Date: 09 Apr 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Am I sensing a tiny bit of sadist in your writing? You sure have given Bella a lot of hellish experiences. What would it hurt to be nice to the poor girl? I for one, can't wait until they get to Volterra, and the big surprise in store for them!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Boy, the Cullens, especially Edward, will have their hands full watching out for Bella. If she can't smell anything, it makes her life really difficult. The only bright spot is no problem feeding from humans, or her daughter.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
That went pretty fast and fairly easy, considering the circumstances. The whole family is really happy to see the beautiful little girl born to Bella and Edward. It really is going to be the best Christmas present ever.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett finally found something Rosalie could be happy about. This baby coming has got all the Cullens in a tizzy, just like any family. Poor Bella, slowly changing and growing a child inside herself at the same time. Some people have all the luck, don't they? My only worry is there will be more trauma in this story, before it's over.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Okay, I have to hand it to you, you found a most unique spin on the Charlie problem. Victoria, of all vampires. Oh well, at least Edward killed him and they burned the pieces. Not that he deserved any less. Too bad Victoria got away. This last development is really something, too. So, Bella's change won't finish until she has her baby? I'll bet that's the answer, too.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Cullens to the rescue! This keeps getting better and better. It's kind of like a Twilight fairy tale, everything just falling into place. All problems have an answer and love conquers all! It's a lot of fun to read, too.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
You have your own personal juggernaught going here! I have to read fast, just to keep up with you! This Charli situation is awful! I hope the Cullens, minus Rose of course, can find a way to keep Bella safe from her nasty father.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! So Charlie is a mean-drunk womanbeater. Probably just as well that Alice kept that from Edward, so he wouldn't kill the chief. That sure is a different Charlie than Bella's usual dad. No wonder Renee left him all those years ago! Wonder how long Alice plans on staying gone from Forks. I'm sure kidnapping Bella may turn out to be a bad idea.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Moving right along! First day and he's saved her and made her fall in lovewith him. The guy's obviously in a hurry to get to know his singer. It zips the story to have Alice tell him so far ahead of their meeting, so he has time to learn control, maybe?
Date: 13 Apr 2011 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
I really loved this story : quite original with elements from the books. I was thrilled by the growing Voltury familly ! I was quite distressed by a small point in the beginning of the story : why Bella come live with her abusive father ? He beats his wife so why would she send Bella there ? Bella smelling problem was quite entertaining. I never saw Maggie coming. What had happen to the wolves ?
I love your style of writing and the original turns of the events ! Hope to read one of your other stories soon !
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
This was a wonderfully well thoughout store. I loved the fact that it encompassed all the books with the most unique quailities story lines. You capture the best of the best in all books and gave a very good revision of the incidents.
I especally liked that Jacob wasn't a bother. Mainly because I don't like his chareter any way. So this was refereshing to read. Charlie that was priceless as well as Larent. I loved the way Bella carried the baby and the no senses issues. Great work around. All in all this was excited to read and I look forward for to reading the rest of your publishings.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
Aw!! I'm a bit dissappointed that you made Nessie a lesbian. I'm not homophobic but I always imagined her as straight - it's been so long since I've read this I'm guessing... no Jake?! Anyway, it was a good twist, so if that's what you were after, it worked - nice one!! I'm surprised the Denalis would accept the loss of Tanya so readily, but I guess they're just too peaceful to condone that kind of crap!! Good ending overall. Have an A - I'd give you an A+, but nobody's perfect - well, maybe Katmom!!
Date: 14 May 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
yay Bella is going to kick Tanya's ass. (I hope)
Please please please tell me that dog hasn't imprinted on the baby that made me gag in breaking dawn I really don't want to have to read it again. #
ROSALIE - She is a jealous, evil, conniving, bitch that the world is blessed by her inability to procreate god knows the world doesn't need any more of her.
Date: 14 May 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
Who the hell are the vampires???
I'm glad you gave an accurate rendition of the first time all too often with fan fic it is like something out of a movie and I think it gives younger readers the wrong idea , although lets be honest they shouldn't be reading NC17 stories anyway.
Date: 14 May 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
“Hey little sister, where are you? Do I need to come in there and get you?” - God I love Emmett I wonder if I could swap him for my brother? hmmm worth looking into.
So we can add potentioal rapists to the dogs list of vileness.
Date: 14 May 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward has been drooling over her since… she was drooling - Gotta love Emmett he is always fantastically inappropriate sometimes.
Rosalie - she needs a slap what a bitch,
Carlisle - Yay he's made the decision already, awesome that cuts out alot of Edward angst and deliberation
Date: 14 May 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh bless him Edward is nervous.
So Alice had to save Bella from s Jasper snack attack, he really does need to gain better control doesn't he poor Jasper.
Edward is going to flip his lid when he finds out what Alice has done.
When I started this story I thought it was just going to be a fluffier version of Twilight I'm so glad its not.
Date: 13 May 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, I have to admit, I didn't see that one coming. What other twits do you have up your sleeve?
i wont tell but you can count on one things from my stories dont look for the usual because i love twists! thanks for reading michele
Date: 02 May 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
URGH!! How coudl Tanya ever be such a bitch... I think you've really gone OOC with here in this story!! A-.
i just might surprise you! Tanya really wasn't being a bitch she just didn't know he was mated...but that will be addressed in the next chapter.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a really good chapter update when you can those 3 will be shocked when they get to Italy loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing....
Italy is going to be fun if your into the revenge thing!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Time to shred and burn Tanya, what a surprise she is in for. These Voltori are more likable then when they are evil.
i dont know shredding and burning might be too easy!! the volutri may be likeable but you know how family can be when it comes to torture of a loved one...
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
OK well that was a shocker!!!! But hell it was a nice surprise, Carlisle on of 4 brothers.
I have a big problem with Bella being disfigured not that it would mean anything to Edward other than he'd want to make mincemeat out of Victoria and Tanya, but that is just sick.
Ok once agin you ahve me talking about these charc=acters like their real...LOVE IT!!!!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Excellent, talk about creating tension and anxiety for everyone including your readers!!!!
that is thew ultimate review! if you could feel the tension they did, then i did my job right! thank you so much for reading and reviewing! michele