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Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2018 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

Absolutely loved this story.  Only just found it today, l8/9/2018.   Is there any chance you will be finishing this?   I know it was written in 2012, but It has a fantastic storyline and I have no imagination myself to finish it in my head.    Please keep writing, you are very, very good.   thanks,   pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

I guess Carlisle was correct when he told Edward there might be problems with Bella carrying twins! I wonder how she will feel about drinking human blood? I will cross my fingers for luck and await the next update!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 22 Jan 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks so much for the update, and for letting Bella have normal delivery. Now they can be married and she can be changed, as soon as they learn if Lizzy will be immortal. Thank heaven Racheal is finally rid of the threat of Eliot, and she and Ben can be happy together. It has been a long horrifying ordeal but the good guys won in the end!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Makes me want to start singing, "Ding dong the witch is dead"! I'm so glad Eliot is a pile of dust and that Racheal was the one to do it! It was so pitiful, Bella crying while Carlisle did a rape kit, as Edward held one hand and Esme the other. Thank God she's okay and the baby, too. What a trauma for all concerned, humans, vampires and wolves.One chuckle is Charlie noticing Bella and Edward both have wet hair! Once more, boy, am I glad Eliot is dead!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

How could you ? The fact Eliot has Bella must be scaring  hell out of Edward! What was done to poor little Racheal was horrifying to read! There has to be a way to kill Eliot, the world would be so much better off without that awful creature! This is just awful, and I'll bet you are going to catch a real ration from readers!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

So glad that Elliot is DEAD!  and that Rachel, Bella and the baby are safe!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Since Carlisle and the ob/gyn have given Bella a clean bill of health, what is Jasper apologizing for? I'm afraid  it has something to do with Racheal, and that's scary! Things are getting a bit tense for Edward and Bella and the Cullens.  Renee is none too happy either!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

omg.......they have to tell Rene! I wouldn`t want to be them :-)

 

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

Now this is a cliffie... I hope you don't let us hanging too long to know what happened. I just hope Rachel is OK.  Love your story.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well that went over better then I expected, but then again what else can be said. I hope Rachel is going to be okay. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is so happy he's going to be a father and so sad Racheal has been spirited off to Russia. It's just sickening that Elliot has her back in his evil clutches(did I just say that?) There has to be a way for the Cullens to rescue the poor girl. If that involved killing Elliot, so much the better! Charlie took the news of Bella's pregnancy better than I expected him to. I wonder if he's going to notice the little oddities, like how fast the baby grows and the "diet" Bella has to have to ensure her baby's health?

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hope everything is going to end OK for Rachel. I'm also very happy for Edward bad Bella. I like that this Edward is not such a worrywart. Waiting for net update.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow...Elliot is just crazy!!! There is no way he is ever going to let go of Rachael and Ben. I think they are going to have to kill him...rip him apart, burn the pieces and all that. I wish he could suffer in the process. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hopefully there is alight at the end of this long dark tunnel Racheal has been living in. If there was only some way for Eliot to be neutralized(killed!) Then everybody could live happily ever after!

Reviewer: Isabellamae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Omg it's getting good I like that Bella is concerned about rachael and that they can share that relationship Elliott's evil ;(

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

Racheal is so brave, to be planning on stealing Eliot's powers. I hope to hell she can do it, and soon. Something like him gives men, vampire and human, a really bad name. Edward and Bella had a wonderful night, and Charlie doesn't need to know his baby girl is no longer a virgin. It might amaze him to kinow that neither is Edward!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love these two! I wonder if Bella is going to end up pregnant after their night of bliss??? Charlie will not be happy with Edward and Bella. I like how Edward is thinking about things. He is not letting anything ruin this experience for him and Bella.

I hope Rachael and Ben can get away from their awful parents. I am so worried for them. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Come on! You have to somehow have the Cullens or the wolves kill that sick, evil son-of-a-bitch! That was horrifying! Edward must be agonized over what his poor little sister showed him! It''s just awful that no one is putting an end to Elliot.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oooo, your story is so good already. What a mystery; I can't wait to find out more. xo Kelly

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am so worried for Rachael. I hope the Cullen's are going to be able to help her. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a great idea, for Edward to have a sister who not only escaped the spanish flu, but still lives ninety years later. The mysterious elements are really puzzling, too. How can she be a vampire and still have green eyes, tears and no vampire smell? What's the deal with her being afraid of her stepfather, and what is he? Questions, questions! Looking forward, eagerly to answers!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting! I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!

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