Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I admit that I normally skip stories where the characters are aware of the fandom or actively read some of the stories on the sites. To me, that just seems a little weird. Perhaps I'm not too fond of trying to remember what is happening in the story's story vs. what is happening in the story (if that even makes sense). I really like how you wrote this, and the characters in the story. Not only that but I feel like I can relate to some of the feelings they go through. While I am not a writer, I enjoy getting to know the people who are kind enough to post stories though their words (mainly through author comments and such).
Author's Response:
I'm glad you can relate to it. I know the feeling! Everytime I get a review from someone, or a response from an author whose story I reviewed, I get a whole new perspective on these stories. Thank you :))
Date: 14 May 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 13 May 2012 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story - I think you should use it as a jump off point to begin a longer story with these two. Might be interesting!!!
TTFN!
Zamar
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)