Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:59 PM Title: Thoughts
Man, you just couldn't let the chapter end on a good note with Edward & Bella. Edward is asking a lot of questions about her family...is he planning on finding them & killing them or finding her dad & sending her to him to keep her safe?
Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:40 PM Title: Revelations
She is losing it! Granted I think I would too knowing what she knows & what she has to do. Everytime Edward calls her Love it gives me hope that just maybe he won't kill her but then I have to tell myself don't fall for that trap.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:58 AM Title: Revealed Truths
HOLY CRAP! This came completely out of left field! You have an amazingly sick mind! I can't wait to see if Isabella gets away..... I'm still in shock. I might even have nightmares.
lol hahaha I'm sorry I mean I had to make it interesting whats a good story with a little bit of twists and turns?
Date: 27 May 2013 9:28 PM Title: Karen
y isnt edward interested in bella?
umm he is lol i just didn't go into specifics with them because It was Karens point of view. The boys pick the girls they want and then they buy them. It will all be explained in later chapters. Thank you for your thoughts
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:48 AM Title: school
so it comes across that terry is an ass...but then is an awesome loving boyfriend..yes, we now know he is a jealous dude, but....is he the type that will hurt her, beat her, rape her.....if she doesn't obey or want him?
lol all that will be answered in the next few chapters
thank you for your review
Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:13 PM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
I tried to pm you...just wanted to suggest a beta to double check for tech errors, spelling, punctuation etc. The story itself is interesting it is dark, I'm waiting to see if there are eventual consequences for those actively involved in this form of sex slavery.
yeah definitley just hit me up at firstname.lastname@example.org :D