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Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:56 AM Title: Epilogue

I can not tell you ow much I have enjoyed this story.  I especially loved the epilogue written after many years with Jasper, Alice-Rose, and Emmett as a family.  Thank you for all the hard work and emotions!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 3:15 AM Title: Epilogue

I hate you and love you rright now. Unconditional is such a beautiful story but this last chapter has me crying like a baby. I think this story is my current favourite of all time. You struck just the right balance of bitter and sweet. So I just want to say thankyou for sharing this story with us.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 2:52 AM Title: Epilogue

I can't believe it's over :'(  I loved it. Bravo.

I wish you luck with your original fiction. I will be waiting anxiously for it. I hope you will come back with another Emmett story. You are truly talented and would love to read more. Thank you, as always, for writing.

Reviewer: The Confederate Major Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

Update? </3

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 20

It seems Jessica wasn't as evil as we all thought. I'm so glad Alice-Rose will be ok. I don't think the boys could kept it together without her and all of their lives would have been a little less. Well done as always. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the great review

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Every emotion feels positively raw and powerful.  Occasions like this one are just that - raw and powerful.  Below it though you have placed a wonderful undercurrent of love.  Emmett and Jasper's.  Esme and Carlisle's for Jasper and Alice-Rose.  Though done quietly, and their opening their hearts to Emmett.  Kudos!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks so much for reading and for the great review

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

I adore this story. It is very sweet and also sad at some points. I cried reading this chapter.

XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin

Author's Response:

hey, thanks for the great review - sorry you cried :-(

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

No parent would sit and wait for their child to be found. I would be knocking on doors and annoying anyone and everyone. Well done. Thank you for writing.

Thank you for the update on Jasper1863Hale. I will be looking up the book. I would also read anything you published so please keep me informed. Thanks.



Author's Response:

thnk you lots and lots xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

Jessica is the epitome of a bad mother. She abandoned her as a new born and now only wants her back for selfish reasons. Never once does she think of her child's needs and wants. Poor Esme. Every mother in the world has fallen asleep hoping their child will be ok for the durationn short nap we must take. I really felt for her. I also hope that Emmett has some tough skin. Jasper is looking to place blame and Emmett and Esme will be at the top of his list (I wouldn't want to be Jessica when they find her either). Well done. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thank you kindly for the review x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love your brand of drama. Keep it coming. Ahhhh.... we've all been there haven't we. The sickening sounds that emits from your parents bedroom. It is truly vomit inducing. LOL  But, feeling like a teenager in the backseat of a car is a wonderful memory. That is what it felt like reading about Jasper and Emmett's morning. You have a way of recreating memories from the past. Well done! Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thank hun

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

Congratulations! It was well deserved. I'm so happy that Emmett's small lapse in judgement didn't create a larger problem. Poor Emmett, he doesn't realize that we love him no matter how big the tire gets to be around his waist. I really like the thought of he and Esme going out for morning runs. I had to laugh at his inner monologue during their run together. Great job as always. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Jessica is such a bitch!!  I hope Emmett doesn't leave Jasper because of her.  Also, so glad he punched that guy.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well done! Emmett should have walked away or better yet reported it to security. It was a childish to stoop to the other guy's level. But I think we can all agree that the guy deserved it. I can't wait to see what Emmett has up his sleeve. You are so great at cliff hangers! Great job. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

No, it wasn't a dream. We can all hate on Jessica but in the end she is her mother. If she is willing to try to be in Sprite's life than Sprite deserves it. Jasper knows that it doesn't matter how he feels about Jessica but how Alice-Rose feels and as long as she doesn't pose a threat of any kind than she should be allowed to see her mother. I hope that made sense. You have an uncanny way of taking peices of my life and folding them into this story. Or maybe your just good at telling true to life stories, either way, I'm amazed. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: lette2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Damn that Jessica is grating on my nerves, she needs to learn you can't buy love.

Reviewer: DrPepperChk21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

My God, that woman is terrible. Morals? That woman woudnt know morals if they bit her in the ass! Here is to hoping that Alice-Rose, doesn't really fall for her "Mother's" tricks. I mean, she seems like a smart kid. Cant wait for the next chapter, to see if that is really what Jasper said.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love your characters. I really enjoy the soft intensity of there love.

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

thanks, really glad you like it

Reviewer: chefJayla Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

im so glad em was able to to do that for jas.



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you like it

Reviewer: DrPepperChk21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 13

I believe in that too. I am loving this story and cant wait for the next chapter. This story is something else and is definitely one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing x



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

I find it amazing that this story brings up so many of my own memories. My 5 year old daughter, shy and a bit timid, once threw a rock at a boy who was teasing her and nailed him in the head. I didn't know whether to ground her or give her a high five. Last chapter you reminded me of sliding down my own staircase in a plastic laundry basket. I loved the lemon and I am glad you showed that it isn't always the perfect romantic senario with white candles and perfect execution. Often times it is filled with other emotions that aren't so sexy such as fear and self doubt. It can be messy and clumbsy as well. Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Being a child of divorce, I truely get it. My parents NEVER said a bad word about the other (at least not that I am aware) and for that I am truely grateful. I am very impressed by the way J/Em are handling it. Let's hope Jessica is as mature and puts her daughter first.

I use to go down the stairs in a laundry basket. Thanks for the memories! As always, thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

This chapter was so sweet. I remember sliding down the stairs but we did it on foam mattresses.

I like that Ali asked emmett to be her mommy and then for both the boys to be there when she meet her mother.

Author's Response:

hey there

 

thank for reading and reviewing xxx

Reviewer: lette2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

Jasper did good, he handled himself well dealing with that bitch Jessica.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading 

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love how outwardly calm and cool the boys were to Jessica.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

I think they did magnificently!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading 

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Jasper did an excellent job! He may hate her and she isn't going to win a parent of the year award but she is her mother and as long as she can at like one, Sprite deserves to have her in her life. Some parents use their kids as pawns in their stupid games of "lets hurt the other parent" but Jasper rose above the crap. Hopefully Jessica can too. For Alice-Rose's sake. Great chapter although these poor boys could use a little less cock-blocking. *wink* Thank you as always.

Author's Response:

ta babe

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loving this story and can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: lette2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

The lemon was incredible, now they have to deal with that bitch Jessica.

Author's Response:

Hey

so glad you liked it, I do think bath sex is kinda hot xxx

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

God, I just knew the mother from hell was bound to get a call from her mother!  It never occurred to her, I suppose that Allie won't know who she is!  This chapter was handled lovingly and wonderfully.  The reader never misses the fact that the number one item in their relationship is love!



Author's Response:

thanks for a great review

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

I want my own Jasper oasis! It was definately worth the wait! Great chaper. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

Mmmm Jasper Oasis xxx

Reviewer: chefJayla Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

*stomps foot & glares* oh you evil man you! how could you just leave me there? it's been was an awful morning at work and i was hoping at least someone would get some relief...but nope.

 



Author's Response:

awww sowwie, but I promise u, the next update is their time to erm...shine???

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

Lovely.  Jasper's reactions here are right on the mark.  This is all new to him and trusting is an issue for him as well.  Emmett here is wonderfully loving, sweet, gentle and romantic.  My favorite line in this chapter is Emmett wondering what their little girl dreams about.  He is truly curious and lovingly sincere.  Wonderful characterizations!



Author's Response:

hey there

 

thanls for the review xxx

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Yep, very short story. LOL!

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

HI THERE:))

LOVED THIS CHAPT TOO:))

I COULD NEVER STOP MYSELF WITH JAZZ..SO HOT!

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE;)

RASH



Author's Response:

Hey there, thanks for the review. I totally agree, but I would br dragging Emmett to bed hehe

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

Every parent worries about their kids coming into the bedroom at the wrong time. It's probably because most of us have walked in on our parents in that situation. There isn't enough eye bleach in all the world - ick!

Emmett wouldn't have time to react if I were alone in his bedroom with him. Oh, the things I would do to that poor man. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xxx

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

Mean cliffie! I want to read more. PLEASE!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the reviews xxx

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Just had to throw some angst in there. LOL

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm ejoying your fic. They are both confused about what they are feeling. Love it! Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmmmm. Very interesting progression.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

For most of the chapter, I had the dumbest smile on my face. When Jasper said "the thought that without the wood between us, our heads would be touching" was perfect. Also, Emmett's romp through the streets throwing flowers (I think he even said something about birds singing), made me think of an old Carpenter's song "Close to You". Until Jessica called, things were great. But I always like a little drama. Great chapter, it brightened my day. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

I was hoping for a drunken kiss but a flag pole in Jasper's boxers is good. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

I can't wait for their night out. Maybe there will be a "druken" first kiss? Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is such a sweet story. Emmett and Alice-Rose are adorable. I look forward to the next update. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Jasper and Alice-Rose are adorable together. (Is it bad that I wished he were blowing raspberries on my tummy?) Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start. I hope you continue. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

I believe in the magic. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks honey xxxx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved this chapt..Emmett&Jazz are so cute together..

Jessica’s mum is freaking insane.. I don’t understand why she thought from the beginning that Emmett+Jazz were a couple.. They weren’t! Emmett was only a visiting friend!

Charlie is my hero:)))

Can’t wait for more..

Hugs, Rashell



Author's Response:

awww, thanks so much

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

I really liked this chapt..Jazz's opening his heart to Emmett and Emmett is so happy to have his Jazz that they make cry:))

Very interesting dream, Jazz;))



Author's Response:

hey, thanks for all the reviews xxx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

LOved this chapt:))

Jessica?? Next time?? Close your mouth and something else!

plz tell that Jazz's going to destroy her!

 

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

Joyce?? Go kill youself!

Great gay pub scenes:))

Hello there, flagpole;))

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm loving these blushing moments:))

Emmett?? I think it's possible:))

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

Lovely chapt:))

My heart broke when Emmett saw Jazz's horror face..

nexttttttttt!!

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

Emmett is going to help Jazz..

Jazz?? You're nervous because Emmett is your bestfriend and you think he might be disappointed of you and your life but HE's NOT!

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting plot..

Jessica?? I have no words for you..You disgust me!

Jazz?? You're the best father in the world for Alice-Rose so, be strong for her;)

 

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed the first chapter.

Reviewer: trallla Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love this story and will keep reading on this site. Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent. I am not a writer but an avid reader who loves to read all these wonderful stories. Great job!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Someone just needs to run over Jessica and her bitch mother with a semi!

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

excellent chapter, matt. i hated that emmett was going to leave, i'm glad that jasper stopped him and made him realise that he does want to give it a go. the dreaming of jasper must have been really good if he was begging emmett to fuck him as he slept. glad emmett had the restraint to hold off though.

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

grrrrrrr can i pretty please bitch slap jessica when she arrives? by the way, you now owe me a coke too, even though i knew it was coming, i still snorted coke across my screen at esme's little tale of her sex with a female incident.

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

it was so good for jasper to get out and enjoy himself, its a shame that he couldnt switch off and realise he didnt need to worry about alice-rose since she wasnt there, but his child is all hes known for so long that its understandable. atleast he had fun and let go, getting drunk for the first time in ages...and hellooo morning flagpole too :D

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

ooooooooooooooh yes please let that be possible!

nice wank scene by the way! lol

if only jasper had spanked emmett's butt for swearing lol

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

Aww, I feel sorry for Jasper. He works his ass off to support his child and Emmett gets to spend all day with her, Jasper feels left out :( Doesn't he even get some kind of child support off Jessica to help with it? 

Thanks for the pimp, babe x

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Jasper feels disappointed? oooooooooooooooh! where's chap 3?

Reviewer: Jasper1863Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

woah i love this chapter! fatherly Jasper is cute and I can see that Emmett is protective of his lifelong friend. I wonder how this is going to play out, will read chap 2 later today, dog walking duties are calling :(

Reviewer: AKR Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loving this:-).   This fic makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.  Obv. not the Jessica part, but i'm assuming that J. and E. takes the bitch down:-).

Reviewer: AKR Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm so so glad that i found this fic!! Anticipation of what is yet to come. Yes yes yes! 

They are just so cute:-)



Author's Response:

Hey there

 

thanks so very much for the reviews, glad you found this as I love writing it. I update weekly so enjoy :-)

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