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Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: wolfpack15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 35

loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

So that is how Edward knew the color of her dress the night of the charity ball. I was wondering how he knew what color necklace to send her. 

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have truly enjoyed reading it. I are a really good writer. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 34

Lol!!!!!!!!!!! What will Edward do now. I  loving these outtakes. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 33

I live it when they have "play" time.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 32

Wow!!!!!!!! Love how you wrote this chapter. You covered lots of ground with it. Great job. 3 kids in 2 years. They definitely have their hands full. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 31

They are perfect! !!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 30

Things are really falling into place for them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 29

Perfect wedding! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

Perfect! !!!!! I laugh at Edward being such a coward with her. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 27

Edward is so sweet doing everything.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

I just knew they were going to get caught there at the end. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Glad Bella is not the jealous type. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

PERFECT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love their  desk sex!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

I can't believe that she threwa pillow at him but at least it was something soft. Lol. When they finally do get to have sex again it could get dangerous for them, lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow, they both have been through a lot in one week, especially emotionally.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

Glad that Bella was ok. I hate that Alice found out about Bella's surgery the way she did. I guess Bella is not going to be getting her birthday sex or any sex for a while.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMGosh! Perfect! ! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

II can't wait for them to get into the playroom. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

I hate that Bella has to go through what she does with her mom. That is so sad. Now maybe Alice will cut Edward some slack. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love how you fill each chapter with so much information.  I love how their relationship is progressing. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

So have they watched porn yet? They are having such a good time together.  When Edward took her in the hood of the car I was afraid that Edward's parents would walk in on them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love Peter and Charlotte! !!!!!!! Why in the world does Edward want to watch port for? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love how open and honest they are with each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 11

What is Alice's deal? Hormones?????? She needs to support her friend. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow,  lots and lots of information in this chapter.  Poor Bella.  So she really can't have children.  I just thought  she had made the decision to not have them but she made sure she would not have any. That is so sad. But I understand why she would be scared.  Edward is so understanding. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Phil.  I am assuming that Bella's mom has more than postpartum depression. I am thinking she had a mental breakdown. Glad Edward came to check on Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMGOSH! ! ! ! ! ! ! !  Lol. Loved the end of this chapter. Heck , what am I saying,  I am loving the whole story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow,  lots of stuff going on in this chapter.  I am thinking that Bella's mom suffered really bad from postpartum depression. And Bella is afraid that the same thing will happen to her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

Lol, love Alice!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder what Edwardthinks of Bella's interactions with James.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

How did he know that Bella was wearing green?  Love Alice and her intervention. Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

Glad he had someone to talk to.  Can't wait for them to really meet.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Jasper and Alice.  Glad Bella tried to set them straight.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

The concept of the club is very different.  Thanks for the background on the girls. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting.  Can't wait to read more. Glad I found this story. 

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

loved this

Reviewer: countrygirl2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

love

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

Aw, so sweet they are.

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 30

I would have told the shower attendees a larger size as she will outgrow everything quickly once she starts eating well.

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

I dont know about a 15 yr old. That might be a shock to all involved.

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

What a chicken he was at the very end. Though I didnt really think the playroom was the right place anyway.

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

Finally they meet!

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

Not setting a very good stage for Ed's appearance.

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

Stalkerward just cant help himself!

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

Not so sure about his changing, especially in the heat of the moment.

Reviewer: MexLadybug Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

Almost spit out my spaghetti when I read the last line!

Reviewer: kaylade22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 35

I have ABSOLUTELY LOVED your story.

It has had me on pins & needles, to LMAO.....especially her & the DVD's in the

adult sex store.

That so would have been me....LOL !!!!!

 

Thanks muches for sharing your story with me.

 

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)

jdcm0630@yahoo.com

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 29

perfect

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

this is so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

this is totally awesome and no I am not 15 but actually 58 but  the expression fits

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

cant wait

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Humm are you going to spill Ed?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

You go Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor rose :(. Poor max :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

Alice is hillareous!  Ed you are being too mysterious 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Bella:(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh Ed.. Bella doesn't want what you do

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

Busy life!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

You go Bella!  

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

love the story

love all your stories

thank you

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

hot damn edward you go with your bad self

 

i want an edward

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

love it

glad they where honest with each other and it is pretty much all on the line

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

hell of a chapter

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

love it

i love the way bella is with james , she takes the time to make sure he is enjoying himself

she finally got somewhere with her mystery man. it will move along

 

love it

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Nice save by Edward

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

How come is so often with Edward lifestyle so fast. I would have to thinkl alot according to it instead being so open

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

WOW

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, to bad she didn't watch the porn, could have been interesting to read. Great never the less. 

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh, holy night!! Watch porn with him? Hell yes!! Love it.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 10

Alright...now we are getting somewhere. Until the monkey wrench falls from the sky. LOL I like this story can't wait for more.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

Finally, a little sit down. Maybe they will get somewhere now.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Aah, man she finally figured out who he was. Emmett will definitely need some ice.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

She still doesn't know that it's Edward. Wow.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

So close, yet so far away. Glad they had a moment together in the dark. I wonder if she will go out with him or if she will stall.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

He should have talked to her, he had a chance with James talking to her. Oh, well...can't wait to see what happens at the party.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

I hate that he is thinking of changing for her, I wonder if this is necessary? Good story so far.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Like the concept of the club, however, how did Emmett and Edward know where the girls where. I imagined them wearing infared goggles. LOL Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: carolinacullen2012 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

This looks to be a promising story. I understand the comments about a bad review on other site, had a few of my own.

Thanks for putting them here for us all to read and enjoy.

Reviewer: mirveil Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 35

a lovely story and what a beautiful E...

Reviewer: RainbowCupcakes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

Kay so, 30 chapters ago, I told myself I was going to stop and work on my term paper. 30 chapters (and many tears) later, and I have about 40 words wrote on my term paper, which is due in about 15 hours, and in 4 I plan on sleeping, so yeah, might as well finish the story so I'm not tempted to start reading it again and then write about 1450 more words on my term paper! lol 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm so glad that Charlie saw how happy Edward makes Bella that he is not giving them any pain. Thank you for that.  Slao glad that Alice is backing a bit even if I personally think that she. Did not deserve an explanation

makes sense that Bella want to be blindfolded in the playroom. I see some sexy times ahead.

more tomorrow, it's one o'clock am over here 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

I cant even beging to imagine how hard it must be to hear your own mother tell you such hurtful thing, regardless that she is mentally ill.

my heart went out to Bella's this chapter

kudos for Edward, for being supportive 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

James is so innocent and lovely that is impossible not to love him.

perharps Rose has to kick Alice's arse a bit stronger, obviously she did not get the message. Doesn't she know that she is stealing a bit of happiness from Bella? She already has 2 kids, there no need to play mama bear towards Bella.  She is a Big girl 

edward as usual is incredibly charming and understanding 

more tomorrow

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

So it seems that Bella is giving into her kinky self, goog for her.

i think these two will be just fine balancing both relationships

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

Holly shit! The ending was hot as hell.

seems Peter was able to push Edward into the right direction

 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

They are lovely together.  I'm so glad that they feel so comfortable already with each other. They truly belong ttogether

now Bella need to fix thing with Alice pronto!

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

Why can Alice be happy for her? I guess we can no longer blame her hormones

edward is simply perfect in this fic.  

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

Lovely chapter.  Hearing about Bella's background was a bit hard but necessary.  No wonder she is so afraid to get pregnant.  Edward was such a sweetheart thought the conversation.  Glad to see thing are moving along

 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

What a lovely chapter! Bella's hitting Emmet was awesome but her running away was a bit infuriating.  Love that Edward came to her. I'm so ready for "the talk"

I'm not certain what the problem with her mother, but I'm guessing it a hereditary problem and that's what is frightening Bella

When she said she could not have Children, was she telling the truth? Or rather that she won't have them?

Hope you bring some light into her mothers issue soon

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella, so it's not that she doesn't want to have children, but that she is convinced they will turn out like his brother? 

this is getting more complicated by the moment, and now Rose could be pregnant!

Edward will need all the luck to change Bella's mind

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Very sensual meeting! And now they have a date.

hope that Edward is not 100% honest with Bella, perhaps wait till the second date to tell her about the wedding and children part.

...so Alice achieved her goal! Good for her but the timing was terrible

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