Date: 08 May 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 22- Epilogue
awesome re write ;) i liked how you tied the date they met with him proposing ;) but i hoped he would have his canon b'day like bella ;) a love how the wolves have all but imprinted and it looks like you doing the jacob one as well;( i was hoping that their child would mate with another hybrid like nahual? anyway 'see' you on book 4 ;D
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19- Through Despair and Hope
LOL for the siblings messing with B now. Although surprised they left her in the house alone with V still on the loose. annnddd of course she was kidnapped.
Grr jus two going is stupid. Poor B.
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 16- The Army Left Standing
Yea kinda sucks being in the middle that way. Ugh for Victoria getting away again. Hope she doesn't go after Charlie. hmm wondering where you are going with this since the big fight scene from Eclipse was this chapter.....I think???
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10- There's A Possibility
Hope Elan behaves. And Paul too. Seth is such a sweetie. If ripley, morgan and Bella were all camping, who was working the diner? Sorry my brain runs away with me sometimes.
Glad E is supporting her with the plan. awww for bonding time
Date: 05 Mar 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8- Army Of Family
awww for Paul still fighting the imprinting. Hang in there Ripley (everytime I see her name I think of the Aliens movie). uh oh for Jared with the Elan thing. Glad E&B are talking about the uncomfortable issues. Horror Movie...if Charlie only knew.
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 7- Wait, What?
hmm dreams again huh? Wonder what they mean. Premonitions?
Glad Leah is joining the pack. :-) I agree with Kim. Too many High School and College degrees have so much garbage classes attached to them.
Good plan of B and Jakes.
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 6- That's That
Think Charlie will take it ok. Not like in the books where she was zombie like in the book. aww for new first kisses.
Glad she talked with Charlie. Renee....I just resent her so much sometimes. But I suppose she tried.
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 5- So You Can Make Me Whole
Wow Jake is actually being a real friend in that conversation. Awww sounds like Paul is going to imprint now. Ugh the beast died. you scared me for a moment thinking V would come out of the woods
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2- One Pack, One Family
Glad she and morgan are being smart and listening and not just arguing. Wow V is getting too close. Glad they are working more closely together. Stupid about not crossing lines when V was just abusing it anyway
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1- I Am Not Afriad To Keep On Living
Hate when relatives forget about time zones. I got a couple in my family who constantly forget.
Of course Charlie had to mention to Renee to call. Sigh. Sorry but I have plenty of guy friends. But I did 20 years in the military and are surrounded by more guys than girls esp since i was in a maintenance field, but I did in high school too.
Good that he is giving her space, but it does sound like she is trying hard to keep him away
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 22- Epilogue
You never disappoint! The perfect place to end this third book. Can't wait to read We Are Breaking Dawn, except for the part where it's your last fan fiction. That hurts, a lot! My daughter asked me if you are going to pull all your storys, when you finish WABD, are you? If you do she might take pity on me and come over to show me how to download onto a flashdrive. Then I can keep you forever! Off to see if I can find You Tube!(just kidding, I think I know where it is!) See you later!
Thank you! And I won't be deleting the stories from the sites so hopefully they're here for a long time.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 21- To Find Where I Belong
Wonderful chapter! With the utter relief of being rid of Victoria and all her newborns, the proposal accepted and celebrated, it's a wonder Edward and Bella don't float away with joy! Sure tickles me a lot!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 20- Through Faith and Love
Atta girl! I just knew you wouldn't let us down, that the cavalry would arrive in time and save the girl! It was a close thing there for a minute, and thank God Bella managed to send her thought warning to Edward. Touch and go a bit with the blood lust, but we all know Edward can't really hurt her, he loves her too damn much! Thank you for the quick update, it is very much appreciated. I tried to send a pm, but it kicked me out, so just know I'm honored to be your faithful reader. Damned if I know why the rest aren't reviewing, maybe their mama's didn't teach them manners. It's their loss, really, because it's fun telling you how much I enjoy all your words! xoxo, Kathleen
Date: 31 Aug 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 19- Through Despair and Hope
Well damn! This is not the birthday Bella was planning for Edward! What a crappy way for Victoria to try to end things, the vicious bitch! Edward and Jacob better get there in time, or I may never speak to you again, so there!
p.s., thanks for getting this chapter out so quickly, hope nobody really gets angry with you!
I highly doubt that you will stop speaking to me, you're my most dedicated reviewer. I'll keep it in mind though, just in case I go rogue and kill everyone off.
p.s not too many people review anymore. i know they read, but since i get no reviews i don't hear the anger...i just sense it haha.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 18- Leave Behind The World You Know
That was one of the best conversations between Bella and Renee I think I've ever read. It was so right for Bella and Edward to go to see her, a perfect farewell, even if Renee didn't quite know it. Bella's mind will now be at peace concerning her decision, just knowing her mom will be okay without her.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17- Like You Imagined When You Were Young
Meeting Renee has eased Edward's mind a bit, now that he knows she loves her daughter. They just got the mother/daughter thing rearranged is all! I hope they have a nice visit, but I'm still worried what Victoria is up to! She won't rest until she gets Bella, one way or another! As long as she can hide her plans from Alice, Victoria's very much a danger!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 16- The Army Left Standing
I hate that Victoria wasn't taken down, but at least none of the wolves or theCullens were hurt. Bella just has to live with the thought that she must be ever watchful, until the crazy redhead is finished! And, of course, Edward will worry 24/7, 365.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 15- Bets
Kudos on the short story! Also on this chapter, as it's a dandy. I'm so glad this deadly pas de deux with Victoria is about to be finished! That crazy redhead always has bugged me and I'm happy to see the last of her! (I hope)
Date: 07 Aug 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 14- Debbie Downer
No jumping, and unchain yourself from that desk! It's still summer and you need to take a little time to relax! The fight is drawing near and tensions are rising, what with nomads and newborns on everyone's mind. Listening to Bella's thoughts, I can see why she's the glue holding wolfpack and vampires together. Hope the dance trap deal works out as planned! See you around!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13- Man Talks
All good excuses for the delay in updating, but really glad you're back! From beginning to end this was the best eighteenth birthday Bella has ever had! It so great that the Cullens and the Quileutes all get along so well. But then, why not, as they have Bella as the glue to hold things together? Great chapters, great story, great characters!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12- Hand-Me-Downs
The more of this story you write, the more I love it. It just keeps getting better and better! The back and forth between Bella and Edward is always great, but the conversation between Edward and Charlie was just the best! There's two men who perfectly understand one another, especially in their love for the same woman.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10- There's A Possibility
The practicing would have been really interesting to observe, especially the last part with Jake, Bella and the Cullens. Edward made his feelings plain when he agreed to Bella's plan as the one that would work. He obviously trusts her judgement and knowingly or not, made huge points with his beloved. Looks like it's about to pay off, too!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 9- Not Bitter, Only Sweet
Alice's vision was a vital piece of information, as it tells the Cullens and the wolves what the true intentions of the Volturi are. They hope Victoria and her newborn army will wipe out the Cullens for them. I guess it would be easier to let her do their dirtywork. I sincerely hope there is a big surprise in store for the evil redhead. Like total destruction, for instance! Even when things are good between Edward and Bella, there just has to be a downside, I guess! "Mother and Daddy are having a moment here", was darling , not to mention tension-relieving!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8- Army Of Family
That damn Victoria sure has a lot of nerve, snooping around Bella's room. Good thing Charlie wasn't hurt by her. Now that Elan knows the truth, and Ripley, the pack grows. More fighters for Jasper to train, because we all know a fight is coming. Nice little sidebar, Bella and Edward talking about children. They both have a pretty good attitude about it.
Date: 02 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 7- Wait, What?
Everything in life is better, now that Bella and Edward are back together. Paul is a bit upset about imprinting on Ripley but he'll get adjusted to it. Leah is much better now that she has imprinted, Paul should follow her example. This plan they have to get Victoria is a bit tricky, but it just may work. The other vampires with her are the wild card! Nice touch, having Bella and Edward watch Lost Boys!
Date: 28 May 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6- That's That
She didn't lose her job, Jake and Morgan are happy for her, and Charlie is okay with it. I would say Bella has had a very good day! She and Edward are back together and stronger than ever. Doesn't get much better than that!
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 3- Fishing
Bella's right, good plan, very risky. I also hated that remark from Leah about the bait always dying! It sounds to me as if Bella is edging closer to trusting Edward and the rest of the Cullens. It would be so great if that would happen, and they could be more like before.
Date: 14 Apr 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2- One Pack, One Family
That was exciting! A whole windshield in your lap, and elsewhere. I hope someone, or a group of someones, comes up with a plan to take down Victoria, sooner rather than later. I noticed one small step forward for Bella and Edward. Keep up the good work, kids!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1- I Am Not Afriad To Keep On Living
Even understanding the whys and wherefores, it saddens me that Bella and Edward aren't together. I guess I've been into this whole Twilight thing so long, it's just second-nature to expect that. Doesn't feel right when they're apart. I have faith that you will fix that somewhere along the way. You will, right?