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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 12: Remembering Kate

I feel so bad for Edward. He needs to forgive himself.  I wish he knew the whole story. I feel that something is missing in the story. I bet Tanya knows, but won't share because she is a shrew. 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: Remembering Kate

great update

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Hi Mrs. Vixter! Thank you for the great review :) Im so glad you enjoyed the update and that you look forward to reading more! I will post the next chapter very soon :) I appreciate your support,  ~Leslie

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 12: Remembering Kate

Good to see you after all this time! Looks like Edward isn't much better off than he was last year, but I'm glad to know some of his and Kate's history. Still a long way to go from the sound of it! At least he's taking the first steps back to life.



Author's Response:

Hi K! Its awesome to get a review from you and I am happy that you are glad to see an update. Yeah, sadly, you are right, Edward still isnt better, yet. But, hang tight, he will finally get there! In the next couple of chapters he is going to make some pretty big steps that will surprise all of you. He knows he has to finally start moving forward! Yes, he really is trying and he will continue to. It will be a long road still but you all will see he will finally come around. Thanks so much for the great review, I appreciate your support! see you in the next update :) ~Leslie

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 11: Confrontations and Painful Memories

Please update



Author's Response:

Hi Turtle! I was really touched when I got this review. As simple as it was. I havent updated TP in over a year and barely heard from anyone asking me for an update :( So thank you, it means so much you miss the story! I am working on an update, (finally) hopefully it will be ready very soon. Thanks so much for your patience!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11: Confrontations and Painful Memories

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Lani! Its really great to hear from you ;) Im happy you enjoyed the chapter! Hope you had a nice Christmas and will have a happy new year too! Xo, Leslie

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 11: Confrontations and Painful Memories

Are you kidding? I want to see Edward shave off his beard, get a haircut and attempt to live again. Bella is going to be in his future, so he may as well not fight destiny. On the other hand, I wouldn't mind if he knocks Tanya on her ass! I realize he won't, having been raised to treat women better than that, but, if anyone ever deserved it , it's Tanya! Amazing she is related to Kate and Irina!  Thanks so much for the update, it's a nice gift for this time of year. Have a happy holiday and a great new year!



Author's Response:

Hi K!
Thanks so much for the great review! Well, reviews. I apologize that I didnt reply to the other ones you left me awhile back. Please know I appreciate all of them ;) I am so happy you are still here with me and are still into reading this sotry, thank you! Haa, believe me, I am very tempted to have Edward shave off that damn beard too and get a haircut too. It will happen soon enough though, I'll hint at that. And yes I want him to join back the land of the living too and he will. You are so right Bella will be his destiny so why should he fight it? Oh I agree, I wish he would kick Tanyas ass. She is despicable isnt she? Oh yes, true even though he was raised well, to not treat a woman that way. She does deserve it, big time! Oh I know right? It baffles me and I write it, haa, how she is related to Irina and Kate who are so kind. Im so glad you enjoyed the update and it was a great gift for you! Thank you so much! Happy holidays to you too and a Happy New Year! Till next time, xo, Leslie

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 10: Catching Up and Awkward Run-In

Charlie is sure trying hard to do things to show Bella he's glad to have her with him, burning pancakes aside! Bella keeps thinking she will leave Edward alone but can't seem to bring herself to do so. If she's not careful, Charlie is going to notice her growing interest in the man next door!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9: Nightmares and Distractions

Pretty spooky that Edward and Bella would have interlocking dreams! I'm beginning to think Bella is the moth, drawn to Edward's flame. She better watch out she doesn't end up getting burned.It was very touching when Bella kissed her mother's picture and told her how much she misses her. Charlie seems pretty torn up about Renee's death, too. Guess he never quite got over her.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Mystery of Mr. Masen

Little hin ts of what might be in store for the two of them, like someday Edward won't be cranky and Bella won't be defensive. She sure was shocked at how his wife died, wait until she learns his other secrets! I would like to knowwhat happened at his folks, with Tanya stalking him. Wonder if it made him take off early?



Author's Response:

Hi again ;) I am so happy to read another review from you! Yes, I made sure to drop the tiniest bit of hints about what will be in
store for them. So much is yet to come, this is only the beginning ;) Oh I agree, if Bella was shocked about Kate's death wait till she finds out Edward's other secrets. Very cool how you mentioned that you want to find out what happened at his parents home and what happened with Tanya. You will get to find that out in Chapter 11. I cant wait for you all to read that one! Thanks again for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Reconnecting and Discoveries

Edward had a nice reunion with his family, right up until Tanya showed her skanky face! Irina was so embarassed to have her sister show up and get all over Edward. You would think Tanya would get a clue that he can't stand her, but I guess not. Bella is probably about to get a lecture from her nextdoor neighbor over teen smoking!



Author's Response:

I agree, Edward had a perfect reunion with his family. It was much needed for all of them to reunite and just forgive and move on. Yeah Tanya just had to make an appareance and ruin it all. Noo, she is in denial. She thinks that Edward will eventually want her. But she is sadly mistaken, hee. You are very very warm about your guess about the lecture Bella may get! I hope you are enjoying the next chapter, its one of my favs :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Unpleasant Encounters and Reuniting with Family

Nice to see Edward has a streak of decency where Bella is concerned. He still can't figure out why he keeps thinking about her. Good thing he ran off that creepy Tyler, who's one step from assauling Bella right in a grocery store! Eww!Mr. Masen sure scared hell out iof the little perv! Then he turns right around and nasties all over Bella for spying on him, which she really didn't, not deliberately, anyway. Maybe he can  calm down at his parents house.



Author's Response:

I know right? Thank god he at least showed Bella some decency and came to her rescue, lol. But he had to, Tyler was just way of line and being so disgusting! Yeah Edward will still be torn for quite sometime over why he keeps thinking about Bella and he tries so hard not too, haa. Oh yeah I am relieved that Edward stepped in and scared the hell out of that creepy perv. I know gross is right that happened at a grocery store. *shakes head* Yeah he does need to chill out. He is still hung up over Bella spying on him. lol. Edward is something else. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

So much of Edward goes on inside his head, it's no surprise everyone thinks he should get over grieving, not knowing his anger, guilt, etc. over what he heard the day of her funeral! He better wise up soon as to why he notices Bella so much.  Being a former teacher, he should know better than to fixate on a seventeen year old girl. Wonder what Tyler is being obnoxious about?



Author's Response:

Hi again :) Yes, lots of things go on in poor Edward's mind, haa. As I said, hes complicated and has just been through so much. its taking him quite a while to finally get together and he will. Yeah I agree with you there, he needs to wise up soon and figure out why he is noticing Bella more than he should. Oh yes, you are correct, he should know better, given he's a former teacher. Naughty Edward fixating on a 17 yr old, lol. Okay off to reply to your newest review, thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 4: Reminiscing and Making Amends

Edward's fortunate in his family as they seem to be hanging in there, trying to help him in his grief. His sisters-in-law are split, one pro, one anti. That Tanya tried to seduce him a week after the funeral says a lot about her, and none of it good! He thinks Bella was snooping, not knowing she was trying to hide her smokingfrom her dad, and only snooped as an afterthought. I'm glad he texted his siblings and called his mom. At least he isn't that far gone, that he would ignore his mother!



Author's Response:

I so agree with you K! He is very blessed to have his family and how they have continued to remain on his side and support him. Even though he has kept them at arms length for so long. Oh yes, Irina, as you can tell is the good one, and Tanya is just vile. You will find out even more so in a few chaps. Oh shes disgusting, has no shame, to try and seduce him days after her own sisters funeral. *shakes head* Yep, thank you, haa. I am glad someone gets it and isnt all over Bella's case of accidentally spying on Edward, haa. It was an accident but now... she may spy on him again and it may not be accidental, hee. Oh yeah, hes not that gone. He regrets what hes put his family through and from here will make it up to them and wont shut them out. Thanks again for the awesome review!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward

Poor Edward, he's a real mess! Grief is a singular thing that affects each person differently. A lot depends on personality and circumstances. How you lose someone you love makes all the difference in how you mourn them. His family is trying to help but not having much success, it seems. Makes me feel for the guy and want to slap him upside his head at the same time. She's dead, but he isn't for heaven's sake, you have to keep going!



Author's Response:

I know, Edward is a mess for sure ;( I admit one of the very tough and draining parts of writing this story is Edward's pov. I have to dig in very deep, into his character, get into his mindset. Because honestly I have never been through what he has, so I cant relate. I am not sure where it came from and how I managed to write it well, but thankfully I did, lol. You are so very right, thats what I had to tell some of these critical readers who left mean reviews. That everyone handles grief differently and is on their own time frame to go through it. Yeah that is the saddest part is that Edward's fam is trying to be there for him and he has shut them out ;( I agree, I feel for him very much too but I myself wanted to slap him and tell him, man you have got to try and keep going. Thanks for the great review, I am really enjoying your take on the story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

That was some trip to the Forks diner! First, Charlie tells Bella about the old truck he bought her and she doesn't know whether to be happy or appalled. Then he asks for a job application for his horrified daughter and is upset when she says she would rather keep looking. Then comes the big commotion with Mr. Masen and how he plays Jekyll and Hyde both in the space of a couple minutes.



Author's Response:

Hi again! Yeah some trip to the diner indeed, lol. I had a blast writing this chapter, especially the part with Bella and Charlie's interaction. To me thats a typical father and daughter convo in a way. I was laughing as I wrote Bella's reaction to Charlie buying her the truck. Yeah then Charlie just had to go and volunteer Bella to work over at the diner. Typical dad, haa. I think I shocked quite a few readers with how Edward behaved at the restaurant. He is definitely a hurt and complicated man. Thanks for the awesome review and for reading!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green

I can hardly wait for Charlie to catch Bella smoking, and he will! Interesting insight into her relationship with her mother. Too bad some parents want to be their children's friend instead of their parent. It confuses the kid! Yes, I want to know what the heck Edward was doinf talking to the air, dressing funny, and all hairy!



Author's Response:

Hello K ;) Wow, thanks for all of the reviews! I dont think I had a reader on here anyway who has reviewed every chapter thus far, lol. It means a lot to me, I appreciate it and I am enjoying your thoughts on the story! Haa, well you never know. Charlie could very well catch Bella smoking someday soon. *wink* I agree with what you said about Bella's relationship with Renee it is too bad that some parents care more about being their childs friend than their parent ;( I am glad you enjoyed Edward's weirdness in the chap, haa. Off to leave a comment for your other review. Thanks again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 1:12 AM Title: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears

Sounds to me as if Bella has her work cut out for her! There must be a woman in his past who either left him or died, which is close to the same thing, I guess. Whichever, Edward seems to have trust issues of some sort.



Author's Response:

Hi K ;) Thanks so much for the great review! Oh yes, Bella has her work cut out for her BIG time, lol. And so does Edward. You are very much on the right track with your guesses and sadly Edward had major trust issues. I cant wait to find out what you think of the rest of the story. Thank you for reading! ~Leslie

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Catching Up and Awkward Run-In

Poor Ed just does not want to let anybody in. And Bella has to smarter that her dad, in getting information.



Author's Response:

Hi Edloves me ;) Yeah Edward is sitll keeping Bella at arms length but he will slowly let her in soon enough. Hang in there, I know its been a slow burn. Yep true what you said about Bella too, haa. Thanks so much for reading and for the review! I appreciate it :)

Reviewer: annazonie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

I like the story. That was a shock with Edward. Reading on. Something pretty bad must have happend to him.



Author's Response:

Hi there Anna :) I want to thank you for the great review and for giving this story a try! I hope you enjoyed the rest of it, what I have up so far. I look forward to reading your thoughts again :) Take care, Leslie

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Mystery of Mr. Masen

Just found this fic and so far love it! Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Hi there ;) That really makes me so happy to read that! Im very glad you are loving the story so far ;) I am enjoying writing it and cant wait for all of you to read more. So much is yet to come! I have the next chapter just about ready. I'll be posting it very soon. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review ;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7: Reconnecting and Discoveries

well atleast he hates Tanya for some reason..can not wait to read more..

Author's Response:

Oh yes, Edward for sure despises her and has every right too. Down the road...he will even have more of a reason too! Thanks for the review. I just posted a new chapter today. Hope you enjoy the rest :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 7: Reconnecting and Discoveries

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Lani! Always great to hear from you, happy you enjoyed the chapter ;) ttys, Leslie

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Unpleasant Encounters and Reuniting with Family

Great chapter!! Ugh... creepy Tyler... hopefully she doesn't have any more bad run-ins with him.

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Hi Kate, so great to hear from you sweety! Im so happy you loved the chap. I enjoyed writing it, esp creepy Tyler, hee. Well you never know she may have run-ins with him again, *wink* As I see it though right now, none for the moment though :) The next chap will be very interesting, that's all i can say. Dont want to give it away, haa. Thanks for reading and for the review, ttys!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Unpleasant Encounters and Reuniting with Family

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Lani! I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter ;) I will hopefully post the next one in a week or so, hang tight ;) I appreciate the review hun, ttys!

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

Hi there, just started reading and read straight through. I think Bella is going to be good for him. She seems fiesty and doesn't put up with what she thinks isn't right. But nice twist that he's a teacher at the high school. This could be interesting.



Author's Response:

Hi edlovesme :) Thank you so much for reading and for the great review! Im happy you like this story thus far and definitely agree with your take on things. I know Bella will be good for him as well, they will be for each other. But, its not going to be such an easy road to get to a good place. Edward really needs to get his stuff together and hes finally on the way there, thank goodness. Haa, thats for sure, Bella doesnt put up with crap for sure and she is feisty and all of you will see that more as time goes on. Yes, Edward did teach at the school, he no longer does though. At least for the time being, hee. Never know. Thanks again for reading and a new chapter will be posted soon, Leslie

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

Loved the last 2 chapter... getting to see Edward's side of things is very eye opening! :) So he was a teacher.... interesting.... and I had a feeling that Kate had an affair... Poor Edward.  Can't wait to read the next one!

-Kate



Author's Response:

Hi Kate!

Oh my gosh I apologize in responding so late to this :( I feel terrible. I recieved no notification for new reviews by email from this site, grr. I havent been online as much this summer either, anyway thank you so much for ther review! It makes me so happy you love the story. I am pleased you enjoyed the last two chaps too. I enjoyed writing them and I cant wati for all of you to read the new chap and the one after. I have them just about ready, finally, lol. It will be worth the wait, promise. So you had a feeling Kate cheated huh? its terrible isnt it? Poor Edward :( So much more is to come and will be revealed. Thank you for reading, see you soon! ~Leslie

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Hi Lani! I apologize for the delay in replying back to your review :) As always I appreciate you reading and reviewing each time! A new chapter will finally post in a couple of weeks. I will try sooner though. Thanks again so much, Leslie

Reviewer: Yrarbil Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

Rhonda is really a sweetheart!
I hope he will follow her advices too!
I really wonder if his family knows about the "real" Kate?
Poor Ben! And all because Edward started to get angry about Bella. Or maybe about himselfe because he cares about her and doesn`t understand why?
While reading this chapter I could better understand Edwards feelings and why he is still or at all so hung up on Kate.
Thank you also for your explanation in the End Notes! (Love the big spoiler!!:))
It`s awful and terribly mean that her "lover" approached him at the funeral!
Will we hear from him again?
Did Edward knows about the pregnancy before she died?
Can`t wait for the next chapter!!! I hope Edward will save Bella and they will finally talkt to each other. But I don`t think they will like each other at first because of the spying and Edwards outburst at the diner.
:) Till next time!! :)



Author's Response:

Hi sweety! So great to hear back from you. Thanks for the awesome reviews! I agree Rhonda is a sweetheart for sure! She will be around a bit more in the story and always there to offer Edward advice ;) In a way, he will follow her advice it will take him a bit longer, but he will finally snap out of it! To answer your question and I do love your q's lol. No, the family does not know about Kates betrayal. Except someone in her family does, take a guess? hee. Haa, i know I feel so bad for Ben too. Its cause Bella got Edward all riled up, haa. Edward will apologize to Ben, I wont spoil when but it will happen ;) I am so so relieved you get why he is so hung up over Kate and it makes sense now. I really want my readers to understand. So i felt i needed to explain more. Haa, glad you loved my long A/N and the spoilers. I love to reat my readers to that ;) Yes, I agree very cruel of her lover to tell Edward the day of the funeral but the man is just that evil and cruel ;( Yes, he may appear in the story or at least you all will find out who he is ;) Um, good question about the preg I cant answer that just yet but only because I am sitll figuring that out, lol. You are so right on your prediction, haa. Edward and Bella wont like each other at first. Their meeting will be very interesting! Till next time thanks so much for reading! xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi sweety! So great to hear back from you. Thanks for the awesome reviews! I agree Rhonda is a sweetheart for sure! She will be around a bit more in the story and always there to offer Edward advice ;) In a way, he will follow her advice it will take him a bit longer, but he will finally snap out of it! To answer your question and I do love your q's lol. No, the family does not know about Kates betrayal. Except someone in her family does, take a guess? hee. Haa, i know I feel so bad for Ben too. Its cause Bella got Edward all riled up, haa. Edward will apologize to Ben, I wont spoil when but it will happen ;) I am so so relieved you get why he is so hung up over Kate and it makes sense now. I really want my readers to understand. So i felt i needed to explain more. Haa, glad you loved my long A/N and the spoilers. I love to reat my readers to that ;) Yes, I agree very cruel of her lover to tell Edward the day of the funeral but the man is just that evil and cruel ;( Yes, he may appear in the story or at least you all will find out who he is ;) Um, good question about the preg I cant answer that just yet but only because I am sitll figuring that out, lol. You are so right on your prediction, haa. Edward and Bella wont like each other at first. Their meeting will be very interesting! Till next time thanks so much for reading! xoxo

Reviewer: Yrarbil Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 4: Reminiscing and Making Amends

It`s a really sad video to watch when Kate acted like she is happy and everything is ok when in reality she was lying and betraying Edward. I`m not sure if it was a good idea to give him this video on her birthday.
Does Alice and the rest of his family and Kates family know that she had an affair?
Tanya is unbelivable!
It´s very nice that he called his parents and very interessting how he already thinks and cares about Bella. She already spare him from his nightmare, and they even didn´t meet each other. :))

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

Im dieing to know who Kate had an affair with!!!!  Poor Edward, but I must say it is time to get over it now, so good thing Bella is here to save the day!!  great chappie



Author's Response:

Hi lamby! Thanks for the review ;) Haa, everyone is dying to know who Kate had the affair with. You all will learn about it, in
the near future, thats all I can say right now. I know I feel bad for Edwrad too, very bad ;( But I agree, he does need to really move fwd. He will, a certain brunette may be just the girl to help him do so. Exactly shes there to save the day, well sort of, lol. Its going to take Edward a little bit of time and they wont get along right away, haa. Thanks for reading and tty next time when I update! xo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl

Well at least he knows he's being a jerk ....wonder what he's gonna do to Tyler ....

Author's Response:

Hi Mountainlion! Always happy to hear from you hun ;) Haa, yes at least he gets that he was being a jerk. I agree bb! Oh and just you wait about what happens with Tyler. I will say there wont be any fighting going on, haa. But some harsh words will be thrown out there. Its going to be very tense. Anyhow, thanks for reading and for reviewing! I really appreciate it, xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: Reminiscing and Making Amends

yikes! very heavy!!! but one question, if he found out she wasn't happy and led this secret life, then why is he still so hung up on her???

Author's Response:

Hi Mountainlion ;) Great to hear from you! Yes very heavy indeed :( And good question. I can get why you are wondering that and I will do my best to explain why he is. I dont want to give too much away. But maybe thats where i went wrong because it seems some readers as confused as to why he still is hung up on her, still loves her even after what she did. But sometimes you cant help who you love and even though she hurt him, the love he has for her isnt easily going away. As much as a part of him wishes he didnt still love her, he loves the woman she was. Not the one he found out that hurt him. You get me? Thats the best way I can explain it. Also the guilt over how she died eats him alive everyday :( Thanks for the great review I really appreciate you reading, xo

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4: Reminiscing and Making Amends

You were right that was hard to read.  Hopefully he starts to mend.  As he said there are other to live for besides himself.  She cheated on him, man get a grip.  LOL



Author's Response:

Yeah I know Cullen very heavy read for sure ;( The next chap will still be intense but will be very interesitng as well especially towards the end, haa. yes, I agree he needs to start mending ;( He needs to think about his family and start building a relationship with them again and let them be there for him. Yeah, i know she cheated on him and he needs to move on. But its not that simple, how she died is what kills him and he still has feelings for her, the woman she was, not the one he found out hurt him. Theres still so much in a way he doesnt know because he found out about the affair after he died. I hope this makes sense. It will all come out soon, thanks so much for reading! And for the review :)

Reviewer: Yrarbil Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward

Poor Edward! I feel really sad for him.
I think that probably the baby wasn`t his.? 
When did he find out that Kate cheated on him? Before or after the accident? I think he found out after.
Is it correct that they had a car crash and he was the driver?
Did Alice give him his wedding video?
Sorry I know too many questions :) But I really love your story!
And I´m really curious for the next chapter and Edwards thoughts about Bella spying on him and when he sees her at the diner.
Congratulations for your nomination! Of course I will vote for you!
Till next time!!!



Author's Response:

Hi yrarbil! Great to hear from you, thanks for the wonderful review!!! I really feel very sad for this Edward too. He has been through so much and it seems to be getting harder on him when it should get a little easier ;( Oh, I cant answer that just yet, hee. But i will say he suspects the baby may not have been his. He found out Kate cheated after her death, so what a whammy to deal with. He already has the guilt on him over how she died then to find that out, its awful ;( Um, you may be very warm about how Kate died but he wasnt the driver or in the car with her. Yes Alice gave him the video. No, thats okay, ask away, lol, I love questions from my readers and the comments! It makes me so happy how people get into my story, so thank you! Oh yes you will find out for sure Edwards pov regarding the diner and other things, haa. The end of the next chp is very interesting! Thanks so much for the congrats I am still floored i got nomin 5 times, a few for my other fics too. Thanks for your vote it means so much! I really enjoy your reviews, the new chap is up and I will post chp 5 soon too. ttys, Leslie :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward

Great chapter... poor Edward, kinda explains his behavior :( ..... I am thinking that Kate prob cheated and the baby they had wasn't his .... I dunno what would have killed her though.... Can't wait to read more!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Tigger :) Great to hear from you! Im glad you enjoyed the chap and thank you for the compliments! Yes, poor Edward indeed, my heary really breaks for him too ;( The next chap is even more sad and you will have more of a better look into his life. Hmm, you are very very warm with your guesses, hee! Some of what you said may be revealed in chap 5. So much more is going unfold soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! ~Leslie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward

So sad :-( was that his wedding video he was watching ?? he had a baby too???? did Kate kill herself ??? can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review mountainlion! I enjoy hearing from you :) Yes it is very very sad ;( My heart just breaks for Edward. It was a tough chapter to write. The next one is even more sad ;( Um, no not his wedding video, good guess though. Um, yes he sort of had a baby and wow you may be pretty close about Kate. I promise these qs will be answered in chap 5. Well, some of will be answered. Thank you so much for your support and for reading, it means so much! ttys, Leslie

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Lani! As always I appreciate your reviews :) Thank you for reading! xo, Leslie

Reviewer: Yrarbil Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
Really liked the dream!!:)
And I really like Charlie!
Does Mr Masen :) recognize Bella when he looked at her and apologized because of that (a bit)?
Can`t wait for the chapter in Edwards Pov!!!
Till next time!



Author's Response:

Hi yrarbil :) So great to hear back from you! Aww thanks for the bday wishes ;) *blush* And haa, Im so glad you enjoyed the dream! I had fun writing it, lol. Oh and thank you too for saying you like Charlie. Another reader had told me the same. I adore him too! He gets even funnier and great :) Yes, Mr. Masen recognizes Bella from spying on him the other night. Thats why he kept staring at her and giving her a dirty look, lol. Oh yes the next chap will be in Epov, actually it may end up being two chaps because its pretty long. I cant wait for you all to read it. I have it just about ready. ttys, thank so much or reading and reviewing! ~Leslie

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

WOW, that was a different Edward.  I look forward to hearing his POV.



Author's Response:

Hi Cullen :) Thank you so much for the great review! Yes, this Edward is very different. He's pretty bitter, heart-broken, just not in a good place at all. You guys will find out so much more in the next chapter. Its almost ready, I will get it posted as soon as i can ;) Thank you for reading my fic, it means a lot!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

Great story so far! Can't wait to read more! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for saying so Tigger! I really appreciate it and Im so glad you like it :) I have the new chap just about ready. I cant wait till all of you read it. Thanks very much for reading! ttys, Leslie

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green

Very nice story.  I will check out the other stories as well.



Author's Response:

Thank you again Cullen :) Im very happy that you enjoy this story so far! I am having fun writing it ;) Hope you do get the chance to check out my other fics when you can. I have a feeling you will like them. ttys, Leslie

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:03 PM Title: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears

Sounds very interesting.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Lani :) As always I really enjoy hearing from you! I will have the next chappie posted very soon, xo, Leslie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen

Well, he's a character , that's for sure....Bella's curiosity it going to go into overdrive with him. loved the dream ...lol

Author's Response:

Yes he is quite the character for sure Mountainlion, lol. You will learn much more about him in the next chapter ;) Oh yeah Bella's curiosity will go into overdrive and get the better of her, as you all will find out in the chapter after next. Im so glad you loved the dream, it was fun to write, hee. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it, till next time :)

Reviewer: Yrarbil Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green

Is he talking to his dead wife? Girlfriend? Mom? I don´t hope the last one.
I like Charlie he is kind of funny.
Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi yrarbil :) Thank you for another great review :) Wow, you were exactly right on your first guess! Yes Edward was talking to his dead wife :( Poor guy. You will find out much more about Edward in chp 3, which will be in his pov. Haa, Im glad you like Charlie i do too. He is funny in this fic. The next chapter there are more funny moments between him and Bella. I am excited for the next chapter too. I will have it posted in a few days :) Thanks for reading! Leslie

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green

looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you very much as always Lani! I appreciate your reviews and you reading my fics :) xo, Leslie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green

so only Edward thinks he sees ghosts, he must be really messed up about said person dying :(

Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Edward :( He is dealing with too much pain and grief and its been going on for a long time. Yeah the death of mentioned perosn, really messed him up. You all will find out in chapter 3 when its his pov. Thanks so much for the great review Mountainlion and for reading! xo, Leslie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:52 AM Title: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears

good interesting beginning :) is Edward thinking of a deceased wife????

Author's Response:

Hi mountain lion :) Thanks very much for the awesome review! Im very glad you enjoyed the prologue :) Wow, you are very very warm, hee about your guess! Okay, you're most likely very correct, and the only one to guess that, lol. Thanks so much for reading! I just sent chap one for my beta to edit and I will post it as soon as shes finished. I appreciate the review, ttys ;)

Reviewer: Yrarbil Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:29 PM Title: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears

Great prologue! Really looking forward to chapter 1! :)



Author's Response:

Hi yrar! Thank you very much for the compliment ;) Im so glad you enjoyed the prologue! Chap one is just finished and i sent it to my beta for edits. I will post it as soon as its ready :) I cant wait for everyone to read it. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing! till next time, Leslie

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 1:06 PM Title: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears

looking forward to seeing where this is going 



Author's Response:

Aww thanks Lani! As always its nice to hear from you :) I just sent chap one to my beta for edits. So as soon as shes done, I will post chap one. Im looking fwd to everyone reading it. ttys, Leslie

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