor Edward he sounds like a geek.

I like your story.

Reviewer: vampiregirl1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

SUCH A CUTE STORY!!! TY BB ! 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Huh? Oh my gosh that is just priceless.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

LOVED THIS!! :) Such a great story!!

-Kate

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

I think you should show them with the kids a lil older. I would like to see if they had another boy or did she always end up knocked up or did someone get tied or cut. he heh  I loved and laughed so hard I cried. I will say that I always love your stories. I am from ff under queen cullen0527. Fellow follower.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

Very cute!

Reviewer: TWILOVER360 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

I Loved this story hard, I would be a very happy gal if there was a sequel, I NEED more like nowwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: pjlittlefoot Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

i loved this story!

Reviewer: kavelf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20

Extend or Sequel.   Yes please.   Love this story.   It was so what I was needing to read.    Very funny.   Very light.   Thanks so much.

Reviewer: kavelf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Cute.   There is a balance of power between estrogen and testosterone.   Thanks again.

Reviewer: kavelf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

Cute.   They should have gotten the 7 bedroom house.   Now there are no spare rooms for more children AND company.  :o)

Darn good thing she met up with him at the beginning of the story.   She needs all the back up grandma and grandpas aunts and uncles she can get.  

Love your story, very, very much.   Thanks for the words.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 20

It's possible that I am suffering from sleep depravation so ignore my earlier review. Great story. Loved it...

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

So I'm confused, when did they get married?? Bella was 27 weeks in chapter 12, but here you said she was 24, how far along was she?? I guess I'll just keep reading....lol!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

this deserves more reviews

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved this story!!!!  Serously I laughed so hard at times, it was great!

 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh my - I had forgotten just how much fun this first chapter was!  I really hope that you are going to expand this story and do a sequel - I loved it!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

This one made my day! :-)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

It was brilliant, funny and so well put together. It made me laugh and cry with laughter. I iove the characters you have created. Sequel please.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

thats a nice way to propose, intimate.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Sweet...like Jaspers comment.

Reviewer: BE1965 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh yes,,,a sequel would be very nice!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

Perfect chapter...loved the kitten line.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

It had to be...hahahahaha...lovely

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

Isn't life just wonderful...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

Nice one...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

Nervous father...he is fun.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh!oh! Trouble afoot...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

Nice cliffy, it would be Em wouldn't it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

AWWWW...beautiful

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

Yea Edward, good on ya boy...way to propose or what ever, such fun.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

OK...back to the laughing, hahahahahahahaha

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

Last line was great...nice to have a chance to catch my breath...hope there is more funny coming up.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hahahahahahahahaahahaha, God I can't stop laughing, Hahahaahaha, tears of laughter now...just love it.

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