Date: 13 May 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
Just before the big fight and right after changing Rose again to heal the damage from the birth of Emily, this story comes to an end? What happened , were you ill or injured and unable to finish? Sure hope not! I have enjoyed this amazing tale so much and would love to see it finished!
Date: 13 May 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
When will Italy get a clue that the Cullens and friends just want to be left alone? They aren't hurting anyone, so it seems rather unfair to try killing them! This should be tricky, planning a fight when Rose is pregnant, and ready to deliver any time!
Date: 13 May 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 33
Nothing like having your whole family all at once! Three beautiful little boys, and naming them after family and friends was totally cool! Had a feeling Jake's imprint was Jessica, I just hope she's a nicer person now than she was in school!
Date: 13 May 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'll put my money on green eyes and the name Masen! Bella had as brief a delivery as she had a pregnancy. That might be pretty nice, considering how long it takes humans! This is really nice for them to have a son, Wonder what Emmett and Rosalie want?
Date: 13 May 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
Had to laugh at the karma thing! Edward telling Emmett how to be careful making love to his wife, just doesn't happen, until now! Rose wiping out Esme's kitchen was pretty funny, the poor girl had no idea! This adjustment to a new condition is going to be fun!
Date: 13 May 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 29
Despite worry over Bella's condition, Rosalie must be over the moon! She will be forever grateful to her new sister for enabling her most cherished dream, a baby! She and Emmett will be good parents too, I'll bet! I hope nothing happens to Bella and Edward's child, she doesn't do well with blame, taking all on herself, regardless. Bella thinks everything's her fault, whether or not it is! I had a stray thought, who runs vampire central now that the brothers are gone? Will chaos ensue?
Date: 12 May 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
May I just tell you how damn happy I am Aro got what was coming to him? Tickled me to death that Eleazar wanted first crack at him for planning what he did with Eleazar's daughter! The wolves came through like the champs they are. No wonder Alice's visions went black, since the pack helped end the guard! It is the pits, though that Bell was bitten by Santiago! What happens to her now, full vamp or ??
Date: 12 May 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good thing they are about to be married or they both might get carried away before they meant to. I have a hunch that Bella is doing something nice for Paul. Noe if only someone would dismember Tanya and burn the pieces!
Date: 12 May 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
How sweet of Paul to follow Bella all the way to Alaska and tell her the truth, to counteract the filthy lies Tanya told to hurt Bella. Of course it didn't hurt that Edward was right there with him, telling her the real story. Sure hope Bella gets an injection of confidence being Mrs. Edward Cullen!
Date: 12 May 2013 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Good thing Jasper was along to run off that bitch, Tanya! Where did she get the idea it was okay to molest Edward at will? He's always told her no and her ego just can't take it! After siccing the Volturi on everyone, and nearly getting them killed, you would think she'd have the decency to stay away, but evidently not!
Date: 12 May 2013 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bet the Quileute wolves were glad to not have to fight the vampires. Even Paul managed a sincere apology. They didn't quite know how to deal with a creature they had never seen before. Luckily Bella is healing fast, just not vampire fast!
Date: 12 May 2013 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Every time Bella hears something different, she reads it the wrong way and panics! Damn stupid werewolf, I kind of hope Paul is really punished for what he did! Poor Bella, now she's wounded and who knows how long it will take for her to heal?
Date: 12 May 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
How cool that Bella can let Edward under her shield and into her mind! That just thrills him no end! Her shild is powerful and will probably be the saving of them all. This instant immersion in all things modern has to be a huge shock to Bella, since she's never been away from her cabin. It must have her shaking in her shoes!
Date: 12 May 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Now Edward, Alice and Jasper know the truth of Tanya's nastiness, so maybe the three of them can help Bella feel better about herself! Wait until they find out Tanya brought the wrath of the Volturi down on everyone! Then it's going to hit the fan, big time!
Date: 12 May 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
The timing of the Volturi showing up leads me to think Tanya has sicced them on Bella out of spite and jealousy. Maybe I'm wrong, but I doubt it! If they have to run, it's a good thing Bella's a shield because even a tracker like Demetri can't trace her!
Date: 12 May 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Like I said, Tanya's a bitch! I'm glad Eleazar told her off. It looks like the story may come out concerning why Bella thinks no one wants her. I hope so, it would serve Tanya right to be shown for the vindictive person she is! It's going to be a problem if Alice can't keep an eye on Edward and Bella's future, in case of danger, etc.
Date: 12 May 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
So the two fathers are okay with their offspring maybe getting together! Wonder if Eleazar will ever find out why Bella won't come to the house to visit him anymore? I wasn't surprised it was Tanya's insensitive remark that hurt Bella's feelings, making her ashamed to see her father! Tanya can be a real bitch!
Date: 12 May 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
You really hit for the bleachers with this one! Bella as a sixty year old hybrid , with Eleazar as her biological father! That's amazing, and Edward is fascinated! I can see why she's been hidden from the Volturi all these years.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just came to this site and remembered reading a few chapters of this on Twilight Archives (and really liking it). I am glad to see there are so many chapters here. TA nver updates anything anymore. I'm glad I found this site and this story (again).
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 34
glad to see you posting again.
So sorry for the delay. I was working on some orginals and then I sent too many chapters for My lovely beta to handle all at once so now they are coming back as she gets through them. Thank you for still reading it. All my stories will be on a better schedule now. I would never leave you hanging, I promise. Thanks again!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I was thinking that one of them might have the power to heal, since Rose might have partially human baby and Rose is as well, in case something was to happen go either, the babys venom can cure the ailment. As for the other power thought it might be cute if the baby had telekinesis .... I dunno just a thought. Hope you enjoyed your vacation!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
love the names :) will EJ and CE have any special powers?
Sorry it took so long for me to get back reply to your reveiw, vacations with no wifi are excruiating! Thank you for your review and for reading it! As for powers do you have any suggestions? I dont like to reuse my names or abilities so I would definitely entertain your thoughts.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 33
Man, I LOVE AngryElla!! But what's with the third kid having totally black eyes?!
First so sorry it took so long to reply I was on the vacation from hell! Who know there was a place with no wifi? As for your question: When I asked for everyone's opinion I recieved three types. So I thought about the third one and figured why not make him special. It's just how my brain works. Not to mention I do love my twists. His power of seeing 360 degress will come in handy later. hint hint! Thanks for reading it!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
You know... I can totally see the moment when the realisation of what they are telling him hits Edward... Imagine a white light glowing around himlittle angels (or devils suit yourself...) help hi elevate up in the air while repeat "AMEN" in their little voices... Then Emmet destroys everything by yelling "Can I get an AMEN here? I think he has seen the light!" while this annoying music of going backwards is playing in the backward....
Carlisle kicking ass and throwing him off the roof? Double H (Hot and Hilarious... I just can't help myself...) ***winks***
I wonder about the name!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Please say green eyes. Everyone else always gives brown eyes. Please update soon. I am not sure how long it will take me to get internet hooked up in my place after i move in. I loved this chapter....question...Are Rose and Emmett going to try for a baby soon? Will Esme and Alice join the club at being a half breed like Bella and Rose?
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
I really like this story. The premise is SO original and inventive. I'm impressed with your creativity.
I've just read the entire story (29 chapters as of June 6th) and I noticed you had some notes about adding a missing chapter, etc. However, it appears to me that chapters 18 and 19 are in reverse order. Please take a look at this. Also, in this chapter, after the author's note, is a stray line and I'm not sure where it belongs.
Lastly, I noticed that you sometimes use the word "use" when you mean "used." The secondary definition of "used" is accustomed or habituated. So, in the sentence, "more modern than they were use to in Alaska . . ." you need the word used. I only mention this because I saw multiple examples while reading through the story. There is a similar issue with suppose/supposed. Also, you should have your beta be on the lookout for confusion between "your" and "you're"
Again, I've read several of your stories and your talent is obvious. I'm looking forward to more chapters in this and your other stories.
Thank you so much for reading my stories! I have a beta now but she has a lot of work to go through to get them all polished up. I will check on chaps. 18 &19 to see if when I added 18 if I mixed them up. Always feel free to point out my errors. I know I have a terrible time with words that sound alike but I am working on finding before it even goes to the beta. I am always striving to do better and reviews like your's really do help! Thank you for your input I do value it! Michele