Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:55 AM Title: 11. Jubilee
ok so they want to abanden their 5 year old? i think that you want to make a bella and edward based story but perhapse you should of placed this story a little more in the future and then their getaway would of been more resonable.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:22 AM Title: 6. Revelations
this chapter gave me a feeling that carlisle uses edward a lot more than any one else in the family, that he has edward to pose and listen and that if he wernt that he would have to be gone. I also got the feeling that they were trying to control bella and edward theough nessie. Im not sure that in continuring the twilight saga that this would be true but i will read more to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 6:23 AM Title: 25. A new order
This has been a ...FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC story !!!!!
I would almost like to see more with the Hunter helping the Cullens...would
make a great sequel.
Thanks muches for sharing your WONDERFUL story with me.....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:51 PM Title: 25. A new order
any chance of a sequel for this great story?
Date: 29 Sep 2011 6:59 PM Title: 22. Waiting for Absolution
Carlisle better make it out safely ... that's all I'm saying ... lol
Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:41 PM Title: 18. Flight
Bella better not be thinking of saving the Hunter by herself, he really needs to be destroyed!
Date: 21 Sep 2011 8:06 PM Title: 1. Meeting
This was exciting and had an interesting plot. There were a lot of loose ends leftoever. I agree with the other calls for a sequel. Please!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:45 AM Title: 25. A new order
I've read this already on FFN, so this is like my third reading...? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE consider a sequel?! :-D
Date: 15 Jun 2010 5:17 AM Title: 25. A new order
I read ths story straight through. I was on the edge of my seat for most of it. It was so good.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 7:36 PM Title: 25. A new order
That was the most exciting story I've read for years! I could not put it down. My husband and kids have been horribly ignored because I simply did not have the willpower to stop reading this!
Thank you for taking the time to share such an amazing story.
Your newly devoted fan,
Cindy
Author's Response:
Thank you, I enjoyed writing it very much.
Ria
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 2:21 PM Title: 25. A new order
Well done!!! I wish I knew what relationship Hudson had with them at the end of the story, though. Last I heard he was still going to destroy them. Epilogue maybe?
Thanks for the great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
I have to confess, the epilogue is written, but I will not be sharing it at this time. It gives more questions than answers, and leads into the sequel, which I don't currently have the inclination to write.
To answer your question, the epilogue opens a year or so later, with Bella, Edward, Jasper and Hudson dealing with a band of newborn vampires who've been causing problems...
Ria
Date: 18 May 2010 2:07 AM Title: 25. A new order
Bravo!!! Great story and I agree, a much more satisfying ending then Breaking Dawn.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:40 AM Title: 25. A new order
What a creative wonderful story! In all that I have read, this went in a direction that I have not seen that really captured the essence of how I also felt about the true destiny of this band of vampires. I agree that Breaking Dawn went a little wierd for me. This was incredible!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:18 PM Title: 25. A new order
This was a brilliant story and well written BRAVO!!!
I cried when Rose was killed (and I had never really liked her), I cried at the end for what the Cullens had to give up and what they will do in the future!!
You have a truly amazing gift to increase the emotional depth of these beloved characters, to create physical and emotional environments that pull you in because they are so vivid.
I hope you will consider a sequel, I would love to know what happens with the Hunter and the New World Order, you have just taken us beyond Breaking Dawn and there are so many new questions to be answered.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed it.
This story is what originally got me into fanfiction, because I was so annoyed by BD after loving the first three books in the saga. I was disappointed that everything fell so easily into place, without any cost to Bella, after having three books of angst over what a terrible thing it was to be a vampire...
You will see a little more in the epilogue, when I finally pull my finger out and finish it. A lot has changed in the Cullen's lives when we next catch up with them!
Ria
PS - I do try and catch the Brit-isms, but in a way I like that you can still tell I'm English ;).
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:43 PM Title: 19. Escape
Great chapter!! But hell Bella and Edward separated is never a good thing, looking firward to the rest of the chapters.
I don't ususaly check authors profiles until after I read a story but with you using terms like boot and bonnet I had to slake my curiosity confirm that you were from the British Isles.
Love this story well writtent and I especailly like the depth of the characters Bella and Edwards realtionship has so obviously grown they have changed each other and matured. Love it!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:15 PM Title: 18. Flight
I really am enjoying this story, and love the original plot, this Hunter is one very scary person!!
But just one small thing we don't call our provincial highways interstates in Canada.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:17 PM Title: 7. Living the Lie
Really a BRILLIANT story, it has me caught up in this new owrld you have created for the Cullens, the tension is palpable and the emotions are so vivid!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: 4. Wendle
Great 4 chapters I just started reading this story today ad you have really engaged my attention. Looking forward to reading further
Author's Response:
I hope you like it...
Ria
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:51 AM Title: 25. A new order
they are going to need to be careful ... a law unto themselves ... kind of scary
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:16 AM Title: 25. A new order
Loved it maybe you could write a sequal update when you can so sad its over
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: 25. A new order
Im so sad to see this over...but i cant wait to see what else you come up with!
~Tiffany
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: 24. Wolves Defiant
ok rip janes head off.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:27 AM Title: 24. Wolves Defiant
you are really good at cliffhangers ...
hmmmm, let me restate that ...
you have a really "evil" ability to use cliffhangers ...
update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: 24. Wolves Defiant
Oh...to leave me like this!!!
AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
~Tiffany
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: 24. Wolves Defiant
Oh no, it's so sad that some of the wolves died. Hopefully everyone else makes it. Excellent chapter update. I am so looking forward to the next one. Can't wait!! :-D
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:13 PM Title: 22. Waiting for Absolution
WOW! Intense story ... I'm overwhelmed for Emmett.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:03 PM Title: 20. A Losing Battle
intense
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:40 PM Title: 19. Escape
So I'm completely baffled as to Bella's plan ... you have me completely engrossed in this story. I can't even imagine what those that couldn't read the next chapter right away were feeling ... I'd be insane waiting for an update.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:18 PM Title: 18. Flight
love the plotting ... hope we get to see more of it
I'm also really intrigued about what Carlisle comes up with.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:03 PM Title: 17. Hudson
Yay for the calvary!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:49 PM Title: 16. Perspective
YIKES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh NO ... oh NO NO NO!
Hope this works out okay.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: 23. The Stand
Oh no poor Rosalie. Thats so sad. Really good chapter though, i will be anxiously awaiting the next update!!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:33 AM Title: 13. Something Else
Yikes ... cliffhanger ... oh .. yeah ... I can keep reading ... YAY!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:06 AM Title: 23. The Stand
Huge gasp!!! I totally didnt see them spliting up, caius's power, bellas New power...totally blindsided me!!!
~Tiffany
Date: 21 Mar 2010 1:22 AM Title: 9. Choices
I'm just finding your story ... loving the interaction and the angst. Excellent chapter as Bella comes to terms with "what" she is.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: 22. Waiting for Absolution
I love her new talent...hope shes able to work with it before the volturi come!
~Tiffany
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:42 PM Title: 22. Waiting for Absolution
Oooh please don't leave it there, i'm really anxious to know what's happened to Carlisle. i love Bella's new ability though, it kinda makes sense in a way as an extension of her shield. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:41 PM Title: 21. Out of Time
ohhh, a new power! What kind of damage will that be able to do???
~Tiffany
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: 21. Out of Time
WOW Im like on the edge of my seat!~~ Great UPDATE
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:01 AM Title: 20. A Losing Battle
Yay Bella..Im so prould of her for doing what she did!!
~Tiffany
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:30 PM Title: 19. Escape
Wow that was such an intense chapter. I am so looking foward to reading what is going to happen next!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 10:21 PM Title: 19. Escape
Very cool how she sees Alice in her mind...
~Tiffany
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: 18. Flight
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! Just thought i'd let you know...again...LOL
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying it!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 3:58 AM Title: 17. Hudson
somehow i missed the update for this, Heading to the next chapter...Loving Hudsons power...jsut not him...lol
~TIffany
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:39 PM Title: 16. Perspective
Oh crap!!! He must be a very good hunter..How did they not notice him?!?
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, this guy's trouble! Next Chapter's titled "Hudson", and will be up tomorrow.
Thanks for reviewing!
Ria
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 12:03 AM Title: 16. Perspective
OMG! This is so far my fav fan fic ever... can`t wait to read more..
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:23 PM Title: 15. A Virtue
I cant believe how easy this theory could actually be what really happened..I always wondered how it had been so...i dont want to say easy for him...but he handled it so well...Even Bella who couldnt stand the sight of blood had a hard time.Yet Carlisle was able to never in his almost 40 years given in to his bloodlust...there has to be something else at work there...
Cant wait to see what other spins you're gonna put into this!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:10 PM Title: 14. Fight or Flight
I was so extremely excited to see there was not only one update, but 2!! I felt like Edward there for a minute...never even crossed my mind about Carlisle's past...NICE!
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:03 AM Title: 13. Something Else
NOOO!!!!!!!!!! and I dont have a chapter waiting to find out whats going to happen!!!!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
This story is quite special to me, as it's what first got me into fanfiction. I felt that the extremely HEA in Breaking Dawn almost detracted from the first three books, and I just couldn't leave Bella without really understanding the life she had gotten herself into!
Hope you enjoy the rest, I will be updating pretty regularly.
Ria
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:55 AM Title: 12. Together
cant wait to see what he hears...
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:44 AM Title: 11. Jubilee
ohhh...sneaky bella...lol
~TIffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:32 AM Title: 10. Alice
Alice always knows just the right things to say!
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:25 AM Title: 9. Choices
Amazing job putting this chapter together!
~TIffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:13 AM Title: 8. Fabrication
wow...she finally gets it...what she begged for..
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:06 AM Title: 7. Living the Lie
OH NO!!!! Everyones gonna be so mad!
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:00 AM Title: 6. Revelations
uh oh...that doesnt sound good...
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:51 AM Title: 5. High School
Edward seems irritated...hmmm
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:31 AM Title: 4. Wendle
i wonder if the first day is going ot be as easy as she thinks...
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:22 AM Title: 3. Denali
I so would have been like bella in this one...
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:14 AM Title: 2. Renesmee
I think Jake too that well...but i dont see him staying...
~Tiffany
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:04 AM Title: 1. Meeting
looking forward to seeing where you're going to take us on this journey!
~Tiffany
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:23 AM Title: 8. Fabrication
Good story. Frustrated because I can't add it to my favorites list for some reason.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reviewing.
Sorry you can't favourite this, maybe drop a line to admin to see if they can see why? I'm new to the site, so couldn't give you any advice, sorry!
Ria
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:27 AM Title: 3. Denali
awwww ain't love grand!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:26 AM Title: 1. Meeting
good to see this one on this site hun - hope you get some good readership.
also nice to revisit this one as it's been ages since I first saw it!