Date: 16 May 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
now hope they don't jump to conclusions its bella
Date: 16 May 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
after that hope she won't believe anything like that again you have to talk
Date: 16 May 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
dry humping is such a tease so funny on how they got those girls great chapter i don't remember him asking bella to marry him where's the ring
Author's Response:
thanks for the reviews as for your question after extensive searching it would appear that a chapter has been deleted and i am currently waiting for my beta to get back to see if she has the missing chapter thank you so much for being the only one who picked up on it! i am very upset that i cant find it i really liked writing that chapter too. i will repost as soon as i hear from her. michele
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
loved the twist update when you can thanks......
Date: 16 May 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
poor bella always comes in just at the wrong time
Date: 16 May 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
YAY!!!
So much fun!
xoxo
Date: 16 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
should have torn tanya to pieces she be back il a bad penny now
Date: 16 May 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
hope they take the traitor down great chapter
Date: 16 May 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow she got some power great chapter
Date: 16 May 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow wonder why they being like that
Date: 16 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter i knew it was Tanya who squealed
Date: 16 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh shit wonder who squealed
Date: 16 May 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
nothing beats a first kiss
Date: 16 May 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
nothing beats a first kiss
Date: 16 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Matchmakers love when they do that
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
thats great that Rose can have children now!
Date: 15 May 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved their first hunt together. Kat
Date: 15 May 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wonderful start to the story. I wasn't sure about the storyline when I first started reading this but I think that I will enjoy this adventure very much. Thanks Kat
Date: 15 May 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
i think it's brilliant! :)
Date: 15 May 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
I like it just after the birth change Rose back and we are ok! About bella I want twins maybe triplets!!
Demanding much?? lol
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
i have been wanting to do a story about triples hummm... you just might get your wish there, but i cant so for sure. Never think you cant tell me whats on your mind sometimes you get what you ask for.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Of course i like it
Date: 15 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
excited to start this story the first Chapter great
Date: 11 May 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
I don't know what to think... Can she fully change??!! I liked the fight though!
You know me gimme blood and I am in..
Marianne
Date: 11 May 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
I don't know what to think... Can she fully change??!! I liked the fight though!
You know me gimme blood and I am in..
Marianne
Date: 03 May 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hmm, DEFINITELY liking this..... Poor Bella though... :-( Will she recover..!? A-.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was great but what will happen to her when she is bit loved it update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
ugggggggggggggggggggggg...ok i like it ... dont leave me hanging long..PLZZZ
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
She changes. Else I shall hunt you down and force you to rewrite the story. Let me repeat...SHE CHANGES.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG, PLEASE TELL ME THAT EDWARD CAN AT LEAST GET SOME OF HIS VENOM IN HER SO SHE CAN CHANGE BY HIS HAND AND NOT HTE GUARD
Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
Fully change would be best. Yippee Aro is dead.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
ok if everyone dies, I'm gonna be really pissed.
Author's Response:
keep reading there are A LOT of surprises coming your way! you wont be disappointed! i promise!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks......
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
i can't believe the other 4 died...:( and what's going on with Em and Rose???
btw i used to be njdevil30718, just in cas you are confused...lol
Author's Response:
next 2 chapters are going to be full of twist on turns! not everything is as it seems;) sorry i can be slightly evil! but all will be rewardeed in the end!! promise!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
Something's gotta happen to the Volturi, the Cullens can't keep running everytime.
Author's Response:
yeah thats is definiatly changing real soon lots happening in the next chapter! its almost already in the works...
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
Finally!!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
That Tanya is a real Bitch! Why does Bella believe her so easily?
Author's Response:
because it's all she's ever known, the only people Bella ever knew in alaska was the denali coven and they were family, she never learned about lying.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
i love it lol
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
go bella. kick some bitchy butt
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
ya baby want more of that tanya ass kickin and edward sexin oh baby, thanks for the chapter loved it update when you can thanks..... and if you want to see it live watch remember me really good Rob sexin in that
Author's Response:
planning on seeing it real soon!! I am glad you like the story!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow she ripped off Tanya's arms off! good for her, that'll teach her!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
i swear if she upsets Bella, Rose will have a field day beating her ass, so will the rest of the family
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
loved it i just wish that bitch would lose her head I hope she doesn't live to see another day please update when you can thanks....
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ok time to decapitate Tanya
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
awww poor bella
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
great story, i think the girls are in tons of trouble. Bella will feel like crap tomorrow
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Haha thats so funny. Drunk Bella lol. Gotta say, it's interesting to see that Alcohol still affected her body in the same way just like a normal human.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
lol that was great can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well if he want bella to trust him then he needs to trust her and if he flips then he needs to think about what he is doing Update when you can please loved it.....
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ugh. That was a hell of a cliffie. Can't wait for the nexdt chapter. Meg
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
Eek ch 16 is missing the words to the chapter. Can you send them in a pm? Meg
Author's Response:
should be all fixed please let me know when this happens its the second time they system lost a chapter! thanks michele
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ok some relief. They need a little fluff tome
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Damn can they not catch a break lol
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh poor Bella. I hate she has so much pain. Meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow. How are they going to get out. Oh let's not forget bellas revenge on Tanya. Lol meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow that was amazing how you wrote bellas shield. Fingers crosssed for the foursome. Meg
Still hate Tanya. Looking forward to Bella releasing her rage on her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
I m not happy about this twist. Lol. I hope the food guys win and Tanya gets what she deserves. Meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hum. Did they get Edwards family too. Still hafeing tanya. Meg
but loving the story
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear. I hope they run in time meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ooo the plot thickens. Again o hate Tanya.
Sorry for the short typo filled reviews Im doing them on my phone. Meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh so sweet. I felt so bad for Bella before Edward kissed her. Hate Tanya. Meg.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awe the. Love is Admited. Darkness around the voltorie What can edward do to protect her ? Meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh the dads are talking. I am not happy with the brothers. Meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh the end was sweet. Can't wait for BPOV I hope they talk it out soon. Meg
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start. Such an interesting twist. Meg
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
maybe she's setting up something special for eddie she doesn't want Alice to see. duh.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love Ben and angela
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
loved it like always update when you can thanks i hope bella gets those girls....
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
lol horny eddie
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens at school update when you can thanks.....
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow that was great i am behind on my reading but i am catching up can't wait to read more thanks....
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
hmmm sounds like jessica is going to be a problem
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story, it's so cute!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
awww poor Bella. Glas she will be ok.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
awwww poor bella
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
You posted chapter 13 twice.
Author's Response:
So sorry all fixed thanks for telling me its an improtant chapter to the story! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait to see edward get all crazy with all those boys at school update when you can thanks
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow i guess i missed that chapter also loved it
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved it so are we going to see edward fight off mike and tyler to keep them away from bella so much fun can't wait....
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Would have done more to Tanya. Think she'll still start more trouble
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
loved it what is she going to say can't wait to see whats next...
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
uh oh that doesnt sound good.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
See he's one of a kind wish he were real can't wait to read more....
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved it can't wait to read more thanks....
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet of him i want one of my very own please can't wait to read more.....
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved this first chapter i am going to catch up on my reiviewing hope you are ok with that thanks for sharing this with us....
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
woo hoo they got to the family