Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:19 AM Title: EPILOGUE
You seriously have a way with words. All of your chapters are absolutely flawless, and the writing is so fluid. I love your descriptions, it makes everything so smooth yet rough at the same time. If that makes sense, haha. I love how you stayed in character, most people right Damon as his cocky, suave self, but end up making him whipped like he is with Elena or Katherine, and I don't imagine that's how he is with Bonnie. You write in the differences of those relationships and his and Bonnie's, but so subtly, it doesn't have to be written so obviously and I love that. You wrote in character for Damon so well, very spot on. For Bonnie too. Very addictive to read, I feel like the transition of the status of Damon and Bonnie's relationship was written very fluidly as well, nothing out of character, or jumping the gun too soon. Best piece of FF i've read sweetie, I love it. This will most definitely be added to my favourites.
You actually have the priveledge of being the first FF that I've reviewed here! :) Most definitely looking forward to more of your Bamon works, your writing is absolutely flawless, such a joy to read.
Author's Response:
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:24 PM Title: EPILOGUE
That was wonderful!! I loved going on their journey with them. They were so stubborn it figures they would fall in love kicking and screaming lol.
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:11 AM Title: EPILOGUE
I absolutely love the way you wrote this! The dialogue rung true, the characters were authentic, the build up was genuine. Really good.