Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 22- Epilogue

awesome re write ;) i liked how you tied the date they met with him proposing ;) but i hoped he would have his canon b'day like bella ;) a love how the wolves have all but imprinted and it looks like you doing the jacob one as well;( i was hoping that their child would mate with another hybrid like nahual? anyway 'see' you on book 4 ;D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 22- Epilogue

GREAT

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 22- Epilogue

Yea I wouldnt be happy with yellow either.   ty for writing and sharing.   

ty

Off to start the last (so sad to say that)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 21- To Find Where I Belong

Glad she is ok and thinking about college.  Nice birthday present she gave him.  Thoughtful.

Aww for proposal

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 20- Through Faith and Love

Like your friendshop with J and B better than any other I've read.  Ugh Jake should have shifted.  Victoria is such a conniving witch.  Glad she's finally gone though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19- Through Despair and Hope

LOL for the siblings messing with B now.  Although surprised they left her in the house alone with V still on the loose.  annnddd of course she was kidnapped.  

Grr jus two going is stupid.  Poor B.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18- Leave Behind The World You Know

Yea def proudness for not letting Charlie help take care of his child since you moved around all the time. (can you tell I'm not a Renee fan?)  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 17- Like You Imagined When You Were Young

LOL for the siblings all terrorizing Edward. LOL for Carlisle.  

I agree with Edward.  Renee could have come out.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 16- The Army Left Standing

Yea kinda sucks being in the middle that way. Ugh for Victoria getting away again.   Hope she doesn't go after Charlie.  hmm wondering where you are going with this since the big fight scene from Eclipse was this chapter.....I think???

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 15- Bets

So glad she has a normal relationship with Rose. Love the costume ideas.

Glad the plan seems to be working so far.     

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 14- Debbie Downer

wow the killing and such are getting ridiculous.  

aww poor Quil.  Gotta be insanity to imprint on a baby.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13- Man Talks

lol for Klutzy Bella. I'm like Bella shopping ..in and out.   oooh a tattoo.  I was thinking a belly ring.  Tattoo is good too.   Wow  great team presents.  aww for the overprotective big brother speeches.    

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 12- Hand-Me-Downs

ah the diner is closed.  I had wondered about that.  hmmm Cinammon Buns....yum.  oooh practice time.    

oooh Charlie and Sue. wow wonderful talk with Charlie and Edward.  Sweet Dad present too.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 11- Every Relationship Has Its Obstacles

Good that they are tackling the sex talk in detail.  and nice bonding time

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10- There's A Possibility

Hope Elan behaves. And Paul too.  Seth is such a sweetie.   If ripley, morgan and Bella were all camping, who was working the diner?  Sorry my brain runs away with me sometimes. 

Glad E is supporting her with the plan.  awww for bonding time

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 9- Not Bitter, Only Sweet

Wonder how long till they figure out B's clothes are missing.  Well I'm glad Alice got a vision so they know more of what they are up against. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8- Army Of Family

awww for Paul still fighting the imprinting.  Hang in there Ripley (everytime I see her name I think of the Aliens movie). uh oh for Jared with the Elan thing.   Glad E&B are talking about the uncomfortable issues. Horror Movie...if Charlie only knew.


Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 7- Wait, What?

hmm dreams again huh?  Wonder what they mean.  Premonitions?  

Glad Leah is joining the pack.  :-)  I agree with Kim.  Too many High School and College degrees have so much garbage classes attached to them.

Good plan of B and Jakes.    

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 6- That's That

Think Charlie will take it ok.  Not like in the books where she was zombie like in the book.  aww for new first kisses.

Glad she talked with Charlie.  Renee....I just resent her so much sometimes.  But I suppose she tried.    

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 5- So You Can Make Me Whole

Wow  Jake is actually being a real friend in that conversation.  Awww sounds like Paul is going to imprint now. Ugh the beast died.  you scared me for a moment thinking V would come out of the woods

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4- That's What We Do

awww Leah imprinted. Glad that she's still hanging with Ang and Jess.   go Bella for helping Jasper.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 3- Fishing

Love that she is so strong willed in this one instead of the doormat follower in the book.  Glad E is trying.  Love the wolf express.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2- One Pack, One Family

Glad she and morgan are being smart and listening and not just arguing. Wow  V is getting too close.  Glad they are working more closely together.  Stupid about not crossing lines when V was just abusing it anyway

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1- I Am Not Afriad To Keep On Living

Hate when relatives forget about time zones. I got a couple in my family who constantly forget.    

Of course Charlie had to mention to Renee to call.  Sigh.  Sorry but I have plenty of guy friends.  But I  did 20 years in the military and are surrounded by more guys than girls esp since i was in a maintenance field, but I did in high school too.

Good that he is giving her space, but it does sound like she is trying hard to keep him away

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 5- So You Can Make Me Whole

Great

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 22- Epilogue

You never disappoint! The perfect place to end this third book. Can't wait to read We Are Breaking Dawn, except for the part where it's your last fan fiction. That hurts, a lot! My daughter asked me if you are going to pull all your storys, when you finish WABD, are you? If you do she might take pity on me and come over to show me how to download onto a flashdrive. Then I can keep you forever! Off to see if I can find You Tube!(just kidding, I think I know where it is!) See you later!



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I won't be deleting the stories from the sites so hopefully they're here for a long time.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 21- To Find Where I Belong

Wonderful chapter! With the utter relief of being rid of Victoria and all her newborns, the proposal accepted and celebrated, it's a wonder Edward and Bella don't float away with joy! Sure tickles me a lot!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 20- Through Faith and Love

Atta girl! I just knew you wouldn't let us down, that the cavalry would arrive in time and save the girl! It was a close thing there for a minute, and thank God Bella managed to send her thought warning to Edward. Touch and go a bit with the blood lust, but we all know Edward can't really hurt her, he loves her too damn much! Thank you  for the quick update, it is very much appreciated. I tried to send a pm, but it kicked me out, so just know I'm honored to be your faithful reader. Damned if I know why the rest aren't reviewing, maybe their mama's didn't teach them manners. It's their loss, really, because it's fun telling you how much I enjoy all your words! xoxo, Kathleen

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 19- Through Despair and Hope

Well damn! This is not the birthday Bella was planning for Edward! What a crappy way for Victoria to try to end things, the vicious bitch! Edward and Jacob better get there in time, or I may never speak to you again, so there!

p.s., thanks for getting this chapter out so quickly, hope nobody really gets angry with you!



Author's Response:

I highly doubt that you will stop speaking to me, you're my most dedicated reviewer. I'll keep it in mind though, just in case I go rogue and kill everyone off.

p.s not too many people review anymore. i know they read, but since i get no reviews i don't hear the anger...i just sense it haha.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 18- Leave Behind The World You Know

That was one of the best conversations between Bella and Renee I think I've ever read. It was so right for Bella and Edward to  go to see her, a perfect farewell, even if Renee  didn't quite know it. Bella's mind will now be at peace concerning her decision, just knowing her mom will be okay without her.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17- Like You Imagined When You Were Young

Meeting Renee has eased Edward's mind a bit, now that he knows she loves her daughter. They just got the mother/daughter thing rearranged is all! I hope they have a nice visit, but I'm still worried what Victoria is up to! She won't rest until she gets Bella, one way or another! As long as she can hide her plans from Alice, Victoria's very much a danger!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 16- The Army Left Standing

Yeahhhh........the won and everyone's ok. For now :-)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 16- The Army Left Standing

I hate that Victoria wasn't taken down, but at least none of the wolves or theCullens were hurt. Bella just has to live with the thought that she must be ever watchful, until the crazy redhead is finished! And, of course, Edward will worry 24/7, 365.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 15- Bets

Kudos on the short story! Also on this chapter, as it's a dandy. I'm so glad this deadly pas de deux with Victoria is about to be finished! That crazy redhead always has bugged me and I'm happy to see the last of her! (I hope)

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 14- Debbie Downer

Great story. I like your characters and the way they cope with things.



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 14- Debbie Downer

No jumping, and unchain yourself from that desk! It's still summer and you need to take a little time to relax! The fight is drawing near and tensions are rising, what with nomads and newborns on everyone's mind. Listening to Bella's thoughts, I can see why she's the glue holding wolfpack and vampires together. Hope the dance trap deal works out as planned! See you around!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13- Man Talks

All good excuses for the delay in updating, but really glad you're back! From beginning to end this was the best eighteenth birthday Bella has ever had! It so great that the Cullens and the Quileutes all get along so well. But then, why not, as they have Bella as the glue to hold things together? Great chapters, great story, great characters!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12- Hand-Me-Downs

The more of this story you write, the more I love it. It just keeps getting better and better! The back and forth between Bella and Edward is always great, but the conversation between Edward and Charlie was just the best! There's two men who perfectly understand one another, especially in their love for the same woman.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 11- Every Relationship Has Its Obstacles

I think Bella just made Edward a very happy man. I know he's a vampire, but he's also a man! I look forward to the next chapters!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10- There's A Possibility

The practicing would have been really interesting to observe, especially the last part with Jake, Bella and the Cullens. Edward made his feelings plain when he agreed to Bella's plan as the one that would work. He obviously trusts her judgement and knowingly or not, made huge points with his beloved. Looks like it's about to pay off, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 9- Not Bitter, Only Sweet

Alice's vision was a vital piece of information, as it tells the Cullens and the wolves what the true intentions of the Volturi are. They hope Victoria and her newborn army will wipe out the Cullens for them. I guess it would be easier to let her do their dirtywork. I sincerely hope there is a big surprise in store for the evil redhead. Like total destruction, for instance! Even when things are good between Edward and Bella, there just has to be a downside, I guess! "Mother and Daddy are having a moment here", was darling , not to mention tension-relieving!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8- Army Of Family

That damn Victoria sure has a lot of nerve, snooping around Bella's room. Good thing Charlie wasn't hurt by her. Now that Elan knows the truth, and Ripley, the pack grows. More fighters for Jasper to train, because we all know a fight is coming.  Nice little sidebar, Bella and Edward talking about children. They both have a pretty good attitude about it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 7- Wait, What?

Everything in life is better, now that Bella and Edward are back together. Paul is a bit upset about imprinting on Ripley but he'll get adjusted to it. Leah is much better now that she has imprinted, Paul should follow her example. This plan they have to get Victoria is a bit tricky, but it just may work. The other vampires with her are the wild card! Nice touch, having Bella and Edward watch Lost Boys!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 6- That's That

Yeaaaaa.......The FINALLY got back together ;-)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6- That's That

She didn't lose her job, Jake and Morgan are happy for her, and Charlie is okay with it. I would say Bella has had a very good day! She and Edward are back together and stronger than ever. Doesn't get much better than that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5- So You Can Make Me Whole

It took a while, and a lot of soul-searching, but they finally got their respective heads screwed on straight!Bella and Edward are together again! Now all's right with the world!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4- That's What We Do

A pretty good Sunday and Monday. It was touch and go for just a minutethere with Jasper. Bella grows closer to all the Cullens, including Edward. Luckily he has infinite patience!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 3- Fishing

Bella's right, good plan, very risky. I also hated that remark from Leah about the bait always dying! It sounds to me as if Bella is edging closer to trusting Edward and the rest of the Cullens. It would be so great if that would happen, and they could be more like before.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 3- Fishing

Looks like Edward & Bella are happy to be a part of each other's lives even if it is not in the same way be for he left her. Hope the can work up to the way it was before he left.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2- One Pack, One Family

That was exciting! A whole windshield in your lap, and elsewhere. I hope someone, or a group of someones, comes up with a plan to take down Victoria, sooner rather than later. I noticed one small step forward  for Bella and Edward. Keep up the good work, kids!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1- I Am Not Afriad To Keep On Living

Even understanding the whys and wherefores, it saddens me that Bella and Edward aren't together. I guess I've been into this whole Twilight thing so long, it's just second-nature to expect that. Doesn't feel right when they're apart. I have faith that you will fix that somewhere along the way. You will, right?

You must login (register a new account) to review.